Unit 2 Keeping Healthy 写作 专练（含解析）仁爱科普版英语八年级上册

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仁爱科普版 英语八年级上册 Unit 2 Keeping Healthy 写作 专练
1．下面是Ann的锻炼计划，请根据图片和时间提示，写一篇60词左右的短文，注意要有一定的感想。
Time Activity
8: 30-9: 30 Wednesday morning
4: 00-5: 30 Friday afternoon
1: 00-2: 30 Saturday afternoon
tomorrow morning
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2．健康的生活习惯会使人受益终身。上周,学校针对同学们的运动和睡眠习惯进行了问卷调查，下图是相关统计结果。请简要说明调查结果，并谈谈你的健康生活习惯。
要求不少于60词。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Healthy living habits benefit people a lot in their daily life. Last week, we asked our students about their living habits. Here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．初中生活短暂又美好。转眼间，同学们已经度过了一年的初中生活。这一年中，同学们都有许多收获和变化。上周，你班同学对全体初二学生做了一个调查，询问同学们这一年里最大的变化是什么，下图是调查结果。请根据调查结果，写一篇70词左右的短文并发表你对该调查所呈现结果的看法 (至少两点) 和建议 (至少两点)。
要求：
1. 短文应包含图中所提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 适当使用比较级和最高级；
3. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；
4. 词数：60-80词左右；
5. 书写工整，格式规范；
6. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名字。
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4．教育部要求学生在校体育运动不少于1个小时，但在校外，中学生普遍缺少运动或不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1. 缺少运动或不运动的原因；
2. 缺少运动或不运动对学生的影响；
3. 针对此现象提出合理化的建议。
要求：
1. 词数：80 左右，开头和结尾已给，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实校名或人名。
Many students are short of exercise in their spare time.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, students should do more exercise in their spare time. The more exercise they do, the healthier they will be.
5．初三的学习生活紧张而忙碌, 拥有健康的身体和心理才是学业的前提和保证。请以“How to be a healthy student”为题写一篇作文, 谈谈初中生如何保持身体和心理健康。要求包含以下要点：
身体健康 1.健康饮食...
2.睡眠充足...
3.多做运动...
心理健康 1.自我放松, 和父母沟通...
2.劳逸结合（看电影, 听音乐, 去观光...）
3.你的看法...
注意: 1.词数80-100之间; 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
How to be a healthy student
As we all know, we need healthy mind and body to help us study well. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．十，一百，一千，一万……即使有再多的零，没有了一，一切都归零。在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位等也都失去了意义。请以“Ways to keep healthy”为题，参照下图的信息，用英语写一篇文章。
要求：1. 书写清晰、字迹工整、行文流畅、语句通顺；
2. 词数：70-80词左右。
Ways to keep healthy
As far as we know it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．某中学生英语网站正在举办以How to keep healthy为题的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。要点如下：
1.多吃新鲜果蔬；
2.坚持体育锻炼；
3.注意劳逸结合；
4.……
注意：1.词数80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
How to keep healthy
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8．假如你叫李华，你班下周要开一个主题班会，就“周末生活进行讨论”，谈谈作为学生如何快乐、健康地度过周末。请根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈谈你自己的看法。
提示：
（1）What do you do on weekends
（如：帮助父母做家务；做志愿者工作，帮助孩子们学英语等；锻炼身体等）
（2）Why do you do these things
要求：
（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名、人名；
（3）词数80个左右。
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9．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A Change about My bad Habits”.（请以“改变我的坏习惯”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Suggest questions:
1. What bad habits did you have
2. Why were they bad (Give at least two reasons)
3. How are your habits now
A Change about My bad Habits
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10．假设你是李华，你的好友Sally最近的体重一直在增加并且经常感到疲劳，她非常苦恼。请根据以下提示给她写一封信。
提示：
1. What’s your advice about the food
2. What kind of exercise does she need
要求：
1. 须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 信中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数不少于 70 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sally,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．假如你是郭燕，你的新笔友Sandy想了解你的个人情况，请你根据表格中的信息，用英语给Sandy写一封信，告诉她你的一些信息，信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
姓 名 郭 燕
年 龄 13
学校班级 第五中学七年级一班
上学方式 乘坐公共汽车
课 程 上午4节课，下午3节课
最喜欢的课程及原因 历史；能从过去的事情中学到很多
喜欢的课外活动 跑步
要求：
1. 根据上述所给提示；
2. 注意语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整；
3. 字数70字左右，开头已经给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Sandy,
Thank you for your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Guo Yan
参考答案：
1．例文
Ann likes sports. She does exercise in the gym for one hour on Wednesday morning. On Friday afternoon, she often goes swimming from 4: 00 to 5: 30. She goes hiking from 1: 00 to 2: 30 on Saturday afternoon. Tomorrow morning, she is going to fly a kite in the park. She thinks that it’s good for our health to do much exercise.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据图片和时间提示，写一篇短文介绍Ann的锻炼计划，属于看图作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主，以一般将来时为辅展开叙述。写作时紧紧抓住图片透露的信息和对应的时间提示，写出Ann不同时间的锻炼活动，最后简要写一下她的锻炼感受。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
2．参考例文：
Healthy living habits benefit people a lot in their daily life. Last week, we asked our students about their living habits. Here are the results.
