Module 1 Wonders of the world 写作专练（含解析）外研版版英语九年级上册

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外研版版英语九年级上册 Module 1 Wonders of the world 写作专练
1．下面是一篇未写完的短文，认真阅读，为短文写一个30词左右的结尾，使短文连贯完整。
The weather was sunny today. I had a trip with my family. In the morning, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．上周末，小红一家参加了为期两天的“山区宿营之旅(A trip camping in the mountains)”。下面这幅图画呈现了小红一家宿营后的情景。请根据提示信息和你对图画的理解，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述图画内容；
2. 简要陈述你的看法。
注意：
1. 可以进行适当的想象；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
（参考词汇：collecting-bags 收集袋)
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3．假设你是张平，请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英文短文，记录你同美国朋友Mike游览武汉东湖的全过程。
内容要点如下：
(1) 我们一大早就到了，迈克被美丽的湖水和磨山上的建筑所吸引；
(2) 接下来，我们去东湖划船；
(3) Mike对湖上的长桥和绿道很感兴趣，拍了很多照片；
(4) 我们在太阳下山时离开；
(5) 请适当发挥一两点游览的感受。
注意：
(1) 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数：60—80；
(3) 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译。
参考词汇：attract v. 吸引 Mo Hill n. 磨山 greenway n. 绿道
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4．你们学校英语报推出了"云旅游"版块,第一期的主题为"the City VS the Countryside",分享同学们去城市或者农村旅行的见闻。请你结合下表信息,选择一个地方,以"My Trip to___"为题写一篇英语短文介绍自己的一次旅行经历和感受参与投稿。
the city VS the countryside
weather
transportation by subway by bus
environment tall buildings... some fields...
activities see the beautiful sights... climb mountains...
要求:（1）把题目补充完整;
(2）文中不能出现真实的个人身份信息;
（3）词数∶110词左右。
My Trip to ___________________
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5．我们身边总有很多的人和事让我们的生活充满乐趣。这些乐趣让我们的生活更加精彩。请以 “ _______ Is Fun” 为题写一篇英语短文。
提示词语：
reading, volunteering, doing sports, traveling
提示问题：·
What do you think is fun
Why do you think it is fun
What experience do you want to share with us
________ Is Fun
In our life, a lot of things are fun, but among them all, I think _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假如你是一只叫做凯特的丹顶鹤，现在生活在扎龙自然保护区，由于人类的帮助，你的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你给人类写一篇词数在80—100之间英语感谢信。
内容必须包括以下要点：
扎龙基本情况介绍 1. 最大的湿地之一；提供…… 2. 鸟儿的栖居情况
人类为湿地和鸟类做的事 1. 中国政府制定法律…… 2. 观鸟协会
我在这里的生活现状 1. 介绍最好的朋友天鹅 2. 最喜欢的季节和原因
Dear humans,
I am a red-crowned crane called Kate. I’m writing to thank you for your help.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks again for helping us.
Best wishes,
Kate
7．假如你是来自美国的Nancy，你和你的父母正在中国旅游。请根据内容要点提示，给你的朋友Anna写一封信。要点提示：
1. 写信时你们正在九寨沟国家公园(Jiuzhaigou National Park)；
2. 你与父母于7月26日从纽约飞往北京；
3. 在北京你们参观了颐和园(the Summer Palace)、天安门广场(Tian’an men Square)和紫禁城(the Forbidden City)，还去爬了长城；
4. 你们拍了许多照片；
5. 你已为她买了一些纪念品(souvenir)，希望她能够喜欢。
Dear Anna,
I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Nancy
8．假如你是李斌，你们学校昨天组织了一次秦岭研学旅行。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇日记。
时间 早上7:30出发
交通 乘公交车
活动 上午：爬山；下午：参观秦岭野生动物园（Qinling Wildlife Park）
感受 ……
要求：1. 必须包括表格内容，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
March 14th
Today we had a school trip to Qinling Mountains.
