2024届高三英语一轮复习 ： 拥有了一切的男孩读后续写练习（含答案）
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When I was a baby, my parents gave me anything I wanted. I would play with a toy for a while get bored, and ask my parents for a new one. Then my dad died when I was 2, and I got even more stuff as my mom, friends, and family gave me more and more stuff to try to make me feel better.My mom continued to treat me to whatever I wanted until I was seven and my world crashed.That was when the real estate (房地产) market crashed. My mom had thought buying houses was a good idea as a way to invest her money to take care of us. After the crash, I went from the kid who got a fine iPod(伏笔自己挣钱买iPod) and who had the coolest house, to almost having nowhere to stay.
我常常会玩一会儿玩具，玩腻了就会向父母当我还是个婴儿的时候，我父母对我有求必应。要一个新的。后来爸爸在我两岁的时候去世了从那时起我得到的东西更多了，因为为了让我好受些，我的妈妈、朋友和家人会给我越来越多的东西。我妈妈继续满足我所有的要求，直到我七岁时，我的世界崩溃了。那是房地产市场崩溃的时候。我妈妈原以为把自己的钱投资到房产是个好主意，这样一来可以照顾我们。房地产危机发生后，我从一个有着昂贵iPod和最酷的房子的人变成了几乎无处可住的人。
Since then, when I would ask for a new toy or bike, or even to see a movie my mom would say“I'm sorry honey but we really can't afford that right now(伏笔生日礼物能比较朴素).But my mom had grown up in a family where money was never a problem, so this change was as big for her as it was for me. My constant requests for toys and video games deepened her concern about our financial situation. But I wasn’t used to hearing “no.’ So, for a year or two, kept asking for things whether I really needed them or not(伏笔作者后来学会分辨自己是否真正需要一些东西).
每当我想要一个新玩具或自行车，甚至想去看场电影时，我妈妈会说:从那以后，宝贝”对于出生在一个衣食无忧家庭的妈"对不起，，但我们现在真的负担不起妈来说，这个变化对她来说是巨大的，对我也是如此。我不断地要玩具和电子游戏，所以，一两年来这让妈妈对我们的财务状况更加担心。但是我不习惯听到“不”我一直在索要东西，不管我是否真的需要它们。
Deepen v加剧;恶化;(使) 变强烈 (deep + -en)
Then something happened that would change my way of thinking forever.My mom had been working really hard all year, just to pay for the necessities like our rents,and water and power bills (伏笔作者理解了母亲的艰难)When she asked me what I wanted for my birthday I said that I wanted a new video gaming system. I didn't know that it was expensive. All I knew was thatmy friends had them and that I wanted one,too.(伏笔可能没有得到这份礼物）
有一年发生了一件事，彻底改变了我的思维方式。我妈妈一整年都在努力工作，就是为了支付必需品的费用，比如我们的房租、电费。当她问我生日想要什么礼物时，我说我想要个新的视频游戏系统。我不知道它很贵。我只知道我的朋友们都有了，我也想要一个。
Paragraph 1 :On my birthday, I started opening presents, believing that I would get what l asked for.
Paragraph 2 :From then on I wouldn’ t ask for anything that I didn’ t need.
思路点拨
1.文章天意:文章讲述了二个原本有求必应、建意索取的男孩的成长历程。文章开头以“my world crashed”埋下了大的伏笔，继而讲述男孩由一个有求必应的孩子成长为理解母亲的辛勤付出、不再肆意索取的人，懂得感恩别人给予的一切，并努力通过自己的劳动来获得想要的东西。
2.续写点拨:第一段开头语提示作者在拆礼物，并期望获得想要的东西，续写内容应围绕礼物的内容以及作者和母亲的后续反应展开。且第由第二段开头语可知，第一段应将作者情感和认知的变化写出来。二段自然是讲作者在行动上发生了何种转变，一是学会了感恩自己收到的任何东西，二是领悟到不劳无获的道理，最后以一句总结升华主心。
参考范文
Paragraph 1: On my birthday, I started opening presents, believing that I would get what I asked for. As I opened the last gift box, I found nothing other than a pair of jeans (指出礼物的内容).My mom could tell how disappointed I was and she started crying.I hugged her harder than I had ever hugged anyone before(“我”由失望到理解母亲的情感转变).I realized how hard she was working and that she couldn't afford to give me anything !didn’t need(呼应伏笔).
在我生白那天，我开始拆礼物，相信我会得到我想要的。当我打开最一个礼物时，却只发现一条牛仔裤。妈妈能看出我有多失望，然后她开始哭泣。我用力地拥抱了她，比以往拥抱任何人都更用力。:我终于意识到她工作有多努力，并且再也负担不起任何我不需要的东西了.
