Unit 3 Our Hobbies 写作专练（含解析）仁爱科普版英语八年级上册

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仁爱科普版 英语八年级上册 Unit 3 Our Hobbies 写作专练
1．请根据下面图表信息写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍你的好朋友Frank及他的家庭成员的喜好。
Name Food Favorite sport Favorite subject
Mike (father)
Helen (mother)
Grace (daughter)
Frank (son)
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2．兴趣爱好给人带来幸福快乐，养宠物也是一种爱好。请根据图片，谈谈你和宠物Henry的日常生活。
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3．
寓言故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过乌鸦喝水这个寓言故事。请你根据右图提示，以“The Crow and the Pitcher”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，在学校广播站“英语之声”栏目播出。
要求：
1．语句通顺，没有语法错误；
2．包含图片全部要点；
3．从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥；
4．80词左右。
参考词汇： 乌鸦 crow；口渴的 thirsty；鹅卵石pebble；罐子 pitcher
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4．你喜欢动画片吗 你最喜欢的卡通人物是谁 请用英语写一篇70词左右的短文, 向大家介绍一下。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考问题: Who is your favourite cartoon character What does he/she look like What does he/she like What does he/she like to eat What does he/she like to do What do you like best about him/her
I like cartoons very much.
5．假设你有一位好朋友Amy，请按照下列表格信息，用英语给全班同学做一个介绍。
基本情况 女生，13岁，住在崇左
学校 在七年级一班，教室在一楼，干净明亮
学习情况 学习努力，最喜欢的学科是历史
爱好 喜欢听音乐，擅长画画
穿着 喜欢穿粉色或蓝色衣服，看起来很漂亮
生活 方式喜欢吃水果和蔬菜，喜欢体育运动
要求：
1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2、必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3、词数：60词左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）；
4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My Good Friend
This is my good friend Amy.
6．以My favourite outdoor activity为题，写一篇短文，字数在70词左右。
1. What outdoor activity are you interested in
2. Why are you interested in it ( at least two reasons ).
……
My favourite outdoor activity
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7．报社以“My best friend”为题，举行征文活动。请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文：
姓名 Tom
基本情况 1.来自泰州，八年级学生，擅长英语，对生物感兴趣； 2.为人友善、大方、幽默……（发挥至少两句）
爱好 1.爱旅游，梦想能环游世界……（发挥至少一句） 2.喜欢DIY, 喜欢制作出新奇的东西，闲暇时进行DIY课程的学习； 3.爱阅读，酷爱野生动物的书，书中了解到狼的能力和习性，能不停奔跑很长时间，团队合作猎食，但生存领域越来越少，人们认为狼危险而捕杀它们，觉得难过。
其他 1.富有爱心，关心动物，认为应立刻行动帮助危险中的动物，禁伐树木，制定法律，建自然保护区…… 2.为了多了解鸟儿，加入观鸟协会，积极参加各种活动保护鸟儿。
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100 词左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
My best friend
My best friend is Tom, Now, let me introduce him to you.
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That’s all. Thank you very much!
8．21世纪学生英语报发起以兴趣爱好为主题的征稿活动, 假设你是 Li Lei, 请你填写问卷调查, 并根据问卷内容, 用英文写一篇短文, 向该报纸投稿.
Questionnaire about Hobbies 1. What are you interested in □ cartoons □space □ traveling □ other interests :_____________ 2. How long have you been interested in it □ several months □ one year □ two years □ more than two years 3. What did you do to develop your hobby _________________________________________________________________________________ 4. What advantages can your hobby bring to you Give at least one example. ________________________________________________________________________________
要求(1)必须涵盖以上要点, 并适当发挥 ;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名校名等 ;
(3)字数: 约100词. ( 开头已给出, 不计入总词数 )
I’ m Li Lei, a middle school student. I would like to share what I like to do in my spare time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．一位好朋友是我们一生的财富，会让我们受益终生，请你以“My best friend and I”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What do you have in common and how are you different from each other
2. What did you do together last weekend
3. What are your favorite TV shows What do you think of them
要求：
1. 语法正确，语句通顺，可以适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3. 词数不少于80。
My best friend and I
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10．阳光中学八年级的英语俱乐部正在招收成员，假如你是John，你想推荐好朋友Tommy加入俱乐部，请用英语写一封推荐信给俱乐部的负责人Mr. Green简单介绍 Tommy。
要点如下∶
性格 1. 慷慨大方，乐意分享
2. 乐于助人 (生活和学习方面)
3. 幽默可爱 (举例说明)
爱好 读书、旅行、DIY…… (可适当举例发挥)
要求：
1. 必须包括上述要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右 (开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
Dear Mr. Wu,
I would like to recommend Tommy to join our English Club.
