【五步达标训练】Unit 1 写作精讲精练（含答案）（新目标八年级上册Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation）

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Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation 五步达标训练
【主题分析】
本单元写作情境属于 “人与社会“主题范畴中 “历史与文化”这一主题群，涉及子主题“文化景观”。常见的写作任务是介绍自己或他人的旅游和度假经历与见闻，体裁多为记叙文或书信等应用文。
【写作方法】
写游记类作文，根据写作要求，先获得写作信息
A 游记类作文，是记叙文
B 共分三段
第一段：交代时间、地点、天气
第二段：重点写活动的内容。
第三段： 我的感受
C 时态用一般过去时。
【素材积累】
单词：weather , wonderful , wonder , exciting , easy , hungry , tired
短语：by bike , arrived at /in , feel like
句子：1 Last weekend , I went to....
2 We also visited ...
3 For lunch , we had ..
4 At last , we felt a little tired but we ...
【思路妙解】
【典型例题】
周日，你们班组织了一次去i幸福有机农场的社会实践活动。假如你是你校英语角的一员，请以“Our trip to the Happy Organic Farm”为题，准备一篇发言稿，在本周五的英语角向大家分享此次活动。
要点：1. 当天的天气如何，使用何种交通方式；
你们参加了哪些活动。
活动感想是什么。
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【思路点拨】
Our trip to the Happy Organic Farm
引入主题，交代活动的时间、地点、参与者和天气： Last Sunday , our class went to the Happy Organic Farm . It was ..
细节描写：介绍活动的内容： First/In the morning ... Then/At noon ... / After that /In the afternoon .. /Finally ...
总结：谈谈感受：We felt a little tired but we ..
【素材积累】
常用短语
along the way ________________
show sb around ________________
be good for __________________
想要做某事______________________
玩得愉快_____________________
常用句子
We went there by school bus .我们乘坐校车去了那里。
It was so big and clean. 它很大很干净。
We picked some strawberries there. 我们在哪里摘了一些草莓。
We felt a little tired but we enjoyed the trip . 我们柑橘有点儿累，但我们喜欢这次旅行。
【高分模板】
Our trip to the Happy Organic Farm .
Good afternoon , everyone . Last Sunday , our class went to the Happy Organic Farm . It was sunny and warm that day .
We went there by school bus . We talked and sang happily along the way . At about 9:00 a.m. , we got there . (2) The farm workers there gave us a warm welcome and they showed us around the farm . It was so big and clean . An hour later , we listened to a talk in a big hall . (3) From the talk we knew that eating organic fruit and vegetables is good for our health . After lunch , we picked some strawberries there . They tasted delicious . (4) How time flies ! At 3:00 p.m. , we had to leave there.
We felt a little tired but we enjoyed the trip . We want to visit it again.
【名师点评】
短文介绍了作者的班级去幸福有机农场进行社会实践活动的经历。这次经历加深了大家对生活的理解和感悟。
开篇点题，交代了活动发生的时间、地点、参与者和天气。
过渡句，自然而然地过渡到具体的活动中。
句中that引导的宾语从句的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。
感叹句的正确运用生动地体现了作者愉快的活动经历。
并列句的恰当使用准确表达了大家对本次活动的感受。
【达标检测】
假如你是Mike, 去年暑假你在乡下（countryside )的爷爷奶奶家度过了一周的愉快时光。那里空气清新，天气也不错，你和爷爷去爬山、钓鱼，你和其他小朋友去游泳，奶奶每天给你作好吃的...请你以“M有Vacation”为题写一篇80 词左右的英文短文。
My Vacation
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参考答案：
作文训练
My vacation
I remember my last summer vacation . (开篇点题，点明时间是去年暑假）I went to see my grandparents in the countryside . I stayed there for a week . The air there was fresh , and the weather was good ,too. I went to the mountains and went fishing with my grandfather . And I went swimming with my friends on the hot afternoon . Every day , my grandma cooked delicious food for me (描写 “我”在乡下的美好时光，正确使用一般过去时态，go ,be,stay ,cook 等词的过去式形式正确；叙事清楚）I had a great time (概括自己的感受）How I miss the days there ! (how引导的感叹句再次表达对过去的怀念；书写工整）
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