Module 3 My school 书面表达专练（含解析）外研版版英语七年级上册

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外研版版英语七年级上册 Module 3 My school
书面表达专练
1．
李浩宇同学的爷爷想知道他的学校情况，请你帮助李浩宇同学介绍一下他的学校。
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2．书面表达
根据提供的要点写一篇50词左右的短文。
要点：
1. 你叫Gina Brown，请介绍一下你的姓、名、电话号码（0571-82538974）；
2. 介绍家庭成员（父母和一个哥哥，他的名字叫Dave）；
3. 介绍一下你房间里的物品及物品的位置（至少3样物品）。
要求：
要点齐全，书写工整，卷面干净。
Hi! My name is Gina Brown. ________________________________________________________________
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3．请你向你的笔友Mike介绍一下你的新学校，具体信息如下:
1. 学校有六个大型的建筑物——教学楼，图书馆，科学实验室，餐厅，运动大厅和办公楼。
2.在学校的正中心是一个大的操场，操场的右边有餐厅和办公楼。
3.操场的左边有图书馆，科学实验楼和运动大厅，而且运动大厅在图书馆和科学实验楼的中间。
4.教学楼在办公楼和图书馆的中间，而且紧邻着操场。
5.我们都很喜欢我们的学校。
要求：1.词数60左右；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯。
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4．在教育局组织的“手拉手”活动中，来自乡村小学校的李小朋对于他所看到的城市学校很有感触，于是他写了一篇作文向他的同班同学做了介绍。假设你就是李小朋，根据下面的提示，以“Their School”为题，写一篇作文。以there be句式为主，60个词左右。
提示：1.学校很大很漂亮，有许多树和花，像花园一样；
2.有图书馆、电脑房、实验室等；
3.学生能够学到很多知识。
Their School
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5．升入中学整整一个学期了，由陌生到熟悉，学校里有很多有趣的地方，同学们经常会去。比如：教室，图书馆，阅览室，操场等。这里的某一个场所一定给你留下了美好的印象，某英文报以“My Favourite Place at School”为题征文，请你投稿。请描述一个你在学校里最喜欢的地方，并说明喜欢的原因。
要求：
1. 词数不少于 70 词；
2. 语句通顺，书写规范，注意正确使用标点；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．同学们，你们的教室一定很漂亮吧。请以“My Class”为题描述一下你班级。
要求：
1.不能出现真实的姓名。
2.字数不少于50词。
My Class
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7．假如你是李雷，请你根据以下内容提示，向你笔友John介绍一下你的学校和你的校园生活吧！
要点提示：1. 学校的位置和主要建筑；2. 学校几点开始上课；每天有多少节课；最喜欢的课程及原因；课外活动有哪些；3. 老师和同学都非常友好；4. 我的感受。
要求：1. 语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁；2. 文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计；3. 词数80个左右。
Dear John,
How are things
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Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Lei
8．近日，我市正在举办“魅力校园”评选活动，同学们都希望自己的学校获奖。假设今天评委来到我校评估，你是学生代表，要向评委组介绍学校的一些情况，请根据以下图示写一篇70词左右的发言稿。
要求:
（1）发言稿须包括图示中的三个要点信息，并补充一个要点；
（2）针对提示内容适当发挥；
（3）文章首段已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实的地名，校名，人名。
Dear judges,
I’m very glad to introduce my school to you. My school_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I love my school. I really hope you can choose my school as the best one. Thank you.
参考答案：
1．参考范文(One possible version)
My school is very big. There are 30 classes, 100 teachers and 1000 students in our school. Here is a map of our school. There are 5 buildings in our school. In the middle of our school is the classroom building. And on the right of the classroom building is the playground. We often run and play on the playground. In front of the playground is the dining hall. How about the library It is on the left of the classroom and near the school gate. I like reading books there. Behind the library is the science building, and behind the science building is the office building.
I like my friends and teachers very much. I love our beautiful school.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求结合图片内容，帮助李浩宇同学向他爷爷介绍一下他的学校。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作时正确地描述学校里的建筑物，具体位置，确保无单词语法错误，语句通顺，表达清晰。
2．Hi! My name is Gina Brown. My first name is Gina and my last name is Brown. My telephone number is 0571-82538974. I am a happy girl.
I have a nice family. These are my parents. They are Chinese teachers. That is my brother, Dave. He is cool.
This is my room. It is very comfortable. Some oranges and my map are on the table. Under the table, you can see a ruler and a pen. Oh, where is my jacket It is on the wall.
