2024届高考英语专题复习 读后续写个人美好品德类 To be honest 讲义 （无答案）
文档属性
| 名称 | 2024届高考英语专题复习 读后续写个人美好品德类 To be honest 讲义 （无答案） |  | |
| 格式 | docx | ||
| 文件大小 | 21.3KB | ||
| 资源类型 | 教案 | ||
| 版本资源 | 通用版 | ||
| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2023-08-25 08:25:43 | ||
图片预览
文档简介
01读后续写原题目
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When the last customer left KFC, it was already 10:30 pm. Adam, an 18-year-old college student, dragged himself home. He had been working at KFC for over a month that summer vacation.
Entering his room, Adam found his younger brother Bill sitting on the edge of his bed with an uneasy expression on his face.
"Sorry, Adam. I... I did something wrong," Bill sprang up and said nervously.
"What is it "
"This afternoon I sneaked (溜) out for a ride on your motorcycle and accidentally hit our neighbor Osman Brook's car. I was so scared and I... I hurried home in panic."
"Is the car seriously damaged "
"The left headlight got broken."
"It's truly your fault and it's really dangerous to ride a motorcycle at your age. Besides, it's illegal," Adam raised his voice, obviously annoyed. Hearing this, Bill lowered his head and bit his lips hard.
"Anyway, it's no use crying over spilt milk. I will deal with it tomorrow. Now you go to bed and have a good sleep."
The next morning when Adam got up, Bill was still sleeping soundly酣畅地. Adam was more determined about what he ought to dd as an elder brother.
After breakfast, Adam took out all the money he had earned and went out of the house with it. In the yard he saw his motorcycle, on whose side the scratches (划痕) were clearly visible. Adam shook his head and sighed slightly. Then he squared挺直 his shoulders and quickened his pace to Osman's house.
When he arrived, he was welcomed by Osman's wife Mary, who told him that Osman had gone to the garage to have his car repaired.
"I have something important to tell him. Can I wait until he comes back " Adam requested eagerly.
"Of course. He should be home soon," Mary invited Adam in, served him a cup of coffee and began chatting with him.
After half an hour, the door opened and in came Osman. Having said hello to each other, Osman and Adam both sat down on the sofa.
注意：1.续写词数应在150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Adam cleared his throat and began to speak.
Paragraph 2: Just then, there came a knock at the door.
02续写内容解析
从给出的前文可知，文中出现了三个主要人物，Bill, Adam 和 Osman。年轻的弟弟 Bill未经哥哥Adam允许，骑他的摩托车外出，撞坏了邻居 Osman 的汽车。事故发生后，担惊受怕的 Bill 选择直接逃回家。忐忑不安的 Bill一直等到 Adam当天夜里下班回家后，向他讲述了事情经过，Adam严厉批评 Bill。经过慎重考虑后，Adam决定承担作为兄长应负的责任：替弟弟到Osman家道歉认错。
根据续写部分第一段首句“Adam cleared his throat and began to speak.”及文中关键信息“After breakfast, Adam took out all the money he had earned and went out of the house with it.”可以判断，本段应描写 Adam 如何向 Osman 道歉，并提出用自己的个人积蓄赔偿损失及Osman对此的反应。本段需要侧重神态、语言和动作描写。
根据续写部分第二段首句“Just then, there came a knock at the door.”及文章情节合理发展的需要，敲门的人应是文中出现的主要人物之一：Bill。经过激烈思想斗争的 Bill，最终选择找Osman认错。本段需描写兄弟俩见面后的反应、Bill 的行为表现、Osman 对兄弟二人的态度和评价以及事件的最终结局。本段需侧重语言、神态、动作及情感描写，在情感升华上应注意凸显诚实做人的主题，体现正确的价值观导向。
注意：1. 第二段敲门的人可以是其他人，故事也可以是不同的结局，只要符合文章主题，体现正能量，故事情节能自圆其说即可。2. 续写部分必须提到 Adam 拿的钱，可以用来赔偿，也可以用来买礼物等。如果丝毫不提及，属于与前文情节脱节，建议降档处理。
03素材积累：
1.埃里克提高了嗓门，显然很生气。Eric raised his voice, obviously annoyed. 他将嗓门提得更高了。He raised his voice to an even higher pitch(音调).