Paragraph 2 : From then on I wouldn't ask for anything that I didn 'tneed. I learned the difference between what I wanted and what I needed (呼伏笔). I learned to appreciate the toys or games I did have and took good care of them. when I wanted a new iPod(呼应伏笔),I had to work to buy it(以上描写“我”行为的转变).The feeling of having truly earned something was one of the best feelings in the world. I was also grateful to my mother, who had given me all she could give.(主旨升华)
从那时起，我不会要求任何我没有要求的东西。我了解了我想要什么和我需要什么之间的区别(呼伏笔). 我学会了欣赏我拥有的玩具或游戏，并很好地照顾它们。当我想要一个新的iPod(呼应伏笔),我必须工作才能买下它(以上描写“我”行为的转变).真正获得一些东西的感觉是世界上最好的感觉之一。我也很感激我的母亲，她给了我她能给的一切。
下水文：
On my birthday, believing that I would get what I wanted, I opened the gift. Shockingly, it was not the gaming system I had craved, but a piggy bank together with a brief note saying ‘Happy birthday.’ Frustration and disappointment washing over me, I grumbled, “mom, this is not what I asked for.” “I know, son. But things are different now. We…are… literally broke.” Mom’s shivering voice turning into a hysteric scream, she sank to the floor, face buried in hand, and cried out her pent-up feelings of grievance and defeat. I sat beside her, thunderstruck.
From then on, I didn't expect to get everything that I asked for. It seemed as if I had grown up overnight. I quitted my circle of rich friends, put all my expensive toys in pawn and even took up some odd jobs. I saved every penny and helped mom pay for our bills. Looking back on those hard-up days, I felt, in a sense, that mom and I grew up together: she confronted unprecedented hardships and became an independent and mature lady while I learned to take responsibility and dragged myself from the edge of becoming a spoiled and capricious child. （Total word count: 170）
写作感悟：
1. 这篇文章通过分析材料，应该是讲我的蜕变，成长，勇于承担责任。属于5种类型中的适应新环境类型。可以附带讲一下我的蜕变和成长给家里，尤其是我的变化给妈妈带来的积极变化，这样主旨应该不会跑偏。
2. 全程写作38分钟，包括读材料，分析材料，写要点，成文，修改润色。
3. 没有去刻意规划剧情的突转，我觉得就是妈妈给我的礼物和妈妈的反应对我触动很大，让我学会了控制自己的欲望，体谅妈妈，学会承担家庭责任。
4.全文没有出现让我曲解文意的字眼，所以无所谓续写内容跑偏。
When I was a baby, my parents gave me anything I wanted. I would play with a toy for a while get bored, and ask my parents for a new one. Then my dad died when I was 2, and I got even more stuff as my mom, friends, and family gave me more and more stuff to try to make me feel better.My mom continued to treat me to whatever I wanted until I was seven and my world crashed.That was when the real estate (房地产) market crashed. My mom had thought buying houses was a good idea as a way to invest her money to take care of us. After the crash, I went from the kid who got a fine iPod(伏笔自己挣钱买iPod) and who had the coolest house, to almost having nowhere to stay.
我常常会玩一会儿玩具，玩腻了就会向父母当我还是个婴儿的时候，我父母对我有求必应。要一个新的。后来爸爸在我两岁的时候去世了从那时起我得到的东西更多了，因为为了让我好受些，我的妈妈、朋友和家人会给我越来越多的东西。我妈妈继续满足我所有的要求，直到我七岁时，我的世界崩溃了。那是房地产市场崩溃的时候。我妈妈原以为把自己的钱投资到房产是个好主意，这样一来可以照顾我们。房地产危机发生后，我从一个有着昂贵iPod和最酷的房子的人变成了几乎无处可住的人。
Since then, when I would ask for a new toy or bike, or even to see a movie my mom would say“I'm sorry honey but we really can't afford that right now(伏笔生日礼物能比较朴素).But my mom had grown up in a family where money was never a problem, so this change was as big for her as it was for me. My constant requests for toys and video games deepened her concern about our financial situation. But I wasn’t used to hearing “no.’ So, for a year or two, kept asking for things whether I really needed them or not(伏笔作者后来学会分辨自己是否真正需要一些东西).
每当我想要一个新玩具或自行车，甚至想去看场电影时，我妈妈会说:从那以后，宝贝”对于出生在一个衣食无忧家庭的妈"对不起，，但我们现在真的负担不起妈来说，这个变化对她来说是巨大的，对我也是如此。我不断地要玩具和电子游戏，所以，一两年来这让妈妈对我们的财务状况更加担心。但是我不习惯听到“不”我一直在索要东西，不管我是否真的需要它们。
Deepen v加剧;恶化;(使) 变强烈 (deep + -en)
Then something happened that would change my way of thinking forever.My mom had been working really hard all year, just to pay for the necessities like our rents,and water and power bills (伏笔作者理解了母亲的艰难)When she asked me what I wanted for my birthday I said that I wanted a new video gaming system. I didn't know that it was expensive. All I knew was thatmy friends had them and that I wanted one,too.(伏笔可能没有得到这份礼物）
有一年发生了一件事，彻底改变了我的思维方式。我妈妈一整年都在努力工作，就是为了支付必需品的费用，比如我们的房租、电费。当她问我生日想要什么礼物时，我说我想要个新的视频游戏系统。我不知道它很贵。我只知道我的朋友们都有了，我也想要一个。
Paragraph 1 :On my birthday, I started opening presents, believing that I would get what l asked for.
