Unit 2 Colour 写作专练（含解析）牛津译林版英语九年级上册
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牛津译林版 英语九年级上册 Unit 2 Colour 写作专练
1．上午的英语课上，老师要求同学们根据提供的图片进行对话练习。请认真阅读图片，编写一段玛丽和汤姆之间就此展开的对话。
要求：（1）对话须包括图片的全部信息，可适当发挥；
（2）对话须包括一般疑问句和特殊疑问句，且不少于10句话。
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2．书面表达
学校要为初三学生订制新的校服，下面是工厂送来的图片，请你结合所学的关于颜色的知识，选择一
款校服加以评价。
要求：
1. 就校服的颜色以及款式加以评价；2. 内容充实，语言流畅，书写工整；
3. 80词左右。
提示：
Style A：red and black sports clothes for girls； blue and black sports clothes for boys
Style B：white shirt，dark blue skirt and red tie for girls；white shirt，dark blue trousers and red tie for boys
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3．为了让刚刚进入七年级的新同学们更好地了解彼此，光明中学的校报开辟了一个 “Let’s be friends!”的英语专栏，鼓励同学们进行自我介绍，交到新的朋友。假设你是七年级一班的学生刘洋，请你根据下面的信息用英语进行自我介绍，进行投稿。
中文名 刘洋
英文名 鲍勃
班级 七年级一班
年龄 12
家庭成员 父母，一个妹妹
最喜欢的颜色 橙色，棕色
QQ号码 65267168
电话号码 52418397
房间 ……
参考词汇：七年级一班 Class One, Grade Seven
要求:
（1）60词左右。自我介绍要包括表格中所有内容，并可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．书面表达
写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。包括以下要点：
1. 颜色分为冷色和热色；
2. 两种颜色的作用；
3. 选择颜色的重要性。
词数：80左右。
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5．根据下面提示写一封邀请函，推荐Tom做你们班的班长, 不少于80词，
1.、Tom很有自信，他认为如果他尽力，他可以做任何事。
2、他是一个勤奋的人，他总是花很多时间帮助我们的同学。
3、他是聪明的，他总是能想出好主意来。
4、他是有组织能力的人，他从来不会忘记该做的事。
5、他也有乐于助人的，他经常帮助其它同学。
We are writing to recommend Tom as our monitor. We think he has many strong qualities for this position.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Millie
6．一个人的成长离不开亲人的陪伴，朋友的支持。他们都给了我们许多的关怀与帮助。让我们怀着一颗感恩的心，以“My_____________”为题，讲述一位令你难忘的人。
要求：1．用一般现在时简要描述人物的外貌和性格特点；用一般过去时简要描述对你的关怀与帮助。
7．在中国传统文化中，红色寓意丰富，它意味着好运和喜庆，也象征着奋斗与胜利。红包，红灯笼、红歌、红色之旅在中国都很受欢迎，请以“Chinese Red”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文，让外国朋友了解中国红。
注意：文本不可出现人名，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Chinese Red
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8．书面表达
现在科学技术日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑（laptop）、手机（mobile phone）、MP4、数码相机（digital camera）、iPad等。请以“My Favourite Invention”为题描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由（理由至少有两个方面）。
词数在80词左右。
My Favourite Invention
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9．我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。
写作要求：
( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
( 2)字数不少于 80词。
(3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。
参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
含义 幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所及表达方式 婚礼，春节等，剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼等
影响 深深地影响每一个中国人
提示词：剪纸 paper-cutting，中国结Chinese knot，红包red packet
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文
Tom: I have a new jacket.
Mary: What color is it
Tom: It is red.
Mary: Do you see the key on the table
Tom: Yes, it is a brown key. Whose is it
Mary: I don’t know. I found it on the playground this morning.
Tom: Is this your ruler
Mary: No, it isn’t.
