Unit 1 The Changing World 写作专练（含解析）仁爱科普版英语九年级上册

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仁爱科普版 英语九年级上册 Unit 1 The Changing World 写作专练
1．春天来了，学校组织学生们春游，老师拍照记录了学生们欢乐的春游时光。请你根据王老师发来的照片，描述学生们春游的场景。
要求：1.必须包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
2.词数60左右，
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： a spring outing春游：fly a kite放风筝；have a picnic野餐
A Spring Outing
Students from No.2 Middle School are going a spring outing. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．某校计划在今年暑期开展社会实践活动。为使同学们更好地了解自己的意向，合理地规划自己的时间，学校对某年级100人进行了抽样调查，下图是相关活动的统计结果。其中，计划参加社区志愿者活动的人数占66%，参加庭院拍卖的人数占10%。
请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你感兴趣的活动项目，制定相应的计划，并说明理由。
要求：1.词数不少于80词；
2.首句已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
A school did a survey among 100 students about their plans for social practice activities during the summer vacation. Here are the results. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．请根据下面三幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文，记述你们学校上周六的志愿者活动。
plant trees pick up rubbish take care of old people
注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last Saturday was the Volunteer Day of our school. The students _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你是李华，母亲节即将到来，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩母亲”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容，写一篇短文用于投稿。
Things your mother does Things you will do
●cook food ●take...to and from school ●Encourage ... ●do housework ●make a card ●say thanks for ...
注意：(1)短文必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
(2)你的补充至少各一条；
(3)词数：80-100：
(4)短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
短文首句：Hello, I’m Li Hua. Mother’s Day is coming
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5．作为新时代的中学生, 你需要具备志愿者的情怀。有哪些优秀品质需要你吸纳呢 寒假期间, 你想作为志愿者去"老人之家"工作, 理由是什么, 你会怎样做 请根据下图所给提示, 写一份发言稿, 拟和同学们在英语课上交流。
注意∶（1）短文必须包括图中所给内容, 可适当增加细节;
（2）你的理由和可能开展的活动要凸显逻辑一致;（3）词数∶80—100;
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用, 不计入总词数。
短文首句∶What should I learn to be a good volunteer First, I ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假设你是学校Helping Hands Club的一名成员，俱乐部希望每位成员在即将到来的寒假参与一些有意义的活动。请你根据以下要点提示写一份60词以上的假期活动计划。
注意：
1. 参考词汇：整理(put…in order)、共享单车(shared bike)、志愿者(volunteer)；
2. 词数: 60词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My Winter Holiday Plan
As a member of the Helping Hands Club, I am going to do something helpful during the coming winter holiday. Here is my plan.
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I am sure that I will have a happy and meaningful winter holiday.
7．提示：“双减”政策落地后的首个寒假，“背着书包赶培训班”的现象已然不再，也没有太多的寒假作业要写。而作为这一政策的亲历者，你是如何度过你的寒假的呢？请你以“My Last Winter Vacation”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一下你的上一个寒假生活。
要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计；
3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
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8．三年的初中学习生活就要结束，暑假即将来临。你打算过一个什么样的暑假呢？放松的(relaxing)？忙碌的(busy)？有意义的(meaningful)？……你准备在这个暑假做些什么？(吃喝玩乐？学习？做志愿者？旅行？……)请你以My Summer Vacation为题写一篇短文，说说你的计划和安排。
写作要求：
1、先填好标题，再围绕标题展开作文；
2、100词左右；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名；
4、短文内容与标题相符，文章逻辑结构合理，字、词、句、语法使用正确。
My ________ Summer Vacation
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9．你校英语组布置了一次以“A Chinese festival”为主题的期末英语实践作业。请阅读下表，选择其中的一个节日并以此为标题，完成一篇有关中国传统节日的文章。要点提示如下：
The Spring Festival The Mid-autumn Festival
do some cleaning have a big dinner visit relatives eat mooncakes get hongbao watch the moon
要求：1.短文必须包括表格中的相关要点，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名或校名；
3.词数：80词左右。
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10．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Mike 来信询问你将如何有意义地度过疫情防控下的暑假。请你根据以下要点写一封回信。
1、减少聚集，注意防护；
2、帮助父母，增进了解；
3、读书锻炼，健康身心；
4、……
提示词：新冠肺炎 COVID-19
注意：
1、词数 80～100；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4、开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I'm writing to tell you how I will spend the coming special summer holiday.
