Unit 1 This is me 写作 专练（含解析）牛津译林版英语七年级上册

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牛津译林版 英语七年级上册 Unit 1 This is me 写作 专练
1．
假如学校征集志愿者卡通形象，你的设计作品是小德和小爱。请根据上图写一篇英语作文，介绍这两个人物的姓名、国籍、长相及衣着打扮等等（可以自由发挥）。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
3. 参考词汇：volunteer志愿者
We have two volunteers in our school. They are Xiao De and Xiao Ai.
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2．校刊 “英语星球”专栏正在征稿游记。上周末阳光明媚，你和家人去了Green Park游玩。请根据下图提示，向校刊专栏投稿。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
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3．根据中英文和图片提示，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。至少谈及其中三幅图片的内容。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
古语有云，“凡事预则立，不预则废”。事先做好计划，我们才能更加合理地安排时间，获得更好的收益。
如何平衡学习与生活，对于我们中学生来说，也是一项挑战。对于即将到来的周末，你有什么样的计划呢？校刊的“英语世界”专栏正在征稿，主题是“My Weekend Plan”。请你踊跃投稿，用英语谈谈你对这个周末的安排，以及你做这些安排的原因。
提示问题：
What are you going to do
Why are you going to do so
do homework fly kites visit grandparents
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4．假如你是李华，你和你的朋友Gina Smith参加了英语社团。在下周社团的活动中，你需要用英语介绍自己和你的朋友。请你写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 包含表格内信息可适当增加信息。
2. 不少于40词。
3. 衡水体书写。
姓名 年龄 电话 其他信息
李华 13 232-4567 家里有五口人；父母；祖父母和他
Gina Smith 14 467-6675 家里有五口人和一只狗
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5．每个人都有自己的爱好。请根据以下内容提示，以“My Hobbies”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你的爱好以及原因。
1. 喜欢游泳，能变得更健康；
2. 喜欢阅读，能了解中外文化；
3. 喜欢听歌，能变得更快乐；
请补充爱好和原因。（至少1点）
注意：
1. 参考词汇：文化culture；
2. 词数80个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My Hobbies
Everyone has his hobbies and so do I.
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6．根据表格所提供的信息，以第一人称写一篇短文，题目是：One of My Weekdays 要求：语句通顺，不少于70词．
Friday,December 16,2016
Time Subject Time Subject
7:30—8:15 Chinese 1:30—2:15 P.E.
8:25—9:10 Math 2:25—3:10 Music
9:10—9:30 Morning exercises 3:10—3:30 Eye exercises
9:40—10:25 English 3:40—4:25 Art
10:35—11:20 History 4:35—5:20 Geography
In the evening:do homework
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7．校广播站英语节目“School Life”面向初一年级学生征稿，本期话题是Friends。每个人都有朋友，都需要好朋友，请用英语写一篇征稿，介绍你的一位好朋友，并叙述发生在你和他/她之间的一件让你难以忘怀的事。
注意：
1. 必须包含所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 不得成段照搬课本中的原文，文中句子可以借鉴或引用；
3. 不得出现真实的人名，校名，地名等相关信息；
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8．学校体育俱乐部要招募新会员了。假如你的名字是Tom Green，请写一段关于自己的介绍。
要求：50词左右。
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9．自我介绍，假设你叫Mary，运用学过的句型介绍一下自己（姓名、性别、年龄、爱好等）。
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10．假如你是 David，请根据下表所提示的内容，写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Tom获得今年的最佳学生奖。
学习 努力刻苦，各学科都学得很好。
爱好 擅长打篮球，他希望下学期能进入学校篮球队。
品行 (quality) 乐于助人，经常帮助有需要的同学。 ……
要求：
1.条理清楚，语意连贯。
2.紧扣主题，按要求补充完整，适当发挥。
3.书写规范，标点正确。正文80字左右。信的开头称呼和结尾落款已经写好，不计入字数。
Dear Sir,
I am writing to recommend Tom to receive the Best Student Award this year.
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Thank you for your reading!
