2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项读后续写情绪描写练习课件(共28张PPT)

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读后续写
（一）情绪描写
读后续写情感描写
1. 喜乐：Kate laughed, happiness and hope bubbling(冒泡)with her.
凯特笑了，幸福和希望围绕着她
2. 愤怒: He glared at me with burning eyes. 他用灼热的眼睛瞪着我。
3. 悲伤 （三选一）
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。
2. I felt like I was floating in an ocean of sadness.我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。
3. It was raining in my heart. 我的心在下雨。
4. 害怕:My heart seemed to jump out of my throat, and my legs were too weak to stand.我的心似乎从喉咙里跳了出来，我的腿太虚弱了，站不起来.
5.惊讶:
The shock of the news quite took my breath away. 这消息的震惊使我大吃一惊。6.后悔: Shame hitting, the woman kept silent, having no courage to look her husband in the eye. 羞耻感袭来，女人保持沉默，没有勇气直视丈夫的眼睛。
7.烦恼: He looked like an ant on a hot pot.他看起来像火锅上的蚂蚁。
8.希望：At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him.
在这黑暗而绝望的时刻，他想到了一个好主意。
9. 感谢：Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
10. I swollowed the emotion down my throat and met her pale blue eyes.
我控制住我的情绪，看着她灰蓝色的眼睛。
读后续写情感描写
1. 喜乐：凯特笑了，幸福和希望围绕着她
2. 愤怒: 他用灼热的眼睛瞪着我。
3. 悲伤 （三选一）
他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。
我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。
我的心在下雨。
4. 害怕:我的心似乎从喉咙里跳了出来，我的腿太虚弱了，站不起来.
5.惊讶:
这消息的震惊使我大吃一惊。
6.后悔: 羞耻感袭来，女人保持沉默，没有勇气直视丈夫的眼睛。
7.烦恼: 他看起来像火锅上的蚂蚁。
8.希望：在这黑暗而绝望的时刻，他想到了一个好主意。
9. 感谢：她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
教学课件
高考英语读后续写
三个万能情感句
Part1：
第一个情感万能句
这个句式，非常简单。属于入门级的情感描述句。主句是用来描述情绪产生的原因。首先我们来看例句：
To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.令我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
To one's +情绪名词，主句
要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如：
【正态度】
amazement惊奇, delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋,
【负态度】
annoyance烦恼, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤,
【中性态度】
puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶
【升级1】加强情绪的语气
比如我想要表达的是：非常令我吃惊的是，汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。你可以这样写：Much / Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
也就是在to前面加上much, greatly，或者在名词前面添加great这个形容词：
To my great surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级2】to the +情绪名词+ of sb（名词或者代词）
比如我想要表达的是：
令他的父母感到吃惊的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
To the surprise f his parents, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
这里把To my surprise改成了To the surprise f his parents ，本质上，是两种所有格的变换。
【升级3】情绪名词叠加使用。
比如我要表达：令他惊讶和高兴的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖
To his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级4】：“to one’s +情绪名词”位置可变换
这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请看下面例句：
I，to my surprise, found that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
Part2：
第二个情感万能句
What+情绪动词+sb +was +that从句
What 主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里通常可以表达故事发展情节。
【举例】
让我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
What surprised me was that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【归纳整理】
【高兴类】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,
【生气类】annoy, upset【惊讶类】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze
【害怕类】frighten, scare, terrify,
【失望类】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore
【忧虑类】worry, concern，
【其他类】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
Part3：
第三个情感万能句
sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.
这句话表示：“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。”
这个万能句也可以用来描写情绪和心理，比句式结构比前两个句子要复杂，表现力也要更丰富。well up表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆：well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义。surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.，把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。我们先来看两个例句：
举例：Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
举例2：Jane感到一股强烈的嫉妒，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是“嫉妒”的名词形式。）
升级一：句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
举例：看到丈夫再跟一个漂亮的女孩聊天 ，Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧在内心升腾，奔涌
Seeing his husband chatting with a beautiful girl , Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
升级二：句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果。
请看下面的例句：
简感到一种强烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出来，把书扔向女孩。
Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her ,throwing the book at the girl.
教学课件
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（三）外貌性格描写
1.外貌描写
(1) 她圆圆的脸上有一双蓝色的眼睛，还有两个可爱的酒窝。
①On her round face are a pair of blue eyes and lovely dimples. (倒装句型)
(2)李老师三十多岁，身材适中/瘦小/结实，一个矮/高的人。
①Miss Li is in her thirties with a medium/slim/stout build ，a short / tall person.
2.性格描写
①Such is Ms. Han, an easygoing, kind and warm hearted woman.
韩老师是一个随和善良又热心肠的女人。
②Though he comes from a poor family, he is a person of great determination and courage.
他虽出身贫寒，但拥有坚强的意志和勇气。
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（四）环境描写
1.The wind is whispering in the tree.
树在树丛中沙沙作响
2.The wind was widely howling/roaring.
狂风呼啸。
3.The hills are bathed in the sunlight
群山沐浴在阳光下。
4.Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.
沐浴在阳光下，享受着美丽的风景，我们向目的地出发。
5.Gray mist and clouds were swept away in the night by the wind.
灰色的雾和云朵在夜晚被风吹散了。
6.Mist was rolling in from the sea.
薄雾从海上涌来.
7.A darkness ruled the forest.
黑暗统治了深林.
8.The water glitters in the sunlight.
水面在阳光下闪闪发光.
8.The silence of the night was punctuated by the distant rumble of traffic.
夜晚的宁静被远处车辆的隆隆声所打破。
9.A heavy silence blanketed(n.毯子/v.包裹) the room.
房间里一片沉寂。
10.The river is flowing slowly.
河水缓缓的流动。
11.The frozen snow crunched/cracked under our feet.
冰冻的雪在我们脚下嘎吱作响。
12.The heavy rain was beating against the window.
大雨打在窗户上。
13.The sky was decorated/ dotted with sparkling stars.
天空点缀着闪闪发光的星星。
14.The fragrant flowers attracted lots of birds, lingering(v.逗留)around them.
芬芳的花朵吸引了许多鸟儿，它们在周围徘徊。
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（五）有用套句
情感升华/点题/首尾呼应：
With the boy’s company, the old man was no longer a lonely soul. （范文）
Finally, the old man came to understand a truth that you will not feel lonely when you open your heart.
I suddenly understand how nice it is to live in a warm atmosphere of love.
情感升华/点题/首尾呼应：
Maybe your life is a mess, but don’t forget to make friends.
When you open you heart, the sun, warmth and love will be close to you!
变成倒装句：
Only when you open you heart, will the sun, warmth and love be close to you.
Only when we open up the door of our heart, can we enjoy the warmth of love and care.