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May both of us can spend the holiday happily and safely.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．假定你是李华，学校“英语之声”社团招募暑期志愿者去贫困地区，帮助那里的儿童学习英语。请你写一封应聘信，你草拟了提纲，请根据下图写一篇英文自荐信。
注意事项：
1.自荐信须根据提纲自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数在90个左右，自荐信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
3.自荐信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4.自荐信必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that the Voice of English Association needs some volunteers to help children in poor areas in the coming summer vacation. I am writing to recommend myself as one of them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．One possible version：
A Spring Outing
Students from No. 2 Middle School are going a spring outing. The sky is blue. The trees are green. The flowers are red. It’s a very beautiful park. They’re doing different things and having a great time.
Look! A girl is flying a kite. The boy next to her takes his dog with him. He is walking his dog and watching the girl’s flying kite. Another girl is singing. She is Lily. She always takes her microphone with her because she really likes singing. Look! Two boys are lying on the ground and enjoying her songs! A boy is riding his bike. There’s also another boy walking around. Where is Mr. Wang Oh, he is taking a picture of two students. They are having a picnic. Mr. Wang likes taking photos because he thinks it is a good way to remember the happy time.
All the students are enjoying themselves. What a wonderful and meaningful spring outing it is!
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目文体属于记叙文写作,作文类型属于看图写作；根据图片内容,描述学生们春游的场景；第一段介绍春游的地点；第二段描述学生们正在进行的活动；第三段总结这次春游给人的感受。
2. 写作指导：本文应用第三人称来描述春游场景；时态采用现在进行时为主,一般现在时为辅；在描述春游的地点环境时，用一般现在时叙述；在描写学生们进行的春游活动时，运用现在进行时进行叙述；按照图片内容，逐一叙述，不要遗漏；正确使用动词短语，使文章内容表达更具体准确。
2．例文
A school did a survey among 100 students about their plans for social practice activities during the summer vacation, Here are the results. Sixty-six students want to do community volunteer work. Twenty-four percent are going to learn a life skill. And only one tenth are interested in having a yard sale. In my view, it’s good to do community volunteer work.
Doing community volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate. The community is a lot like a big family of different people. First, I need to make a group of volunteers by talking with the teenagers. Then we’re going to work out different plans based on old people’s needs. We can also organize some out door activities for the kids and hand out advertisements to better our environment. They all need us to communicate and work well with others. Now, I’m already looking forward to the coming vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出下文对这个调查结果的分析；
第二步，分析调查结果；
第三步，介绍自己感兴趣的活动项目。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②talk with与……交谈
③work out制定
④hand out交出
[高分句型]
①Doing community volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate.（动名词作主语）
②First, I need to make a group of volunteers by talking with the teenagers.（动词不定式作宾语）
3．例文：
Last Saturday was the Volunteer Day of our school. The students took an active part in attending volunteer activities.
The students in Class One planted trees in the West Mountain in order to protect our environment. They tried their best to plant more trees. The students in Class Two picked up rubbish in our city park, so that many people could enjoy their stay there. The students in our class took care of old people in old people’s home. Some students danced for the old people, some students chatted with them, and other students cleaned the rooms for the old people.
It’s very meaningful to be a volunteer, and we will do more volunteer activities and help more people.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段叙述上周六我们学生参加了志愿者活动；第二段根据图片描述进行的志愿者活动；第三段描述自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，描述参加志愿者活动；用一般现在时描述感受；保证内容包含图片主要信息，适当发挥，条理清晰。
4．例文
Hello, I’m Li Hua. Mother’s Day is coming. I’m writing to express my thanks for her care and love.
All these years, you have done so much. Almost every day, Mum cooks delicious food for me and takes me to and from school. When I’m sick, you look after me carefully and patiently. When I face all the difficulties and troubles, you encourage me to never give it up easily. Now I promise to do something back for you. In my free time, I will be responsible for part of housework as a family member. I will also make a card with my best wishes on it to say thanks for everything you have done for me. I will study hard to be a better person whom you’re proud of.
Thanks again. Love you, mom.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示内容，写一篇主题为“感恩母亲”的作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。写作时首先需把母亲为你做的事情叙述出来，其次要介绍下你将要做的事情。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
5．One possible version:
What should I learn to be a good volunteer First. I should be active. I must offer to help if necessary. Next, I am expected to be honest so that I can respect both others and myself. Third. I hope to work with others happily.
During the winter holiday, I want to help out in the old people's home. The old people are weak. so I could clean their rooms. Also, I can wash clothes for them. As the old people always feel lonely. I would rather talk to them or just listen to them. If the old people like music, I'll play the music they like.