For exercise, there are 70 percent of stuedents who do exercise one to three times a week. About 30 percent of students do exercise every day. Then we see that about 85 percent of students sleep less than 8 hours every day, and others sleep more than 8 hours every day.
For me, I do exercise for two hours every day, such as running or playing volleyball. I think that doing exercise is good for our health. Also, I sleep about 8 hours every day because enough sleep can give me energy. With these good habits, I have a better understanding of the importance of health.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文。要求根据图中的调查结果来描述同学们的运动和睡眠习惯，并结合自身情况，谈谈自己的健康生活习惯。
2.写作指导：本文用第一、三人称来书写，时态主要以一般现在时为主。首段已给出，第二段主要就图中的调查结果展开描写；第三段根据自身情况谈谈自己的健康生活习惯。写作中可使用一些连词、短语和常用句式给文章增添色彩，注意要保证要点齐全，语句通顺，逻辑合理。
3．例文
How time flies! We have spent a year of junior high school life. This year, we had a lot of gains and changes. Last week, our class made a survey on all the students in grade eight about their biggest changes. Here are the results.
55% of the students have improved their study and studied harder than last year. 30% of the students are becoming more outgoing and friendly. 15% of the students do more physical exercise than before and become taller and healthier.
I think it is important for us to study well, as well as we will take the entrance examination in another year. We should spend more time on studying. Good health is the foundation of learning. We also need to pay more attention to our own health at the same time.
I hope that all of us will make more progress in the coming year and live a more meaningful life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态综合使用“现在完成时”，“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“现在进行时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要求”中“适当使用比较级和最高级”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出初中一年，同学们收获颇丰，并为此做了调查；
第二步，具体介绍调查的结果；
第三步，就调查结果发表自己的看法和建议，并提出祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②made a survey做调查
③pay more attention to更多地关注
④at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①I think it is important for us to study well, as well as we will take the entrance examination in another year. (省略that的宾语从句，It固定句型)
②15% of the students do more physical exercise than before and become taller and healthier. (运用形容词比较级表达变化)
4．例文
Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. On the one hand, they have too much homework to do after school, on the other hand, they probably have so many after-school classes such as playing the piano. So there is no time for them to do exercise.
Less exercise is harmful to students. Even though they are too busy with their schoolwork, they still need to play sports to make their bodies strong. I think they had better exercise in their daily life. First, they can take a walk after dinner on weekdays. After all, it’s bad for them to do homework at once after dinner. Second, they can go swimming on weekends. Swimming is a very good sport.
All in all, students should do more exercise in their spare time. The more exercise they do, the healthier they will be.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述学生缺乏运动的原因和影响，并提出改善的建议。
2. 写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主讲述学生缺乏运动的原因以及对学生的影响，针对问题提出改善的建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
5．例文：
How to be a healthy student
As we all know, we need healthy mind and body to help us study well. But do you know how to keep healthy
Physical health. I think first of all, we should eat healthily. Breakfast is necessary because it can give me energy. I also have healthy food. I often eat more fruits and vegetables, but less junk food. Secondly, we get enough sleep. Don’t stay up late, because I think staying up late is harmful to my health. If we can’t sleep well, we may have a headache. Third, we should do more exercise. Such as playing basketball and football after school or on weekends. We should exercise at least four times a week.
