课件15张PPT。主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇话题分析自学反馈重点突破 与环保相关的书面表达通常是先列举环境中出现的某一现象,要求考生先就该现象进行描述,然后提出建议,最后阐述自己的观点。主要涉及低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境等。此类试题通常以要点提示的方式来考查。主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇常用表达1.It's important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
2.The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.
3.People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.
4.In order to live a better life, it's time for us to protect our world.主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇5.We should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution.
6.I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper.
7.I hope our world will be more and more beautiful.主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是一个注重“低碳生活”的中学生,假设你是他,请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。
要点:
1.每天步行上学;
2.离开教室时,关灯、电扇、电视等;典型例题主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇3.不用水时,记得关水龙头,循环使用水;
4.不使用塑料袋;
5.充分使用纸张。
参考词汇:on foot, turn off, tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic bag 主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇【审题思路】
1.明确主旨:节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起;
2.写作要点:见提示点1—5;
3.时态:一般现在时;
4.人称:第一人称。
【写作模板】 主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇【佳作赏析】
My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I go to school on foot every day(结合要点:说明每天步行上学). I always_(副词的使用使行文流畅) remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when_I_leave_the_classroom_(when引导的时间状语从句). When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap (结合要点:描写关掉水龙头). I often_(副词的使用使行文流畅自然) reuse water, for example, when I finish主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor(结合要点:适当发挥). I never use plastic bags (结合要点:描写不使用塑料袋). I think saving paper is necessary, so_(so的使用使文章过渡自然) I often make full use of paper (结合要点:描写充分利用纸张).
It's_important_for_us_to_live_a_low-carbon_life_to_protect_the_environment_(it作形式主语,动词不定式为真正主语). 主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活。而我们的工作、生活、生产又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境?请以“How to protect/save our environment/world?”为题写一篇短文。挑战自我主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇提示: 存在问题:1.水污染和大气污染越来越严重;
2.森林被破坏和砍伐;
3.白色垃圾随处可见。
要求:如何改善/保护环境?至少写出3-4个方面。
词数:80词左右。自学反馈重点突破 主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
自学反馈重点突破 主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇One possible version:
How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We nearly have no clean water to drink because of water pollution. And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a自学反馈重点突破 主题写作 (八) 环境保护篇better life, it's time for us to protect our world.
Firstly, we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. Don't use plastic bags. Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.自学反馈重点突破