Yours,
David
11．假如你是李明，你的美国朋友露西在QQ上询问你和你的家人正在做什么，请给她写一封回信。
内容包括：你和你的家人正在做什么。
作文要求：1.词数70个左右。
2.用现在进行时叙述。
3.信息内容完整，语句连贯。
Dear Lucy,
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Yours,
Li Ming
参考答案：
1．例文
We have two volunteers in our school. They are Xiao De and Xiao Ai. One is a boy. His name is Xiao De. He comes from China. He is a tall and slim boy with short black hair. He doesn’t wear glasses. Look! He is smiling at us in his red waistcoat. The other is a girl. Her name is Xiao Ai. She is also from China. She is short and thin. She has long black hair and her eyes are very big. She is wearing a red hat. She is very friendly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这两位志愿者是谁；
第二步，根据图片显示介绍他们的外貌。
[亮点词汇]
①be/come from 来自
②be smile at 朝某人微笑
[高分句型]
①He is smiling at us in his red waistcoat（现在进行时结构）
2．例文
Last weekend, it was sunny. I went to Green Park with my family. I had a great time there.
My mother wakes us up early. After breakfast, we began to set out. It’s 500 meters from my home to the subway. So we went to the subway station on foot. It took us 10 minutes to get to Green Park by subway.
The park is beautiful. There are some hills and a lake in the park. There are many people in the park. Someone was fishing by the lake. Some people were boating on the lake. We also went boating. We took photos. We didn’t go home until evening.
We were very happy. We had a happy weekend.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，看图作文，根据图片提示，写自己的一次旅游经历。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称来叙述，时态为一般过去时，在叙述客观事实时，用一般现在时。写作时，一定根据图片内容提示来写，可适当补充。需要适当使用一些连词和固定句型或短语。叙述要完整，保证条理连贯，语言通顺，符合英语表达习惯。写完以后，注意检查，确保语法、单词拼写和标点使用正确。
3．例文
My Weekend Plan
I have some plans for this weekend. On Saturday, I will have a picnic with my friends in the park. Because we all want to relax and enjoy life. On Sunday morning, I will help my parents with the housework. Because my parents are very busy on weekdays, I want to make them have a rest on weekends. On Sunday afternoon, I will do some reading. It can help me open my eyes, and learn a lot. I hope I will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的周末计划；
第二步，希望自己能过一个愉快的周末。
[亮点词汇]
①have a picnic野餐
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③have a rest休息
[高分句型]
①Because we all want to relax and enjoy life.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I hope I will have a good time.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I’m 13 years old. My telephone number is 232-4567. There are five people in my family, my parents, my grandparents and I. I have a good friend, and her name is Gina Smith. She’s 14 years old. Her telephone number is 467-6675. There are five people in her family, too. And she also has a dog.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中李华自己和朋友Gina Smith的年龄、电话和家庭信息等情况的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍李华自己的年龄、电话和家庭信息等情况。
第二步，介绍李华的朋友Gina Smith的年龄、电话和家庭信息等情况。
[亮点词汇]
① My telephone number我的电话号码
② have a good friend有一个好朋友
③ in my family在我的家里
[高分句型]
① There are five people in my family, my parents, my grandparents and I.（There be句型）
② She’s 14 years old.（基数词+years old描述年龄）
5．例文
My Hobbies
Everyone has his hobbies and so do I.
I like swimming because it can make me healthier. Besides, I like the feeling of being in the water. I also like reading. I think reading is a very good habit. It can not only let me know Chinese and foreign culture, but also teach me how to do things. I like to listen to music. Music is so wonderful that it can make me happier. I also like drawing pictures. It makes me express my ideas through the pictures.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己的爱好以及喜欢做某事的原因的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍每个人都有自己的爱好；
第二步，具体介绍自己的爱好以及喜欢做某事的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① not only…but also…不仅……而且……
② listen to music听音乐
③ like drawing pictures喜欢画画
④ express my ideas through the pictures通过图片表达我的想法
[高分句型]
① Everyone has his hobbies and so do I.（倒装结构）
② I think reading is a very good habit.（I think+宾语从句）
③ It can not only let me know Chinese and foreign culture, but also teach me how to do things. （not only…but also…结构）
6．例文
One of My Weekdays
My weekdays are usually very busy.Let me tell you one of my weekdays—Friday.I usually have four classes in the morning.They’re Chinese,math,English and history.Classes begin at half past seven in the morning.After two classes and I have morning exercises.Classes are over at twelve twenty.I have lunch at school.