2.听到这话，比尔低下头，用力咬了咬嘴唇。Hearing this, Bill lowered his head and bit his lips hard.（非谓语）lower: (使)降低; (使)跌落克里斯蒂娜脸一红，匆忙垂下了眼睛。Christina blushed and hastily lowered her eyes.·电影·《泰坦尼克号 Titanic》01:49:35,270 - 01:49:36,660Blimey. Keep lowering!Steady! Make it taut! And winch out!天哪 继续往下放稳住 绳子拉紧 去转绞盘
3.泪水充满了他的眼睛，因为他非常清楚他哥哥想要如何得到山地自行车。Tears filled his eyes,because he knew very well how his brother wanted to get the mountain bike.
4.看到这里，埃里克擦掉了哥哥脸上的泪水，伤心道：“我以后可以赚钱，但我们不能丢我们的诚实！Seeing this, Eric wiped off the tears in his brother’s face and sad " I can earn money in the future, but we can't lose our honest！"
5.兄弟俩放松地离开了史密斯先生的家。The brothers left Mr.Smith’s house in a relieved mood.（巧用介词短语）relieved：adj：放心的 宽慰的 | 同义词： alleviated . eased听到这不是真的,我感到宽心了。I am relieved to hear that this isn’t true.但我内心深处仍然感到宽慰。But I still felt relieved deep inside.·美剧· 《实习医生格蕾》第十五季 Grey's Anatomy Season 15 第13集: I Walk the LineOkay, so, now can we talk about how you feel Relieved,mostly.A little gloaty.现在能聊聊你的感受了吗 主要就是松了一口气也有点小骄傲
6.她向他们竖起了大拇指，并愉快地称赞了他们。She gave them a thumbs-up and praised them happily.他竖起了大拇指表示赞同。He gave a thumbs-up sign.
04参考范文
Adam cleared his throat and began to speak. “Mr. Brook, I’m here to make an apology. Yesterday afternoon my brother Bill damaged your car and ran away in panic. We are awfully sorry for that.” “Oh, I see. But it’s no big deal,” Osman smiled. Then Adam drew out the money from his pocket and said to Osman with sincerity, “This is all the money I have. I wonder if it can pay for your loss.” However, Osman insisted that it was only minor damage and declined拒绝 to take it.
亚当清了清嗓子，开始说话。“布鲁克先生，我是来道歉的。昨天下午，我哥哥比尔弄坏了你的车，惊慌失措地逃跑了。我们对此感到非常抱歉。”“哦，我明白了。但没什么大不了的，”奥斯曼笑着说。然后亚当从口袋里掏出钱，真诚地对奥斯曼说：“这是我所有的钱。我不知道它能不能弥补你的损失。”然而，奥斯曼坚持说这只是轻微的损坏，并拒绝了拒绝拿着它。
Just then, there came a knock at the door. Osman went to answer it, only to find Bill standing outside. “Morning, Mr. Brook. I … I’ve come to say sorry for …” Bill stammered结巴. But Osman laughed and let him in. The two brothers were both surprised and glad to see each other. Osman gave them a thumbs-up大拇指 and praised them happily, “Good boys, I truly appreciate your honesty. Just forget about my car.” Whatever the boys said, Osman wouldn’t take the money. Finally, he accepted their suggestion that they make it up to him by doing some work in his garden.
