人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 2 Travelling around Reading for Writing 课件(共58张PPT)

(共58张PPT)
Unit 2 Travelling Around
Period 5
Reading for Writing
Write to a friend about a travel plan
(Activity 1—Activity 4)
Warming-up
Guess which city in China may attract(吸引) me most
Guangzhou
Shanghai
Guess which city in China may attract(吸引) me most
Xi’an
假期来临，我打算去西安旅游。
I’m planning to travel to Xi’an for the coming holiday.
西安是一个深受游客喜爱的旅游胜地,它有许多令人叹为观止的景色风光。对我来说，西安是一个必去的地方。
Xi’an is always a popular destination with lots of amazing sights for tourists. For me, Xi’an is a must-go place in China.
Xi’an
Dayan Tower
Xi’an City Wall
我准备在那儿待两天。I’m going to spend two days there.
On the first day, I’m going to visit the Terracotta Army. It is a famous and must-see site, and I can’t wait to go. (第一天，我打算去参观兵马俑，这是个著名而且必看的景点，我已经迫不及待了。）
On the second day, I will visit the History Museum. I’m looking forward to going to the museum, because it is known as “Chinese treasure house”.(第二天，我将去参观历史博物馆。我很期待去那儿因为它被誉为中国的宝库。）
Transport
我准备乘坐飞机去那里。
I’m taking the plane to go there.
基本框架
1．开头(beginning)——开门见山地指出旅游目的地和想参观的景点(when & where)。
2．主体(body)——具体说明旅游目的地之外的其他计划(plans & what)和交通方式(transport)。
3．结尾(ending)——表达自己的想法和对对方的希望或要求(final thoughts)。
Opening:
I’m writing to share my travel plan to…with you.
2. Over the holiday, my parents and I are planning to go…
3. I’m writing to tell you my travel plan to…
4. You have asked for some information about/concerning
my travel to…
5. We are planning to make a trip to…
9/27/2022Mr Lee假定你是李华，请根据下面表格的内容给你的朋友王林写一封电子邮件，介绍你国庆期间去北京旅行的计划。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯第一天颐和园/天安门第二天长城第一步 谋篇9/27/2022Mr Lee明确体裁话题1.国庆北京两日游旅行计划2.第一天：顾和园；第二天：长城3,询问对方看法第一部分：点明主题内容第二部分：详细介绍旅行计划第三部分：询问对方看法一般将来时、现在进行时表示将来；第一人称应用文；告知朋友旅行计划确定时态人称布局文章框架列出核心要点第二步 遣词
国庆节
计划做某事
从10月1日到2日
颐和园
长城
the National Day
plan to do sth
from 1st October to 2nd October
the Summer Palace
the Great Wall
第三步 造句
1.国庆节就要来了。
（现在进行时表示将来）
2.我计划从10月1日到2日花两天时间参观北京。（现在进行时表示将来；spend..doing sth)
3.在第一天，我打算参观颐和园。(be goingto do)
The National Day is coming.
I am planning to spend two days from 1st October to 2nd October visiting Beijing.
On the first day , I am going to visit the Summer Palace.
9/27/2022Mr Lee4.据说它是中国最大、保存最好的(best-preserved)皇家(royal)园林。(be said to be;一般现在时)It is said to be the largest and best-preserved royal garden in China.5.在第二天，我要参观长城。（will)On the second day , I will visit the Great Wall.6.它作为世界伟大的古代建筑奇迹之一为世人所知。(be known to;一般现在时)It is known to the world as one of the great ancient architectural wonders of the world.第四步 升级9/27/2022Mr Lee1.用since引导的从句连接句1和句2。Since the National Day is coming , I am planning to spend two days from 1st October to 2nd October visiting Beijing.2.用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句3和句4。On the first day , I am going to visit the Summer Palace , which is said to be the largest and best-preserved royal garden in China.3.用as引导的非限制性定语从句改写句6。As is known to the world , it is one of the great ancient architectural wonders of the world.第五步 写摹背诵9/27/2022Mr LeeDear Wang Lin,Since the National Day is coming , I am planning to spend two days from 1st October to 2ndOctober visiting Beijing.On the first day . l am going to visit the Summer Palace . Which is said to be the largest and best-preserved royal garden in China . On the second day . I will visit the Great Wall . As is known to the world , it is one of the greatest ancient architectural wonders of the world.A wonderful trip , do you agree Yours.Li HuaReading
Please read the page about Terracotta Army from a travel brochure and tell us what amazes you most.
I was amazed by its size. I can’t believe there are more than 8000 statues in the tomb.
It’s unbelievable to me that they were discovered by accident.
Yes, it sounds quite interesting. The Terracotta Army is a national treasure and one of the largest and most important archaeological finds in the world.
