【2015中考复习方案】2015届九年级英语复习课件（山西专用）：主题写作+五　人物故事篇（共16张PPT）

课件16张PPT。主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇话题分析自学反馈重点突破 人物故事类书面表达一般针对考生熟悉的著名人物或者同学、朋友来设题，要求考生对人物进行描写。主要涉及描写人物的简历、变化以及自己对此人物的看法等。此类试题通常以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇常用表达1．My friend Jenny comes from New York.
2．She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses.
3．He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the people in trouble.
4．I want to be a person like Helen from now and get along well with everyone.主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇5．I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend—David.
6．He is a 15－year－old student, who is outgoing.
7．He is good at playing basketball.
8．I hope that he will become a famous person in the future and we can keep in touch with each other. 主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇在初中三年的英语学习中，Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给同学们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的短文。
注意：1.词数：80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。典型例题主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He ________________________________________________________________________主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇【审题思路】
1．找出关键点：外貌、爱好、性格特征；
2．列出提纲。从以上三个方面简单列出提纲；
3．明确时态：主要使用一般现在时；
4．确定人称：第三人称。
【写作模板】主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇【佳作赏析】
My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses (结合要点：描写图片中人物的长相). He is good at playing computer games (结合要点：写擅长玩电脑游戏), but_(转折词的使用，使行文跌宕起伏) he dislikes sports. He has many good personalities. He is helpful (结合要点：写乐于助人). He often_(频度副词的使用，使文章流畅自然) helps his classmates with the homework, 主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇and also_(副词的使用，使文章过渡自然) helps the old cross the road. He is kind to others (结合要点：写对人友善). He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is also creative (结合要点：写有创造性). For_example_(举例说明，使文章生动), he can create a TV program. He is generous to his friends (结合要点：适当展开). He likes to share his things with them. So (so一词引出作者学到的内容) I want to be a person like Daniel from now and get along well with everyone.主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇2014 ·山西百校联考一“爸爸去哪儿”自播出之日起就受到了大家的热捧。爸爸是每个人心中的大树，孩子是爸爸最美的礼物。你和爸爸在生活中的点滴故事都是人生中的财富。请根据以下提示写一篇短文。
■ What is your father like?
■ Tell us a story about you and your father.
■ What will you do to show your love for your father?挑战自我主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇要求：1.不少于80词；
2．不要出现真实的人名和校名。自学反馈重点突破 主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇One possible version:
It is not easy to find a suitable word to describe my father. He is neither strong nor tall. Like most fathers, he is not talkative, either. Because of his quietness, we seldom communicate with each other. But one thing changed my idea and I felt his deep love.自学反馈重点突破 主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇That day, it was the first time for me to ride a bike to school by myself. At the first sight of the heavy traffic, I was scared. But I had no choice but to ride alone carefully. It was a real challenge for me. How I envied my classmates who were on their fathers' bikes. Finally, I arrived at school. When I looked back, I found my father's smiling face, full of pride and encouragement. 自学反馈重点突破 主题写作 (五)　人物故事篇Since then, I have realized how much my father cares about me. Being his kid, I will invite my father out for a walk when we are free, or just to have a talk and spend time together. It is my pleasure for me to help him with some chores. Most importantly, I will show my love for him and let him know I will be always proud of being his son. 自学反馈重点突破