【中考题型实战】2015年聚焦中考英语（甘肃）题型分项讲解课件：第47讲书面表达（共58张PPT）

课件58张PPT。甘肃省英
语第三轮 中考题型实战
第47讲 书面表达 中考题型实战 书面表达。(2014，兰州)
学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自己的观点，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护。
要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。中考题型实战 How Can We Protect OurselvesSelf-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves？Here are some of my suggestions.中考题型实战 First，we should be careful when we make friends，especially on line. Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely. Besides，we shouldn't crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least，summer is coming，we must remember it's dangerous to swim alone.
In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中考题型实战 书面表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言进行表达的能力；同时，还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。
一、常见的书面表达题型
1．根据文体归类：日记、书信、通知、便条、启事、贺卡、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等。然而许多试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融为一体，形成复合型的写作。中考题型实战 2．根据所提供的材料形式归类：图画作文、图表作文、提纲作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定的控制性，又有一定的开放性，为考生展示其写作能力提供了发挥的空间。
二、如何写出优美的文章
1．选准词语。
①语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语，切忌使用生僻的词汇。
②选词要达意，英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短语，切忌混淆使用。
③用词要简明扼要，在不确定的情况下，宁可用常用词简单明了地表达信息。中考题型实战 2．写好句子。
①运用所学词汇、短语，结合一定的语法知识，按照句子的结构特点，直接用英语写出相应句子。
②运用固定句式表达信息，把比较复杂的句子分成两个或两个以上的简单句子，减少写错句的几率。
③把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来，这样可提高文章的可读性，但在没有把握的情况下慎用。
④遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时，可以在保持原意的基础上，用不同的表达方式写出来。中考题型实战 3．设计段落。
一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确运用连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。
4．书写规范、卷面整洁。
三、如何提升写作
1．熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。
2．收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。
中考题型实战 3．坚持常规练习。即：词——词组——句子——段落——篇章。切记：简单句是主菜，要做到运用自如；复杂句是佐料，有之增色，缺之乏味，但不可舍本逐末，以免弄巧成拙。
4．仔细审题，要点齐全，人称及时态运用正确。
【例1】 假设你和朋友将在今年暑假参加以“拥抱大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营，其中包括小组自由活动。请你为你们小组设计一个活动方案。中考题型实战 提示词语：climb mountains；go fishing；pick fruits；have a campfire (篝火晚会)
要求：1.写明你们组计划要做的具体活动，并给出理由；
2．提示词语仅供参考，可增减内容；
3．词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。
We are going for a camp this summer. I'm glad to make a plan for our group.
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______________________________________中考题型实战 解析：第一步：认真仔细地阅读提示，思考所提供的信息，计划文章大致内容。第二步：根据信息要求遣词造句，连句成文。第三步：通读全文，纠正错误，书写整洁。
写作要点：1.具体的活动要丰富多彩。2.写出安排这些活动的理由。
注意：此文是计划打算，应用将来时态。切忌写成流水账。中考题型实战 【参考范文】
We are going for a camp this summer. I'm glad to make a plan for our group.First of all，we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. After that，we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better. What's more，there will be a campfire. We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories. 中考题型实战 Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends?
We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe we'll have a wonderful time together.
中考题型实战 精彩再现：
①文章内容完整，叙述清楚，要点一目了然。
②使用了first of all，after that，what's more等表顺序的副词来使文章条理更清晰，更流畅。
③经典句型：?we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. ?Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？?I believe we'll have a wonderful time together.中考题型实战 【例2】 近年来，“光盘行动(Clean Plate Campaign)”悄然流行，提倡“节约型社会(economized society)”已成共识。请你根据下列表格中的信息，用英语为某英语报社写一篇短文，谈谈作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该如何勤俭节约、反对浪费，并作简要评论。中考题型实战 注意：1.短文须包括上述要点，应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
中考题型实战 Let's Start with the Things around Us!
Recently，the “Clean Plate Campaign” has been very popular with many people. Our government is doing its best to build an economized society.