就在这时，有人敲门。奥斯曼去应门，却发现比尔站在外面。“早上好，布鲁克先生。我……我是来为……道歉的。”比尔结结巴巴地说结巴. 但是奥斯曼笑着让他进去了。兄弟俩见到对方都很惊讶也很高兴。奥斯曼向他们竖起大拇指大拇指并愉快地称赞他们：“好孩子，我真的很感激你的诚实。忘了我的车吧。”不管孩子们说什么，奥斯曼都不会接受这笔钱。最后，他接受了他们的建议，让他们在他的花园里干活来补偿他。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When the last customer left KFC, it was already 10:30 pm. Adam, an 18-year-old college student, dragged himself home. He had been working at KFC for over a month that summer vacation.
Entering his room, Adam found his younger brother Bill sitting on the edge of his bed with an uneasy expression on his face.
"Sorry, Adam. I... I did something wrong," Bill sprang up and said nervously.
"What is it "
"This afternoon I sneaked (溜) out for a ride on your motorcycle and accidentally hit our neighbor Osman Brook's car. I was so scared and I... I hurried home in panic."
"Is the car seriously damaged "
"The left headlight got broken."
"It's truly your fault and it's really dangerous to ride a motorcycle at your age. Besides, it's illegal," Adam raised his voice, obviously annoyed. Hearing this, Bill lowered his head and bit his lips hard.
"Anyway, it's no use crying over spilt milk. I will deal with it tomorrow. Now you go to bed and have a good sleep."
The next morning when Adam got up, Bill was still sleeping soundly酣畅地. Adam was more determined about what he ought to dd as an elder brother.
After breakfast, Adam took out all the money he had earned and went out of the house with it. In the yard he saw his motorcycle, on whose side the scratches (划痕) were clearly visible. Adam shook his head and sighed slightly. Then he squared挺直 his shoulders and quickened his pace to Osman's house.
When he arrived, he was welcomed by Osman's wife Mary, who told him that Osman had gone to the garage to have his car repaired.
"I have something important to tell him. Can I wait until he comes back " Adam requested eagerly.
"Of course. He should be home soon," Mary invited Adam in, served him a cup of coffee and began chatting with him.
After half an hour, the door opened and in came Osman. Having said hello to each other, Osman and Adam both sat down on the sofa.
注意：1.续写词数应在150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Adam cleared his throat and began to speak.
Paragraph 2: Just then, there came a knock at the door.
02续写内容解析
从给出的前文可知，文中出现了三个主要人物，Bill, Adam 和 Osman。年轻的弟弟 Bill未经哥哥Adam允许，骑他的摩托车外出，撞坏了邻居 Osman 的汽车。事故发生后，担惊受怕的 Bill 选择直接逃回家。忐忑不安的 Bill一直等到 Adam当天夜里下班回家后，向他讲述了事情经过，Adam严厉批评 Bill。经过慎重考虑后，Adam决定承担作为兄长应负的责任：替弟弟到Osman家道歉认错。
根据续写部分第一段首句“Adam cleared his throat and began to speak.”及文中关键信息“After breakfast, Adam took out all the money he had earned and went out of the house with it.”可以判断，本段应描写 Adam 如何向 Osman 道歉，并提出用自己的个人积蓄赔偿损失及Osman对此的反应。本段需要侧重神态、语言和动作描写。
根据续写部分第二段首句“Just then, there came a knock at the door.”及文章情节合理发展的需要，敲门的人应是文中出现的主要人物之一：Bill。经过激烈思想斗争的 Bill，最终选择找Osman认错。本段需描写兄弟俩见面后的反应、Bill 的行为表现、Osman 对兄弟二人的态度和评价以及事件的最终结局。本段需侧重语言、神态、动作及情感描写，在情感升华上应注意凸显诚实做人的主题，体现正确的价值观导向。
注意：1. 第二段敲门的人可以是其他人，故事也可以是不同的结局，只要符合文章主题，体现正能量，故事情节能自圆其说即可。2. 续写部分必须提到 Adam 拿的钱，可以用来赔偿，也可以用来买礼物等。如果丝毫不提及，属于与前文情节脱节，建议降档处理。
03素材积累：
1.埃里克提高了嗓门，显然很生气。Eric raised his voice, obviously annoyed. 他将嗓门提得更高了。He raised his voice to an even higher pitch(音调).
