Unit 1 Playing Sports 写作 专练（含解析）仁爱科普版英语八年级上册

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仁爱科普版 英语八年级上册 Unit 1 Playing Sports 写作 专练
1．现在是星期天早上9点，你的朋友们正在不同的地方做不同的事情。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文描述他们的活动。内容可以适当发挥，80词左右。
提示：
Ben Park Linda Shop Bill Playground Bob Library Ann Friend's house
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遣词造句 （共5小题；
请根据每题所提供的图片和提示词(要求全部用上)，写一个与图片情景相符的句子。
2．visit, next month _____________________________________________________
3．exercise, every day _____________________________________________________
4．be good for, health ______________________________________________________
5．play, last Sunday _________________________________________________________
6．should, clean _____________________________________________________________
7．下面是Ann的锻炼计划，请根据图片和时间提示，写一篇60词左右的短文，注意要有一定的感想。
Time Activity
8: 30-9: 30 Wednesday morning
4: 00-5: 30 Friday afternoon
1: 00-2: 30 Saturday afternoon
tomorrow morning
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8．请根据下面提示，写一篇80—100词的英语短文，介绍一下中国著名羽毛球运动员（badminton player）林丹，内容可适当发挥。
出生情况：1983年10月14日出生于福建省。
训练经历：5岁开始打羽毛球，9岁进体校，他刻苦训练，从不放弃。
成绩及荣誉：他一次又一次地为中国赢得金牌。2008年北京奥运会获得一枚金牌，2010年广州亚运会上获得两枚金牌……虽然年轻，但被认为是“世界十佳运动员”之一。
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9．Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ is important ”.(以“________是重要的”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
1. What do you think is important
2. Why do you think so ( list at least two reasons)
注意：
文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。
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10．假如你叫Peter, 上周日你校在操场举办了一场运动会。根据表格信息并发挥想象写一篇作文。要求60词左右。
Name Activity Result
Kate girls’400-metre relay race first
Lucy the long jump badly
Peter boys’100-meter race first
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11．英语写作课上，大家对平时选择哪种交通方式上学进行了讨论。有人选择坐公共汽车，有人选择走路，有人由父母开车接送……假如你叫高琳，你平时喜欢走路上学。请你以“My Ways to Go to School”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，说明走路上学的原因及益处。
写作提示：1.家离学校不远；
2.走路上学是锻炼的好机会；
3.可以欣赏沿途的风景(scenery)；
4.和朋友一起走路很有趣。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. .
12．北京冬奥会将于下个月开幕，世界各地的运动健儿将参加这一盛会。大家会不会为运动员们的获奖而激动，为他们的坚持而感动？
想想你最崇拜的一位运动员是谁，以My favorite athlete为题，写一篇英语作文。
要点：1. 介绍你最崇拜的运动员。
2. 为什么最崇拜他/她？
3. 你从他/她身上学到了什么？
写作要求：
1. 包括以上所有要点，并作适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺,意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 80—100词左右。
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13．运动可以让我们更健康，爬山成为很多年轻人喜爱的运动。假如你和同学计划本周日去爬山，请根据提示，写一篇60词左右的短文。
要求：层次清楚，结构完整。
提示词：classmate, Sunday, meet, school gate, leave, take, guitar, bread, water, fun
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14．2022 年杭州亚运会志愿者正在招募中。假如你是学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会陈女士写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 个人情况；2. 自身优势；3. 服务承诺
Name 李华，13 岁，中学学生
Abilities 擅长英语，口语很棒；爱好运动，了解亚运会；性格外向，善于与人交流，且乐于助人；会为人们提供最好的服务。
参考词汇：the Asian Games 亚运会 spoken English 英语口语 service 服务
注意：1. 内容必须包括提示的信息；可适当发挥，字数80左右。
2. 逻辑通顺，表达得体，书写工整。
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15．假设你是Sally，上周参加了学校举行的运动会。请根据表格内容, 以日记的形式描述当时运动会的情况，并且表达自己的感想。词数在80词左右。
比赛时间 周日
比赛地点 学校操场
比赛结果 1. John在男子1500米赛跑中获得第一名； 2. Lisa在跳高比赛中表现较差； 3, Sally参加女子200米赛跑, 赢得第一名； 4. Sally的班级获得第一名。
要求：1. 语言通顺、流畅；
2. 包含以上所给全部信息，可适当添加内容；
3. 使用第一人称。
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参考答案：
1．例文
It’s 9:00 am on Sunday. Where are my friends What are they doing now Look! This is Ben. He likes photographing. He is taking photos in the park. Linda is shopping in the shop. She wants to buy some delicious food. Bill is good at doing sports. He is playing football on the playground. Bob likes reading. He is reading a book in the library. Ann is playing with some friends in her friend’s house.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片上的信息，介绍每个人此时正在做的事情。
2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称，时态采用现在进行时。围绕图片和所给词，介绍朋友们所在的地方和所做的事情。写作时注意保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
2．I am going to visit Beijing next month. 3．Ann does exercise in the gym every day. 4．Washing hands often is good for our health. 5．He played soccer last Sunday. 6．We should clean our classroom every day.
