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Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation
Section B 3a-self check
Knowledge objectives:
1. 熟练掌握以下词汇和短语
duck, dislike, take photos, Tian'anmen, the Palace Museum, bring back, shopping center, have a fun time, school trip, come up
2. 熟练掌握以下句型
1. Did you dislike anything
2. How did you feel about the trip
3. What did you like best
Skill objectives:
1. 通过复习，找出日记的写作要点，为写作做好基础知识储备。
2. 通过阅读Section B 2b例文，梳理篇章结构，掌握日记的写作方法。
3. 通过写作范例展示,由简入难,使学生逐步掌握写作技巧,梳理成文,写一篇关于学校旅行的日记的短文。
Cultural awareness objectives:
能使用日记的形式来描述自己曾经经历的旅行，养成写日记的好习惯。
Thinking quality objectives:
通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。
Learning objectives
New words
Read and repeat.
duck
n.鸭
dislike
v.&n.
不喜爱(的事物)；
厌恶(的事物)
Tian’anmen Square
天安门广场
/skwe /
/d s'la k/
/d k/
the Palace /'p l s/ Museum
故宫博物院
Revision
The first day of Jane's trip
Who
Weather
my family
beach
Where
sunny and hot
Food
In the morning
What
Feelings
paragliding
Georgetown
rode bicycles
In the afternoon
saw
Where
How
Malaysian
yellow noodles
buildings;
the houses of
Chinese traders
exciting, delicious,
enjoyable
Revision
The second day of Jane's trip
Who
Where
my father and I
raining
Weather
Penang Hill
How
Feelings
take the train
climbing
Food
What
one bowl of rice and some fish
terrible, so hungry
What a difference a day makes!
Did Jane have the same feeling
They were all the feelings that Jane couldn’t forget.
So she wrote 2 diaries to keep them in memory.
Monday
Tuesday
Do you know these places
Tian’anmen Square
the Palace Museum
the Great Wall
the Summer Palace
a Beijing hutong
the old Summer Palace
Do you know the name of it
Beijing duck
Lvdagun
ZhaJiangmian
Mung Bean Milk
or Dou Zhi
Fried ring
or Jiao Quan
Aiwowo
Suppose you have a one-day tour of Beijing. Talk about your trip. Then show your plans.
Weather
Transportation
Date
People
Places
Food
Where did you go
Did you go with anyone
How was the weather
What food did you eat
How did you feel about it
Did you dislike anything
What did you like best
Discussion
3a
Complete the diary entry about a trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you.
Wednesday, _______ 20th
Today the weather was __________. I went to ________________.
It was _____________. We _________________. I liked this place
because______________________________________. For dinner
we had ____________________. It was _____________. In the
evening, I felt really _____________________.
hot and sunny Beijing duck take some photos buy something special August
learn something important tired delicious beautiful interesting
Group the words in the box.
hot and sunny
Beijing duck
take some photos
buy something special
learn something important
tired
delicious
beautiful
interesting
August
Date
Weather
Activities
Food
Description words
August
take some photos
buy something special
learn something important
Beijing duck
tired
delicious
beautiful
interesting
hot and sunny
hot and sunny tired
Beijing duck delicious
take some photos beautiful
buy something special interesting
learn something important August
Wednesday, _______ 20th
Today the weather was _____________. I went to ______________. It was ________. We _______________. I liked this place because ____________________________. For dinner we had ____________. It was ________.
In the evening, I felt really ______.
hot and sunny
August
beautiful
a Beijing hutong
took some photos
I learned something important
Beijing duck
delicious
tired
3b
Answer the questions to make notes about a vacation you took.
Where did you go 2. Did you go with anyone
3. How was the weather 4.What did you do every day
5. What food did you eat 6. What did you like best
7. Did you dislike anything 8. How did you feel about the trip
How did you like the trip
What did you think of the trip
While-writing
3c
Write a travel diary like Jane’s on page 5. Use your notes in 3b.
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
How to write a diary entry in English
Sunny Monday, July 15th
I arrived in Penang in Malaysia this morning with my family. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel. My sister and I tried paragliding. I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting! For lunch, we had something very special – Malaysian yellow noodles. They were delicious! In the afternoon, we rode bicycles to Georgetown. There are a lot of new buildings now, but many of the old buildings are still there. In Weld Quay, a really old place in Georgetown, we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago. I wonder what life was like here in the past. I really enjoyed walking around the town.
