(共16张PPT)
My Dream
Writing
Learning Objective
By the end of the class:
I can write a passage :
My Dream
I want to be a/an _________
basketball player
BY YUSHEN
What do you want to be
A: What do you want to be when you grow up
B: I want to be a /an ....
=I am going to be a /an...
Make It Longer
I want to be a basketball player.
I want to be a _______basketball player.
I want to be a famous basketball player like _____.
I want to be a famous basketball player likeYaoMing .
I want to be a famous basketball player likeYaoMing __________.
A: Why do you want to be a basketball player
B: Because...
I like...
I am good at...
It can...
Let’s talk”why”
ing.
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I want to be a basketball player.
I like play basketball.
I am good at play basketball.
Playing basketball can make me strong and health .
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I want to be a basketball player.
I like playing basketball.
I am good at playing basketball.
Playing basketball can make me
strong and healthy.
sports
Jerry’s Teaching Time
变换表达方式。
使用适当的连词。
I want to be a basketball player.
I like sports.
I am good at playing basketball.
Playing basketball can make me strong and healthy
and
so
but
because
but
I like sports,and I want to be a basketball player , because playing basketball can make me strong and healthy.But I'm not good at playing basketball.So...
A: How are you going to do that
B: I am going to .
Let’s talk”How”
practice playing basketball
every day
play basketball often after school
My Dream
I want to be a famous basketball player like YaoMing in the future. I’m not very good at playing basketball, but I like sports very much.Because playing basketbal can make me strong and healthy.So I am going to practice playing basketball every day.
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My Dream
I want to be a __________ when I grow up.
______________________________________
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Everyone has dreams.I have a dream,too.
Different people have different dreams.
I am going to be a __________ in the future.
参 This is something about ....What do you think of it What about yours Can you tell me
Dear friend , do you have a dream Study hard , I believe our dream will come true .
Practice
1. 请以 My Dream 为题写一篇不少于80字的短文。
2. 请以I want to be a/an 为题，写一篇不少于80字的短文。
写作要求：
1. 不能抄袭原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，注意分段，80词左右。
BY YUSHEN
Study hard,
your dream will come true.