Paragraph 2 :From then on I wouldn’ t ask for anything that I didn’ t need.
思路点拨
1.文章天意:文章讲述了二个原本有求必应、建意索取的男孩的成长历程。文章开头以“my world crashed”埋下了大的伏笔，继而讲述男孩由一个有求必应的孩子成长为理解母亲的辛勤付出、不再肆意索取的人，懂得感恩别人给予的一切，并努力通过自己的劳动来获得想要的东西。
2.续写点拨:第一段开头语提示作者在拆礼物，并期望获得想要的东西，续写内容应围绕礼物的内容以及作者和母亲的后续反应展开。且第由第二段开头语可知，第一段应将作者情感和认知的变化写出来。二段自然是讲作者在行动上发生了何种转变，一是学会了感恩自己收到的任何东西，二是领悟到不劳无获的道理，最后以一句总结升华主心。
参考范文
Paragraph 1: On my birthday, I started opening presents, believing that I would get what I asked for. As I opened the last gift box, I found nothing other than a pair of jeans (指出礼物的内容).My mom could tell how disappointed I was and she started crying.I hugged her harder than I had ever hugged anyone before(“我”由失望到理解母亲的情感转变).I realized how hard she was working and that she couldn't afford to give me anything !didn’t need(呼应伏笔).
在我生白那天，我开始拆礼物，相信我会得到我想要的。当我打开最一个礼物时，却只发现一条牛仔裤。妈妈能看出我有多失望，然后她开始哭泣。我用力地拥抱了她，比以往拥抱任何人都更用力。:我终于意识到她工作有多努力，并且再也负担不起任何我不需要的东西了.
Paragraph 2 : From then on I wouldn't ask for anything that I didn 'tneed. I learned the difference between what I wanted and what I needed (呼伏笔). I learned to appreciate the toys or games I did have and took good care of them. when I wanted a new iPod(呼应伏笔),I had to work to buy it(以上描写“我”行为的转变).The feeling of having truly earned something was one of the best feelings in the world. I was also grateful to my mother, who had given me all she could give.(主旨升华)
从那时起，我不会要求任何我没有要求的东西。我了解了我想要什么和我需要什么之间的区别(呼伏笔). 我学会了欣赏我拥有的玩具或游戏，并很好地照顾它们。当我想要一个新的iPod(呼应伏笔),我必须工作才能买下它(以上描写“我”行为的转变).真正获得一些东西的感觉是世界上最好的感觉之一。我也很感激我的母亲，她给了我她能给的一切。
下水文：
On my birthday, believing that I would get what I wanted, I opened the gift. Shockingly, it was not the gaming system I had craved, but a piggy bank together with a brief note saying ‘Happy birthday.’ Frustration and disappointment washing over me, I grumbled, “mom, this is not what I asked for.” “I know, son. But things are different now. We…are… literally broke.” Mom’s shivering voice turning into a hysteric scream, she sank to the floor, face buried in hand, and cried out her pent-up feelings of grievance and defeat. I sat beside her, thunderstruck.
From then on, I didn't expect to get everything that I asked for. It seemed as if I had grown up overnight. I quitted my circle of rich friends, put all my expensive toys in pawn and even took up some odd jobs. I saved every penny and helped mom pay for our bills. Looking back on those hard-up days, I felt, in a sense, that mom and I grew up together: she confronted unprecedented hardships and became an independent and mature lady while I learned to take responsibility and dragged myself from the edge of becoming a spoiled and capricious child. （Total word count: 170）
写作感悟：
1. 这篇文章通过分析材料，应该是讲我的蜕变，成长，勇于承担责任。属于5种类型中的适应新环境类型。可以附带讲一下我的蜕变和成长给家里，尤其是我的变化给妈妈带来的积极变化，这样主旨应该不会跑偏。
2. 全程写作38分钟，包括读材料，分析材料，写要点，成文，修改润色。
3. 没有去刻意规划剧情的突转，我觉得就是妈妈给我的礼物和妈妈的反应对我触动很大，让我学会了控制自己的欲望，体谅妈妈，学会承担家庭责任。
4.全文没有出现让我曲解文意的字眼，所以无所谓续写内容跑偏。