【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据图示分别介绍成为一名志愿者需要哪些品质，寒假期间去志愿活动的理由。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。文中给出First，下文续写，需条理清晰，熟练运用Second，next，third等词汇。介绍理由时，要适当的展开，注意从句的使用，可以让文章更有层次。
6．参考范文
My Winter Holiday Plan
As a member of the Helping Hands Club, I am going to do something helpful during the coming winter holiday. Here is my plan.
I would like to help my parents do some housework, such as cleaning our house and washing the dishes and so on. And then I will help put the shared bikes outside the school in order. It can help make our city beautiful. I am going to be a volunteer in the Guangzhou Library so that I can help collect the books and put them back to the right places. Finally, I plan to visit the old people in my hometown because they may feel very lonely during the Spring Festival. I will spend time talking with them so they can have a good time during this festival.
I am sure that I will have a happy and meaningful winter holiday.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据题目中思维导图的要点提示，写出自己在寒假做的一些有意义的活动情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般将来时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
7．例文
My Last Winter Vacation
I had a great winter vacation last year. I did something meaningful during winter vacation.
First, I spent some time playing sports to keep healthy and strong. I am much stronger than before. Second, I read some interesting books about Spring Festival. I have learned more about the Chinese traditions and enjoyed Spring Festival. Third, I helped my parents do housework. For example, I swept the floor and did the dishes. Moreover, I volunteered in my community. I helped keep the community clean and tell people how to prevent COVID-19. I learned how to provide the public with good services.
All in all, I really had a wonderful and meaningful winter vacation and I’ve learn a lot from it.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文一篇话题作文，要求根据提示以“My Last Winter Vacation”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一下“双减”政策落地后你的上一个寒假生活。
2.写作指导：写作时以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般过去时；文章要做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、拼写和标点错误。
8．范文：
My meaningful Summer Vacation
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, I plan to relax myself, such as watching movies and traveling with my parents. I’ll exercise every day because it is good for our health. Then I am going to spend some time learning cooking, swimming and bike riding. And I want to communicate with my parents more. In my opinion, these skills will be useful and helpful in my future life.At the same time, I’ll read some books to open up my eyes. I also plan to take part in some social activities to prepare for future study.
I think I’ll have a meaningful summer vacation.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应首先填好标题，再围绕标题展开写作；接下来介绍自己有意义的暑假包含的内容：让放松自己；锻炼；学习各种技能等。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言通畅，语法正确，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
9．
One possible version:
The Spring Festival
My favorite festival is Chinese Spring Festival. It is the most important festival in China. It is celebrated in January or February. Before the festival, people often do some cleaning and buy new clothes. During the festival, they often have a big dinner with families and they like to eat dumplings and visit relatives. Parents usually give their children some money and it is calledhongbao.
I think Spring Festival is very relaxing and people can have a good time. It is the most interesting festival and I like it very much.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。根据表格里的要点，选择其中的一个节日并以此为标题，写一篇作文关于中国传统节日。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作时可适当发挥，使行文连贯，做到语句通顺，条理清晰。
10．One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm writing to tell you how I will spend the coming special summer holiday.
Since we are still faced with the fight against COVID-19, each of us should pay more attention to our personal health and try to avoid being crowded with lots of people. When at home, I will do my best to help my parents with something I can do. This way, both my parents and I will understand each other much better. What's more, I plan to do more reading and sports for a healthy body and mind. Lastly, it's also important for me to get ready for the coming new term. So I may learn some new lessons by myself.
May both of us can spend the holiday happily and safely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是信件写作，信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求写信给笔友Mike，告诉他你将如何有意义地度过疫情防控下的暑假，题中以给出三个要点，要求适当发挥一点。
2.写作指导：写作时应以第一人称为主，把一般将来时和一般现在时结合起来写作。信件第一段点明写作主题，第二段分条讲述自己讲如何度过疫情防控下的暑假，在包括提示要点的基础上适当发挥，最后一段预祝彼此安全快乐地度过暑假。写作时要保证文章有条理，可使用适当的副词和连词来过渡，使行文连贯。
11．One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that the Voice of English Association needs some volunteers to help children in poor areas in the coming summer vacation. I am writing to recommend myself as one of them.
I’m a sweet and helpful girl. I’m willing to help others. What’s more, I’m good at English. This activity is a good chance to do something for the children in poor areas. It is not only a way for them to learn more but a chance for me to improve myself. I think it is really meaningful to take part in activities like this. If accepted, I’ll teach them some English songs and skills in reading and writing. I hope you will kindly consider me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按自荐信格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段根据提纲叙述推荐自己的理由以及好处。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来写；时态采用一般现在时为主；在陈述推荐自己的理由时，要运用连词，使叙述的内容有理有据，条理清晰，具有说服性，语气要委婉；适当运用从句使叙述的内容更加饱满，情感更真挚。
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