Module 3
向校英语广播电台投稿
假如你是校篮球队队长,请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,向校英语广播电台投稿,
介绍你校篮球队的情况。
提示:
1. 星期六早上,我们尽可能早点集合以便有更多时间热身。
2. 去年我们输了很多场比赛,因为没有刻苦训练,传球也不认真。
3. 今年我们训练得更刻苦,也更认真了。教练对我们很满意。我们今年胜算很大。
思路
1. 基调
体裁:记叙文
时态:叙述过去的事情用一般过去时;
介绍现在的情况用一般现在时
人称:以第一人称为主
2. 布局
校篮球队 现状 介绍 It is Saturday morning and our school basketball team is training hard. (1) The practice starts at 7:00, but __________________(我们尽可能早到). (2) __________________________(我们想有更多时间热身).
今昔对比 去年 Our team lost many games because we didn’t train hard and passed the ball carelessly. 今年 (3) __________________________(我们训练更加刻苦认真). The coach is pleased with us because we are playing better as a team now. (4) __________________________(所以我们现在更有机会赢).
3. 衔接
今昔对比时,可用 last year 和 this year 自然地承接上下文。
4. 成文章
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答案:
2. 布局、
(1) we arrive as early as we can
(2) We want to have more time to warm up
(3) We train harder and more carefully
(4) So we now have a better chance of winning / to win
4. 成文章
It is Saturday morning and our school basketball team is training hard. The practice starts at
7:00, but we arrive as early as we can. We want to have more time to warm up. Last year, our
team lost many games because we didn’t train hard and passed the ball carelessly. This year, we
train harder and more carefully. The coach is pleased with us because we are playing better as a
team now. So we now have a better chance of winning.