A Diary Entry
1.题材：
记叙文
2.格式：
天气左上角
日期右上角
星期在前，日期在后
3.时态：
一般过去时
Sunny Monday, July 15th
I arrived in Penang in Malaysia this morning with my family. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel. My sister and I tried paragliding. I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting! For lunch, we had something very special – Malaysian yellow noodles. They were delicious! In the afternoon, we rode bicycles to Georgetown. There are a lot of new buildings now, but many of the old buildings are still there. In Weld Quay, a really old place in Georgetown, we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago. I wonder what life was like here in the past. I really enjoyed walking around the town.
A Diary Entry
1.题材：
记叙文
2.格式：
天气左上角
日期右上角
星期在前，日期在后
3.时态：
一般过去时
4.要点：
where
who
weather
activities
food
Read and find out the main points.
Sunny Monday, July 15th
I arrived in Penang in Malaysia this morning with my family. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel. My sister and I tried paragliding. I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting! For lunch, we had something very special – Malaysian yellow noodles. They were delicious! In the afternoon, we rode bicycles to Georgetown. There are a lot of new buildings now, but many of the old buildings are still there. In Weld Quay, a really old place in Georgetown, we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago. I wonder what life was like here in the past. I really enjoyed walking around the town.
A Diary Entry
1.题材：
记叙文
2.格式：
天气左上角
日期右上角
星期在前，日期在后
3.时态：
一般过去时
4.要点：
where
who
weather
activities：
food
Which main points are more important
1.扩天气原因
It was... so...
2.描述活动+扩感受
I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting.
3.描述活动+
扩见闻 We saw...
扩思考 I wonder...
扩感受 I really enjoyed...
For..., we had /ate /enjoyed something special—食物。 +扩感受
the framework(结构) of the diary
My travel
Beginning
Main body
Ending
time
place
weather
feelings
partner
activities
We did
We ate
We thought
We enjoyed
...
We saw/heard
feelings
3w( when, where, who)+weather
what
feelings
how
假如你是李明,这个暑假你和你父母一起去了北京,你们在北京游览了很多地方。请你以“My Trip to Beijing”为题,写一篇短文,记述你的这次旅行。
参考词汇:Tian’anmen Square; the flag-raising ceremony(升旗仪式); the Great Wall; the Palace Museum; the Summer Palace; the Temple of Heaven
要求:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名校名
及其他相关信息;
2. 不少于70词。
practice 1
谋篇布局
My travel
Beginning
Body
Ending
Today I went to the Palace Museum ….
Then I went to visit …
In the afternoon, I went to …
Today was Chinese Army Day …
At last, we traveled around …
I felt very happy today …
on vacation 度假 the next day 第二天
take photos 照相 quite a few 相当多
learn about 了解 go to the beach 去海滩
at first 首先 feel like 给……的感觉；感受到
have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得高兴
have a three-day trip 进行三天的旅行
go hiking/camping/swimming 去远足/野营/游泳
短语储备
句型储备
开头句：
Last …, … went to … on vacation.
… had a good time with … in /on …
中间句：
We visited …
Because of …, we …
It was time for us to …
Everything was excellent there!
结尾句：
What a pleasant …!
I was so … that …
经典名句：
Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
He who travels far knows much.
Sample writing
Thursday, August 1st
Today I went to the Palace Museum. It was cool. Then I went to
visit the Great Wall. How great it is! I took many photos there. In
the afternoon, I went to Tian’an Men Square. The square is very
large. Today was Chinese Army Day. So there were many people
there and it was very crowded. We had great fun playing there! At
last, we traveled around Beijing hutong on tricycle. The Chinese
people are very friendly. I felt very happy today, but I was really tired.
practice 2
去年暑假（8月22日）你和你父母坐飞机一起去了成都,你们在成都游览了很多地方。请你写一篇日记,记述你的这次旅行。
内容提示：1.天气晴朗炎热。
2.你们晚上去旅馆附近散步，看到许多美丽的建筑物和好的饭店。
3.午饭吃了火锅，辛辣美味。
4.下午去看熊猫，喜欢熊猫，机灵可爱。很高兴了解人们正尽力拯救这濒临灭绝的动物。
5.晚上沿着Chunxi路购物，买了很多。累但很快乐。
要求:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名校名
及其他相关信息;
2. 不少于70词。
第一段
交代背景
第二段
具体细节
第三段
总结升华
写作提纲
My travel
引入主题句，交代旅行的___，___，___，___。
按___顺序，描述旅行的过程。内容包含___，___，___...