【解析】2．根据next month是一般将来时的时间状语，故答案是I am going to visit Beijing next month..
3．根据every day可知用一般现在时，故答案是Ann does exercise in the gym every day.。
4．根据be good for, health故填Washing hands often is good for our health.。
5．根据last Sunday可知用一般过去时，故填He played soccer last Sunday.
6．根据should后加动词原形。故填We should clean our classroom every day..
考点：遣词造句
7．例文
Ann likes sports. She does exercise in the gym for one hour on Wednesday morning. On Friday afternoon, she often goes swimming from 4: 00 to 5: 30. She goes hiking from 1: 00 to 2: 30 on Saturday afternoon. Tomorrow morning, she is going to fly a kite in the park. She thinks that it’s good for our health to do much exercise.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据图片和时间提示，写一篇短文介绍Ann的锻炼计划，属于看图作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主，以一般将来时为辅展开叙述。写作时紧紧抓住图片透露的信息和对应的时间提示，写出Ann不同时间的锻炼活动，最后简要写一下她的锻炼感受。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
8．例文
Do you know Lin Dan, a great badminton player in China
He was born on October 14, 1983 in Fujian Province. He started to play badminton at the age of 5. When he was 9 years old, he was admitted into the sports school. He practiced hard and never gave up. He won gold medals for China time after time. He got one gold medal in the 2008 Olympic Games. And another two gold medals were won in the 2010 Asian Games of Guangzhou.
Although he is young, he is considered to be one of the ten best athletes in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“林丹的个人情况，训练的经历以及所获荣誉”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你认识中国伟大的羽毛球运动员林丹吗？”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“林丹的个人情况，训练经历以及所获荣誉”重点介绍林丹；
第三步，书写结语。表达“尽管他很年轻，但他被认为是世界上最优秀的十名运动员之一。”
[亮点词汇]
① at the age of在……岁时
② give up放弃
[高分句型]
① When he was 9 years old, he was admitted into the sports school.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② Although he is young, he is considered to be one of the ten best athletes in the world.（although引导的让步状语从句）
9．例文
Exercise is important
Everyone in the world wants to live happily. Exercise is indispensable to a happy life. There is a famous saying: “life lies in exercise.” So I think exercise is important.
Exercise helps to improve our mood. When you do exercise, you move a lot and you have to be more positive, which helps you become optimistic. Exercise will make your life full of all kinds of contents and make your life more colourful. Moreover, exercise will help you get rid of your inertia. If you insist on exercise, you will never be a lazy person.
