Module 4 Planes, ships and trains . 单元写作 导学案 2023-2024学年外研版八年级英语上册

Module 4 介绍旅行方式
下周的英语口语课上，老师要求同学们介绍一下从伦敦到巴黎的几种旅行方式。请你根
据下面的表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，为下周的发言做准备。
伦敦—巴黎 旅行方式 费用 耗时 舒适指数 趣味指数
长途汽车 20 10 小时 * **
飞机 80 1 小时 ** *
火车 60 3 小时 *** ***
思路
1. 基调
体裁：应用文（发言稿）；发言稿的主体部分为说明文
时态：以一般现在时为主
人称：介绍旅行方式的优缺点用第三人称
2. 布局
从伦敦到巴黎的旅行方式 引出话题—具体的旅行方式 Hello, everyone! You can go from London to Paris by coach, plane or train.
具体介绍—对比各种旅行方式的优缺点 ◆飞机 (1) ________________________(乘飞机旅行是最快的方式). Travelling by plane is the most expensive way. (2) _________________(乘飞机旅行不像乘长途汽 车或乘火车那么有趣). ◆长途汽车 The second choice is by coach. (3) ____________________(乘长途汽车旅行只需花费20 英镑). Travelling by coach is a lot cheaper than going by train or by plane. Travelling by coach is also the slowest way. Travelling by coach is not so comfortable as travelling by train or by plane. ◆火车 Also, you can travel by train. (4) __________________(乘火车旅行是最舒适、最有趣的方式). (5) _________________________(乘火车旅行也是第二便宜、第二快的方式). You can choose your favourite way.
总结全文 That's all. Thanks for listening!
3. 衔接
在表示语意过渡或转折时，可以用 but (also)；而为了语意连贯，可以用 and 来连接。
4. 成文章
Hello, everyone! _____________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thanks for listening!
答案：
2. 布局
(1) Travelling by plane is the fastest way
(2) Travelling by plane is not as / so interesting as travelling by coach or by train
(3) Travelling by coach costs only 20
(4) Travelling by train is the most comfortable and the most interesting way
(5) Travelling by train is also the second cheapest and the second fastest way
4. 成文章
Hello, everyone! You can go from London to Paris by coach, plane or train.
Travelling by plane is the fastest but also the most expensive way. And it is not as interesting
as travelling by coach or by train. The second choice is by coach. Travelling by coach costs only
20. It's a lot cheaper than going by train or by plane, but it's also the slowest way. And it's not so
comfortable as travelling by train or by plane. Also, you can travel by train. It's the most
comfortable and the most interesting way. It's also the second cheapest and the second fastest way.
You can choose your favourite way.
That's all. Thanks for listening!