课件14张PPT。第三部分 高频话题写作指南七年级(上)Units 1-4
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结交新朋友写作导图
从广西近五年与“结交新朋友”相关话题的书面表达来看,其主要涉及的命题角度为:人物的简单介绍,如:2012年桂林以“My good friend”为题,介绍自己的好朋友Susan;2012年梧州以“A Person I Will Never Forget”为题,从外貌、性格、爱好等方面进行介绍; 2010年崇左根据提示从学习、运动、娱乐等方面的特长与爱好出发写一篇自我介绍。同时,从全国近五年的命题方向可知,该话题还可从“如何和朋友相处”、“对友谊的认识”等角度设题。以(2012年桂林)为例:My good friendPersonal dataAppearance Personality Hobbies Education Evaluation name, age, sex, birthdaytall/ short, fair/ dark, eyes, hair…lovely, helpful, friendly, cute, funny…like sports, read books, listen to music…be interested in, study in, graduate, major in…famous/well-known, set a good example, make great contributions to…亮点句型速成
常用句型:Susan is a girl. She was born in America on Dec. 12, 2001.
推荐句型:①Born in America on Dec. 12, 2001, Susan is a quiet girl.
②Susan, the daughter of a peasant family, was born in America on Dec. 12, 2001.常用句型:Susan is a girl. And she has long golden hair.
推荐句型:①Susan is a beautiful girl with long golden hair.
②Susan is a good-looking girl, who has long golden hair.常用句型: Susan likes reading and listening to music.
推荐句型:①Susan likes not only reading but also listening to music.
②Susan is not only interested in reading, but also likes listening to music.
1. He/She was born in Poland (place) on Nov.7, 1867(date).
2. He/She was born in/into a poor/ rich family.3. He/She likes/is interested in/ fond of reading books.
4. He/She has so many hobbies/interests.
5. He sets us a good example, so all the people think highly of him.
典例剖析(2012桂林)
假设Susan是你的好朋友,下面是Susan的个人信息,请你根据以下提示,以“My good friend”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。要点提示:要求:(1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点,可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译;
(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1. 根据要求可知是用英文介绍自己的好朋友,因此体裁为记叙文,时态用一般现在时;
2. 要点提示表格中包含8点内容,叙述人物时应全部包含在内,同时可以对朋友进行评价;
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。【高分范文】
My good friend
I have a good friend at school. Her name is Susan. She is from America. She is fourteen years old. She is tall. She has big blue eyes and long golden hair. She is lovely and helpful. She often helps us with our English. We all like her very much. She likes sports. Her favorite sports are swimming and running. She has many hobbies, such as reading books and listening to music. She likes China and Chinese people. She is very interested in Chinese history and culture. She wants to know more about China.【检测菜单】
可爱的 ______
2. 有帮助的 _______
3. 爱好 ______
4. 来自 _______
5. 例如 ______
6. 对……感兴趣 _____________be interested inlovelyhelpfulhobbybe fromsuch as