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外研版版英语八年级上册 Module 3 Sports. 写作专练
1.Linda上周参加了学校举行的运动会,请根据表格内容,写一篇文章说明比赛的结果,并且表达自己的看法.词数70、左右.
比赛时间 周六
比赛地点 学校操场
比赛结果 1.Mark 在男子1000米赛跑获得第一名 2.Mary 在跳高比赛中做的较差。 3.Linda 参加女子200米赛跑,获得第一
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2.书面表达。
我们的健康离不开运动。请你根据自己最喜欢的运动谈谈多锻炼对我们的益处。70词左右。
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3.以“Basketball”为题,充分发挥自己的想象力,写一篇60词左右的短文。
提示词:popular, exciting, favourite, excited, strong
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4.假如你叫Jack,给你的好友Dale写一封信邀请他来观看你们学校下周三(10月20日)的篮球比赛。
Dear Dale,
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Jack
5.上周学校举办了校运会。许多学生积极参加,包括你。你们班男生在接力赛中,尽了最大的努力,但遗憾的是他们没获得好名次。你擅长跳高,第一次比赛并幸运地获得第一名。你很激动,现在很喜欢运动。你认为运动对我们大有益处,谈谈你长大后的运动理想,并制定锻炼计划。
请结合以上内容,适当拓展,用第一人称写一篇不少于80词的日记。
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参考答案:
1.例文
Sunday, Sept.15th
Last weekend our school held a sports meet in the school playground. Everyone in our class was very excited and happy because our class won first place. In the competition, Mark ran very fast and won the first to pass the finish line in the boy’s 1000 –meter race. Mary did badly in the high jump, but we’re sure that she can do it better next time. I took part in the girl’s 200-meter race. I did my best and was the first to pass the finish line. That made me happy. Now I love sports. I’m going to take more sports and I hope I can take part in the Olympic Games some day.
【详解】1.题干解读:根据表格内容,写一写琳达上周参加学校运动会的情况。包括比赛时间、比赛地点和比赛结果。
2.写作指导:文章写上周运动会的情况,所以主要用一般过去时态,注意谓语动词的正确形式;写作时最好使用一些短语和句型,让文章更丰富多彩。
2.I am a healthy girl,because I like exercising. It’s good for our body. And my favourite exercise is swimming. It’s really interesting. Every summer,I always swim in the sea. It makes me feel comfortable,and I can swim very well. My friend says that I am like a fish in the sea.
Most of us love sports. We should do more sports as it plays an important role in our lives. In my opinion,plenty of physical exercise will help us keep in shape.
【详解】阅读作文题干要求,是谈关于运动的。时态应该以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主。
重点词汇短语:healthy adj.健康的;favorite adj.最喜爱的;comfortable adj.舒适的;physical adj.物理的;be good for……对…有好处;like doing sth喜欢做某事;like a fish像一条鱼;most of us我们大多数;plenty of 许多;in shape处于良好状态;In my opinion我的观点。
句型:
It makes me feel comfortable,and I can swim very well. 它让我感觉很舒服,而且我可以游得很好。Make sb do sth让某人做某事,well 副词修饰动词swim。
My friend says that I am like a fish in the sea. 我的朋友说我像大海里的一条鱼。That引导的宾语从句。
We should do more sports as it plays an important role in our lives. 我们应该多做运动,因为它在我们的生活中起着重要的作用。As引导的状语从句,play a role in扮演重要的角色。
3.例文
Basketball
Basketball is very popular in the world. It’s very exciting. Many young people like it.
Basketball is also my favourite sport. When I watch the basketball match, I’m excited. I am good at it. My friends and I play basketball after school every day. The famous American basketball player, Curry, is my favourite basketball star.
Basketball makes us strong and happy. I love basketball.
【分析】这是一篇话题作文,以“Basketball”为题,写一篇短文。
【详解】结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Basketball is……,I am……,Basketball makes……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用提示词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了很多人喜欢篮球,接下来介绍我擅长打篮球以及我最喜欢的篮球明星,最后指出篮球让我强壮快乐。此处be good at, play basketball, after school, make sb+形容词,等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4.One possible version:
Dear Dale,
How are you doing I have good news to tell you.
Do you like sports Do you have a basketball Do you like watching basketball games Next Wednesday, our school will have a basketball game. It’s on October 20th. It is very exciting. I want you to come to our school to watch it with me. See you there.
Have a good day!
【详解】1、题干解读:题目要求你给好友Dale写一封信邀请他来观看你们学校下周三(10月20日)的篮球比赛,可适当发挥。
2、写作指导:本文应该以第二人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;写邀请信时,应详细具体,语句通顺,逻辑性强,保证条理清晰。
5.例文:
Last week our school held a sports meeting. Everyone took an active part in it, including me.
The boys in my class did their best in the relay, but unfortunately they didn't get a good place. I took part in the high jump competition. It’s my first competition and luckily, I won the first place. I was so excited.
Now I like sports very much. I think sports are good for our health. When I grow up, I want to be a high jumper. I believe that if I exercise every day, my dream will come true one day in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时需要认真审题,本篇习作题干已经给出大部分内容,写作时可以按题干描述来写。自己发挥部分主要是在长大后的运动理想和锻炼计划,表达清楚即可。
2. 写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来写;因为是日记,时态采用一般过去时,但是注意自己对运动的看法和以后的理想都要根据具体情况,用一般现在时或一般将来时;在组织篇章时,可以第一段写上周举办了运动会;第二段写大家在运动会中的表现;第三段写自己对运动的看法和以后的理想及锻炼计划。在组织语言时,可以先把句子涉及的单词、短语列出,再连词成句,最后连句成篇章。
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