《广西中考试题研究》2015年英语写作专题指导：我们的变化（含广西各地中考真题及原创题）（共18张PPT）

课件18张PPT。第二部分
高频话题写作指导九年级（全） Units 3-4我们的变化
写作导图 从广西近五年“我们的变化”相关话题的书面表达来看，其主要涉及的命题角度为：①介绍人物各方面的变化，包括：外貌、性格、心理、学习、人际交往等方面，如：2013年崇左针对课堂教学改革说明现在和过去的课堂变化；2012年南宁以“How I Change”为题描述自己三年初中前后的变化。②介绍周围的变化，包括：学校、家乡、城市、所居住环境的变化，如：2010年来宾根据所给图片介绍自己及家乡的情况（环保、精神面貌、新变化等）。以（2012年南宁）为例：
写作范文详见：
http://www.wanweiedu.com used to be
Appearance: fat、short…
Personality: shy、quiet、lonely…
Hobbies: play computer games…now become
Appearance: taller、stronger…
Personality: outgoing、friendly…
Hobbies: sports、read…in the pastnowHow I Change亮点句型速成
常用句型：My teachers and classmates help me with my English. My English is good now.
推荐句型： ①Thanks to my dear teachers and classmates, my English becomes much better now than before.
②With the help of (Under the help of) my teachers and classmates, my English has improved a lot now.
③I have made a great progress on my English with the help of (under the help of) my teachers and classmates.常用句型：I liked playing computer games before. And I played it a lot.
推荐句型： ①I was interested in playing computer games before, so I played it a lot.
② I used to be interested in playing computer games, so I always spent plenty time on it.开头句：1. Great changes have taken place In the past three years around me.中间句：1. I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing.
2. Day by day, I get on very well with my classmates.
3. My life has changed a lot in the past three years.
4. I was fat and short before I came to the middle school.
5. Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school.
6. So I become taller and stronger than before.结尾句：
1. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.
2. My parents and my teachers used to worry about me, but now they are both pleased with me.典例剖析（2012南宁）
初中的学习生活即将结束了。 请你以“How I Change”为题，写一篇短文，描述你这三年里前后的变化。写作要点包括外貌、兴趣爱好、行为习惯等方面。写作要求：1. 词数在80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 短文中不能出现校名和人名，否则不得分；
3. 所给的写作要点都必须用上；紧扣主题，适当发挥。
How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years. ______________________【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：
1. 短文必须包括三年里前后的变化，包括外貌、兴趣爱好、行为习惯等方面；
2. 写过去的情况用一般过去时，现在的情况用一般现在时；
3. 词数80词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名，所给的写作要点必须都用上。【范文点评】