Module 4 Planes, ships and trains 写作专练（含解析）外研版版英语八年级上册

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外研版版英语八年级上册 Module 4 Planes, ships and trains 写作专练
1．读下面一段对话，然后用自己的话概括主要内容。50词左右。
Betty: I was late for school today.
Mum: Why What happened
Betty: I took the bus. There was a road accident, and the traffic was very heavy. But nobody was late, except me. Maybe I should go to school by taxi.
Mum: It’s the most comfortable way, but it’s also the most expensive. And taxis are very slow in heavy traffic, too.
Betty: Then what about going by bike
Mum: That’s a good choice, but it’s a bit dangerous. There’s so much traffic.
Betty: But most of my classmates ride bikes, and it’s quite safe. Don’t worry. I’ll be careful.
Mum: All right. You can ride your bike to school, but remember to be careful all the time.
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2．根据图片提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的作文。
要求:1)结合图意,围绕出行方式、通讯工具及空气质量展开叙述,可适当发挥；
2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Fifteen years ago Now
Great changes have taken place since I was born.
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3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据所给情景写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。）
Situation: Nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground...How do you go to school What do you think of it （眼下不少学生骑自行车、乘私家车、乘地铁上学。你是怎么去学校的？你觉得你的方式如何？谈谈你的想法并阐述理由。）
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4．随着社会的发展，交通方式各种各样。请你以“My favorite transportation”为题写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。词数在80词左右。
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5．假如你是某中学初三（1）班班长李华，请你为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你们前天主题班会“To be sent to school or not”的讨论情况。
内容要点包括：
1. 部分同学认为上学应该接送，省时又安全；
2. 部分同学认为步行或骑自行车是最好的方式，环保又健身；
3. 你的看法和建议。
注意：
1. 词数：80个左右；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不要出现真实姓名和校名。
To be sent to school or not
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6．假如你叫李华，你的笔友Linda想要了解你的同学Su Lin,下面3组图片是关于Su Lin的，请根据图片所提供的信息给Linda写信，介绍Su Lin。

参考词汇：杜甫草堂：DU FU Cottage
要求：1. 字数80个单词左右。2. 内容应包括以上要点。3. 注意格式。
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7．为迎接2022年11月在广东举办的第五届世界创新大会，你校上月举办了青少年科技创新大赛，鼓励发明创造。你的发明作品飞翔单车（flying bike）荣获一等奖。你的英国笔友Alice对你的发明很感兴趣，请你根据提示向Alice写一封信介绍你的发明。
外观 外观和普通单车一样，但有翅膀；
特色 1. 使用太阳能和风能； 2. 速度比汽车快； 3.……
优点与评价
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使文章条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Alice,
I am writing to introduce my invention to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure that you will like my invention.
8．骑行是最普遍的交通方式之一，但骑行也存在一些问题。你们班就骑行的好处与安全注意事项展开了讨论。请你结合下图提示，在班上发表一篇演讲。
要求：1. 60词左右；（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2. 图片中的信息要全部包括，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名或学校名称
Hello, everyone! Here I’d like to share with you some of my views on cycling. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．范文：
Betty and her mum are talking about how to go to school. Betty was late for school because of the accident, so she’d like to go by taxi or by bike. Her mum thinks taking a taxi is the most comfortable way, but it’s also the most expensive. At last her mum agrees to let her ride a bike. But she must remember to be careful all the time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时根据对话内容，首先概括Betty和妈妈谈论的内容，然后具体说明Betty一次上学迟到的原因，以及因为这次上学迟到，Betty想变换交通方式，最后和妈妈达成一致。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时为主。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证概括内容完整，条理清晰。
2． Great changes have taken place since I was born.
Fifteen years ago, most people rode bikes when travelling for a short distance. Because there weren’t many cars, the air was fresh. And people kept in touch with each other mainly by telephone.
Now, many people own cars as well as cellphones which are widely used to chat on QQ, do shopping, etc. Lives seem easier than before, but too many cars make traffic heavier, and air pollution is getting worse.
To live a better life, we still have a lot to do.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Great changes have taken place since I was born为题目，介绍15年来我们的社会发生的变化。题目中用图片的形式给我们展示了这些变化，从三个方面来介绍：出行方式、通讯工具和空前质量，我们应用正确的英语将图片的内容表达出来。写作时，需要注意文章的结构，这篇作文可以分段写，先介绍15年前人们的生活情况，另起一段介绍现在的情况。这样文章的结构比较清晰，层次比较清楚。注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译。英语的句子结构主要为主谓宾结构和主系表结构，写作时要从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型表达。通过审题可知，这篇作文应以一般过去时态和一般现在时态为主，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态。文章中使用一些较好的句型和短语，语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯，表达流畅，提升文章档次。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文主题明确，符合题目要求。内容完整、充实，包含了题目要求的所有信息。其次短文结构清晰，层次清楚，文章共分成两段，第一段介绍了过去人们的生活状态，从题目要求的三个方面进行了介绍。第二段介绍了现在的变化，跟第一段的内容对应。另外短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章第一段使用了一般过去时态，第二段用了一般现在时态，语法规范，谓语动词的形式变化也很准确。短文中还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Fifteen years ago, most people rode bikes when travelling for a short distance.中连词when后加现在分词形式作状语；Because there weren’t many cars, the air was fresh中使用了Because引导的原因状语从句；And people kept in touch with each other mainly by telephone、Now, many people own cars as well as cellphones which are widely used to chat on QQ, do shopping, etc.中短语keep in touch和as well as以及定语从句的使用等等。这些复合句和复杂句式提升了文章的档次，使文意连贯、流畅。
3．例文
Nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground, but I think it’s a good choice to go to school by bike. Indeed, I ride a bike every day. Here are some reasons.