In terms of mental health, I think we should first relax ourselves and communicate with our parents in time if there are problems. Second, we should combine work and rest. For example, watching movies, listening to music and sightseeing are good ways to relax. I think drinking more and chatting with classmates and teachers can also make us feel relaxed.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“How to be a healthy student”为题写一篇作文，谈谈初中生如何保持身体和心理健康，要求包括健康饮食、睡眠充足、多做运动、自我放松、劳逸结合以及你的看法等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍初中生如何保持身体和心理健康时，应详细具体，简单明了，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
6．例文
Ways to keep healthy
As far as we know it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy.
Firstly, we must eat healthy food. We must also eat the right kinds of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food. Secondly, it’s necessary for us to do exercise. It helps us be active and strong. Thirdly, never stay up late. If we can’t get enough sleep, the whole body will work slowly. Lastly, learning to reduce pressure is also important to our health. I find it relaxing to listen to some soft music when I feel bad. Follow the ways, and you will be healthy!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“保持健康的方法”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段从健康饮食，锻炼，保证足够水满以及减少压力等方面进行描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．例文：
How to keep healthy
Nowadays, more and more people's life is becoming better and better. And we pay more attention to keeping healthy. Here is some advice on how to keep healthy.
Firstly, we should eat a balanced diet. This means eating different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables. Besides, we shouldn't eat much junk food. It is bad for our health. Secondly, we must exercise every day. Exercise makes us strong and helps us relax. Thirdly, we must try to sleep early at night and get up early in the morning. This point is especially important for the students. Sometimes we should do some things to relax.
To sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy life.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于话题作文，主要是以“How to keep healthy”为主题展开描写，内容按照题目中的提示信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍保持健康的方法，包括运动、饮食以及睡眠等方面。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
8．例文：
I have lots of things to do on weekends.
Sometimes I help my parents with the housework. Because I think they are tired after working for a week. I also volunteer to help the children to learn English and I love English very much. In my opinion, I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time. Besides, I take exercise so that I can keep healthy and study better. Of course, when I am tired, I would like to sit on the sofa and read books. It can make me feel relaxed. I do many other interesting things on weekends, too.
In a word, we should do something to live happily and healthily on weekends.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是话题作文。主要是谈论如何快乐、健康地度过周末。包括周末在家做什么、为什么要做这些事情。可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍周末有很多事情可以做；第二段叙述具体的周末活动有哪些以及为什么要做这些事情；最后一段进行总结。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．范文：
A Change about My bad Habits
In the past, I have two bad habits. One is to play too many computer games. The other is to eat unhealthily.
When I played too many computer games, I always forgot to finish my homework which led to my bad marks in the school. My parents were worried about me. And sometimes I stayed out to play computer games which caused me to feel sleepy in class. Therefore, I didn’t do well in the subjects. As for the other bad habit, I used to eat fast food which made me fat. And I didn’t like eating vegetables and fruits. That couldn’t help me digest.
But now, I don’t play computer games any more. I spend my time on study. And I also eat healthily and do more exercise. I often eat green vegetables and many fruits. I think I will keep away from the two bad habits forever.
【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“改变我的坏习惯”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文；要求根据包含所有提示。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：阐述自己的坏习惯有哪些；第二段：阐述为什么这些习惯是不好的；第三段：阐述现在这些习惯如何了。
10．例文
Dear Sally,
I’m sorry to hear that you are getting fat and you always feel tired. I think you should go to the doctor for some advice first. Try to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eat less junk food. It’s good for you to take enough exercise, too. You can run in the morning, play basketball after school or take a walk after dinner. Finally, make sure you have at least eight hours’ sleep every night. If you keep on doing, I’m sure you will be thin. I hope you will get well soon and become a healthy girl.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封书信，主要是给朋友提一些建议，题干中给出了两个相关问题，写作时不要遗漏要点，也可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称用第二人称。文章首先要对朋友的困境表示同情，之后从食物和锻炼等方面给朋友提供建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语，使文章层次清晰，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。
11．Possible version:
Dear Sandy,
Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My name is Guo Yan. I am 13 years old. I am in Class One, Grade Seven in No 5 Middle
School. I usually go to school by bus. I have seven classes every weekday. In the morning I have four classes, in the afternoon I have three classes. My favorite subject is history. I think I can learn a lot from the past. In my spare time I like running.
What about your school life Please write to me and tell me something about it.
Yours,
Guo Yan
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按信件的格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头，然后介绍自己的个人情况以及上学方式和最喜欢的课程及原因等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍自己的个人情况以及上学方式和最喜欢的课程及原因时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强。
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