Module 4 Home alone 写作专练（含解析）外研版版英语九年级上册

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外研版版英语九年级上册 Module 4 Home alone 写作专练
1．仔细观察下列六幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数在80～100词之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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2．无规矩不成方圆。有规矩的家庭，更能培养人格独立、德行兼优的孩子。但有时我们并不能理解这些规矩存在的意义，经常与父母产生矛盾。就此话题，请发表你的看法。
提示如下：
1. What are the rules in your home
2. What do you think of these home rules
3. What efforts do you or your parents make to understand each other
要求：
1. 内容须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数90个左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
As the saying goes, “nothing can be accomplished without rules.” Because of this,
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There are still many “don’ts” in my home. But nothing is unchangeable. It’s all about understanding each other.
3．子曰：“见贤思齐焉。”榜样的力量是无穷的。你校广播站正在开展以“榜样的力量”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你眼中的榜样，以及他/她对你的影响。
写作要点：
1. 谁对你的影响最深刻？
2. 他/她做了什么？
3. 你从他她的事迹中学到了什么？
注意：
1. 包含以上信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，句式多样；
3. 字数100词左右。
4. 不得出现真实的学校及姓名信息。
参考词汇：inspiration鼓舞，make progress取得进步
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4．今年春节上映了一部贺岁片——《你好，李焕英》，讲述了妈妈和女儿之间的故事。片中妈妈和女儿的故事令观众感动不已，将母爱诠释得恰当好处。我们总以为自己已经很爱妈妈了，但妈妈远比你想象地还要爱你。生活中，你和妈妈之间肯定发生了很多令你难以忘记的美好的记忆，请结合自己的亲身经历，用英语介绍你的妈妈，并说说你用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。
内容包括：
something about your mother (appearance, personalities, hobbies...)
an experience you had with your mother
what you will do to thank her
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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5．Write a short passage about your parents’ changes in the past three years when they get along with you. （写一篇关于在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中变化的短文。）（请根据下面的提示，在答题卡第六节下面，写出一篇90-120词的短文。
注意∶不要出现自己的信息：诸如姓名、学校，人名可以用英文名字。）
l. The title of your short passage. （你的短文的标题。）
2. First, write the general introduction about how your parents got along with you in the past;
（首先写关于你父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍。）
3. Second, write the most important change and how it happened.
（其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的。）
4. Third, write about how you feel about this change.
（最后写一下你对变化的感受。）
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6．My Childhood Memory
提示：每个人都经历过童年，小时候的一些美好瞬间总是令人难以忘怀。请以“My Childhood Memory” 为题写一篇不少于60词的英语短文，向大家讲述一下你童年发生的故事。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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7．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A perfect family”（以“完美家庭”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
我们都和家人生活在一起，都希望拥有一个完美的家庭。请你描述一下你心目中的完美家庭。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予计分）
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8．近期，江苏卫视热播电视剧《都挺好》在全国引起不少轰动。假如你是王梅，你的英国网友Rose偶然看到这部电视剧，她对中国家庭的现实生活感到好奇。请你写一封回信，以你的家庭为例，向她介绍你的家庭生活。
写作要点：
1.我家有三口人。爸爸经常忙工作，妈妈常来我学校参加学校活动；
2.我需要做一些家务，妈妈希望我学会承担责任以及关心他人；
3.父母亲对我很严格，给我制定了家规，如……；
4.当我和父母发生矛盾时，我会 (结合你平时的处理方法，谈至少2点)。
[写作要求]
1.字数：100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总字数)
2.文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可做适当发挥；
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
[参考词汇]矛盾n. conflict (s)
Dear Rose,
In the last email, you asked me what a common Chinese family life is like. Now I’ll take my own family as an example, telling you something about our daily life.
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9．近期，一部片名为《摔跤吧，爸爸！》的印度电影在各地热映，引发了观众对父母育儿方式的热议，为此英文报Teens将在下期开设专栏讨论这一话题。假设你是Alice，上周随父亲一起观看了此片，请结合观后感受给报社写一封英文信参与讨论，内容提示见下表：
总体印象 一部充满正能量的电影
内容概要 一个印度父亲和他两个女儿的故事 父亲为实现自己的世界冠军梦逼迫女儿们接受训练 起先两人都不愿意，但父亲非常严厉，最后成功了。
热议焦点 父母是否该为孩子决定未来？
你的观点 ……
注意事项：
1. 英文信须包括表格中所有提及内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 表格中“你的观点”一栏须用2-3句话进行合理阐述，可作适当发挥；
3. 词数在90个左右，信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数，信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
参考词汇：正能量(positive energy) 世界冠军(world champion)
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Alice
参考答案：
1．例文：
This morning my mother didn’t go to work and she wanted to do some washing at home.