Tom: Whose is it
Mary: It is Amy’s. She has a yellow and white ruler.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片内容编一段对话，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。对话须包括一般疑问句和特殊疑问句，且不少于10句话。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2．I like style A very much. I think wearing such school uniforms can make us look not only smart but also sporty. And we may feel energetic when we wear them. I like the colours as well. It’s good for boys to wear blue and black. They are a good match. They can make us feel less stressed. And red is also a good colour for girls. Red makes us feel full of energy. It can make us take actions easily.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头写出我选择的校服类型；接下来介绍我的理由以及对校服的评价。
2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，对校服的颜色以及款式加以评价，叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：not only, but also； be good for；make sb do sth；take actions。
句型：I think后面接宾语从句；句型It’s+形容词+for sb to do sth；They are……。
3．例文
Hello! My Chinese name is Liu Yang. My English name is Bob. I am in Class One, Grade Seven. I am 12 years old. There are four people in my family, and they are my parents, my sister and me. My favorite colors are brown and orange. My QQ number is 65267168 and my phone number is 52418397. My room is tidy but small. Do you want to make friends with me
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给的表格中的信息，介绍自己的情况。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。从个人信息，家庭信息，房间情况等方面来介绍自己，写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4．Color may decide the feelings of the people. People usually talk about two group of colors: warm colors and cool colors. The warm colors are red, orange and yellow. The cool colors are green, blue and grey. The warm colors make people active and excited. And the cool colors can make people relaxed and calm. Because different colors have different effects on the people. So it is important for us to choose different colors to suit different situation.
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People usually talk about…..., The warm colors are……., The warm colors make……, So it is important for us to…..等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了颜色可能会决定人的心情，接下来介绍颜色分为冷色和热色以及两种颜色的作用，最后指出选择颜色的重要性。此处talk about, make sb+形容词，have effects on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
5．We are writing to recommend Tom as our monitor. We think he has many strong qualities for this position. Firstly, Tom is very confident. He thinks he can do anything if he tries his best. Secondly, he is a diligent man. He always spends a lot of time helping our classmates. Thirdly, he is clever. He always comes up with good ideas. Fourth, he is an organizing ability man, he never forgets what he ought to do. Especially， he is also helpful, and he often helps other students. I think he can do better in the task.
Yours sincerely
Millie
【详解】本作文是一封邀请函。要把提示所列的5条内容都讲述到作文中去，注意多使用衔接词，连接上下文，转折类的，承上启下的，还要注意时态和人称的变化，以及单复数的变化。对于拿不准的句子，多使用简单句。
6．Mr. Wu is my math teacher. He is tall and outgoing. He likes sports very much.
Mr. Wu is a kind teacher. When I was in Grade One, my math was poor and I couldn’t work out the problems. He helped me with it and told me the good ways to learn math. He regarded me as his own child. Now my math is better and I often get good grades. I really thank him for his kind help.
No matter where I go, I will remember I have an excellent teacher.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，主要介绍一位令你难忘的人，用一般现在时简要描述人物的外貌和性格特点；用一般过去时简要描述对你的关怀与帮助。根据要求可知除了描述人物的外貌及性格特征还要介绍一件过去的事情以表示自己对这个人的难忘。
写作亮点：这篇短文内容全面，语句通顺。在短文中时态应用灵活准确。短文中用到了比较复杂的复合句，是这篇短文的亮点，如：When I was in Grade One, my math was poor and I couldn’t work out the problems. No matter where I go, I will remember I have an excellent teacher.
考点：话题作文。
7．例文
Chinese Red
In China, red is a traditional colour that can be found almost everywhere. It means a lot to every Chinese.
It is a symbol of good luck and happiness. We can see red on some big days, such as the Spring Festival or wedding days. To express our great joy and wishes, we often put up red lanterns, give hongbao or prepare other red items.
Chinese red also stands for hard work and success. It is chosen as the colour of Chinese national flag, reminding us of how Chinese people fought for our country before. Today more of us take red tours and sing red songs, which fill us with pride and strength to work harder.
