Unit 2 School life 写作专练（含解析）牛津译林版英语八年级上册

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牛津译林版 英语八年级上册 Unit 2 School life 写作专练
1．实行“双减”政策以来，同学们的作业减少，睡眠充足，生活更加丰富多彩。青少年杂志社邀请你撰稿，请根据所给提示，以“My Colourful Life”为题写一篇英语作文，分享你的感受。
注意事项：
1．词数: 80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3．文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
My Colourful Life
This term, there are many changes to my life. I’m happy to live a more colourful life now.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．请根据下面三幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文，记述你们学校上周六的志愿者活动。
plant trees pick up rubbish take care of old people
注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last Saturday was the Volunteer Day of our school. The students _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是八年级的学生，请你阅读下面的表格，就七年级和八年级的学习生活作比较，并简要谈谈自己的看法。
Students in Grade 7 Students in Grade 8
Number of subjects 10 12
Time spent on homework every day One and a half hours Two hours
Time for sports An hour a day An hour a day
Clubs to join 5 6
要求：
1. 覆盖要点，可以做合适的补充；
2. 70词左右。不包括所给的开头。
We’re in Grade 8 now. Our school life has changed (已经发生了变化) in some ways.
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4．你的校园一定很美丽吧！你的校园生活也一定是有趣的。请根据以下提示，简单描述你的校园及校园生活。
注意事项：
（1）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范，可以适当发挥。
（2）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
My school is very beautiful._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．我们每天都学习很多学科，有的同学喜欢英语，有的喜欢数学或语文，每个学科有着不同的魅力。你最喜欢的学科是什么呢？请以"My Favorite Subject"为题，向大家介绍你最喜欢的科目。
提示：1. What's your favorite subject
2. Why do you like it
3. How many classes do you have in a week
4. Are you good at this subject
注意文章结构完整，语言流畅自然，书写工整清晰，至少80词。
My Favorite Subject
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6．一个学期的初中生活即将结束，亲爱的同学，你适应了吗？你学校的生活是什么样的？你又有哪些感受呢？请以My School Day 为题，写一篇80个单词左右的英语短文，向大家描述一下你的校园生活。要求意思连贯、语句正确、书写规范。文中不要出现真实的校名和姓名。
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7．假如你是李华，疫情当下，你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部”(Helping Hands Club)将招募新的志愿者。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面提示问题，用英语给俱乐部的主席写一封自荐信。
提示问题：
1. What are you like
2. What can you do
3. Why do you want to join it
注意事项：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear chairperson,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I’d like to be a volunteer of the Helping Hands Club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’ll be happy if I’m accepted. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假如你是David，根据图片信息，用一般现在时写一篇日志记录你在周四一天的学习生活。
要求：
1. 词数60—80词；
2. 文中必须包括图片中全部内容要点，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Diary,
Today is Thursday. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假如你是李华，你们学校要组织召开以“我们班级的道德标兵”为主题的英文演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你心中的道德标兵(moral model)是谁；介绍他（她）的外貌特征，以便同学们能认出他/她；以及你为什么视他（她）为标兵，从他（她）身上你能学到什么。
提示词语：outgoing，hardworking
提示问题：1. Who is your moral model
2. What does he / she look like
3. Why do you think he / she can be your moral model
4. What can you learn from him / her
Dear teachers and friends,
I think it’s my pleasure to talk about the topic—Moral Model In My Class. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是学生小明，因天气突变感冒卧床，向班主任王老师请一天的假。（40词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Mr Wang,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Xiao Ming
11．皮影戏是中国一种传统艺术形式。为弘扬中华传统文化，你校将举办“皮影戏进校园”的活动。假设你是学生会主席李华，请你用英文写一份通知，号召同学们积极参加活动。要点包含：（提示词：皮影戏shadow puppet play）
1. 时间：5 月 16 日下午从 2:30 到 4:30
2. 地点： 学校操场
3. 内容： 皮影戏知识竞赛；皮影戏演出
4. 其他： 招募一批志愿者，要求如下：
①了解并热爱皮影戏；
②……(请补充 1-2 点)
写作要求：
1. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 必须包含以上全部要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校：
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Notice
Shadow puppet plays are one of the most popular traditional art forms in China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．参考范文：
My Colourful Life
This term, there are many changes to my life. I’m happy to live a more colourful life now.
