Unit 4 My day 写作专练（含解析）牛津译林版英语七年级上册

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牛津译林版 英语七年级上册 Unit 4 My day 写作专练
1．假设你是李华，根据所给图片，请用英语介绍你的家人和你的房间。
提示：
1) How old are you
2) How many people are there in your family
3) Where are the things in your room
要求：
1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.词数60左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
I’m Li Hua.
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2．下图是Steve’s Family Tree，假设你是Steve，请以“My Family”为题目写一篇英语短文。不得少于60词。
My family
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3．根据下面的图片写至少4句话介绍图片中的物品位置，注意书写规范。
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4．进入初中两个月来，我们的日常生活和校园生活都发生了许多改变，你是否重新认识了自己？请你围绕以下方面用英语介绍自己。
英文名字、生日、年龄、饮食习惯、体育运动、喜爱科目
要求：1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名、班级和师生姓名；
2.词数60左右。
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5．今年，受国内外疫情影响，很多学生正常的校园学习依然受到影响。你有一位哈尔滨的朋友，她叫李华，本学期大部分时间依然在家上网课，每天坚持学习和健康生活。请你向同学介绍你的朋友李华的个人信息，以及她在家里一天的生活和学习情况，并号召同学们努力学习，保持健康，热爱每一天。
要求：①短文须包含要点中的所有信息，可适当增加细节；②词数：60词左右。
提示词： 哈尔滨：Harbin； 上网课：have classes on line
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6．假如你是李萍，你将参加学校组织的英语夏令营活动。请你根据表格内容写一篇在开营式上自我介绍的发言稿，可适当拓展。
要求：
1、语法正确，语言流畅，语意通顺，上下文连贯，书写工整。
2、字数不少于60词。
Name Li Ping
Age 13
Living place Ningbo, Zhejiang
Family members Father: 46 / policeman Mother: 44 / teacher Sister: 10 / student
Favorite sports tennis
Hope（希望） be good friends
Dear friends,
I’m very glad to introduce（介绍）myself to you._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
7．学校体育俱乐部要招募新会员了。假如你的名字是Tom Green，请写一段关于自己的介绍。
要求：50词左右。
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8．如你是七年级一班的学生，本周你们的英语作业是以“My best friend”为题，写一篇短文描写自己最好的朋友。请根据下面的信息图写一篇短文，完成英语作业。
要求：1.短文须包含信息图中的内容，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于60。
My best friend
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9．同学们，从小到大你一定收到过不少礼物，请用英语描述一份你收到的最喜欢的礼物，不少于六句话。
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10．假如你是陈泽，你想邀请吉姆来你家做客。请你根据下表中的提示给吉姆写一封信。
姓名 陈泽 家庭成员 陈泽和他的父母
住址 南京市中心，离学校约5千米远。
公寓 位于一楼，前面有一个大花园。
房间 四个卧室，都有阳台，可提供单独卧室； 两个卫生问，内有淋浴器和抽水马桶； 一个大客厅，有沙发和电视； 共用书房看书和做作业。
要求：1.包括信息中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚；
2.词数70左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当加以发挥。
Dear Jim,
I am very happy to invite you to come to my flat.
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I hope I can see you soon.