In conclusion, Chinese red plays a significant role in our traditional culture.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，主要是描写红色在中国传统文化中的寓意以及象征等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．My Favourite Invention
Among all the modern inventions,the laptop is my favourite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. The laptop is light and small. It is easy to carry. With a laptop,we can work,study and entertain everywhere. The laptop can get to the Internet outside,which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using the laptop,I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place. I think in the future,everybody will have his or her own laptop.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要记叙文格式写。在写作时，开头是介绍我最喜欢的一种发明是笔记本电脑；接下来介绍原因；最后表示我的看法，将来每个人都会有自己的笔记本电脑。
2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述我最喜欢笔记本的理由；时态主要采用一般现在时介绍笔记本电脑的优点；用一般将来时表示将来每个人将会有自己的笔记本电脑。文中分析理由细致，条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：get to；enable sb to do sth；keep in touch with；in the future。
句型：句型It is+形容词+to do sth；I think后面接的宾语从句；which引导的定语从句。
9．例文
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck．
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍红色所代表的意义；
第三步，介绍红色的应用；
第四步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be popular with受欢迎
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.（such…that引导结果状语从句）
②I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.（宾语从句）
10．例文：
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
As we all know, China Red is one of the most popular colours in China, and it is deeply loved by people of all ages. The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. What’s more, it can bring people good luck. When the Spring Festival is coming, China Red will come into your eyes whenever and wherever you are. When you attend someone’s wedding, what impresses you most is the China Red. On these occasions, China Red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. The China Red has deeply affected every Chinese. It is not only a colour but also a kind of Chinese spirit and culture.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助你的英国朋友Tony，了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明很高兴收到对方来信，然后回信告诉他关于“中国红”的事情；
第二步，从地位、含义、使用场所及表达方式和影响四个方面来介绍“中国红”；
第三步，结语已给出，希望回信能对他有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for代表
②on these occasions在这些场合
③put into把……放进
④be used to do习惯于
[高分句型]
①The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. （that引导表语从句）
②On these occasions, China red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
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牛津译林版 英语九年级上册 Unit 2 Colour 写作专练
1．上午的英语课上，老师要求同学们根据提供的图片进行对话练习。请认真阅读图片，编写一段玛丽和汤姆之间就此展开的对话。
要求：（1）对话须包括图片的全部信息，可适当发挥；
（2）对话须包括一般疑问句和特殊疑问句，且不少于10句话。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．书面表达
学校要为初三学生订制新的校服，下面是工厂送来的图片，请你结合所学的关于颜色的知识，选择一
款校服加以评价。
要求：
1. 就校服的颜色以及款式加以评价；2. 内容充实，语言流畅，书写工整；
3. 80词左右。
提示：
Style A：red and black sports clothes for girls； blue and black sports clothes for boys
Style B：white shirt，dark blue skirt and red tie for girls；white shirt，dark blue trousers and red tie for boys
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．为了让刚刚进入七年级的新同学们更好地了解彼此，光明中学的校报开辟了一个 “Let’s be friends!”的英语专栏，鼓励同学们进行自我介绍，交到新的朋友。假设你是七年级一班的学生刘洋，请你根据下面的信息用英语进行自我介绍，进行投稿。
中文名 刘洋
英文名 鲍勃
班级 七年级一班
年龄 12
家庭成员 父母，一个妹妹
最喜欢的颜色 橙色，棕色
QQ号码 65267168
电话号码 52418397
房间 ……
参考词汇：七年级一班 Class One, Grade Seven
要求:
（1）60词左右。自我介绍要包括表格中所有内容，并可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．书面表达
写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。包括以下要点：
1. 颜色分为冷色和热色；
2. 两种颜色的作用；
3. 选择颜色的重要性。
词数：80左右。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．根据下面提示写一封邀请函，推荐Tom做你们班的班长, 不少于80词，
1.、Tom很有自信，他认为如果他尽力，他可以做任何事。
2、他是一个勤奋的人，他总是花很多时间帮助我们的同学。
3、他是聪明的，他总是能想出好主意来。
4、他是有组织能力的人，他从来不会忘记该做的事。
5、他也有乐于助人的，他经常帮助其它同学。
We are writing to recommend Tom as our monitor. We think he has many strong qualities for this position.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Millie
6．一个人的成长离不开亲人的陪伴，朋友的支持。他们都给了我们许多的关怀与帮助。让我们怀着一颗感恩的心，以“My_____________”为题，讲述一位令你难忘的人。
要求：1．用一般现在时简要描述人物的外貌和性格特点；用一般过去时简要描述对你的关怀与帮助。