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I am looking forward to seeing Tommy in our club. Thank you. Best wishes.
John
11．假如你是李华，学校英语周报需开设“人与自然”专栏，现面向全校招募专栏记者。请你根据提示，用英语写一封申请信。
个人信息 阳光中学，八年级学生
性格 乐于助人……
爱好 喜爱观鸟……
自然现状 人们砍伐树木……
加入目的 ……
若能加入 联系方式87766123或Lihua@
要求：
(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
(3)词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I would like to be a reporter of the special column “Human and Nature”.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文
I have a best friend, and his name is Frank. Let me introduce his family and their habits.
His father is Mike. He likes eating carrots, and doesn’t like eggs. Football is his favorite sport. His mother is Helen. She likes eating ice cream best, but she doesn’t like milk. Table Tennis is her favorite sport. He has a sister. His sister Grace likes oranges, but she doesn’t pears. Basketball is her favorite sport. Geography is her favorite subject. Frank likes rice best, but he doesn’t like tomatoes. Volleyball is his favorite sport. He likes maths best.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片内容介绍好朋友Frank及他家人的喜好。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。根据图片内容介绍他的家人信息，以及他家人的饮食习惯，喜欢的运动以及学科。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
2．One possible version:
I have a pet dog. I call it Henry. It is brown and small, but it is very clever. It likes playing games with me. It also enjoys watching TV with my mother on the sofa. After supper, we often go out for a walk. At that time, it is very active. I think he must like walking outside very much. I often help it take a bath, so it is very clean. It sleeps in my room and wakes me up every day. It is my best friend and I love it very much.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片内容以及自己的想象介绍你和宠物Henry的日常生活。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时可以介绍宠物的外貌、性格以及它喜欢做的事情，同时可以介绍你是怎么和它相处的。围绕主题展开合理想象即可，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
3．例文：
The Crow and the Pitcher
It was a hot day. A crow felt so thirsty that he looked for water everywhere. Finally, he found a pitcher. But there wasn’t much water in it. His beak couldn’t reach it. He was very distressed.
When he wanted to give up, he came up with an idea. He picked up a small stone and dropped it into the pitcher. Then he took another and dropped it in. Gradually, the water rose and he was able to drink the water.
How clever the crow was!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文。要为我们根据右图提示，以“The Crow and the Pitcher”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主。写作要包括故事的时间、人物、背景、经过及结果；写作时，首先简单介绍天气条件，提出乌鸦口渴想找水喝；其次描述乌鸦找到水后遇到的困难；最后说明乌鸦用怎样的方法喝到了水。在写故事时，可适当发挥。
4．例文
I like cartoons very much. I have been watching them since I was young. My favourite cartoon character is Winnie the Poor. Winnie is a very cute yellow bear. He looks really funny. He has a big belly, and he wears a small red shirt all the time. He walks very slowly, like a gentleman. Winnie is also very friendly and helpful. This brings him lots of friends, such as the tiger, the piglet and so on. Winnie's favourite food is honey. He likes it so much that once he was attacked by bees. Poor Winnie! I love Winnie.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示要点，从外貌、兴趣、爱好等方面介绍一个自己最喜欢的卡通人物，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，辅以第一人称；时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
5．One possible version:
This is my good friend Amy. She is thirteen years old. She comes from Chongzuo. She is in Class One, Grade Seven. Her classroom is on the ground floor. It’s clean and bright. She works hard. Her favorite subject is history. She likes listening to music and she is good at drawing. She likes to wear pink or blue clothes. She looks beautiful in pink or blue. She likes to eat fruit and vegetables. She loves sports.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格中的提示内容，从姓名、性别、家庭住址、学习情况、爱好、穿着等方面写一篇英语短文，向全班同学介绍你的好朋友Amy；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
6．例文
My favourite outdoor activity
I like playing football, cycling and traveling, but traveling is my favourite outdoor activity.
I travel twice a year with my parents. I have visited many places of interest, such as Disney, Yu Garden, the Great Wall and so on. I think traveling can open a new world for me, I can learn a lot of local culture and history. I can also enjoy much delicious food. Do you like it
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我最喜欢的户外活动”为题，写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己喜欢旅行的原因。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．例文
My best friend
My best friend is Tom. Now, let me introduce him to you.