Firstly, it is convenient. Secondly, it can save space, time and money. Thirdly, it can save energy. Fourthly, it can’t cause any kind of pollution. Lastly, it can stop us from getting fatter.
In a word, riding a bike is the best way to go to school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的上学交通方式；
第二步，阐述这种交通方式好的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①any kind of任何一种
②stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①I think it’s a good choice to go to school by bike（省略that的宾语从句）
4．范文：
My favorite transportation
There are so many means of transportation, such as bus, taxi, subway an so on. I think taking a bus is my favorite. A bus is a public transportation. It has many advantages. For one thing, it is convenient and safe. It can provide service from the city center to the countryside. For another, it is cheap to take a bus. Everyone can afford it. What’s more, it can make less pollution. It is good for protecting the environment.
In a word, to have a cleaner living environment, I hope more and more people can take a bus. It’s really a better way.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为命题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：命题作文需找好角度，可从最喜欢的交通方式、喜欢的原因等方面展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的交通方式。直奔主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述为什么最喜欢这种交通方式，其优点是什么；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家选择更健康的交通方式。
[亮点词汇]
① there be某处有某物
② for one thing...for another...一方面……另一方面……
③ what’s more此外
④ in a word简言之
[高分句型]
① There are so many means of transportation, such as bus, taxi, subway an so on.（“there be”句型，表示某处有某物）
② I think taking a bus is my favorite. I hope more and more people can take a bus.（2个省略that的宾语从句）
5．例文：
To be sent to school or not
There was a theme class meeting in our class the day before yesterday. We mainly talked about whether we should be sent to school or not. There were many different opinions in the meeting.
Some think it can save a lot of time if parents send them to school. What’s more, it is helpful for parents to make sure their kids’ safety, especially when the weather is bad. Others think we should go to school on foot or by bike instead of being sent to school. Regular walking and cycling are not only good for our health but also good for our environment.
In my opinion, we should go to school on foot or by bike. Walking or bicycling are wonderful ways to exercise. Besides, if we walk or ride to school, there will be fewer cars in the city. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，对“学生上学是否接送”展开讨论，要分别写出接送与不接送的理由，最后提出自己的个人观点及建议。
写作指导：根据材料内容可知，本文主要是一般时态；人称用第一人称和第三人称。写作时，可分为三段式，首先开篇点题；其次写出同学们的观点；最后阐述自己的看法。注意要点齐全，表达准确，以及注意上下文衔接和过渡。
6．例文
Dear Mary,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you about one of my classmates. Her name is Su Lin. She is 14 years old. She’s of medium height and she has long straight hair. she’s good at playing the guitar. She lives near a supermarket. It’s three kilometers from her home to school. She rides to school every day. It takes her about 10 minutes. Last Saturday, It’s sunny. We went to DU FU Cottage. We had a good time.
We’re not only good classmates but also good friends. Do you want to make friends with her
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求你的笔友Linda想要了解你的同学Su Lin，根据关于Su Lin的图片所提供的信息给Linda写信，介绍Su Lin，要求包括个人信息、去学校的方式和周末活动等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称单数来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍Su Lin时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
7．例文：
Dear Alice,
I am writing to introduce my invention to you. My invention is a flying bike. It looks like a usual bike but it has two wings, so it can fly.
It uses solar power and wind power, so it won’t pollute the environment. It can even run faster than a car! Besides, it can wake me up every morning because it can sing songs.
I think we should make use of our time and travel in a green way. This flying bike can help us go to school at a faster speed without polluting the air.
I am sure that you will love my invention.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为英文书信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”表中关于“特色”和“优点与评价”的补充，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。衔接所给开头直接点题，来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“飞翔单车的外观、使用的动力、速度、作用等”几个方面重点介绍飞翔单车；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我相信你一定会喜欢我的发明”的信心。
[亮点词汇]
① look like 看起来像
② wake up 醒来
③ make use of ... 利用……
④ in a green way 以一种绿色方式
[高分句型]
① It looks like a usual bike but it has two wings, so it can fly.（but连接并列句）
② Besides, it can wake me up every morning because it can sing songs.（because引导原因状语从句）
③ I think we should make use of our time and travel in a green way. （含宾语从句的复合句）
8．例文
Hello, everyone! Here I’d like to share with you some of my views on cycling. Now more and more people like cycling and it brings us a lot of benefits. Firstly, cycling is a good exercise because it can help us keep healthy. Besides, it’s also good for the environment because it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it’s very convenient and helps to avoid traffic jam.
When we go cycling, we should obey some rules to keep safe. We should wear a helmet and we can’t go cycling side by side.
In conclusion, we can benefit a lot from cycling. At the same time, we also should obey the safety rules.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中的总结部分，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来介绍骑行的优点；
第二步，介绍骑行时需要注意的安全事项；
第三步，书写结语。表明“骑行能带来许多好处，但也要遵守安全准则”。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②what’s more除此之外还
③traffic jam交通堵塞
④side by side并排，一起
⑤in conclusion总的来说
⑥at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①Firstly, cycling is a good exercise because it can help us keep healthy.（because引导原因状语从句）
②When we go cycling, we should obey some rules to keep safe.（when引导时间状语从句）
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