总结旅行的__________。
I arrived in Chengdu this morning with my parents. …
It was sunny and hot, …
so we decided to......
For lunch, we had
In the afternoon, we went to...
I was happy to know people...
I felt really ….
谋篇布局
第一段
交代背景
第二段
时间顺序
天气/动作/感受
第三段
总结升华
Wednesday, August 22 th
去年暑假，我和父母坐飞机上午到达成都。
天气晴朗炎热。
所以我们决定去旅馆附近散步。我们看到了许多漂亮的建筑物和好的饭店。
午饭我们吃了火锅，非常辛辣美味，我喜欢四川食物。
下午，我们去动物园看熊猫。熊猫是我的最爱，因为它们是这么可爱。
很高兴了解的人们正在尽力地拯救这濒临灭绝的动物。
晚上，我沿着春熙路购物，买了许多物品。
It was sunny and hot.
so we decided to go for a walk near our hotel. We saw many pretty buildings and lots of good restaurants.
For lunch, we had hot pot. It was very spicy but delicious. I love Sichuan food!.
In the afternoon, we went to see pandas. Pandas are my favorite animals because they’re so cute.
I was happy to know people are trying their best to save this endangered animal.
In the evening, we went shopping along Chunxi Road and bought many things.
I arrived in Chengdu this morning with my parents by plane last summer vacation.
今天我真的感到疲惫，但是我非常快乐。
I felt really tired today, but I was very happy .
Sample writing
Wednesday, August 22 th
I arrived in Chengdu this morning with my parents last summer vacation. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go for a walk near our hotel. We saw many pretty buildings and lots of good restaurants. For lunch, we had hot pot. It was very spicy but delicious. I love Sichuan food! In the afternoon, we went to see pandas in the zoo. Pandas are my favorite animals because they’re so cute. I was happy to know people are trying their best to save this endangered animal. In the evening, we went shopping along Chunxi Road and bought many things. I felt really tired today, but I was very happy .
4
Imagine you are all foreigners on vacation in China. You meet each other at the airport on your way home. Talk about what you did on your vacation.
Self Check
Complete the conversations with the correct words in the box.
1
anything everything nothing anyone everyone no one
1. A: Did __________ go on vacation with you last month
B: Yes, my family went to the countryside with me.
2. A: Did your family go to the beach with you last weekend
B: No. __________ from my family went, but my friend went with me.
anyone
No one
3. A: I didn't bring back anything from Malaysia.
B: __________ at all Why not
4. A: Did you buy __________ in the shopping center
B: No, I didn't. __________ was very expensive.
5. A: How was the volleyball game yesterday
B: Great! __________ had a fun time!
Nothing
anything
Everything
Everyone
2
Complete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.
Last August, our class _______ (do) something very special on our school trip. We _______ (go) to Mount Tai. We _______ (start) our trip at 12:00 at night. Everyone in our class _______ (take) a bag with some food and water. After three hours, someone looked at the map and _______ (find) out we _______ (be, not) anywhere near the top. My legs _______ (be) so tired that I wanted to stop. My classmates _______ (tell) me to keep going, so I _______ (go) on. At 5:00 a.m., we got to the top! Everyone _______ (jump) up and down in excitement. Twenty minutes later, the sun _______ (start) to come up. It was so beautiful that we _______ (forget) about the last five hours!
did
went
started
took
weren't
found
started
were
told
went
jumped
forgot
Homework
假如你是李华，上周日独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana。请根据表格内容，写一篇日记。
活动 上午 讲故事，唱歌······
中午 煮面(cook noodles)，休息(have a rest)，······
下午 看动画片（watch cartoons）,做家务，看书······
感受 …… 要求：１. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥；
２. 语句通顺、意思连贯、书写工整；
３. 词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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