First, she put some dirty clothes into the washing machine, and she went back to the bedroom to look for other dirty clothes with the door open. At that moment, my pet cat ran out of the bedroom happily and rushed into the washing machine. When my mother returned and was about to close the door, I came in with a dirty T-shirt. “Mom, could you please help me clean it ” “Of course, my dear.” Suddenly, my pet cat rushed out of the washing machine. My mother and I were both shocked. My god! What would happen if I didn’t give Mom the T-shirt
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据图片内容，描写具体的事情，场景描写要具体详细，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣图片内容，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
2．One possible version:
As the saying goes, “nothing can be accomplished without rules.” Because of this, my parents are very strict with me. There are many rules at my home.
First, I’m not allowed to go out with my friends at night. Then, my parents pay too much attention to my exam results. It’s not allowed to make mistakes because of carelessness. Third, I mustn’t lie to anyone because honesty is important. However, I try my best to understand my parents. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and put too much pressure on me, I know that it is because they really care about me and want me to have a bright future.
To keep a good relationship with my parents, I work hard and obey the rules most of the time. I also speak up when I feel stressed. If I do want to stay out with my friends at night, I keep in touch with my parents. To be safe, I get back home before 10 pm.
There are still many “don’ts” in my home. But nothing is unchangeable. It’s all about understanding each other.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你家里有什么规矩；
第二步，说明你觉得这些家庭规定怎么样；
第三步，最后介绍你和你的父母在相互理解方面做了哪些努力；
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do sth被允许做某事
②pay attention to注意
③try one’s best to do尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①Third, I mustn’t lie to anyone because honesty is important.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and put too much pressure on me, I know that it is because they really care about me and want me to have a bright future.（although引导让步状语从句）
3．例文：
No one is an island, so there is no doubt that we are influenced by others. The person who has influenced me most is my father. As a doctor, he works hard day and night to save people’s lives. Whenever he is called to the hospital, he will head to the front lines to help patients in need. He is so hard-working that he is highly praised by other doctors and his patients.
I can not only see the kind heart of a great doctor in him, but also learn the true meaning of one’s life — to spare no effort to help others.
His inspiration made me study harder. And I have made greater progress in my study. I look forward to being like him one day. I dream of becoming an excellent doctor, just like him.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己眼中的榜样以及对自己的影响，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出提示问题融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
4．例文
My mother is a kind and gentle woman. She is a pretty woman with a round face and two big black eyes. She always has a smile on her face. I love my mother very much.
Maternal love is a kind of selfless power, which is like the spring rain, scattering in our hearts. I still remember it was a summer vacation in Grade 8 when I felt painful in my feet and found that there was a large black area on the surface of my feet. It was bitten by a bug. Without saying anything, my mother sucked out the poison with her mouth. At that moment, I felt a strong feeling of happiness rising from the bottom of my heart. Thanks to my mother, and it took a few days for my foot to fully recover. What a great mother she is!
To thank my mother, I will always listen to my mother and don’t do anything that makes her angry. And I will make every effort to do some housework to help my mother reduce the burden.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你写一篇介绍妈妈的文章，要结合自己的亲身经历详细介绍妈妈的一些信息、和妈妈经历的事情以及你将用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。
2. 写作指导：文章应该主要以第三人称展开客观描写，介绍妈妈外貌、性格、爱好等信息时以一般现在时为主，描述一起的经历时以一般过去时为主，表示将用什么实际行动来报答妈妈时以一般将来时为主。整体做到表述到位、条理清晰。
5．例文
How my parents have changed!
My parents have changed a lot in the past three years. They used to be strict with me. On Sunday, they always let me stay at home and study. So I didn’t have any friends.
Their biggest change is much gentler than before. Because I don’t have any friends, I’m very lonely. I’m not interested in my study, so my grades are worse and worse. Now my parents let me go out on Sunday. I have made many friends. We often help each other and get better grades.
