Module 1 Wonders of the world 单元写作 导学案 2023-2024学年外研版九年级英语上册

Module 1 分享一次旅游经历
简介
以每模块 Unit 2 的写作练习为依托，科学点拨写作思路，关注学生写作过程。
利用思维导图形式，直观呈现短文脉络。既重遣词造句，也重谋篇布局，同时深入浅出，结
合短文渗透语篇衔接知识。
写作任务 (Unit 2 Writing)
你校的英语公众号“一起去旅行”近日面向全校学生征文，要求同学们将自己的一次旅
行经历介绍给大家。假如你去年国庆游览过黄山，请你用英语写一篇短文，把你的旅行经历
分享给大家。
思路
1. 基调
体裁：记叙文
时态：以一般过去时为主
人称：以第一人称为主
2. 布局
游览黄山的经历 引出游览的地点-黄山 I took a trip to Mount Huangshan with my parents last National Day.
介绍黄山 (1) ______________(黄山是中国著名的自然奇观之一) . (2) ___________________(黄山位于安徽省南部) , and covers an area about 1,200 square kilometers. (3) __________________(每年都有无数的游客来游览黄山) .
游览过程及感想 It was raining when we got there by car. (4) ______________(幸运的是，大约半小时后，雨停了) . (5) ___________________(我们下车开始爬山) . (6) I especially enjoyed the sea of clouds near the top of the mountain, __________________(并且给他们拍了很多照片) . Though we felt tired, we were very happy.
3. 衔接
成文时，第一次提到“黄山”用全称 Mount Huangshan，紧接着再次提到时可以用 it
代替。用代词指称前面的事物是使文章保持简洁、连贯并避免重复的一种衔接手段。
4. 成文章
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答案
Guided Writing
2. 布局
(1) Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous natural wonders in China
(2) Mount Huangshan lies / is in the south of Anhui Province
(3) Every year, millions of visitors come to visit Mount Huangshan
(4) Luckily, after about half an hour, the rain stopped
(5) We got out of the car and started / began to climb / climbing the mountain
(6) and took many / a lot of / lots of photos / pictures of them
4. 成文章
I took a trip to Mount Huangshan with my parents last National Day.
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous natural wonders in China. It lies in the south of
Anhui Province and covers an area of about 1,200 square kilometres. Every year, millions of
visitors come to visit it.
It was raining when we got there by car. Luckily, after about half an hour, the rain stopped.
We got out of the car and started to climb the mountain. We climbed for about five hours, and
finally, we got to the top. I especially enjoyed the sea of clouds near the top of the mountain, and
took many photos of them.
Though we felt tired, we were very happy.