I have different kinds of homework, like listening, writing and reading. And every day, I also do some exercise at home. Now I spend less time on homework and I do most of my homework at school. So I can have enough time for my hobbies after school.
There are a lot of interesting clubs to choose. I like singing so I join the Singing Club. All the members practise singing for about an hour on Friday. In the afternoon, we usually do sports together. There are football and basketball matches every year.
It’s great for me to have more time to sleep. I don’t need to get up early because the class begins at 8 o’clock now. I think it’s good for our health and helps me study well in class. I really enjoy my colourful life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求根据内容提示以“My Colourful Life”为题写作，分享一下实行“双减”政策以来的感受。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，用第一人称书写。写作时可分为四段式：第一段总体介绍“双减”政策改变了我的生活；第二段具体介绍学习生活上的变化；第三段介绍课余生活的变化；最后一段介绍作息时间的变化以及总体评价我的生活。在写作时应该注意符合题意，同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
2．例文：
Last Saturday was the Volunteer Day of our school. The students took an active part in attending volunteer activities.
The students in Class One planted trees in the West Mountain in order to protect our environment. They tried their best to plant more trees. The students in Class Two picked up rubbish in our city park, so that many people could enjoy their stay there. The students in our class took care of old people in old people’s home. Some students danced for the old people, some students chatted with them, and other students cleaned the rooms for the old people.
It’s very meaningful to be a volunteer, and we will do more volunteer activities and help more people.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段叙述上周六我们学生参加了志愿者活动；第二段根据图片描述进行的志愿者活动；第三段描述自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，描述参加志愿者活动；用一般现在时描述感受；保证内容包含图片主要信息，适当发挥，条理清晰。
3．We’re in Grade 8 now. Our school life has changed in some ways.
Now we’re busier than before, because we are learning two more subjects. And we have to spend more time on our lessons. That means we have less time for hobbies. We have more homework as well. We must spend about two hours on it every day. At the same time, we have one more club to choose from.
It’s true that we are busier now. But don’t you think that school life is more colourful
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，就七年级和八年级的学习生活作比较，并简要谈谈自己的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，现在进行时和现在完成时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Our school life has changed……，because we are learning……，That means……，We must……，It’s true that……，But don’t you think that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们现在是八年级，学生生活发生了很多变化，接下来介绍我们八年级和七年级时的变化方面，最后指出我的看法。此处in some ways, spend time on sth, at the same time, choose from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4．例文
My school is very beautiful. I’m very happy to tell you something about my school life.
Our school is not very big, but it is beautiful. There are two teaching buildings and a library. Between them there is a small playground. There are many trees and flowers around the playground. I have seven subjects this term: Chinese, math, English, history, politics, geography and P.E.
After school I often play basketball. I join the drawing club and I have drawing lessons once a week. I think our school library is too small and there are not many interesting books in it. More new books need to be bought for us so that we can improve our reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校的一些建筑设施；
第二步，介绍自己所学的科目以及课后的一些活动。
[亮点词汇]
①be happy to do sth开心做某事
②once a week一周一次
[高分句型]
①There are many trees and flowers around the playground.（there be句型）
②More new books need to be bought for us so that we can improve our reading.（so that引导目的状语从句）
5．例文：
My Favorite Subject
My favorite subject is English. I like it very much because it is fun. I have five classes in a week. I am good at English and I can talk with others in English. I like listening to English songs. I join the school English club. Every Wednesday afternoon I go there and practice English with my friends. I think English is very useful. If I have a good knowledge of English, I can read some interesting English stories and watch English movies.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍我最喜欢的科目。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章题目已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍我喜欢的科目是什么，为什么喜欢它，我是否擅长这个学科；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
6．例文
My School Day
My name is Beth. I’m 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Beijing. My school is very big and beautiful. I’m very happy in the school. I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning.
Then I do morning exercise on the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates. We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 a.m. After class, I always play games with my friends because it is interesting.
I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。内容是以My School Day 为题，写一篇80个单词左右的英语短文，向大家描述一下你的学校生活是什么样的以及你的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；第一段介绍在学校上的课；第二段介绍课外活动；最后介绍自己的感受。
7．例文：
Dear chairperson,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I’d like to be a volunteer of the Helping Hands Club.
I’m 14 years old. I’m strong and healthy. I work hard at all my lessons and I’m good at them. I like computer studies best. I’m kind to my classmates. So they all like me much.
