Unit 3 Teenage problems 写作专练（含解析）牛津译林版英语九年级上册

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牛津译林版 英语九年级上册 Unit 3 Teenage problems 写作专练
1．书面表达。随着互联网的发展，智能手机(smartphone)已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇短文。
好处 聊天、网购……
现象
弊端 影响家人、朋友的关系；容易引发交通事故；对身心有害，不利于学习和工作
观点 正确使用手机……(你的两个观点)
要求：1.词数在90左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2.条理清晰，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smartphones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.
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2．
这是小华家里发生的一幕, 请根据你对这幅图画的理解, 写一篇100词左右的英语短文.
内容包括: 1. 描述漫画内容, 可以进行适当发挥;2. 表达你的看法。
写作要求: 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
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3．下面这幅漫画呈现了国庆期间小明外出度假时在公路上的情景。请根据你对漫画的理解，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
内容包括: 1.描述漫画的内容 2.简要陈述你的看法
注意：可以进行适当的想象， 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息
（参考词汇：traffic jam 交通阻塞）
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4．近年来，中学生的健康问题逐渐引起人们的关注。为呼吁中学生关注自身健康，你校将开展以“Care for Health”为题的英文征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下内容要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加比赛。
提示：(1) Why is health important (2) How do you keep healthy (3) What are your plans
注意：(1)短文必须包括提示中的要点；(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Care for Health
As we all know that health is the most important thing for us.
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5．Write a passage in at least 80 words on the topic “Here’s a New Start”. (请以“这是一个新的开始”为题，写一篇不少于80个词的作文，标点符号不占格。)
提示：岁月的长河中，我们所做的每件事情，都如同随手洒下的种子，在时光的滋润下，那些种子慢慢的生根、发芽、抽枝、开花，最终结出属于自己的果实。人的生命只有一次，但生活可以每天不同。你有了什么新的开始呢？你为此做了什么准备呢？打算怎么努力或改变呢？请结合自身经历，谈谈你的感受。
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)
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6．春节就要来了，亲朋聚餐，你是否懂得一些基本的餐桌礼仪呢？看图“TheTable Manners”为题，写一段连贯的话，说说如何做一个有教养的好孩吧。
要求：1. 参考提示语，要有适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于80词。
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7．随着中国的发展，我们的生活发生了日新月异的变化。请你结合生活实际，重点选择2—3个方面谈谈具体的变化，以及你对这些变化的看法。
提示词语: living condition, education, transport, entertainment, satisfying
提示问题
* What changes are there in our life
* What do you think of these changes
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8．习近平主席提出“绿水青山就是金山银山”，这是中国生态文明建设的目标，保护环境，从我做起，结合自己的生活实际，谈谈保护环境的具体做法及这样做的目的。
写作要求：1. 语言表达准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，词数：80—100词。
2. 书写工整、规范，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Build a Beautiful China
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9．回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多深刻的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class？”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。
提示：
1. Listen to the teacher.
2. Take part in activities.
3. Be confident in ourselves.
要求：
1. 文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
3. 词数：60～80个。
参考词汇：take notes，work in groups with …，not be afraid of …
题目：What should we do in English class
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10．假如你是九年级学生邹杨，寒假期间每天观看北京冬奥会比赛。你给在国外的笔友Mike写一封信，表达兴奋的心情。并谈谈九年级学生如何坚持锻炼。并邀请他有时间来中国参加冰雪运动。
写作要点：
1. 表达观看冬奥会的兴奋心情，为所有中国运动员感到骄傲。
2. 介绍自己寒假期间的安排
(1) 制定每天的学习计划，并按时完成。
(2) 利用休息的时间观看奥运比赛，为运动员加油。
3. 谈谈作为九年级学生该如何坚持锻炼，保证身体健康。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
Dear Mike,
I am very happy to write to you.
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Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Zou Yang
11．今天，学校“英语节”总结交流会上，你的同学李华做了发言，分享了经验。请你写一则英文日记，记录这特别的分享。日记需包括以下要点：
1. 分享者：李华，学校英语演讲比赛一等奖获得者；
2. 分享内容：现场演讲、分享演讲技巧；分享学英语的方法等；
3. 你的收获和感受。
注意：
1. 词数80~120个左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Thursday, March 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we listened to a wonderful speech. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．疫情得到控制后，同学们都回到了校园。为时刻提醒大家不能放松对病毒的警惕，学校征集有关防护措施的小贴士，准备张贴在校园的公共场合。请你用英语写两条建议，每条字数不超过10个。
（1）________
（2）________
参考答案：
1．例文
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smartphones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. We can use samrtphones to chat online, go shopping, watch news and play mobile games and so on.