Now I get on well with my parents. I love my parents very much.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时注意根据提示的内容，写出在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中的变化：首先写父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍；其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的；最后写一下你对变化的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，说明现在的情况，并兼用一般过去时介绍过去的情况。在写作中，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证条理清晰。
6．例文：
My Childhood Memory
Like many children, I had a happy childhood under the care and love of my parents. There are many beautiful memories that I can’t forget forever.
My mother is an English teacher. She had to get up early to have morning classes when I was young. So I had to get up with her and got to the kindergarten very early. I was always the first to get to the kindergarten then. Because of this, I was often praised by my teachers. My teachers also told me to help them to get ready for kids’ breakfast. From then on, I began to learn to do things by myself.
Sometimes I think my mother is a hard-working teacher but not a good mother because she loves her work and students more than me. Although that, I should also thank my mother. It was her who taught me independence.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“My Childhood Memory” 为题写一篇英语短文，向大家讲述童年发生的故事；词数不得少于60词，不得出现真实的姓名、校名。
2.写作指导：
要点提示 素材串联
开头：开篇点题 有很多让人难忘的美好记忆。
正文展开：阐述自己上幼儿园的故事。 妈妈是英语老师，不得不早起上早读。自己也不得不和妈妈一起起床 去上幼儿园。自己总是第一个到达幼儿园并帮助老师为小朋友们准备早餐。
结尾：表达对妈妈的看法和感激之情。 表达对妈妈忙于工作而忽略对自己的爱的看法。与此同时，也正因此， 无意培养了自己独立的性格。
7．例文：
A perfect family
Every child holds his or her own views on a perfect family. In my opinion, perfect families always have some specific qualities. First, family members always love each other. They love one another whether they have shortcomings or not. Second, they know how to respect each other, such as parents do not interfere with children’s privacy and children can understand their parents’ difficulties. Third, they support each other. If any of the family members is in trouble, the others give him or her encouragement and help.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。题目要求以“A perfect family”为题，用不少于60词描述一下你心目中的完美家庭。
2. 写作指导：本文主要以观点陈述或一般情况的描述为主，时态主要采用一般现在时；人称主要使用第三人称；在文章内容上可以结合日常生活从多角度阐述你认为的“完美家庭”所拥有的特质；写作完成后需保证文章内容符合题目要求，行文流畅，语言表达符合英文语法规则。
8．例文
Dear Rose,
In the last email, you asked me what a common Chinese family life is like. Now I’ll take my own family as an example, telling you something about our daily life.
There are three people in my family. My father is busy with his work, so my mother often comes to take part in my school’s activities. In my daily life, I need to do some housework, such as sweeping the floor and making the bed. My mother hopes that I should learn to take responsibility and care for others by doing these. What’s more, my parents are very strict with me. They make a lot of family rules for me. For example, I mustn’t hang out with my friends on school days. I must do my homework first when I get home. When there is a conflict, I will communicate with them and tell them what I thought. Sometimes I will send messages to them to solve problems.
I love my family very much. We have a close relationship and we always support each other.
Yours,
Wang Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍自己的家庭情况，父母给自己制定的家规，以及与父母发生矛盾时如何解决；
第三步，表达自己对家人的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①take…as an example以……为例
②be busy with忙于
③such as例如
④be strict with sb对某人要求严格
⑤communicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family.（there be句型）
②My mother hopes that I should learn to take responsibility and care for others by doing these.（that引导的宾语从句）
9．参考范文：
Dear editor,
I think the film Dangal is a wonderful one and it is full of positive energy.
It tells a story about a father and two daughters. In the film, the father wants to realize his world champion dream by training his two daughters hard. At first, the two girls don’t agree. However, their father is very strict with them. They finally make a big success.
After the film, many people discuss whether parents should decide their children’s future.
I suggest our parents should guide us to choose our own life. When we have difficulty making decisions, they should give us wiser advice.
Yours,
Alice
【详解】题干解读：题目要求结合《摔跤吧，爸爸！》观后感受给报社写一封英文信；要求包含表格中所有提示内容，并用2-3句话阐述自己的观点。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称和第三人称口吻。此文可采用4段落格式，第一段：介绍这部电影的总体印象；第二段：介绍这部电影的主要内容；第三段：介绍人们的热议焦点；第四段：阐述自己的观点，并说明理由。
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