Period 4 Integrated skills
Activity 1 Read for some details
Ⅰ.Read the email on P23 and choose the best answer.
1.What’s the purpose of the email
A.To apply for a post.
B.To ask for help.
C.To make a complaint.
D.To give advice.
2.What difficulty does Leo encounter
A.He doesn’t have money to work out.
B.He feels bored every day.
C.He doesn’t know how to make it a habit to work out regularly.
D.He doesn’t like doing exercise.
Ⅱ.Read the email again and make a list of the reasons.
Why is Leo unwilling to begin working out regularly
Activity 2 Read for the structures
Read the email on P23 and do the following exercise.
The email about asking for help can include the following parts:
Beginning:Greetings. one encounters.
Body: for not working out regularly.
Ending:Ask for .Greetings.
Activity 3 Read for some good sentences
When you write an email of encouragement,you can follow the structure below.
1.Convey your comfort:
2.Give suggestions:
3.Ending:
Activity 4 Writing outline
When writing a letter of proposal,you can use the following outline.
Dear ,→Greeting
Having known that ,I am writing to offer my advice.→Body
First of all,I suggest that you should .Besides,it might be a good idea .Last but not least,how about ?→Body
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.→Close
Yours,
Li Hua→Signature
本单元的写作项目属于应用文类别中的“建议信”。建议信是写信人针对某一问题表达个人的意见,并向收信人提出一些建议或忠告的一种信件。建议信可以写给某个人,就某个问题陈述自己的观点;也可以写给某个组织或机构,就如何解决某个问题、改进服务等提出建议或忠告。
1.开头——开门见山,说明写信缘由,向对方陈述自己的观点。
2.主体——陈述具体的建议和理由。
3.结尾——希望建议能被考虑和采纳。
常用表达
1.开头部分常用表达
(1)I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely.
(2)I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
(3)Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.
(4)I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
(5)I hope you will find my suggestions/recommendations/advice helpful/useful/beneficial.
2.主体部分常用表达
(1)First(ly),why not join a club If you do this,you can make friends.
(2)Second(ly),you should/can try to talk with others.Then/In that way,you will feel better.
(3)Third(ly),it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this,you will calm yourself down.
(4)Last but not least,you should talk with...
(5)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,you should help each other.
3.结尾部分常用表达
(1)I hope you will find these ideas useful.
(2)As time goes on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.
(3)I believe that if you follow my advice,you’ll get along well with your classmates.
(4)I believe,with your trying,you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
假如你是李华,你的好朋友Peter最近身体很弱,想参加一些运动,但是不知道做什么运动好,于是他写信来征求你的建议,请你根据下面提示给他写一封信,建议他去打乒乓球。
1.乒乓球不仅是一种运动还是一项艺术;
2.打乒乓球时,我们需要判断球的方向,并用力把它打回去;
3.打乒乓球时,你还会发现球快速运动,运动员的动作也很美;
4.我认为打乒乓球能使我们强身健体。
注意:
1.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯、通顺;
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
1.确定体裁:本文为应用文;
2.确定人称:以第一人称和第二人称为主;
3.确定时态:以一般现在时为主。
谋篇
第一段:写信的目的;
第二段:对乒乓球运动的介绍以及此运动的益处;
第三段:希望建议能被考虑和采纳。
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇
1.不但……而且……
2.力气;力量
3.判断
4.方向
5.把它打回去
6.增强心肺功能
7.使我们强身健体
连词成句
1.乒乓球不仅是一种运动还是一项艺术,因为它是需要力气和技巧的。
Table tennis is a sport and an art,because it needs .
2.打乒乓球时,我们需要判断球的方向,并用力把它打回去。(用状语从句)
,we need the ball,and hit it back with great strength.
3.一场比赛过后,你会感到很累,但是这会增强你的心肺功能。
After one game you ,but it can make your heart and lungs grow stronger.
4.在比赛中,你经常会发现球快速运动,运动员的动作也很美。
In the game,you can often find the ball ,and the players’ .
第三步 句式升级
1.用not only...but also...改写句1,同时要包含一个定语从句。
2.把句2中的状语从句改写成省略句式。
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇英语短文。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise.
Yours,
Li Hua
Period 4
细读文本
Activity 1
Ⅰ.1.B 2.C
Ⅱ.He doesn’t have much time for exercise.
He doesn’t think that he has the money to work out in the gym.
He thinks it’s hard to stick with an exercise routine.
Activity 2
The difficulty Reasons help
Activity 3
1.I’m sorry to hear that...
2.What do you think of...
How do you feel about...
You’d better...
You might as well...
3.I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration.
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.
写作实践
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇
1.not only...but also... 2.strength 3.judge 4.direction 5.hit it back 6.make one’s heart and lungs grow stronger/increase the efficiency of one’s heart and lungs 7.build up our bodies
连词成句
1.strength and skill
2.When we play table tennis;judge the direction of
3.will be very tired
4.moving quickly;movements very beautiful
第三步 句式升级
1.Table tennis is not only a sport but also an art,because it is a game that/which needs strength and skill.
2.When playing table tennis,we need judge the direction of the ball,and hit it back with great strength.
第四步 组句成篇
参考范文
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise.I recommend you to play table tennis.
Table tennis is not only a sport but also an art,because it is a game that needs strength and skill.When playing table tennis,we need judge the direction of the ball,and hit it back with great strength.So after one game you will be very tired,but it can make your heart and lungs grow stronger.In the game,you can often find the ball moving quickly,and the players’ movements very beautiful.
I think playing table tennis can build up our bodies.Hope you will join me in playing table tennis.
Yours,
Li Hua