Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time! Lesson 4 Writing 学案 人教版英语八年级上册

Lesson 4　Writing
综合练习
A．回答问题
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题。
　　Life and study are hard for all of us．And junior middle school students have every reason to say so．Besides, 48.8% of middle school students show signs of mental(精神的) health problems．Recently, Zhejiang Province did a survey(调查) of young people's mental health．It found that junior middle school students in Zhejiang feel the biggest stress from schools among teenagers． What do students worry about “First, the class ranking(排名) after exams．Second, students are afraid that they can't reach their parents' expectation，” Youth Times reported． This is not only true with Chinese students．The American Psychological Association recently did a similar survey．The results are surprising: In the US, teenagers have a higher level of stress than adults．For them, one of the biggest reasons for stress is also schoolwork． What can we do to help out “To begin with, you can live your life actively．Sleep for 9－10 hours a day, find someone to exercise with every day, and eat healthily，” said Norman B．Anderson．“Also, try to keep away from mobile phones and computers．If you spend too much time on them, you will more likely feel terrible，” said experts.
1．How many middle school students show signs of mental health problems according to the passage
48.8%(of middle school students show signs of mental health problems)．
2．Which province did a survey of young people's mental health recently
Zhejiang Province (did a survey of young people's mental health recently)．
3．Where's the biggest stress among teenagers from according to the survey in Zhejiang Province
The biggest stress among teenagers is from schools./From schools.
4．Which country's teenagers have the same stress as Chinese teenagers
American teenagers (have the same stress as Chinese teenagers)．
5．How long does Norman B．Anderson suggest us sleep a day
Norman B．Anderson suggests us sleep for 9－10 hours a day./9－10 hours(a day)．
【短语积累】
1．mental health心理健康
2．worry about担心
3．keep away from ..．远离……
4．spend ..．on sth．在某事/物上花费……
5．to begin with首先；起初
【难句解析及仿写】
1．For them, one of the biggest reasons for stress is also schoolwork．
对他们来说，压力最大的原因之一也是学业。
解析：“one of the＋形容词最高级＋可数名词复数”意为“最……之一”。
仿写：在学生的生活中，教育是最重要的事情之一。
One of the most important things in students' life is education.
2．If you spend too much time on them, you will more likely feel terrible，” said experts.
解析：这是if引导的条件状语从句，时态是“主将从现”。
仿写：如果你遵守交通规则，你会更加安全。
If you follow the traffic rules, you will be safer.
B．书面表达
假如你是Miss Lin，你收到了来自李华的一封电子邮件，邮件里讲述了他这次月考成绩并不理想，并害怕告诉他的父母此事。请你给李华回复一封英文邮件，帮助他解决这个问题。内容包括：
1．你对李华的烦恼的看法；
2．我们应该如何处理生活上遇到的问题或烦恼(至少两点)。
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。
2．语句连贯，词数80左。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
写作提炼
★审题定人称： 第一人称
★审题定时态： 一般现在时、一般将来时
★审题列提纲：
★素材积累：
【提分好词】
1．害怕做某事 be afraid to do sth．
2．起初 at first
3．最好不做某事 it's best not to do sth.
4．逃避 run away from
5．犯错误 make mistakes
【提分好句】
1．如果你告诉他们，开始的时候他们可能会生气。
If you tell them, they may be angry at first.
2．他们将会理解你并帮助你提升成绩的。
They will be understanding and help you improve your grades.
3．问题和担心在生活中很正常。
Problems and worries are normal in life.
★实战训练：
Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear about your problem．I know you are afraid to tell your parents that you failed the exam．But I think you should tell your parents the problem．If you don't talk to them about your problems, you will feel worse．If you tell your parents, they may be angry at first．But I think they will be understanding and help you improve your grades．Share problems with people you trust, and there will be more people to help you．Problems and worries are normal in life．It is best not to run away from the problems, but try to solve them．I really hope my advice can help you．
Yours，
Miss Lin