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9．假如你是李琳，你校下周要举办一个英语自由演讲比赛，你打算参加，请根据下面的提示写一篇发言稿。
我喜欢和家人旅行，已经参观了许多世界奇观。我拍了很多照片，还参加了摄影比赛。我了解了白求恩（Bethune）医生，他是中国最著名的英雄之一，他来中国帮助中国人民并为他们牺牲了。我读了一本叫《The Adventures of Tom Sawyer》 的名著，它讲述的是关于一个有着许多冒险经历的男孩的一些令人激动的故事。如今，它仍被全世界的人阅读和喜爱。父母出差时我学会了做饭和整理，不过也意识到了一个人在家也不总是完美的。我认为现在的生活比过去更好了。作为一个中国人我很自豪。
注意：(1) 内容必须包含提示中的信息，并可适当发挥。
(2)词数不少于80 左右。
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校。
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10．假设你是李明，5月29日你们年级的同学将去净月潭公园旅游。请你代表学生会根据以下提示写一则通知。
1. 早晨9点在学校门口集合，乘坐大巴车前往；
2. 返回时间为下午3点；
3. 同学们会搭帐篷、玩游戏；
4. 带好午餐和水。
要求：信息表述完整，要点齐全，不少于40词。
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参考答案：
1．例文
The weather was sunny today. I had a trip with my family. In the morning, we went to a zoo. There were lots of animals, such as cute pandas, active monkeys and so on. We also had a delicious lunch in the zoo. In the afternoon, we went to a natural park and had a picnic. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful view. What a happy day we had!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇短文续写，主题是家庭出游。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。续写时，应详细描述旅游出行的活动，并表达自己的感受。注意紧贴主题，语句通顺，条例清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
2．例文
Last weekend, Xiao Hong’s family took a two-day trip. This picture shows what happened when they arrived in the mountains. After they arrived in the mountains, they found the scenery was beautiful, the mountains were green and the water was clear. But because so many tourists come, there is a lot of rubbish in this area. Xiao Hong thought of what she had learned recently to protect the environment, so she found some collecting-bags and sorted the garbage around her. Her parents also agreed with her and accompanied her, even the dog helped. After their cleaning up, the area became more beautiful.
This reminds us that we should pay attention to protecting the environment when we travel.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。假定你是小红，和父母去山区宿营之后发生的事情；根据图片内容描述，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据图片的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
3．例文：
Mike and I went to the East Lake. It is unforgettable for both of us.
Early in the morning, we arrived there. Mike felt quite excited. He was attracted by the beautiful lake and the buildings on the Mo Hill. Then we climbed to the top of the hill to enjoy the wonderful view. Later, we went boating on the East Lake. Mike was interested in the long bridges over the lake and the greenway, and took a lot of photos. Meanwhile, I explained to him how wonderful the greenway was. When the sun was setting, we left. Mike was deeply impressed and couldn’t help praising Wuhan for its beauty.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于一篇材料作文。在写作时注意要根据汉语提示的内容，叙述同美国朋友Mike游览武汉东湖的全过程。内容包括：到达东湖的时间，在东湖看到的优美景色以及在东湖做的事情，离开的时间及游览的感受等。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
4．例文
My Trip to Countryside
This summer vacation, I went back to my hometown by bus. It is a small country. There are no tall buildings here, but there are many green plants, rice fields, as well as rivers and mountains. The air is so fresh that makes me refreshed every day.
I liked green plants, clear rivers and lovely animals there. I could climb mountains and breathed the fresh air on the mountain top, sometimes I went swimming in the river. In the city, we will never have such an experience. There are some fields here, and people are working in the fields. I often helped them to do farm work.
I not only like the scene of the countryside, but also the people there.
【详解】题干分析：阅读题干，这里是要求同学们分享去城市或者农村旅行的见闻，选择一个地方,以“My Trip to___”为题写一篇英语短文介绍自己的一次旅行经历和感受，那么在介绍自己过去的经历时，应该用一般过去时。
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确的运用的时态，例文中运用的是一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称为主，主谓一致。例文采取三段式的写作手法，第一段点明了写作的地方——乡村；第二段详细的介绍了乡村的美丽，以及自己在乡村的一些有趣的经历；最后一段表达了自己对于乡村的热爱之情。例文同时使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
高分亮点：
　　短语：summer vacation暑假；as well as也；make sb. do sth让某人做某事；go swimming游泳；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事。
　　句型：（1）The air is so fresh that makes me refreshed every day. 空气如此清新，让我每天都神清气爽。So +adj. + that……如此……以至于。（2）I not only like the scene of the countryside, but also the people there. 我不仅喜欢乡村的景色，也喜欢那里的人。Not only…..., but also……不仅…….如此…….。
5．例文
Travelling Is Fun
In our life, a lot of things are fun, but among them all, I like travelling best.
I think travelling is fun for the following reasons. First, I can appreciate beautiful scenery when we go traveling. Second, I can meet some interesting people on the way. Also, I can try a lot of delicious local food when I visit different places.