However, every coin has two sides. Smartphones have some bad effects on people. Some family members play with their smartphones while eating with families instead of talking with them. It has effects on the relationship between them. Some people look at their smartphones while walking even riding or driving. It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents. Some children want to play with smartphones before sleeping. It’s bad for their health and their study.
In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting online by phones. Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life. But we should make good use of them and to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers. We should pay more attention on our study instead of phones. At the same time, we should go out to exercise and enjoy more sunshine.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中手机的好处，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，并介绍使用手机的好处；
第二步，介绍“低头族”现象，以及手机带来的弊端；
第三步，介绍自己对正确使用手机的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①here and there到处
②and so on等等
③have effects on...对……有影响
④instead of替代
⑤be bad for对……有害
⑥make good use of好好利用
⑦pay attention to注意，留心
⑧at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①Some family members play with their smartphones while eating with families instead of talking with them.（while引导状语从句）
2．例文
Xiaohua is cleaning the house ,but his parents ask him not to do that.They think the only thing he need do is to study well.Some parents love their children too much and don't let them work at home.On one hand,they think that their children are too busy with their studies and expect them to do well in their lessons only.On the other hand,they think their children don't know how to do the housework.I don't think so.It is good for children to do some housework.Firstly,to do some housework can make children independent.They can't depend on others all their life.So they should learn to do some housework.Secondly,to do some housework can keep them healthy and strong,some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise.Doing housework isn't a big deal,but it is the attitude to life.
【详解】1.题干解读：根据图片上小华家里发生的一幕，小华在做家务，父母不让他做，让他好好学习就行，针对这一现象，谈谈自己的看法。
2.例文点评：例文根据图片内容孩子在家是否应该做家务这个主题阐述自己的观点，条理清晰，内容丰富，语法正确，是一篇优秀的例文。
3.高分亮点：
短语：ask sb. not to do sth.要求某人不要做某事，do well in在……做得好；depend on依赖，keep sb.+adj. 使某人保持某种状态
句型：that引导的宾语从句，疑问词+不定式，it's+adj.+for sb. do sth.做某事对某人来说是怎样的
3．例文：
In the picture, there are a great number of cars on the road. A man is sitting in a car with an unhappy expression. On the top of the picture, there are a lot of cloud shaped bubbles. Different bubbles have different contents, such as a bike, a running woman, and a flying car.
In fact, it is a picture of traffic jam. With the development of science and technology, more and more cars appear on the road. The phenomenon of traffic jam can be seen everywhere, especially during rush hours. The progress of science and technology not only make our life convenient, but also brings us corresponding troubles.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据对这篇漫画的理解写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为两段式：第一段描述漫画的内容；第二段发表自己的看法，阐述当今交通拥堵这一现象和问题。写作时注意保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
4．例文
Care for Health
As we all know that health is the most important thing for us. Health has great influence on our daily life and good health makes us happy. In order to keep healthy, we should pay attention to the followings.
First of all, we should have a healthy body. We should have a balanced diet. We should drink more milk and eat more eggs and vegetables. Also, we should have enough sleep and avoid staying up late. What’s more, taking exercise and listening to music are necessary. On the other hand, we should have good mind. We can read beautiful articles when we have free time. They can make our lives more colorful. We also make friends. At the weekend, we can go to the park to take the fresh air with our family.
I plan to do some exercise every day and have a balanced diet to keep healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍健康为什么很重要；
第二步，具体介绍如何保持身体健康；
第三步，最后介绍自己的计划。
[亮点词汇]
① in order to为了
② avoid doing sth避免做某事
③ plan to do sth.计划做某事
[高分句型]
① In order to keep healthy, we should pay attention to the followings.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② We can read beautiful articles when we have free time.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．例文：
Here’s a New Start
Last week, I was taking a walk along the road when I happened to see a man drawing a picture by the river. I was so impressed by that beautiful picture that I made up my mind to learn to draw.
After I discussed this with my parents, they were so supportive and they bought me the paper and brushes immediately. In order to improve my drawing skills, I have made some plans. First, I am going to watch some videos of masters’ painting so as to learn some skills and, most importantly, improve the sense of beauty. Second, I am going to take part in the school’s painting club where I can learn some basic painting skills.
