课件17张PPT。七年级(上)Units 1-4 (含Starter) 第三部分
高频话题写作指南家庭
写作导图
从全国近5年“家庭类”相关话题书面表达的命题来看,通常会从介绍家庭成员及家庭成员之间发生的故事、家庭成员之间的沟通与交流及家庭成员之间的深厚感情三方面来设题。
分析近4年36套贵州真题可知,贵州对此话题的书面表达是以介绍家庭成员及表达对他们的深厚感情为主,下面以(2012贵阳)真题为例:I love my familyBasic informationThe story between my family and IShow my feelingswho
age
job
hobby
personality
lookhad a fever; worried about me; took me to a hospital; too tired to standlove my family; can take care of her亮点句型速成
常用句型:The person is my mother. I love her very much.
推荐句型: →①The person I love most is my mother.
→ ②The person who often encourages me is my mother.
常用句型:Thanks for what she has done for me. I’m moved.推荐句型:I am deeply moved and thankful by the things that she has done for me.
常用句型:You do as I mentioned above. You can get on well with your parents.
推荐句型: If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents.开头句:
1. I have a big family. I like my father, mother, grandfather, grandmother and they like me, too.
2. How can I get on well with my brother?正文句:
1. My mother likes reading books when she has a day off.
2. My father is a handsome man with big eyes.
3. Her favorite color is green, so she often wears green skirt.4. My mother gets up the earliest in our family.
5. My father is one of my best friends, and I often talk with him if I have some problems.
6. I often have a communication with my parents.7. They often encourage me when I’m in trouble.
8. I argued with my brother when he broke my glasses.
9. Mr. Smith is a loving grandfather who often tells stories to me.结尾句:
1. I love my parents more than anyone else.
2. Thank you for everything you have done for me.
(常用词汇见《28天话题词汇分类速记表》话题
(一)个人情况和(二)家庭、朋友与周围的人)典例剖析
假设你是 Hilltop School 的 Lin Tao 同学,在你成长的过程中,家人们一直为你默默地付出,请你以“I love my family”为题,为《English Study》写一篇征文,表达你对家人们的感激之情。
要点如下:1. 简要介绍你的家人;
2. 叙述他们为你所做的一件令你感动的
事;
3. 表达你对家人的感激之情。注意:1. 短文应不少于80词;
2. 文中不得使用真实的人名、校名。__________________________________________
__________________________________________【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1. 本篇作文为记叙文,主要介绍你的家人,叙述他们为你所做的一件令你感动的事,并表达你对家人的感激之情。
2. 介绍家庭的基本情况用一般现在时,叙述他们为自己所做的感动的事用一般过去时;介绍家庭成员的情况用第三人称。【高分范文】
I love my family
I am a left-behind child. There are five people in my family. They are my grandmother, my parents, my sister and me. My parents work in a big city in order to make money for living. So my sister and I live with my grandmother in a small village. My grandmother is 75 years old. Last year, I was badly ill. I had a fever at midnight. But it was raining heavily outside. And my home was far from the town hospital. My grandmother was worried about me. So she took me to a town hospital. When we arrived at the town hospital, she was too tired to stand. Thedoctor looked over me and said it was nothing serious. My grandmother smiled.
I love my family. I love my grandmother more than anyone else. I hope my parents can work in my hometown. And we can take care of my grandmother well.【检测菜单】
1. 为了 ___________
2. 与……一起生活 _________
3. 发烧 _____________
4. 担心 ______________
5. 仔细检查 __________
6. 照顾 _____________in order tolive withhave a feverworry aboutlook overtake care of