Reading
Activity 1:
Read Richard’s email to his friend and the brochure that he found. Do you think his plan sounds interesting Why
Reading
Read Richard’s email to Xiao Li, and then find out the aspects mentioned in his travel paln.
where to go
when to go
why
how
with whom
what to do
structure analysis
main purpose for the trip
other plan for the trip
transport
final thought
Greeting
Signature
Reading
Activity 2:
Study the organization and language features.
1. Summarize the email in the table.
Paragraph Main idea Detail
1 main purpose for the trip
2 other plans for the trip
3 transport
4 final thoughts
go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army
go to the Shaanxi History museum, the Xi’an City Wall, and a few other famous sights.
take the train, leave the day before the October holiday begins and arrived at 9:30 a.m.
write again soon and send photos
Reading
2. Underline the words and phrases used to express emotion in the email. Then complete the sentences below.
Study the organization and language features.
It is an amazing sight. It is _____________.
I am amazed.
... is almost unbelievable. I can’t believe it.
It’s hard ____________.
It’s an _____________ story.
amazing
to believe
unbelievable
More expressions:
I have been longing for...
It’s my dream destination.
I’ve always wanted to visit...
I’m dying to see...
How exciting it is to ...
destination, main purpose for the trip, reasons for the trip
transport, accommodation, length of the trip, activities
other details (passport, visa, weather, credit card, shopping...)
Pre-writing
When we share our travel plan with our friends, what do we usually talk about
Discussion
Activity 3: Use the tables above to help you write a travel plan. Then follow the steps below.
While-writing
Step 1: Pretend you are Xiao Li and reply to Richard’s email. Choose a destination and then write an outline of your travel plan with the help of the table.
Paragraph Main idea Detail
1 main purpose for the trip
2 other plans for the trip
3 transport
4 final thoughts
Pretend you are Xiao Li and reply to Richard’s email about your travel.
Before you write, fill in the table below.
A travel plan Detailed information
who
where
when
how
how long
what
1
P 31 2(3)
While-writing
Key points
While-writing
Writing
2
Make a draft based on the outline.
Dear Rechard,
I am very gald to receive your letter. Over the October holiday, my parents/my friends and I will go to _________
________________.
After we visit ________, we are planning to _______, because ___________________.
We will take airplane/train, leaving at ______, arriving at __________.
I'll take gifts for you. Now, I can't wait to see your photos. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Your friend,
Xiao Li
Step 2: On the basis of your outline, write a draft. Pay attention to the words and phrases used to express emotion.
Step 3: Exchange drafts. Assess each other’s work according to the checklist.
Is there a clear purpose for the trip
Does each paragraph have a clear main idea
Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans
Dose the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly
Are all the words spelt correctly
Are all the proper nouns capitalised
Step 4: Revise your draft according to your partner’s comments.
While-writing
Activity 4:
Put up your email in the classroom or read it to the class.
Post-writing
Assignment
1. Polish your work again.
2. Workbook on Page 80. Read the article Be a Good Tourist, and then finish exercise 2, 3 and 4.
基本框架
1．开头(beginning)——开门见山地指出旅游目的地和想参观的景点(main purpose for the trip)。
2．主体(body)——具体说明旅游目的地之外的其他计划(other plans for the trip)和交通方式(transport)。
3．结尾(ending)——表达自己的想法和对对方的希望或要求(final thoughts)。
1．介绍功能或特点
(1)The theme of the park is...
(2)You will enjoy doing/seeing...
(3)It is known/famous for...
(4)With so many attractions，no wonder more and more tourists come here for a visit.
2．介绍地理位置
(1)It is located/situated in the centre of...
(2)It lies in/to the south/east of...
(3)On the top of...stands...
3．介绍面积
(1)It has/covers an area of...square kilometres.
(2)..with an area of...square kilometres.
4．介绍历史
(1). It has a history of...years.
(2)．..with a history of...years.
(3)．..has witnessed too much...in history.
5．活动及介绍交通方式
(1)There are various/a variety of activities for visitors to enjoy themselves.
(2)You can reach the building/museum by...
(3)You can get there a little more quickly by...
模板一
The Chinese Ethnic Culture Park(中华民族园)，which covers_________(面积)，lies in the east of _________ (位置)．The theme park，designed to _________ (设计目的)，was opened to the public on _________ (对外开放的时间)．
The park is made up of__________，where__________(组成及展品)．Apart from__________，people can enjoy a variety of fancy food. Additionally，the park provides __________ (活动) for visitors of different ages.
In a word，visiting __________ (总结陈述) will be rewarding for every visitor from different parts of the world.
模板二
Dear__________，
Now I am an exchange student in China，and my time here is going well. I love everyone here，my new teachers and my classmates. Over the October holiday，my classmates and I are planning to go to __________(目的地) to see __________(景点)．I've heard that it is an amazing sight，and I can't wait to go. ______(具体介绍此景点)．
We're going to visit several other places in__________(目的地)．We are all looking forward to seeing __________(景点)，because __________(原因)．We're taking ________ (交通方式)．
I will write again soon and send photos to you. Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely，
Tom
假定你是英国人杰克，五月份打算来中国旅行，请你给你的中国笔友李华写封信，要点如下：
1．你的旅行计划：北京→泰山→杭州；
2．征求他的建议并询问他是否愿意充当你的导游。
注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：紫禁城the Forbidden City；泰山Mount Tai
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to tell you that I'm going to visit China in May.