I have four classes in the afternoon.They are PE,music,art and geography.I do eye exercises at ten past three.We go home at five twenty.In the evening,I usually do my homework at home.It’s really a busy day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的一个周末生活。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。根据表格内容来逐一介绍自己的周末生活，写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．例文
Everybody has friends, so do I!
Sun Ping, a beautiful and lovely girl, is one of my best friends in my school. She is taller than me. We often study and play together. People say we like sisters. In fact, I treat her as my sister. We have a lot of wonderful time together. Now I’ll share one story between us.
One weekend, we planned to see a film together. The film began at 4 pm. I waited for her at the cinema when it was 3:55 pm, but she didn’t arrive. I was not happy. Why was she late So I rode my bike to her home. On the way, I found her walking with an old lady. The old lady came to visit her daughter, but she didn’t know the way and got lost. Sun Ping knew this and she decided to help the lady. Then we stopped our bikes beside the street, and took a taxi with the old lady to her daughter’s home.
I will never forget that day. I am very happy to have a good friend like her, because she is helpful and kind.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，写一篇作文，话题是Friends，介绍你的一位好朋友，并叙述发生在你和他/她之间的一件让你难以忘怀的事。
2.写作指导：本文在叙述难以忘怀的事情用一般过去时，叙述朋友的基本信息时用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称。围绕话题适当发挥，叙述时保证语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
8．例文：
My name is Tom Green. I’m 13. I’m in Class 4, Grade 7 now. I like sports very much, and I have a great sports collection. I have four baseballs, three basketballs, two ping-pong balls and five tennis balls. I play sports every afternoon. I want to be in the School Tennis Club.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求写一段关于自己的介绍，参加学校体育俱乐部的新会员招募，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍自己的运动收藏和运动情况；
第三步，表达想加入学校的网球俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①very much非常
②have a great sports collection有很棒的体育收藏
③want to be想要成为
[高分句型]
I like sports very much, and I have a great sports collection.（and连接并列句）
9．例文：
Hello, my name is Mary. I am an English girl. I am 12 years old. My birthday is on December 8th. I have a healthy eating habit. I like eating fruit and vegetables. I don’t like eating hamburgers or ice-cream. I like playing basketball.
What about you
【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求做个自我介绍，可以从姓名、性别、年龄、爱好等方面介绍。用学过的句型。
写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。本文主要使用简单句，肯定句和否定句可以交替使用，多使用动词短语，注意上下文连贯，条理清晰。
10．例文
Dear Sir,
I am writing to recommend Tom to receive the Best Student Award this year. Tom is a hard-working student. He does well in all his lessons. Tom has many hobbies. He likes playing sports very much and he is good at playing basketball. He is going to join the school basketball team next term.
Tom is so helpful that he often helps his classmates with their lessons. He is also a polite boy. He always gives his seat to the old people on the bus. Tom is kind. Last week, on his way home, he helped a lost child find his mother.
I think Tom has all the qualities to get the award.
Thank you for your reading!
Yours,
David
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Tom的学习情况以及爱好；
第二步，介绍Tom的品行；
第三步，最后再次推荐Tom获得今年的最佳学生奖。
[亮点词汇]
①do well in在……方面做得好
②be good at擅长
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Tom is so helpful that he often helps his classmates with their lessons.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
11．例文：
Dear Lucy,
Hi, Alexa! Everyone in my family is busy now. My father likes soccer, and he is watching a soccer game on TV. It is very interesting, he thinks. My mother is very kind, and she is cooking dinner for my family. I’m reading in my room. You know, I like reading very much. And my two sisters are doing their homework in their rooms.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以李明的名义给露西回信解答她在QQ上问你的问题，内容包含你和家人正在做的事情，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来写作；时态采用现在进行时和一般现在时为主，全文需要叙述完整、条理清晰。注意主谓一致。
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