牛津上海版（试用本）八年级第一学期Module 1 My life Unit 1 PenfriendsWriting课件(共17张PPT)

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Module 1
Unit 1
My life
Penfriends
Period 3 Writing
A letter to a penfriend
A0 Know the task
Before you write
We received a letter from Jon
We are going to write back to
him and be his penfriend
A letter
greeting
signature
address
date
closing
body
format & layout
About himself
About his family
About his school
About photos
content & structure
manners
A1 Review:How to write a letter
Before you write
2 Middle Street
Walker
Newcastle
NE6 4BY
England
UK
Number and Street
Town
City(district)
Postcode
Region
country
smallest
biggest
A2 Review:How to write an address in English
Before you write
上海市闵行区水清路769号
邮编201199
28 Shuiqing Road
Minghang District
Shanghai
201199
China
A2 Write down the following address in English
Before you write
Beginning
Ending
I saw your name in fenriends magazine, and l would like to be yourpenfrend. First,I will tell you something about myself, ...
It was great to hear from you, Jon. I hope you’ll write again soon.
B1 Think,conclude and mimic
Whle you write
What should we write in the body part？
Reason of writing
Thanks a lot for your letter. I’m happy to be your penfriend.
I’d like to tell you something about myself.
Lead in
I enclosed a photo of myself and some of my school friends...I hope you will write to me soon and tell me all about yourself.
Expectation
Enclosur(附件)
address
date
greeting
body
closing
signature
oneself
family
school
photos
B2 Think and list: What do you want to write about
Whle you write
This is what Jon write in his letter
Make a list of
what you want to
write
What I want to write about
myself
my school
my house
the city I live in
my pet
my idols
my favourite films
my favourite games
books I like to read
my hobbies
my ambition
my family
B2 Make a list of what you want to write about
Whle you write
What I want to write about
myself
my school
my house
the city I live in
my pet
my idols
my favourite films
my favourite games
books I like to read
my hobbies
my ambition
my family
B3 Group the topics on your list
Whle you write
my house
my pet
topic
details
Para. Topic Details
1
2
3
4
family
my house, my pet
,my parents, their jobs
…
…
…
…
…
…
Delete topics that can‘t be grouped or add details to them
Whle you write
B3 Group the topics on your list
Be logical when introducing ourselves
What else should we pay attention to when writing a letter
Choose different words or phrases to enrich language
Be polite and sincere when writing a letter
interact with the receiver by asking questions
B4 Write a reply to Jon’s letter
Whle you write
Remember to：
cover the six basic elements (address, date, greeting,body, closing, signature)
have proper beginning and ending in the body part
be logical when introducing yourself
It would be better if you：
choose different words or phrases to enrich language
be polite and sincere
interact with Jon by asking him some questions
C1 Evaluate each other’s writing according to the checklist
After you write
信件6大基本元素cover the six basic elements
少/错一项，结构0.5
body part有合适的开头结尾（开头原因&引入+结尾期待） have proper beginning and ending in the body part 少一点，内容1分
介绍自己的时候有逻辑be logical when introducing yourself 错一处，结构0.5
语言丰富choose different words or phrases to enrich language 做到2处，结构0.5
礼貌真诚be polite and sincere 两点都做到，结构1
通过询问与Jon互动interact with Jon by asking him some questions 语法一处0.5分
address
date
greeting
body
closing
signature
8+8+4
There are 4 people in my family . They are my father, my mother , Tom and me .My father is an engineer and my mother is a shop assistant.
There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, my mother, Tom and me.My father is an engineer and he works in a very modern technology company and my mother is a shop assistant. She sells shoes in a shopping mall. We sometimes go outing together at weekends. Tom is not my brother but our pet dog . He is very lovely . I always take him for a walk after school .
Tip 1: Add detailed information （添加细节信息）
C2 Learn some tips of improving your letter
After you write
I am in Year 8 at Garden School. It is far away from my house. My classmates and teachers are friendly and helpful . My deskmate's name is Alice . Her mother is a nurse and she often takes Alice to travel to other places.
I am in Year 8 at Garden School. It is far away from my house. Unlike you, I have to take a bus to school. But sometimes my father drives me to school if it rains. I usually have seven classes at school. After school, we can attend different clubs. I am a member of the Art Club. I can draw some pictures and do crafts. That's fun! My classmates and teachers are friendly and helpful. My deskmate's name is Alice. Her mother is a nurse and she often takes Alice to travel to other places.
Tip 2: Cut out irrelevant information （删除无关信息）
C2 Learn some tips of improving your letter
After you write
My name is Nina. I am a Chinese girl. I am 14 years old. I live in Shanghai with my parents. Shanghai is an interesting city. There are many other interesting cities in China.
It is famous for its night views and it is known as a ‘Shopping Paradise’. If you come to Shanghai, I’m sure you’ll like it.
More practise
After you write
C3 Improve your writing
After you write
Use a blue pen
Add some detailed information
Cut out irrelevant information.
A letter to a penfriend
format & layout
content & structure
manners
Tips for revision
Add detailed information
Cut out irrelevant information
Summary
6 basic elements
beginning &ending in the body part
be polite and sincere
be logical
use different expression
After we write ,we should