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________ Yours， Jack
[审题]　
1．确定文体：介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。
2．主体时态：一般现在时或现在进行时。
3．主体人称：以第一人称为主。
[谋篇]
[谴词]　
1．如下 ______________
2．期盼 _________________
3．打算做某事 __________________
4．迫不及待做某事 ___________________
5．充当 ________
as follows
look forward to
intend to do sth.　
can't wait to do sth.
act as
[造句]
1．补全句子
(1)I am__________________Beijing，the capital of China.
我计划参观北京，中国的首都。
(2)I am __________________________ the Great wall，the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks.
我期盼着欣赏长城、紫禁城和一些漂亮的公园。
(3)______________ it is one of the most famous mountains in China.
我听说它是中国最著名的山脉之一。
(4)I____________ enjoy the amazing sunrise there.
我迫不及待地欣赏那儿令人惊奇的日出。
(5)___________________________________ my travel plan
你认为我的旅行计划怎么样？
planning to visit
looking forward to enjoying
I've heard that
can't wait to
What do you think of/How do you like
2．句式升级
(6)用where引导定语从句合并(1)(2)句
①I am planning to visit Beijing，the capital of China. ②I am looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks.
I am planning to visit Beijing，the capital of China，where I am looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks.
(7)把(3)(4)句合并成并列复合句
(3)I have heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China. (4)I can't wait to enjoy the amazing sunrise there.
I have heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China and I can't wait to enjoy the amazing sunrise there.
[成文]　
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to tell you that I'm going to visit China in May.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Jack
[参考范文]
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to tell you that I'm going to visit China in May. My arrangements are as follows. First，I am planning to visit Beijing，the capital of China，where I am looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. Then I intend to go to visit Mount Tai in Shandong Province. I've heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China and I can't wait to enjoy the amazing sunrise there. After that，I am also going to Hangzhou. It is said that it is a beautiful modern city with breathtaking natural sights，among which the West Lake is a well known tourist attraction.
What do you think of my travel plan？Will you act as my guide and be ready to offer help whenever I need it？Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Jack
假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
目的地 中国第二大岛--- 海南岛
时间 10月1日--- 10月6日
活动 岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营
感想 增长知识，拓宽视野
Task 2
（1）一、审题：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁: 应用文----告知信
主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅
行计划。
（2）二、确定时态和人称
时态：一般将来时
一般现在时
人称：第一人称、第二人称
【写作指导】
（3）三、明确写作要点
①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈
②具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等）
③旅游的心得体会
（4）四、布局
第一段：写信目的；
第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划；
第三段：体会+期待回复
（1）谢谢你写信告诉我你在西安的旅行,这真是特别令人惊奇的旅行。(非限制定从)
________________________________
（2）我们选择海南岛旅游，因为它的风景优美。
__________________________________
Thank you for your letter about your trip to Xi'an, which is amazing.
We choose to travel to Hainan Island because it has beautiful scenery.
【写作提示】
3. 依我看，旅游不仅可以让我增长知识，而且还可以拓宽视野。(enrich my knowledge; broaden my horizons)
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons.
Useful phrases：
1.take advantage of 利用
2.make a reservation 预定
3.take a tour 游览
4.set out / off 出发
5.leave for sp 动身去某地
6.enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景
7.a seven-day trip 七日旅
8.broaden one’s horizons/view 开阔眼界
9. sth is around the corner 即将来临
10.experience a different culture 体验不同的文化
Opening:
I’m writing to share my travel plan to…with you.
2. Over the holiday, my parents and I are planning to go…
3. I’m writing to tell you my travel plan to…
4. You have asked for some information about/concerning
my travel to…
5. We are planning to make a trip to…
Body part:
I. We are looking forward to…
2. We are anxious to do…
3. It is an amazing sight that I have ever seen
4. We can't help going…
5. I have heard that…
6. There is no doubt that…
7. We’ll go to the destination by train/air/ bus…
Ending part:
I. I think that’s all for now.
2. Sp. is really worth your visiting. Looking forward
to your coming.
3. I’ll never forget the place…
4. I’Il travel here again if I have time in the future.
s. I hope you will have a trip with me.
6. In a word, the travel makes me…
参考范文
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays.
With the National Day coming, I am going to travel to Hainan Island to see its beautiful scenery with my family. We will spend 6 days there, from Oct. 1th to Oct. 6th. It’s because of its beautiful scenery that we choose to travel to Hainan Island. Other than hiking on the island, we have planned many other activities like surfing in the water,
spending the nights in the tents. I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
See You Next Class!