As a middle school student，I think ____________________________________________
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_______________________________________________________________________中考题型实战 解析：第一步：认真阅读题目要求，仔细观察表格中的内容。第二步：根据提示内容，把握好文章的中心，适度发挥。选用合适的表顺序类单词或短语使文章条理清晰。第三步：通读全文，检查要点是否遗漏，纠正错误，书写要整洁。
注意：不仅要写出生活中“勤俭节约，反对浪费”的实例，更重要的是“作简要评价”，这才是文章的点睛之笔。中考题型实战 【参考范文】
Let's Start with the Things around Us!
Recently，the “Clean Plate Campaign” has been very popular with many people. Our government is doing its best to build an economized society.
As a middle school student，I thinkwe should join in the campaign. We can start with the things around us. Firstly，make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room. Secondly，we can save as much paper as possible. Thirdly，it is important 中考题型实战 for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used. What's more，we must not spend money buying unnecessary things. When we eat，we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food.
In a word，saving energy is very important. Let's work together from now on!中考题型实战 精彩再现：
①整篇文章结构完整，内容详尽，要点清晰。
②层次清晰。先表明自己观点；再用firstly，secondly，thirdly，what's more表顺序的副词把作者观点一一陈列，清楚明了，条理分明；最后又用in a word作出总结。
③经典句型：?We can save as much paper as possible. ?It's important for us to… ?saving energy is very important.中考题型实战 (一)(2014，河南)
你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My Special ________”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。
要求：1.在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象， 如grandma，teacher 或friend等；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.80词左右。中考题型实战 My Special GrandmaMy grandma is special to me because we're like friends. She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble. There are no secrets between us.
When I am with my grandma，we spend a lot of happy time together. I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything. My grandma is good at many things. One thing she's best at is cooking. She often cooks delicious food for me. I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.中考题型实战 (二)(2014，江西)
阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实，某英文报为了了解中学生的课外阅读情况，向广大中学生做调查。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及阅读计划。
提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。中考题型实战 Reading Outside Class
As we all know，reading has a lot of benefit. 中考题型实战 It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge，and it makes us wiser and richer in life. I like reading newspapers and magazines，from which I get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world. I also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because they're bad for中考题型实战 eyes. On weekends，I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.
Summer vacation is coming. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. I'm sure reading can make a difference to my life.中考题型实战 (三)(2014，陕西)
在日常生活中，你看到身边有哪些不良现象？请列举一些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想法。
提示：speak loudly，cut in line (插队)，waste food，unfriendly (冷漠的)，offer no help...
要求：1.参考提示语，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；4.词数：不少于80词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)中考题型实战 In our daily life，I usually see some bad behavior around us. For example， I often hear people speak and laugh loudly in public. It is too noisy. Some people cut in line while others are waiting. It makes me unhappy. And in our school dining hall，I often see students waste food. At times，people seem unfriendly and offer no help when others are introuble. For me，my parents are strict with me. They often tell me to behave well. So I never drop litter about. 中考题型实战 And I never draw on the desk or on the wall. I am polite to old people.
I think if everyone can think more of others，we'll have a better living environment.中考题型实战 (四)(2014，鄂州)
不久前，全国有部分省市出台一项新政策：高考英语将由150分降为100分，此事在国内引起极大争议。有的人认为此举很好，有的人则认为不妥。作为一名中学生，你的看法是什么？请分析其原因。
注意：1.词数80词左右；开头已给出，但不计入总词数。2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。3.参考词汇：reform改革；master掌握；advanced先进的中考题型实战 Not long before，a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100.As a student，in my opinion，it is of the same importance to learn Chinese and English well. We Chinese certainly should learn our mother language well. At the same time，English is an international language and tool. We should master it to better know about the中考题型实战 world and learn advanced technology abroad to serve our motherland. What's more，as China is developing quickly，we have more chances to communicate with foreigners in English.In a word，whether the mark of English will be reduced or not，we students should learn it well.中考题型实战 (五)(2014，玉林)
我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……请以“Love Around Me (我身边的爱)”为题，写一篇短文，内容要点如下：中考题型实战 参考词汇：1.receive love；2.cook；3.teach knowledge；4.get on...with；5.chat online，share (分享)；6.thank
要求：1.题目开头已给出，不计入总词数内；2.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。(参考词汇仅供参考)；3.语句通顺，语法正确，80个词左右；4.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的名称。中考题型实战 Love Around Me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents，my teachers，my classmates and my friends. In the morning，my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily，getting on well with中考题型实战 each other. I chat online with friends in
my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress.