I still remember the wonderful time I went to Sanya. It was the first time for me to see the sea. The vastness of the sea amazed me. When I put my feet into the cool sea, I felt all my troubles and worries were washed away by the waves.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“……是有趣的”为题，描述的内容包括：有趣的事情是什么，认为它有趣的原因，分享曾经的经历。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称，以一般现在时和一般过去时来介绍。采取三段式：第一段介绍有趣的事情，第二段认为它有趣的原因，第三段分享经历。注意主谓要保持一致，逻辑性要强。
6．范文
Dear humans,
I am a red-crowned crane called Kate. I’m writing to thank you for your help.
Zhalong Nature Reserve is one of the largest wetlands in the world. It provides humans with a lot of food, raw materials and water. Many birds live here. They are very happy. Thanks to the laws made by the Chinese government, we are safe. We don’t have to worry about bad guys hunting us. Humans have formed birdwatching association, so there are a lot of people coming to watch us. I have a best swan friend here. She is beautiful. I like spring very much, because the weather is warm and I have enough food.
Thanks again for helping us.
Best wishes,
Kate
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍扎龙自然保护区基本情况；
第二步，介绍人类为湿地和鸟类做的事；
第三步，介绍自己在这里的生活现状。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb with sth提供某人某物
②thanks to多亏
③worry about担心
[高分句型]
I like spring very much, because the weather is warm and I have enough food.（because引导原因状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Anna,
I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. It is a world-famous National Park in China. My parents and I flew to Beijing from New York on 26th July. We visited the Summer Palace, Tian’an men Square and the Forbidden City. We also climbed the Great Wall. We took a lot of beautiful photos. What’s more, we ate delicious food such as Beijing Roast Duck.
I bought some small souvenirs for you and I’m sure you will like them.
Yours
Nancy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍去北京的旅行情况；
第二步，买了一些纪念品给对方，确定对方会喜欢的。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②a lot of许多
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①I’m sure you will like them.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文
March 14th
Today we had a school trip to Qinling Mountains. We started from school at 7:30 am. It took us an hour to get there by bus. We started to climb the mountain at 8:30 and got to the top at 10:00 am. We had lunch at the top of the mountain. After lunch, we visited Qinling Wildlife Park. We saw many kinds of wild animals there. We all love the monkeys, so we watched them for a long time. We also took many photos of them. We spent three hours in the park and left at 5:30 pm. We all felt tired but happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据表格内容介绍这次旅行，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍出发时间及出行交通方式；
第二步，介绍具体活动；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①start to do sth开始做某事
②at the top of在……的顶端
③take photos拍照
[高分句型]
①It took us an hour to get there by bus.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
②We all love the monkeys, so we watched them for a long time. （so连接的并列句）
9．参考范文：
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Lin. I like travelling with my family. I have visited many wonders of the world. I took many photos and entered the photo competition. I learned about Dr Bethune. He is one of the most famous heroes in China. He came to China to help the Chinese people and died for them. I read a great book called The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It tells some exciting stories about a boy who has many adventures. Today, it is still read and loved by people all over the world. I learned (how) to cook and tidy up when my parents went (away) on business. But I also realized being home alone was not always perfect.
I think life is better today than in the past. I am proud of being a Chinese.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍自己的信息，去过哪里旅行，了解到的英雄人物，读到的文学名著以及自己学到的生活技能等；第二段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．例文：
Notice
Boys and girls, the students in our grade will have a trip to Jing Yuetan Park on May 29th. We are going to meet at the school gate at 9 o’clock in the morning. And we will take the bus there. We are going to return at 3:00 p.m. We will put up tents and play games. You had better bring lunch and water. If you have some questions, you can tell me ahead of time. I hope that we will have a good time.
Students Union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为通知。
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你们年级的同学将去净月潭公园旅游的通知的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“5月29日你们年级的同学将去净月潭公园旅游。请你代表学生会根据提示写一则通知”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“集合和返回的时间、乘坐的交通工具、要进行的活动等”几个方面重点介绍你们年级的同学将去净月潭公园旅游的通知的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我希望我们会玩得高兴”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have a trip to去……旅行；
②put up举起，建造；
③play games玩游戏；
④ahead of time提前。
[高分句型]
①If you have some questions, you can tell me ahead of time. (if引导条件状语从句)
②I hope that we will have a good time. (that引导宾语从句)
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