2.听到这话，比尔低下头，用力咬了咬嘴唇。Hearing this, Bill lowered his head and bit his lips hard.（非谓语）lower: (使)降低; (使)跌落克里斯蒂娜脸一红，匆忙垂下了眼睛。Christina blushed and hastily lowered her eyes.·电影·《泰坦尼克号 Titanic》01:49:35,270 - 01:49:36,660Blimey. Keep lowering!Steady! Make it taut! And winch out!天哪 继续往下放稳住 绳子拉紧 去转绞盘
3.泪水充满了他的眼睛，因为他非常清楚他哥哥想要如何得到山地自行车。Tears filled his eyes,because he knew very well how his brother wanted to get the mountain bike.
4.看到这里，埃里克擦掉了哥哥脸上的泪水，伤心道：“我以后可以赚钱，但我们不能丢我们的诚实！Seeing this, Eric wiped off the tears in his brother’s face and sad " I can earn money in the future, but we can't lose our honest！"
5.兄弟俩放松地离开了史密斯先生的家。The brothers left Mr.Smith’s house in a relieved mood.（巧用介词短语）relieved：adj：放心的 宽慰的 | 同义词： alleviated . eased听到这不是真的,我感到宽心了。I am relieved to hear that this isn’t true.但我内心深处仍然感到宽慰。But I still felt relieved deep inside.·美剧· 《实习医生格蕾》第十五季 Grey's Anatomy Season 15 第13集: I Walk the LineOkay, so, now can we talk about how you feel Relieved,mostly.A little gloaty.现在能聊聊你的感受了吗 主要就是松了一口气也有点小骄傲
6.她向他们竖起了大拇指，并愉快地称赞了他们。She gave them a thumbs-up and praised them happily.他竖起了大拇指表示赞同。He gave a thumbs-up sign.
04参考范文
Adam cleared his throat and began to speak. “Mr. Brook, I’m here to make an apology. Yesterday afternoon my brother Bill damaged your car and ran away in panic. We are awfully sorry for that.” “Oh, I see. But it’s no big deal,” Osman smiled. Then Adam drew out the money from his pocket and said to Osman with sincerity, “This is all the money I have. I wonder if it can pay for your loss.” However, Osman insisted that it was only minor damage and declined拒绝 to take it.
亚当清了清嗓子，开始说话。“布鲁克先生，我是来道歉的。昨天下午，我哥哥比尔弄坏了你的车，惊慌失措地逃跑了。我们对此感到非常抱歉。”“哦，我明白了。但没什么大不了的，”奥斯曼笑着说。然后亚当从口袋里掏出钱，真诚地对奥斯曼说：“这是我所有的钱。我不知道它能不能弥补你的损失。”然而，奥斯曼坚持说这只是轻微的损坏，并拒绝了拒绝拿着它。
Just then, there came a knock at the door. Osman went to answer it, only to find Bill standing outside. “Morning, Mr. Brook. I … I’ve come to say sorry for …” Bill stammered结巴. But Osman laughed and let him in. The two brothers were both surprised and glad to see each other. Osman gave them a thumbs-up大拇指 and praised them happily, “Good boys, I truly appreciate your honesty. Just forget about my car.” Whatever the boys said, Osman wouldn’t take the money. Finally, he accepted their suggestion that they make it up to him by doing some work in his garden.
就在这时，有人敲门。奥斯曼去应门，却发现比尔站在外面。“早上好，布鲁克先生。我……我是来为……道歉的。”比尔结结巴巴地说结巴. 但是奥斯曼笑着让他进去了。兄弟俩见到对方都很惊讶也很高兴。奥斯曼向他们竖起大拇指大拇指并愉快地称赞他们：“好孩子，我真的很感激你的诚实。忘了我的车吧。”不管孩子们说什么，奥斯曼都不会接受这笔钱。最后，他接受了他们的建议，让他们在他的花园里干活来补偿他。