He is from Taizhou. He is in Grade 8. He is good at English and interested in biology. He is friendly, generous and humorous. Last term, Tom used his pocket money to donate 100 face masks to an epidemic area in Wuhan. We are proud of him.
He loves traveling and dreams of traveling around the world. He was a great admirer of Jules Verne and planned to write a travel novel. He loves DIY, and he likes to create new things. He takes DIY courses in his spare time. He also likes reading books, especially about wildlife. From books he learns the abilities and habits of wolves. They can run for long periods of time and hunt in teams. However, they have less and less territory to live in, because people think wolves are dangerous and kill them. He feels bad about it.
In addition, Tom is very concerned about animals. He believes that immediate action should be taken to help animals in danger, such as banning trees, making laws and establishing nature reserves. In order to know more about birds, he joined the bird-watching society and took an active part in various activities to protect birds.
That’s all. Thank you very much!
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My best friend”为题介绍朋友的情况，属于话题作文。写作前，应仔细审题，确定文章的主题、时态和人称；写作时应紧承开头并围绕表格信息展开叙述，必要时发挥想象力，补充具体细节，使文章内容更加丰富、充实。
2. 写作指导：本文介绍的是朋友的情况，需以第三人称、一般现在时为主，辅以一般过去时来叙述，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其注意不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐句翻译。应该从句子的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。句子结构可以简单句为主，如主谓宾或主系表结构，穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他复杂结构，如非谓语动词等，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
8．例文:
I’ m Li Lei, a middle school student. I would like to share what I like to do in my spare time.
I like sports a lot. I have been interested in sports since I was ten years old. I enjoyed watching football and basketball games with my father on TV. I played basketball with my friends on the weekend in the park near my house. I love collecting balls and buying sports clothes. I think it is a good way to relax by doing sports. It’s healthy to my body and mind. It’s great fun spending time with my family and friends and playing together. Once I failed the math exam, I felt very upset. My friend Jack and Alan comforted me and asked me to play basketball with them. We didn’t care about the scores, just playing for fun. It made me feel relaxed at last.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述自己的兴趣爱好，讲述兴趣的培养，并举例说明给自己带来的好处。
2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主，讲述自己兴趣爱好的培养，举例说明给自己带来的好处，叙述完整，条理清晰。
9．例文
My best friend and I
My best friend is Li Ying. We are similar to each other. Both of us are tall and have long straight hair. But we also have something different. She is talented in music, and she can sing all kinds of songs. She is more outgoing, so she has more friends. I am good at all my schoolwork and I’m more serious and hard-working. She took me to the music club last weekend. I like comedies best because they make me happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“My best friend and I”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍自己和朋友之间的相似和差异，上周末一起做了什么，最喜欢的电视节目是什么以及你觉得它们怎么样。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．例文：
Dear Mr. Wu,
I would like to recommend Tommy to join our English Club.
Tommy is a generous boy. He is always willing to share something with others. He also likes helping us in the life and study. We all like him because he is humorous and lovely. He often tells funny jokes to us and makes us laugh. He is an active boy, too. He likes reading, traveling, DIY and all kinds of sports, such as basketball, volleyball, soccer and so on. Of course, he is good at English. He speaks it really well.
I am looking forward to seeing Tommy in our club. Thank you. Best wishes.
John
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“举例说明和省略号部分”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山表明要推荐Tommy加入英语俱乐部；
第二步，具体介绍Tommy的性格，爱好，人品等；
第三步，书写结语，希望对方能允许Jimmy加入俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
① be willing to do愿意做某事
② tell funny jokes to sb.给某人讲有趣的笑话
③ such as例如
④ be good at擅长于
[高分句型]
① We all like him because he is humorous and lovely. (原因状语从句)
② He often tells funny jokes to us and makes us laugh. (使用使役动词)
11．one possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I would like to be a reporter of the special column “Human and Nature”.
First, let me introduce myself to you. I am a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. I am hardworking and helpful. I am ready to help people as well as animals.
I have a lot of hobbies, and I like going birdwatching best. I am very interested in Biology. I enjoy the nature and the animals. Sadly, many animals have nowhere to live because people cut down lots of trees.
I think it is important for me to do something to change the situation. I want to call on more people to protect nature and wild animals. I can take part in activities from 8 a.m. to 10 a.m. at weekends. You can call me at 87766123 or email me at Lihua@.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据表格提示写一封申请信。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称。写作时不要遗漏要点，围绕主题，确保无单词语法错误，可适当的使用一些短语句型使文章更顺畅。
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