7．在中国传统文化中，红色寓意丰富，它意味着好运和喜庆，也象征着奋斗与胜利。红包，红灯笼、红歌、红色之旅在中国都很受欢迎，请以“Chinese Red”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文，让外国朋友了解中国红。
注意：文本不可出现人名，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Chinese Red
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8．书面表达
现在科学技术日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑（laptop）、手机（mobile phone）、MP4、数码相机（digital camera）、iPad等。请以“My Favourite Invention”为题描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由（理由至少有两个方面）。
词数在80词左右。
My Favourite Invention
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9．我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。
写作要求：
( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
( 2)字数不少于 80词。
(3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。
参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
含义 幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所及表达方式 婚礼，春节等，剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼等
影响 深深地影响每一个中国人
提示词：剪纸 paper-cutting，中国结Chinese knot，红包red packet
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文
Tom: I have a new jacket.
Mary: What color is it
Tom: It is red.
Mary: Do you see the key on the table
Tom: Yes, it is a brown key. Whose is it
Mary: I don’t know. I found it on the playground this morning.
Tom: Is this your ruler
Mary: No, it isn’t.
Tom: Whose is it
Mary: It is Amy’s. She has a yellow and white ruler.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片内容编一段对话，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。对话须包括一般疑问句和特殊疑问句，且不少于10句话。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2．I like style A very much. I think wearing such school uniforms can make us look not only smart but also sporty. And we may feel energetic when we wear them. I like the colours as well. It’s good for boys to wear blue and black. They are a good match. They can make us feel less stressed. And red is also a good colour for girls. Red makes us feel full of energy. It can make us take actions easily.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头写出我选择的校服类型；接下来介绍我的理由以及对校服的评价。
2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，对校服的颜色以及款式加以评价，叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：not only, but also； be good for；make sb do sth；take actions。
句型：I think后面接宾语从句；句型It’s+形容词+for sb to do sth；They are……。
3．例文
Hello! My Chinese name is Liu Yang. My English name is Bob. I am in Class One, Grade Seven. I am 12 years old. There are four people in my family, and they are my parents, my sister and me. My favorite colors are brown and orange. My QQ number is 65267168 and my phone number is 52418397. My room is tidy but small. Do you want to make friends with me
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给的表格中的信息，介绍自己的情况。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。从个人信息，家庭信息，房间情况等方面来介绍自己，写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4．Color may decide the feelings of the people. People usually talk about two group of colors: warm colors and cool colors. The warm colors are red, orange and yellow. The cool colors are green, blue and grey. The warm colors make people active and excited. And the cool colors can make people relaxed and calm. Because different colors have different effects on the people. So it is important for us to choose different colors to suit different situation.
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People usually talk about…..., The warm colors are……., The warm colors make……, So it is important for us to…..等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了颜色可能会决定人的心情，接下来介绍颜色分为冷色和热色以及两种颜色的作用，最后指出选择颜色的重要性。此处talk about, make sb+形容词，have effects on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
5．We are writing to recommend Tom as our monitor. We think he has many strong qualities for this position. Firstly, Tom is very confident. He thinks he can do anything if he tries his best. Secondly, he is a diligent man. He always spends a lot of time helping our classmates. Thirdly, he is clever. He always comes up with good ideas. Fourth, he is an organizing ability man, he never forgets what he ought to do. Especially， he is also helpful, and he often helps other students. I think he can do better in the task.
