2024届高三英语二轮复习：一颗球换取牛奶与面包读后续写 学案
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音乐中的家庭故事
——2024年高考英语读后续写复习题
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
We were in our late 20s with a child when my husband, Ralph, finally graduated from college.
“OK, now I deserve a piano,” I blurted out when he sat down for lunch just before the graduation ceremony. A look of surprise crossed his face.
“We could never afford a piano. After so many years of hard work, we got you through school. Now I deserve a piano,” I repeated.
Several months later, Ralph, with help, moved the upright piano we bought for $ 100 into our cottage’s tiny arched dining room. It smelled a little musty, but had great tone.
Ralph started graduate school, leaving no money for private piano lessons. The first thing that came to my mind was Santa Monica City College—maybe it offered piano lessons. Skimming the catalog, I danced around the room when I found a class at the same time the boys were at preschool.
Practicing, however, was not so easy. Four-year old redheaded Denny crawled out of bed in the evening on a regular basis. That was my time to practice. He’d pad out of the bedroom in his sleeper and climb up on the bench with me. Soon he began plinking (发出叮铃声) on the high keys. I tried to ignore him. He listened to the echoes of the keys and plinked some more. Doing all I could do to keep focused on my own practicing, I continued to ignore him.
This practice pattern became an evening routine. After a while, I didn’t even hear him anymore. Ralph studied. Denny plinked on the high keys, and I focused on my piece for the end-of-the-term recital (独奏会).
That evening came. However, Ralph said he was busy preparing for the midterms and couldn’t watch Denny.
Pacing back and forth, I shook my head trying to figure out what to do. Time was running out. I bundled up Denny—with his sleeper on—and drove off to the recital with him.
“We’ll sit in the front row, Denny,” I whispered. “You have to be very quiet and listen when I am playing.” He nodded, said “Uh-huh,” and we sat down.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Denny held my hand, but then my turn came.
Paragraph 2：
A small body climbed onto the piano bench next to me.
情节分析
这个故事的情节围绕着一对夫妇展开，他们在二十多岁时有了一个名叫丹尼的孩子。丈夫拉尔夫在大学毕业后，妻子突然说出想要一架钢琴的愿望，让拉尔夫感到惊讶。尽管他们生活拮据，但他们设法购买了一架只值100美元的钢琴，并将其放在小餐厅里。然而，由于资金有限，妻子无法支付私人钢琴课程的费用。
后来，她在圣塔莫尼卡市立学院（Santa Monica City College）的课程目录中发现了一门与孩子上学时间相同的钢琴课程。然而，练习并不容易，因为四岁的丹尼经常在晚上从床上爬起来。每当妻子打算练琴时，丹尼就会爬到钢琴凳上，弹奏高音键。虽然妻子试图忽视他，但丹尼继续弹奏，沉浸在键盘的回音中。妻子努力保持专注于自己的练习，而丹尼则在弹奏高音键。
这种练琴的模式成为每天晚上的常规。久而久之，妻子甚至已经听不见他的弹奏声了。拉尔夫忙于学业，无法照看丹尼的情况下，妻子面临着一个难题。她决定将丹尼穿着睡衣带到自己的独奏会上。在演出当天，拉尔夫表示他忙于准备期中考试，无法照看丹尼。妻子不知所措地来回踱步，但时间不等人。最终，她决定将丹尼穿着睡衣带上车，一同前往独奏会。
在演出中，妻子告诉丹尼他们坐在前排，要保持安静，专心听她演奏。丹尼点了点头，回答了一个“嗯”，然后他们坐下来等待演出开始。
续写思路
Paragraph 1：
在这段中，由第一段首句内容“丹尼握着我的手，但接下来轮到我了。”以及结合题目所给短文的最后一段分析，可知，第一段可描写作者上台前叮嘱丹尼要听话，要安静。
Paragraph 2：
在这段中，由第二段首句内容““一个小小的身体爬上了我旁边的钢琴凳。”可知，第二段可描写作者注意到妻子丹尼爬上了钢琴凳，但是并没有慌张，而是更出色地完成了演奏。
参考答案
I told Danny it was my turn to play, be good, and be quiet when I play, and I'll come back to you when I'm done. He nodded and said I would be good, but I looked at Danny hesitantly and walked straight to the stage to begin my play. I want to give the audience my best. I was so absorbed in my performance that I forgot Danny was offstage.
I was playing to my heart's content, and I saw Danny climbing onto my piano stool, next to me. He was very quiet there. He didn't make a sound. He watched me play. My hanging heart calmed down and I focused more on my playing. Far from freaking me out, the arrival of the baby gave me a great deal of confidence, and I managed to complete my solo without a problem. When I finished, there was thunderous applause and I picked up my little Danni to thank the audience and waved off the stage.
我告诉丹尼，现在轮到我演奏了，他要乖乖地安静等我演奏完，我会回到他身边。他点了点头，说他会乖乖的，但我犹豫地看着丹尼，径直走向舞台开始我的演奏。我想要给观众呈现出最好的表演。我沉浸在我的演奏中，完全忘记了丹尼在舞台外面。
我尽情地弹奏着，突然看到丹尼爬上了钢琴凳，坐在我旁边。他非常安静，一声不响地观看着我演奏。我的紧张心情平静下来，我更加专注地投入到我的演奏中。宝宝的到来并没有让我感到紧张，反而给了我很大的信心，我成功地完成了独奏，没有出任何问题。当我演奏结束时，观众发出雷鸣般的掌声，我抱起小丹尼向观众致谢，并在舞台上挥手告别。
——2024年高考英语读后续写复习题
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
We were in our late 20s with a child when my husband, Ralph, finally graduated from college.
