2024届高考英语概要写作说课课件(共21张PPT)
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| 名称 | 2024届高考英语概要写作说课课件(共21张PPT) |  | |
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| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2023-09-13 13:23:54 | ||
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(共21张PPT)
高中英语-概要写作
Summary Writing
the criteria(标准) of a good summary
how to write a good summary
1
2
5
After this class, I hope students will know:
Learning objectives
文本分析与写作步骤：
本文是一篇议论文，主要讲述了成名给名人们生活带来的影响，以及处理这些问题的方法，并依此引发读者思考。
此类文章在写概要时：
首先要抓住文章主旨和关键词；
其次，要对每一段的主题进行总结和概括；
最后在各个信息要点中，加入适当的连接词，使上下文连贯，过渡自然。
The teaching procedures
Step1 The requirements of summary writing .
Evaluation standards
1. Cover the main points (3*4=12points)
2. Do not copy, in your words (4 points)
3. Use correct language，grammar and vocabulary (4 points)
4. Apply transitional words if necessary to make the
summary coherent. (2 points)
5. Have proper punctuation and good handwriting. (2 points)
6. Contain about 60 words (40—80words). (1 point)
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today's stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world's attention. Paparazzi(狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
Step 2 Find the key words and key sentences.
According to the psychologists, celebrities(名人) worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. Over time, they feel separated and alone.
The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages. In the 4th century B.C., painters followed Alexander the Great into battle, hoping to picture his victories for his admirers. When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century, his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans, leading him to complain about his lack of privacy. Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran articles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do.
Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. Superstars cannot move about without worrying about photographers with modern cameras. When they say something silly or do something ridiculous, there is always the Internet to spread the news in minutes and keep their "story" alive forever.
If fame is so troublesome, why aren't all celebrities running away from it The answer is there are still ways to deal with it. Some stars stay calm by surrounding themselves with trusted friends and family or by escaping to remote places away from big cities. They focus not on how famous they are but on what they love to do or whatever made them famous in the first place. With these effective approaches, some celebrities relieve the stress and remain popular with fans. Consequently, though being famous is driving some stars crazy, some wise ones enjoy what reputation brings them.
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today's stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world's attention. Paparazzi(狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
Currently, celebrities, with their privacy being disturbed by fans, are confronted with high pressures.
Step3 Group work: summarize the main idea of each paragraph.
According to the psychologists, celebrities(名人) worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. Over time, they feel separated and alone.
Psychologists say that celebrities focus too much on their public image, leaving themselves cut off and isolated.
The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages. In the 4th century B.C., painters followed Alexander the Great into battle, hoping to picture his victories for his admirers. When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century, his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans, leading him to complain about his lack of privacy. Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran articles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do.
Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. Superstars cannot move about without worrying about photographers with modern cameras. When they say something silly or do something ridiculous, there is always the Internet to spread the news in minutes and keep their "story" alive forever.
In fact, the same problem has existed for long, but today's celebrities have more challenges to face.
If fame is so troublesome, why aren't all celebrities running away from it The answer is there are still ways to deal with it. Some stars stay calm by surrounding themselves with trusted friends and family or by escaping to remote places away from big cities. They focus not on how famous they are but on what they love to do or whatever made them famous in the first place. With these effective approaches, some celebrities relieve the stress and remain popular with fans. Consequently, though being famous is driving some stars crazy, some wise ones enjoy what reputation brings them.
Therefore, to tackle the problem, some wise celebrities give priority to doing what they like rather than doing something stressful.
目前，名人的隐私受到粉丝的打扰，面临着巨大的压力。 心理学家们认为，名人过于注重他们的公众形象，使他们 自己与世隔绝，非常孤独。
事实上，同样的问题存在已久，但今天的名人面临更多的挑战。
因此，为了解决这个问题，一些聪明的名人优先考虑做 他们喜欢做的事情，而不是做一些有压力的事情。
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3and 4
Para.5
Currently, celebrities, with their privacy being disturbed by fans, are confronted with high pressures.
Psychologists say that celebrities focus too much on their public image, leaving themselves cut off and isolated.
In fact, the same problem has existed for long, but today's celebrities have more challenges to face.
Therefore, to tackle the problem, some wise celebrities give priority to doing what they like rather than doing something stressful.
Step 4: Try to write a summary with
transitional words.
Show Time Show Time
Step 5 Presentation
Living in the public gaze, stars suffer from great pressure. (要点1)What's worse, anxiety over their public appearance robs them of the objective self-image, which leads to the feeling of isolation in the long term. (要点2) While being tracked has been a headache to celebrities for centuries, modern cameras and the Internet make it harder to be famous nowadays. (要点3. 4) However, by dealing with the stress wisely, stars still can stay popular and happy. (要点5)【71字】
Step 6 A possible version
avoid adding your own comments.
avoid any mistakes in spelling, grammar
and punctuation.