【分析】这是一篇看图作文，介绍我个人以及家人的情况，并介绍一下我房间里的物品及物品的位置。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My first name is…、I have…、These are…、It is…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的的姓、名、电话号码，接下来介绍我的家庭成员，最后介绍我房间里的物品及物品的位置。此处first name、last name、telephone number、under the table、on the wall等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3．高分范文
Hi,Mike.This is my new school.
There are six big buildings in my school: a classroom building, a library, a science building. In the middle of the school is a big playground. On the right of the playground is the dining hall and the office building. On the left of the playground is the library, the science building and the sports hall. And sports hall is between the library and the science building. The classroom building is between the office building and the library, near the playground.
We all love(like) our school very much.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给出的材料提示，写一篇英语短文向笔友Mike介绍一下你的新学校。首先我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时来描述学校的建筑和设施，及它们之间的位置关系，文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
4．例文：
Their School
Their school is big and beautiful. There are many beautiful flowers and green trees around the school. It’s like a big garden. There are five teaching buildings in the school. In front of the teaching buildings, there are many trees and flowers. On the second floor, there is a big reading room, two computer rooms and three science labs. The students love playing on computers. The reading room opens from Monday to Friday. There are many books in it. Students like reading books there. They learn a lot from those books. They all like their school very much.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是以“Their School”为主题展开描写，内容按照题目中给出的信息提示描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，主要用There be句型展开描述。主要是介绍城市学校的一些情况，主要是建筑以及配套设施等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
5．例文：
My Favourite Place at School
Our school has a lot of places where students like to hang out, such as the playground, computer rooms, art rooms and so on. My favorite place is the library.
In the library, people know how to restrict themselves, behave more politely, and it is a good place for me to read plenty of novels and study my own subjects. I am used to hanging out in the library after school, because even I go home, I may not have the mood or conditions to finish my homework, and it is a good place for me to meet some friends who have something in common and we can share experience on study or other subjects.
It's really good to have such a quiet place!
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇介绍类写作，我们可以采用三段式的写作手法。第一段点明自己最喜欢的地方是哪里；第二段重点阐述喜欢的原因；最后一段再次表达喜爱之情。
2.写作指导：本文应该用一般现在时，以第一人称的口吻来写。第一段和最后一段都可以简短的表达，重要的是要详细说明喜欢的原因，我们要注意多种句式交替运用，写作时注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整地表达出提纲中所列内容。
6．参考例文：
My Class
This is my classroom. It’s big and bright. There is a teacher’s desk, a shelf, a computer and two boards. There are many desks and chairs, too. The curtains are green. The fans are white. The books are on the shelf. The computer is on the teacher’s desk. I like my classroom.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求根据“My Class”为题，写一篇关于自己班级的作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作时语句要通顺，无单词语法错误。
7．例文
Dear John,
How are things
Let me tell you something about my school. My school is in the center of the city. There are two classroom buildings in it. There is a beautiful garden behind them. Classes begin at eight in the morning. I have six classes every day. My favorite subject is English because it is easy and interesting. After school, I often run on the playground. Sometimes I go to the library. My teachers and classmates are very kind to me. We often help each other. I love my school very much. Welcome to my school.
Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文，要求根据内容提示向笔友John介绍自己的学校和学校生活，学生要围绕题目所给的四点提示进行描述。必须要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示进行描述，文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
8．例文
Dear judges,
I’m very glad to introduce my school to you. My school is very big and beautiful. The teachers and students are friendly to each other and help each other like a big family. I’m very happy in the school.
We have six classes every day. We listen to the teachers and do the exercises carefully in class. My teachers can make the classes lively and interesting, but they are strict with us. After class, I always do sports with my friends. We can play ball game in the big playground and we also can learn to swim in the swimming pool. There are many clubs in our school, such as art club and cooking club. We can paint, sing and dance in the art club and we can learn some basic life skills that are useful to us in the cooking club. There are also many activities in our school, such as sports meeting, food festivals, fashion show and so on.
I love my school. I really hope you can choose my school as the best one. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，向评委组介绍自己的学校，图示内容描述清楚，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达能够发言的荣幸并整体介绍学校，老师和学生；
第二步，具体介绍学校，从学习和业余活动介绍自己学校拥有的亮点；
第三步，表达希望学校能够选中的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① are friendly to对……友好
② are strict with对……严格
③ such as例如
④ and so on等等
[高分句型]
①My teachers can make the classes lively and interesting, but they are strict with us.（转折并列句）
②There are also many activities, such as sports meeting, food festivals, fashion show and so on.（there be句型）
③We can paint, sing and dance in the art club and we can learn some basic life skills that are useful to us in the cooking club.（并列句+限制性定语从句）
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