Module3 Sport and health Unit 6 Caring for your health第5课时 Writing课件（25张PPT）

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Module 3 Sport and health
Unit 6 Caring for your health
第5课时 Writing
目录
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课堂练习
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写作乐园
话题十四 给朋友的一封邮件
【短文写作】
假设你是Joe，你的朋友Simon最近因九年级功课压力大而变得少言寡语，与同学沟通困难。他在英语学习方面也有困难，而且考前紧张失眠。此外，他因父母让他放弃他喜爱的篮球活动而与父母吵架。请你根据下面的内容要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，帮他找到解决方案。80词左右。
写作乐园
Dear Simon,
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Yours,
Joe
【写作指导】
在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 作文要求是写一封电子邮件，要注意电子邮件的格式；
2. 作文开篇要简洁阐述写这封电子邮件的目的——帮朋友Simon找到解决方案，所以重点应该是写解决方案，不要过多地写问题，导致作文头重脚轻；
3. 朋友Simon遇到的问题有：与同学沟通困难、英语学习、紧张失眠、与父母吵架。写作过程中提出的解决方案要合理，能够相应地解决这些问题。同时要给予鼓励和支持。
【范文赏析】
Dear Simon,
I' m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 9. I' m writing to give you some help.
You used to be outgoing and now you don' t want to express yourself because of the stress from study. And you don' t get along well with your classmates. I think you should communicate with your classmates often.
As for your English study, why not take notes in class and practise more after class Learn to relax！Take a long walk before the exam. You love basketball but your parents asked you to stop it because they want you to pay more attention to your study. If I were you, I' d talk with them instead of arguing with them.
I hope what I said could help you deal with your worries.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Joe
课堂练习
一、写作能力提升
(一)请使用所给的短语造句。
1. be busy with 忙于做……
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The Smiths have been busy with housework since morning.
2. take up 学着做；开始做
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(二)请找出句子中错误的部分，并将正确的句子写在横线上。
3. I saw she is talking with her mother.
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We should take up a hobby because hobbies are enjoyable and relaxing.
I saw she was talking with her mother.
4. Do sports is a good way to get relaxed.
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(三)请根据括号内的扩写要求，将短句扩写。
5. We should form a habit of making plans for our study. (扩写原因)
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Doing sports is a good way to get relaxed.
We should form a habit of making plans for our study because it can help us learn more efficiently.
6. We should learn to relax ourselves. (扩写方式)
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We should learn to relax ourselves by doing sports often or watching a movie.
二、读写综合　　
A. 回答问题　　　
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题，并把答案写在横线上。
When I was in primary school, I was very fat and didn' t like doing exercise. I felt tired and bored when doing any kind of exercise. Because I hardly did any exercise, I often felt sick and went to see the doctor. What' s worse, I was absent（缺席的）from school from time to time, so I couldn' t catch up with others. And my poor health made it even more difficult for me to keep on exercising. My parents were really worried about me.
One afternoon, my father asked me to have a walk with him in the park. He said it was difficult for people with very poor health to take up running and other sports at the beginning, but they could start from walking and increase endurance (耐力) little by little. With his encouragement, I agreed and we went out together. It was hard for me to walk for half an hour. I wanted to give up, but my father encouraged me to keep on walking.
From then on, I often walked with my parents. To my surprise, I could walk for an hour in the fourth month. How proud I felt! Now I am a perfect runner in my middle school. I lost all the fat and I am a healthy girl now.
1. How did the writer feel when doing any kind of exercise in primary school
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The writer / She felt tired and bored (when doing any kind of exercise in primary school).
2. Why did the writer fall behind others at school
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Because the writer / she was absent from school from time to time.
3. Who encouraged the writer to take up doing sports
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The writer' s / Her father encouraged her to take up doing sports. / The writer' s / Her father.
4. How long could the writer keep walking in the fourth month
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5. How is the writer now, healthy or unhealthy
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The writer / She could keep walking for an hour in the fourth month. / For an hour.
The writer / She is healthy now.
B. 书面表达
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们来说是非常重要的。你认为我们应该如何养成健康的生活习惯 请你根据下面的内容要点，写一篇短文来给出你的建议。
内容包括：
(1) 关于作息的建议；(2) 关于饮食的建议；
(3) 关于运动的建议；(4) 补充其他建议。
作文要求：　
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。　　
(2)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
I think healthy habits are very important to us.
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Here are some ways to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink more water and fewer soft drinks.
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Third， we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally， we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don' t feel well， we should go to see the doctor at once.
THANKS!