Step 7 Conclusion (How to write a good summary)
1.抓住文章主旨和关键词；
2.对每一段的主题进行总结和概括；
3.在各个信息要点中，加入适当的连接词，使上下文连贯，过渡自然。
高中英语-概要写作
Summary Writing
the criteria(标准) of a good summary
how to write a good summary
1
2
5
After this class, I hope students will know:
Learning objectives
文本分析与写作步骤：
本文是一篇议论文，主要讲述了成名给名人们生活带来的影响，以及处理这些问题的方法，并依此引发读者思考。
此类文章在写概要时：
首先要抓住文章主旨和关键词；
其次，要对每一段的主题进行总结和概括；
最后在各个信息要点中，加入适当的连接词，使上下文连贯，过渡自然。
The teaching procedures
Step1 The requirements of summary writing .
Evaluation standards
1. Cover the main points (3*4=12points)
2. Do not copy, in your words (4 points)
3. Use correct language，grammar and vocabulary (4 points)
4. Apply transitional words if necessary to make the
summary coherent. (2 points)
5. Have proper punctuation and good handwriting. (2 points)
6. Contain about 60 words (40—80words). (1 point)
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today's stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world's attention. Paparazzi(狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
Step 2 Find the key words and key sentences.
According to the psychologists, celebrities(名人) worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. Over time, they feel separated and alone.
The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages. In the 4th century B.C., painters followed Alexander the Great into battle, hoping to picture his victories for his admirers. When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century, his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans, leading him to complain about his lack of privacy. Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran articles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do.
Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. Superstars cannot move about without worrying about photographers with modern cameras. When they say something silly or do something ridiculous, there is always the Internet to spread the news in minutes and keep their "story" alive forever.
If fame is so troublesome, why aren't all celebrities running away from it The answer is there are still ways to deal with it. Some stars stay calm by surrounding themselves with trusted friends and family or by escaping to remote places away from big cities. They focus not on how famous they are but on what they love to do or whatever made them famous in the first place. With these effective approaches, some celebrities relieve the stress and remain popular with fans. Consequently, though being famous is driving some stars crazy, some wise ones enjoy what reputation brings them.
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today's stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world's attention. Paparazzi(狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
Currently, celebrities, with their privacy being disturbed by fans, are confronted with high pressures.
Step3 Group work: summarize the main idea of each paragraph.
According to the psychologists, celebrities(名人) worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. Over time, they feel separated and alone.
Psychologists say that celebrities focus too much on their public image, leaving themselves cut off and isolated.
The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages. In the 4th century B.C., painters followed Alexander the Great into battle, hoping to picture his victories for his admirers. When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century, his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans, leading him to complain about his lack of privacy. Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran articles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do.
Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. Superstars cannot move about without worrying about photographers with modern cameras. When they say something silly or do something ridiculous, there is always the Internet to spread the news in minutes and keep their "story" alive forever.
In fact, the same problem has existed for long, but today's celebrities have more challenges to face.
If fame is so troublesome, why aren't all celebrities running away from it The answer is there are still ways to deal with it. Some stars stay calm by surrounding themselves with trusted friends and family or by escaping to remote places away from big cities. They focus not on how famous they are but on what they love to do or whatever made them famous in the first place. With these effective approaches, some celebrities relieve the stress and remain popular with fans. Consequently, though being famous is driving some stars crazy, some wise ones enjoy what reputation brings them.
Therefore, to tackle the problem, some wise celebrities give priority to doing what they like rather than doing something stressful.
目前，名人的隐私受到粉丝的打扰，面临着巨大的压力。 心理学家们认为，名人过于注重他们的公众形象，使他们 自己与世隔绝，非常孤独。
事实上，同样的问题存在已久，但今天的名人面临更多的挑战。
因此，为了解决这个问题，一些聪明的名人优先考虑做 他们喜欢做的事情，而不是做一些有压力的事情。
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3and 4
Para.5
Currently, celebrities, with their privacy being disturbed by fans, are confronted with high pressures.
Psychologists say that celebrities focus too much on their public image, leaving themselves cut off and isolated.
In fact, the same problem has existed for long, but today's celebrities have more challenges to face.
Therefore, to tackle the problem, some wise celebrities give priority to doing what they like rather than doing something stressful.
Step 4: Try to write a summary with
transitional words.
Show Time Show Time
Step 5 Presentation
Living in the public gaze, stars suffer from great pressure. (要点1)What's worse, anxiety over their public appearance robs them of the objective self-image, which leads to the feeling of isolation in the long term. (要点2) While being tracked has been a headache to celebrities for centuries, modern cameras and the Internet make it harder to be famous nowadays. (要点3. 4) However, by dealing with the stress wisely, stars still can stay popular and happy. (要点5)【71字】
Step 6 A possible version
avoid adding your own comments.
avoid any mistakes in spelling, grammar
and punctuation.
Step 7 Conclusion (How to write a good summary)
1.抓住文章主旨和关键词；
2.对每一段的主题进行总结和概括；
3.在各个信息要点中，加入适当的连接词，使上下文连贯，过渡自然。