Therefore, exercise is important. Let’s get up and exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要求根据提示问题，列出至少两点原因说明你的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍锻炼是重要的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍锻炼的好处和重要性；
第三步，总结并呼吁大家一起来做锻炼。
[亮点词汇]
① indispensable 不可或缺的
② Positive 积极乐观的
③ get rid of 摆脱
[高分句型]
If you insist on exercise, you will never be a lazy person.（条件状语从句）
10．Last week our school held a sports meet on the playground. All the students were very excited. Kate is good at running and she took part in the girls’ 400-metre relay race. She won the first place. Lucy joined in the long jump, but she did badly. I was in the boys’ 100-metre race and I was the first to cross the finish line. At last, our class won the first place.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文，是一篇材料作文。本文时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时。本文应分为三部分，比赛目的，比赛过程和总结。认为阅读材料，认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。
2. 例文点评：例文采用三部分，第一部分：交代写作目的：上周日我校在操场举办了一场运动会。第二部分：具体介绍运动会的过程，本文需要把表格中的内容表达出来，可适当发挥，加入运动员的表现好坏。第三部分：总结全文，说明运动会的结果。本文时态使用正确，表达条理清楚，运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。
3. 高分亮点：
短语和句型：be good at/take part in/ join in/ at last, win the first place /I was in the boys’ 100-metre race and I was the first to cross the finish line./ Lucy joined in the long jump, but she did badly.。
11．参考范文：
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. My home is not far from school. It takes me about twenty minutes to walk to school every day. I think walking is good for me. First of all, it’s a good way to exercise. I’m busy studying and have little time to do sports, so walking to school is a perfect chance to take exercise. Next, when I walk, the scenery along the way changes every moment, and I can enjoy it. What’s more, it’s fun to walk together with my friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. I hope more and more students will enjoy going to school on foot.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。题目要求是假如你叫高琳，你平时喜欢走路上学。请你以“My Ways to Go to School”为题，根据提示信息，写一篇英语短文，说明走路上学的原因及益处。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；语句要通顺，条理要清晰，详略要得当，书写要工整；100词左右。
2.写法指导：本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所提示的信息，经整理后展开思维，运用所学的英语知识准确表达出来。所以，要注意不能遗漏要点，写作时，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式；同时要注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
12．例文
My favorite athlete
My favorite athlete is Ma Long. He is one of the best table tennis players in the world.
Ma Long was born in Anshan, Liaoning province. He has been playing table tennis since his childhood. At the 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games, Ma Long tried his best and won the first place. All Chinese people are proud of him.
Although Ma Long showed his talent at an early age, he still worked hard. Like every other athlete, he faces difficulties in training, but he never gives up. From his experience, I have learned that we can do almost anything if we never lose heart. He is my hero!
【详解】题干解读：题目要求以My favorite athlete为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有要点提示。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，采用第三人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：介绍最喜欢的运动员；第二段：描述为什么崇拜他；第三段：描述你学到了什么。
13．例文
This Sunday my classmates and I are going to climb mountains. We plan to meet at the school gate. We are leaving at 8:30 a.m. They are going to take many things, such as some delicious food, different kinds of drinks, the guitar and so on. I am going to take some bread and water. When we have a rest, Li Kang is going to play the guitar and sing some songs for us. I think we must have fun.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，内容是根据提示，写一篇60词左右的短文，介绍一下你和同学本周日计划去爬山的情况。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般将来时为主，用be going to描述场景；首先提出周末计划；其次具体介绍活动安排；最后是祝愿。
14．例文
Dear Ms Chen,
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old and I am a middle school student. Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games, I am writing to apply for the position.
First of all, I am good at English and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Besides, I have other advantages. I am fond of sports. I was born in Hangzhou, so I am familiar with Hangzhou. What’s more, I do well in communication and I am ready to help others. I am willing to provide the best service for every athlete in the Asian Games. Therefore, I think I am suitable for serving the Games.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息以及想申请成为一名志愿者的想法；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，希望对方能给予这次机会，并期待回信。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②be good at擅长
③communicate with与……沟通
④be fond of喜欢
⑤be born in出生于
⑥be familiar with熟悉
[高分句型]
①I think I am suitable for serving the Games（省略that的宾语从句）
②I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer（if引导条件状语从句）
15．例文
Sunday, Sept. 15th Sunny
Last weekend our school held a sports meet on the school playground. Everyone in our class was very excited and happy because our class won first place. In the competition, John ran very fast and was the first to pass the finish line in the boys’ 1, 500-meter race. Lisa did badly in the high jump, but we’re sure that she can do it better next time. I took part in the girls’ 200-meter race. I did my best and was the first to pass the finish line. That made me happy. Now I love sports very much. I’m going to take more exercise later and I hope I can take part in the Olympic Games some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格”中提示的内容，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表示上周末学校举办了一场运动会；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍运动会的时间、地点以及比赛结果；
第三步，书写结语，表达运动给自己带来的快乐。
[亮点词汇]
①do badly in在某方面做的不好
②do one’s best尽某人最大的努力
[高分句型]
Lisa did badly in the high jump, but we’re sure that she can do it better next time.（that引导的宾语从句）
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