Here，I should say to them，“Thank you for all your love.”中考题型实战 (六)(2014，苏州)
假设你校为了配合创建“文化校园高效课堂”活动，最近以“学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案？”为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成，但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，以“Think Before You Search Online”为题用英语写一篇短文。中考题型实战 中考题型实战 　注意：
1．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。中考题型实战 Think Before You Search Online
Some students now have a new use for the Internet—helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.Some students agree with it. They sometimes don't know the answers to the problems，so they have to turn to the Internet. They think they can learn from other people. At the same time，it's easy and it saves time.中考题型实战 However，not all the students welcome this. Many students think simply copying the answers won't improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.
I think students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly，it could be a good way to study.中考题型实战 (七)(2014，绥化)
放学回家的公交车上，你看见一位老爷爷和他十岁左右的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包，你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，还大声喊着向老人要水喝，并在窗户上乱写乱画，对此请写一篇短文，谈谈你对这件事的看法。
参考词汇：grandson，shout to，respect (尊重)中考题型实战 On my way home on the bus，I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy's schoolbag. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However，the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while，the boy shouted to his grandpa for water，then drew something on the window of the bus.
When I saw this，I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.中考题型实战 (八)(2014，厦门)
假设你是思湘，你的美国笔友艾米来信想了解中国的传统节日端午节。请根据如下提示用英语写一篇80词以上的回信给她。中考题型实战 注意：1.信中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。
2．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．参考词汇：
端午节the Dragon Boat Festival；
为了纪念in memory of
Dear Amy，
I learn from your letter that you want to know something about Chinese traditional festival—The Dragon Boat Festival.中考题型实战 The festival has a history of more than 2 000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day，people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious Zongzi，a kind of special food with sticky rice，meat etc.wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Qu Yuan，a great poet in history.中考题型实战 In a word，we all love the festival because it's a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Si Xiang中考题型实战 (九)(2014，丽水)
暑期即将来临，对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期，家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示，写一篇英语短文，描述他们的不同看法，同时发表你自己对暑期安排的观点。中考题型实战 中考题型实战 注意：1.表格中的观点仅供参考，允许适当发挥；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息；
4．词数：80～100。
How will you spend the coming summer vacation？Parents and kids have their own opinions.中考题型实战 Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the summer，so it's necessary to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But many children disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends and do some sightseeing.中考题型实战 In my opinion，we children can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to have a trip or some sports.中考题型实战 (十)(2014，台州)
根据下面图片的内容，以“Mother Stops Him”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向某英语报社投稿。要求如下：中考题型实战 (1)描述图中发生的事件；
(2)简单分析妈妈的行为对孩子可能产生的不良影响；
(3)指出老人若不被扶起可能出现的后果；
(4)倡议人们彼此信任、互相帮助；
词数：80～100。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：lift...up扶起　knock...down撞倒
trust信任中考题型实战 Mother Stops Him
Here is a picture from a news report. In the picture，we can see three people. An old woman is lying on the ground A boy is trying to lift her up，but his mother stops him at once.“ Don‘t do that！Others may think it’s you who have knocked her down，” she says.
In my opinion，the mother's behavior is not right. A mother should encourage her child to give others a hand. How can a child become 中考题型实战 warm-hearted if he is educated in such a way？And the old woman might feel worse or even be hit by the traffic unless we move her away in time.
I hope it won't happen again. Let's trust each other and help anyone in trouble.请完成考点跟踪突破47