All the best,
Chen ze
11．在今天的英语课上，老师向你们介绍了中国第一位漫步太空的女宇航员王亚平的追梦故事。请根据以下信息卡内容，写一则英文日记，记录你所了解的相关内容以及所思所想。日记需包含以下所有要点，可适当拓展。
注意：
1. 参考词汇：astronaut 宇航员。
2. 词数：不少于70词（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Tuesday, June 18th
Dear Diary,
Today, I learnt something about Wang Yaping in our English class.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文
I’m Li Huan. I am 12 years old. There are six people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my sister and I. My grandparents are old, but they are healthy. My parents are both teachers. They work hard. My sister is only 2 years old. She is lovely. This is my room. There is a small bed near the window. The desk and the chair are next to the bed. A radio is on the desk. A soccer ball is under the desk. A bookcase is next to the wall. Some flowers are on the bookcase. It is a nice room. I love my family and my room.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍个人信息以及家庭信息；
第二步，介绍自己的房间情况。
[亮点词汇]
①next to 在……旁边
②work hard 努力工作
[高分句型]
①There are six people in my family.（there be句型）
2．例文
My Family
My name is Steve. I’m thirteen years old. I’m from the USA. I live in China now. I study in a high school. My grandpa’s name is Robert. Linda is my grandma. They are farmers. Tony and Helen are my parents. My father is a doctor and my mother is an office worker. I have an uncle. His name in Paul. He is a driver. Sally is my aunt. She is a teacher. They have a daugher, Kate. She is twelve years old. She is in Class 2, Grade 7. I’m in Class 3, Grade 8. We are in the same school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：记叙文
②时态：一般现在时
③提示：题目要求根据图片介绍Steve的家，写作时注意搞清人物关系，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，先介绍我的大概情况。
第二步，根据图片依次介绍家里的爷爷、奶奶、父母、叔叔和婶婶，包括人物关系、职业等。
第三步，最后介绍堂妹凯特。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自
②the same相同的
[高分句型]
①My grandpa’s name is Robert.（’s的名词所有格）
②My father is a doctor and my mother is an office worker（并列连词and）
3．例文
My Room
This is a picture of my room. There is a desk, a bookcase and a bed in the room. My black computer is on the desk. My books and my Teddy bear are in the bookcase. Where is my schoolbag It is in the bookcase, too. A photo of my family is on the wall. My father, my mother and I are in the picture. My room is small but tidy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已按图片给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干及图片中的内容要点；可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍关于一张我的房间的图片；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细列举房间内物品及所处位置；
第三步，书写结语，总结“我的房间虽然小但是整洁”。
[亮点词汇]
①a picture of my room 一张我房间的图片
②a photo of my family 一张我家庭的照片
③small but tidy 小但整洁
[高分句型]
①This is a picture of my room.(This is这……, 用于介绍某人或某物)
②There is a desk and a bed in the room.(there be句型表示某地有某物)
4．例文
My name is Li Hua. My English name is Lucy. I was born in September, 2008. I like to eat healthy food, such as fruit and vegetables. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. My favorite subject is English. Because I think it is very useful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生从提示要点中的几个方面来介绍自己。
[写作步骤]
本文采用一段式写作，按照提示内容“英文名字、生日、年龄、饮食习惯、体育运动、喜爱科目”的先后顺序来介绍自己。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth. 喜欢做某事
②be born in 出生于
③such as 比如
④play basketball 打篮球
[高分句型]
If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball.（if引导条件状语从句）
5． My friend Li Hua is from Harbin. She is 13 years old. And she is a student in Harbin No.5 Middle School. Because of COVID-19, she is still having online classes at home for most of the semester. She likes carrots best, and she has porridge in the morning, rice for lunch, and noodles in the evening. What’s more, she exercises two hours a day. At home she has four online classes every day: Chinese, Math, English and biology. In her free time, she often listens to music, watches TV, and goes to play basketball. Finally, I hope all the students should study hard and keep healthy.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容，向同学介绍你的朋友李华的个人信息，以及她在家里一天的生活和学习情况，并号召同学们努力学习，保持健康。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。按照图示内容详细介绍李华的个人信息，注意不要遗漏，针对细节可适当发挥，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
6．例文
Dear friends,