“OK, now I deserve a piano,” I blurted out when he sat down for lunch just before the graduation ceremony. A look of surprise crossed his face.
“We could never afford a piano. After so many years of hard work, we got you through school. Now I deserve a piano,” I repeated.
Several months later, Ralph, with help, moved the upright piano we bought for $ 100 into our cottage’s tiny arched dining room. It smelled a little musty, but had great tone.
Ralph started graduate school, leaving no money for private piano lessons. The first thing that came to my mind was Santa Monica City College—maybe it offered piano lessons. Skimming the catalog, I danced around the room when I found a class at the same time the boys were at preschool.
Practicing, however, was not so easy. Four-year old redheaded Denny crawled out of bed in the evening on a regular basis. That was my time to practice. He’d pad out of the bedroom in his sleeper and climb up on the bench with me. Soon he began plinking (发出叮铃声) on the high keys. I tried to ignore him. He listened to the echoes of the keys and plinked some more. Doing all I could do to keep focused on my own practicing, I continued to ignore him.
This practice pattern became an evening routine. After a while, I didn’t even hear him anymore. Ralph studied. Denny plinked on the high keys, and I focused on my piece for the end-of-the-term recital (独奏会).
That evening came. However, Ralph said he was busy preparing for the midterms and couldn’t watch Denny.
Pacing back and forth, I shook my head trying to figure out what to do. Time was running out. I bundled up Denny—with his sleeper on—and drove off to the recital with him.
“We’ll sit in the front row, Denny,” I whispered. “You have to be very quiet and listen when I am playing.” He nodded, said “Uh-huh,” and we sat down.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Denny held my hand, but then my turn came.
Paragraph 2：
A small body climbed onto the piano bench next to me.
情节分析
这个故事的情节围绕着一对夫妇展开，他们在二十多岁时有了一个名叫丹尼的孩子。丈夫拉尔夫在大学毕业后，妻子突然说出想要一架钢琴的愿望，让拉尔夫感到惊讶。尽管他们生活拮据，但他们设法购买了一架只值100美元的钢琴，并将其放在小餐厅里。然而，由于资金有限，妻子无法支付私人钢琴课程的费用。
后来，她在圣塔莫尼卡市立学院（Santa Monica City College）的课程目录中发现了一门与孩子上学时间相同的钢琴课程。然而，练习并不容易，因为四岁的丹尼经常在晚上从床上爬起来。每当妻子打算练琴时，丹尼就会爬到钢琴凳上，弹奏高音键。虽然妻子试图忽视他，但丹尼继续弹奏，沉浸在键盘的回音中。妻子努力保持专注于自己的练习，而丹尼则在弹奏高音键。
这种练琴的模式成为每天晚上的常规。久而久之，妻子甚至已经听不见他的弹奏声了。拉尔夫忙于学业，无法照看丹尼的情况下，妻子面临着一个难题。她决定将丹尼穿着睡衣带到自己的独奏会上。在演出当天，拉尔夫表示他忙于准备期中考试，无法照看丹尼。妻子不知所措地来回踱步，但时间不等人。最终，她决定将丹尼穿着睡衣带上车，一同前往独奏会。
在演出中，妻子告诉丹尼他们坐在前排，要保持安静，专心听她演奏。丹尼点了点头，回答了一个“嗯”，然后他们坐下来等待演出开始。
续写思路
Paragraph 1：
在这段中，由第一段首句内容“丹尼握着我的手，但接下来轮到我了。”以及结合题目所给短文的最后一段分析，可知，第一段可描写作者上台前叮嘱丹尼要听话，要安静。
Paragraph 2：
在这段中，由第二段首句内容““一个小小的身体爬上了我旁边的钢琴凳。”可知，第二段可描写作者注意到妻子丹尼爬上了钢琴凳，但是并没有慌张，而是更出色地完成了演奏。
参考答案
I told Danny it was my turn to play, be good, and be quiet when I play, and I'll come back to you when I'm done. He nodded and said I would be good, but I looked at Danny hesitantly and walked straight to the stage to begin my play. I want to give the audience my best. I was so absorbed in my performance that I forgot Danny was offstage.
I was playing to my heart's content, and I saw Danny climbing onto my piano stool, next to me. He was very quiet there. He didn't make a sound. He watched me play. My hanging heart calmed down and I focused more on my playing. Far from freaking me out, the arrival of the baby gave me a great deal of confidence, and I managed to complete my solo without a problem. When I finished, there was thunderous applause and I picked up my little Danni to thank the audience and waved off the stage.
我告诉丹尼，现在轮到我演奏了，他要乖乖地安静等我演奏完，我会回到他身边。他点了点头，说他会乖乖的，但我犹豫地看着丹尼，径直走向舞台开始我的演奏。我想要给观众呈现出最好的表演。我沉浸在我的演奏中，完全忘记了丹尼在舞台外面。
我尽情地弹奏着，突然看到丹尼爬上了钢琴凳，坐在我旁边。他非常安静，一声不响地观看着我演奏。我的紧张心情平静下来，我更加专注地投入到我的演奏中。宝宝的到来并没有让我感到紧张，反而给了我很大的信心，我成功地完成了独奏，没有出任何问题。当我演奏结束时，观众发出雷鸣般的掌声，我抱起小丹尼向观众致谢，并在舞台上挥手告别。