I’m also always ready to help others. I often visit the old people with my classmates and help the old people clean their flats. When there is something wrong with my neighbor’s computers, they usually ask me to check them and help them to fix them. Sometimes I go to clean the park with my friends.
I can make more friends after I join the club. I can also learn different skills from the other volunteers in the club. Then I can do more for others and help more people.
I’ll be happy if I’m accepted. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封自荐信。
②时态：本文要以一般现在时为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，开头已给出，介绍自己，交代自己写作目的：想要加入俱乐部成为一名志愿者；
②第二步，结合所给要点，分别介绍自己是什么样的，自己能够做什么，自己为什么想要加入俱乐部；
③第三步，结尾已给出，表明自己期望收到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长……
②be kind to 对……友好
③be ready to 乐于做某事
④ask sb to do sth 请求某人做某事
⑤help sb (to) do 帮助某人做某事
⑥learn … from … 向……学……
[高分句型]
①When there is something wrong with my neighbor’s computers, they usually ask me to check them and help them to fix them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I can make more friends after I join the club. (after引导的时间状语从句)
8．例文
Dear Diary,
Today is Thursday. I have math at 9 am. It’s a little difficult. I don’t like it. I have an English class at 10 am. I like it because I think it is useful. I have Chinese at eleven. I also like Chinese classes. I have lunch at twelve. I have geography at 2 pm. I don’t like geography either. I think it’s boring. I do sports at 3 pm. I like doing sports very much. I come home from school at 4 pm. I play basketball with my friends at 4:30 pm. Although I am busy today, I am very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一篇日记；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按照图片内容介绍上午的生活；
第二步，介绍下午的活动以及放学回家后的活动。
[亮点词汇]
① a little 有点
② do sports 做运动
③ like doing sth 喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
① I like it because I think it is useful.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② Although I am busy today, I am very happy.（although引导的让步状语从句）
9．Dear teachers and friends,
I think it’s my pleasure to talk about the topic—Moral Model In My Class. In our class Wang Hua is my moral model. She is a girl with a round face and long hair. She looks smart with her smiling eyes. She works harder than any other student in our class. She is full of humor. She is always kind to others. For example, she often gives her seat to others on the bus. In our class, whenever someone encountered difficulties, she always overcame the difficulties and tried to help others to solve them, so she won the respect of her classmates.
From her, I have learned that no matter what difficulties I meet in my life, I should work hard to solve them and be a strong person．
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，假如你是李华，学校要组织召开以 “我们班级的道德标兵”为主题的英文演讲活动。要求你根据提示要点用英语写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你心中的道德标兵(moral model)是谁。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：talk about，full of，kind to，on the bus，try to do sth，no matter what。
句型：She is a girl with a round face and long hair. 她是一个圆脸和长发的女孩。with a round face有一张圆脸，介词短语作后置定语。
She works harder than any other student in our class.此句是含有比较级的一般现在时的陈述句，运用句型：主语+动词的形式+副词的比较级+than+any+other+n（可数名词的单数）+比较的范围，是最高级转换的比较级，此句可翻译为“她学习比我们班的任何其他学生都努力。”
10．例文：
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm sorry to tell you I got a cold. The doctor asked me to stay at home and have a good rest. So I ask you for a day's leave. If I feel better tomorrow, I will go to school as soon as possible.
Xiao ming
【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一张英语请假条。主要以题目中给出的要求“因天气突变感冒卧床”为主线描写。写作时要运用正确的英语把内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2.写作指导：请假条的描写要简单明了。要注意语言描写要精炼，突出写作的重点和目的，要让人看后一目了然，注意格式要正确。
11．例文
Notice
Shadow puppet plays are one of the most popular traditional art forms in China. In order to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school will organize an activity of shadow puppet. I hope you will actively participate in the activity.
The activity will be held on the school playground on May 16 from 2:30 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. There will be shadow play knowledge competition and shadow play performance in this activity.
Now we need some volunteers to help us. If you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, you should not miss this activity. If you love shadow puppetry and have a better understanding of it, come and join us.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求写一篇通知，围绕皮影戏活动来写，写作时要说明本次“皮影戏进校园”活动的时间、地点及内容，还要说明本次活动对志愿者的一些要求，号召大家积极参与。
2. 写作指导：本文主要以第三人称为主；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在写作时，力求语句简练，语法正确，保证通知内容完整，条理清晰。
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