【2015中考复习方案】2015届九年级英语复习课件（山西专用）：主题写作+九　安全问题篇（共17张PPT）

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主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
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安全问题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等。此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
常用表达
1．As students, we should keep safety in mind.
2．As a result, safety must come first!
3．We should try our best to make sure we are safe.
4．If we are in danger, we must call the police for help so that we can keep ourselves safe.
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
5．We must remember it is dangerous for us to swim alone in the river.
6．Safety is the most important thing in our life.
7．We should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home.
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
为了增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
典型例题
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
注意：
1．内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3．词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： be careful, on line, danger, call…for, go bad
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
How to keep safe
As teenagers，we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions. First，________________________________________________________________________
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
【审题思路】
1．明确主题：本文根据图片内容就“如何保持安全”这一话题进行阐述；
2．写作要点：(1) 慎重交友；(2)遇险报警；(3) 安全饮食；(4)自己的观点；
3．时态：一般现在时；
4．人称：第一人称。
【写作模板】
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
【佳作赏析】
How to keep safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions. First (与second，also，last使文章布局合理，条理清晰), we should be careful when_we_make_friends (时间状语从句), especially on line. Second, if_we_are_in_danger (条件状语从句，一般现在时表示将来), we must call the police for help in time
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
so_that_we_can_keep_ourselves_safe (目的状语从句). Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating_food (动名词作主语，高级用法) that_goes_bad (定语从句) will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it_is_dangerous_to_swim_alone_in_the_river(it作形式主语，to swim alone in the river作真正主语). (结合要点：说明自己的观点)
In_short (进行简要总结), safety must come first!
主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
近来，全国正在进行平安校园建设，作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更加注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Daming，担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。
内容提示：
(1)不带管制刀具到学校；
(2)不私自下河洗澡；
(3)不打架；
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主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全；
(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。
……
参考词汇：restricted knives or things(管制刀具)；have a bath(洗澡)；fight(打架)；emergency(紧急情况)；pay attention to the traffic(注意交通安全)。
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主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。
(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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主题写作 (九)　安全问题篇
Dear students，
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Daming
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One possible version:
Dear students，
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds alone without our parents' permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned.
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Make sure that we always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours，
Daming
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