课件14张PPT。七年级 (上) Units 1-4(含Starter)第三部分
高频话题写作指南家庭
写作导图
昆明近六年未涉及此话题,从云南近四年家庭类相关话题书面表达的命题来看,通常写家庭成员之间的深厚感情,如2011玉溪“我爱我的家人”。the familyfamily
membersthe story between your familiesshow your love to your familywho, look, job, hobby, personalitywhen, how, who, where, your feelingsend a gift, write a card/letter, do housework or other things to help them亮点句型速成
常用句型: You do as I mentioned above. You can get on well with your parents.
推荐句型:→If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents.
常用句型:The person is my mother.推荐句型:→①The person I love most is my mother.
→②The person who often encourages me is my mother.
开头句:The person I love most is.../ I want to introduce...to you.
中间句:1. She is a woman of medium build with long hair.2. My mother gets up the earliest in our family.
3. My father is one of my best friends, and I often talk with him if I have any problems.
4. They often encourage me when I’m in trouble.
5. How can I get on well with my brother?6. My loving grandfather spends most of his free time with me.
结尾句:1. I love my parents more than anyone else.
2. Thank you for everything you have done for me.
(常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题(一)个人情况(二)家庭朋友与周围的人)典例剖析(’11玉溪)
提示:家是一个能让人感到温暖的港湾。在你的成长过程中,家给予了你很多,那么你是否曾用适当的方式对你的家人表达过关爱和回报呢?请以“I Love My Family”为题,写一篇英语短文,通过记叙一件你为家庭做过的事情来体现你对家人的爱。要求:
1. 词数不少于60;语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3. 不得以单纯介绍家庭成员的方式来撰写。【审题指导】
1.本篇作文的题材以记叙文为主,记叙自己为家人做过的一件事来体现自己对家人的爱;
2.主要是写事件来表达自己对家人的关爱,不仅仅是介绍家庭成员;
3.叙述家庭基本情况用一般现在时,描写自己做的事情用一般过去时;
4.词数不少于60,语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。【高分范文】
I Love My Family
I have a happy family. Although my parents are very busy, they try their best to take good care of me. I think I should do something for them.
Yesterday was Sunday. I got up earlier than usual. After washing, I swept the floor, watered the plants and then I went to the kitchen to prepare breakfast. At around 9 o’clock breakfast was ready. Mum and dad got up. When they saw it, they were very happy. “Dear, thank you for your delicious breakfast.”
Hearing that, I was so happy and felt as if I had grown up. Mum and dad have done a lot for me. I should do what I can do for my family though I am very busy learning. The more I do for it, the happier my family will be.【检测菜单】
1. __________ 厨房
2. ____________ 早餐
3. _______________ 尽某人最大努力
4. _________________拖地
5. _____________ 为……感谢
6. _______________ 照顾kitchenbreakfasttry one’s bestsweep the floorthanks fortake care of