Yours sincerely
Millie
【详解】本作文是一封邀请函。要把提示所列的5条内容都讲述到作文中去，注意多使用衔接词，连接上下文，转折类的，承上启下的，还要注意时态和人称的变化，以及单复数的变化。对于拿不准的句子，多使用简单句。
6．Mr. Wu is my math teacher. He is tall and outgoing. He likes sports very much.
Mr. Wu is a kind teacher. When I was in Grade One, my math was poor and I couldn’t work out the problems. He helped me with it and told me the good ways to learn math. He regarded me as his own child. Now my math is better and I often get good grades. I really thank him for his kind help.
No matter where I go, I will remember I have an excellent teacher.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，主要介绍一位令你难忘的人，用一般现在时简要描述人物的外貌和性格特点；用一般过去时简要描述对你的关怀与帮助。根据要求可知除了描述人物的外貌及性格特征还要介绍一件过去的事情以表示自己对这个人的难忘。
写作亮点：这篇短文内容全面，语句通顺。在短文中时态应用灵活准确。短文中用到了比较复杂的复合句，是这篇短文的亮点，如：When I was in Grade One, my math was poor and I couldn’t work out the problems. No matter where I go, I will remember I have an excellent teacher.
考点：话题作文。
7．例文
Chinese Red
In China, red is a traditional colour that can be found almost everywhere. It means a lot to every Chinese.
It is a symbol of good luck and happiness. We can see red on some big days, such as the Spring Festival or wedding days. To express our great joy and wishes, we often put up red lanterns, give hongbao or prepare other red items.
Chinese red also stands for hard work and success. It is chosen as the colour of Chinese national flag, reminding us of how Chinese people fought for our country before. Today more of us take red tours and sing red songs, which fill us with pride and strength to work harder.
In conclusion, Chinese red plays a significant role in our traditional culture.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，主要是描写红色在中国传统文化中的寓意以及象征等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．My Favourite Invention
Among all the modern inventions,the laptop is my favourite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. The laptop is light and small. It is easy to carry. With a laptop,we can work,study and entertain everywhere. The laptop can get to the Internet outside,which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using the laptop,I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place. I think in the future,everybody will have his or her own laptop.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要记叙文格式写。在写作时，开头是介绍我最喜欢的一种发明是笔记本电脑；接下来介绍原因；最后表示我的看法，将来每个人都会有自己的笔记本电脑。
2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述我最喜欢笔记本的理由；时态主要采用一般现在时介绍笔记本电脑的优点；用一般将来时表示将来每个人将会有自己的笔记本电脑。文中分析理由细致，条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：get to；enable sb to do sth；keep in touch with；in the future。
句型：句型It is+形容词+to do sth；I think后面接的宾语从句；which引导的定语从句。
9．例文
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck．
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍红色所代表的意义；
第三步，介绍红色的应用；
第四步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be popular with受欢迎
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.（such…that引导结果状语从句）
②I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.（宾语从句）
10．例文：
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
As we all know, China Red is one of the most popular colours in China, and it is deeply loved by people of all ages. The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. What’s more, it can bring people good luck. When the Spring Festival is coming, China Red will come into your eyes whenever and wherever you are. When you attend someone’s wedding, what impresses you most is the China Red. On these occasions, China Red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. The China Red has deeply affected every Chinese. It is not only a colour but also a kind of Chinese spirit and culture.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助你的英国朋友Tony，了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明很高兴收到对方来信，然后回信告诉他关于“中国红”的事情；
第二步，从地位、含义、使用场所及表达方式和影响四个方面来介绍“中国红”；
第三步，结语已给出，希望回信能对他有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for代表
②on these occasions在这些场合
③put into把……放进
④be used to do习惯于
[高分句型]
①The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. （that引导表语从句）
②On these occasions, China red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
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