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Ping. I’m thirteen years old. I come from Ningbo, Zhejiang. There are four people in my family. My father is 46 years old and he is a policeman. My mother is 44 years old and she is a teacher. My sister is a ten-year-old student. My favorite sports is tennis. I often play it after class. I hope to make some good friends here.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，开头结尾已给出，正文部分需要根据表格，介绍李萍的个人信息。注意信息的完整，以及上下文连接。
2.写作指导：本文应采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。介绍个人信息时，可以使用短语be/come from和并列句。介绍家庭人物，可以使用There be句型。注意主谓一致。
7．例文：
My name is Tom Green. I’m 13. I’m in Class 4, Grade 7 now. I like sports very much, and I have a great sports collection. I have four baseballs, three basketballs, two ping-pong balls and five tennis balls. I play sports every afternoon. I want to be in the School Tennis Club.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求写一段关于自己的介绍，参加学校体育俱乐部的新会员招募，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍自己的运动收藏和运动情况；
第三步，表达想加入学校的网球俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①very much非常
②have a great sports collection有很棒的体育收藏
③want to be想要成为
[高分句型]
I like sports very much, and I have a great sports collection.（and连接并列句）
8．例文：
My best friend
I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Ming. He is thirteen. He is a student in Grade Seven. Zhang Ming is tall and he has short black hair. He likes flying kites and he often does it on Sundays. Fish is his favorite food, but he doesn’t like chicken. He likes black very much, so all his clothes are black. He thinks black looks cool. He is nice and he often helps me. He is my best friend.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。我们要以“My best friend”为题，并根据下面信息图写一篇短文描写自己最好的朋友。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；写作时要涵盖信息图中的所有内容，同时可根据实际适当增加内容；注意语法和单词正确，逻辑清楚。
9．例文：
Hello, I’m Lily. I have got many gifts in my life. My favourite gift is a robot. Its name is Dotty. It’s from my uncle. And it’s for my twelfth birthday. It’s very smart. It can sing and dance. It can also speak. I often play with it after school. It’s one of my best friends. I like it very much.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇短文，要求描述考生收到的最喜欢的礼物，不少于六句话，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述，时态采用一般现在时为主；描述礼物时，名称、来源、特征等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
10．Dear Jim,
I am very happy to invite you to come to my flat. My home is in the centre of Nanjing. It’s about 5 kilometres away from my school. I live with my parents.
My flat is on the ground floor with a big garden in front of it. We have four bedrooms. Each bedroom has a balcony. You can have your own bedroom. There are two bathrooms and each of them has a shower and a toilet.
Our living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV together. We can share a study to read books and do the homework.
I hope I can see you soon.
All the best,
Chen Ze
【详解】[总体分析]
提示：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为书信；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息或偏题；写作时注意条理清晰，时刻记得书信格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头。直接表明写信目的，引出主题；
第二步，介绍家里的具体信息，比如楼层、卧室等；
第三步，介绍客厅，以及在客厅可以做的活动；
第四步，表示期待见面。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb to do邀请某人做某事
②in the centre of在……的中心
③live with sb与某人居住
④in front of在……前面
⑤own自己的
[高分句型]
①I am very happy to invite you to come to my flat.（句型：主+谓+形容词+to do sth）
②It's about 5 kilometres away from my school.（句型：地点+be动词+距离+away from+地点）
③There are two bathrooms and each of them has a shower and a toilet.（句型：there be句型）
11．例文
Tuesday, June 18th
Dear Diary,
Today, I learned something about Wang Yaping in our English class.
Born in a village in Yan Tai, Shan Dong Province in 1980, Wang Yaping was the first Chinese woman to walk in Space. In fact, it was not very easy for her. She studied hard from an early age. In 2003, she made up her mind to be an astronaut. She kept on trying with a strong will. She spent ten years training hard and finally made her dream come true.
In the class, I was deeply moved by her story. She devoted all her time to achieving her dream. When she met difficulties, she never gave up. She sets a good example for me. To realize my dream, I think I should spare no effort to study and never lose heart.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求介绍了中国第一位漫步太空的女宇航员王亚平的追梦故事，结合提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称进行写作，时态主要以一般过去时为主，作文可以分为三段，第一段已经给出；第二段可以从王亚平的个人信息以及她的追梦之路两方面进行写作；第三段进行总结收尾，描述自己的观点。要求语言连贯，无语法以及拼写错误。
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