课件17张PPT。 第三部分 高频话题写作指导八年级(上)Units 7-8未来的生活
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分析近3年湖南42套中考真题可知,湖南各地市对“未来的生活”考查主要以“描述个人梦想”为命题角度。如:2014郴州中考真题要求描述有关梦想的主题班会的讨论结果,并介绍三个梦想,写出理由;2013怀化中考真题要求根据表格内容提示,以“Our Dreams”为题目,报告梦想主题班会的调查结果,并谈谈自己的梦想。全国各地市考查此话题时的命题角度还可分为:描述未来的生活和谈论短期内的计划和打算。如:2014甘肃天水“Our future life in Tianshui”要求考生写出对未来生活的畅想和期待;2014云南 “My Plan for the Coming School Year” 让学生对即将开始的高中生活充满憧憬和期待。
下面以2014湖南郴州中考真题为例分析此话题:Life in the futureShort plan and changesDream in the futureChanges in the future lifeexpectation for the life of senior schoolplan for the future and hope for yourselfto imagine the life, study and work in the futurethe changes of lifethe expectation for studythe effort you will make for the lifewhat dream do you havewhy do you have this dreamthe effort you will do to achieve your dreamthe expectation you will make for the dreamchanges of lifewhy these changes happenthe effort you will do for the life亮点句型速成
常用句型: I have a dream. I want to be a teacher.
推荐句型:
①I have a dream that I can be a teacher.
②To be a teacher is my dream.
③I hope that I can be a teacher.开头句:
1. Everyone has his dream, and I also have my own dream.
2. Life is full of challenges and hope. That’s why everyone longs for the future.
3. It’s important to have a dream, because it’s the power of our life and study. 中间句:
1. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
2. It’s interesting to be a guide in my opinion.
3. I’m going to be a reporter in the future.
4. Some students dream of being scientists. 结尾句:
1. As long as we work hard, we will realize our dreams.
2. Good beginning is half done.
3. We will never know what will happen in the future.写作模板
It’s exciting to imagine 未来生活的样子. At this time next year, I will be a senior high school student, and I will 交很多好朋友. I hope to be 对自己的期望 so that perhaps I will be 如何学习提高英语成绩. It will be 非常令人兴奋的 to do so. What’s more, I will 生活上的变化和成长 and know how to take care of myself when I am alone.典例剖析(’14郴州)
你班举行了以“What will you do when you grow up?”为主题的班会,大家畅所欲言,谈论自己的梦想,有的想当老师,有的想当记者……用英语写一篇短文,介绍你们讨论的情况。
参考词汇:1. teacher, reporter actor/actress...
2. interesting, helpful, important, famous, popular, busy, hard...要求:
1.80词左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.至少写出三个梦想,每个梦想不少于两条理由,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Last week, we had a class meeting. We talked about “What will you do when you grow up?”. Now I’ll tell you what they expressed at the meeting.【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,提取以下信息:
1. 介绍你们主题班会讨论的情况,时态可用一般过去时和一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主;
2. 紧扣作文要求,必须至少写出三个梦想,并且每个梦想要陈述不少于两条建议;
3. 文章的词数在80词左右,不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。【高分范文】
Our Dreams
Last week, we had a class meeting. We talked about “What will you do when you grow up?” Now I will tell you what they expressed at the meeting. Some students want to be teachers when they grow up. They think teaching is interesting and helpful though teachers are too busy sometimes. Besides, it’s fun to face lovely and smart children every day. Some dream of being reporters because they like talking to people. What’s more, they have opportunities to meet important and famous people, and they can learn more from them.
There are still some other students who want to be actors. Actors are popular with people. They hope they can become famous some day.【检测菜单】
1. 向……学习 _________
2. 为……所喜欢,受……所欢迎 _______________
3. 某一天 ________learn frombe popular with some day