I believe I can make a difference as long as I work hard.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以“Here’s a New Start”为题，根据提示中的问题写一篇不少于80词的英文作文，内容是关于你的新开始和你为这个新的开始所做的准备和努力。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作；首先先结合自身经历表述清楚你的新开始是什么，然后再介绍你为新开始所做的准备和努力，文章重点应放在后半部分的准备和努力上，最后再用一到两句话表明自己的决心作为文章的结尾；文章重点部分的写作可使用连接词（如First），这样使得文章层次清晰，逻辑连贯；最后写作完成时应保证文章内容完整、行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
6．例文
The Table Manners
The Spring Festival is coming. Our relatives and friends will get together to have big meals. Do you know any good table manners How to be a good child at table Firstly, we should respect the elders and let them eat first. Secondly, don’t use your chopsticks to knock at the bowls and plates on the table. Besides, it’s rude to talk and laugh loudly while eating. What’s more, you are supposed to share the delicious food with others. Don’t only care for your own feelings . Finally, You’d better not use a toothpick at the table. Maybe other persons will feel uncomfortable.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，讲述好的餐桌礼仪；
②时态：本文主体时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文写作要点已给出四条，写作时切记不要遗漏要点，最后要再补充一至二条。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山表明写作意图，即春节来临，亲戚和朋友将要聚在一起吃饭，如何在餐桌上做一个懂事的好孩子；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，分条介绍好的餐桌礼仪。
[亮点词汇]
①knock at敲……
②besides除此之外
③what’s more而且
④be supposed to应该
⑤care for关心
[高分句型]
①Secondly, don’t use your chopsticks to knock at the bowls and plates on the table.（祈使句的否定形式）
②Besides, it’s rude to talk and laugh loudly while eating.（it作形式主语，真正的主语为to talk and laugh loudly以及while引导的时间状语从句的省略形式）
7．例文：
With the development of the society, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. One big change is in the living condition. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.
As the Internet is developing so rapidly, the way of education keeps changing and new forms of education emerge surprisingly. Especially during the pandemic of corona virus, online education has become one of the most important ways of education throughout the world.
In short, changes in our life have brought us comfort and convenience. These changes are quite satisfying.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述生活中的具体变化，以及自己对这些变化的看法
2.写作指导：本文用第一和第三人称来写作，时态采用现在完成时为主，讲述生活中的具体变化，叙述完整，条理清晰。
8．例文：
Build a Beautiful China
Nowadays, our environment is getting worse and worse. To build a beautiful China, we must protect our environment. First, to save water and electricity, we should turn off showers, taps and lights in time when we don’t use them. Second, we’d better walk or ride a bike rather than drive a car when we go out. If we do so, the air will be fresher and fresher. Third, we should use both sides of paper and stop using disposable chopsticks or cups. So fewer trees will be cut down. Fourth, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping so that we can reduce pollution.
Let’s try our best to protect our environment. As long as we pull together, we will build a beautiful China and our Chinese Dream will come true!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求我们根据习近平主席提出“绿水青山就是金山银山”这个中国生态文明建设的目标，并结合自己的生活实际，谈谈保护环境的具体做法及这样做的目的。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时为主；要求我们根据要求，结合自己的生活实际，谈谈保护环境的具体做法，同时说明这样做的目的；写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高分短语和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
9．[例文]
What should we do in English class
In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. Try to answer questions in English.
We should take part in all kinds of activities, like reading, writing, having discussions and playing games. We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other.
It’s very important to be confident. Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, we can make much progress.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求根据所给要点以“What should we do in English class ”为题写一篇文章。要点不可遗漏，并且学生可适当进行拓展。
2.写作指导：本文写作时应用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。写作时注意思路清晰，上下文衔接自然，单词拼写、语法时态使用正确。
10．例文
Dear Mike,
I am very happy to write to you. I made a daily study plan and completed it on time. I used the rest time to watch the Olympic Games and cheer for the athletes. During the winter holiday, I watch the Beijing Winter Olympics every day. I am very excited and proud of all Chinese athletes. As a ninth grade student, I think we should fully realize the importance of exercise. Exercise can help you stay healthy and energetic. We can do sports for one or two hours every day to keep healthy, such as doing morning exercises, playing basketball, long-distance running and so on. I think it is very useful for us. More importantly, through physical exercise, we can become stronger and more confident than before. I also want to invite you to come to China to participate in winter sports when you have time.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Zou Yang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据写作要点进行写作。学生不要遗漏题目中的写作要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己寒假期间的计划；
第二步，表达观看北京冬奥会比赛的心情；
第三步，谈谈作为九年级学生该如何坚持锻炼。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of以……为傲
②the importance of……的重要性
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①As a ninth grade student, I think we should fully realize the importance of exercise.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I think it is very useful for us.（省略that的宾语从句）
③I also want to invite you to come to China to participate in winter sports when you have time.（when引导的时间状语从句）
11．例文：
Thursday, March 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we listened to a wonderful speech. There were twelve students in the contest. Li Hua won the first prize. She shared her speech skills and English learning experience with us. Here are some in her speech.
Before the speech, we should pick the topic and prepare for it. We should write down the outlines and organize what we are going to say. Take a deep breath to relax yourself and start the speech. She said making a speech in public made her confident and brought her great pleasure. She advised us to do a lot of reading and sing English songs. It’s good to listen carefully and take notes in class. I learn a lot from her speech. I am sure I will do better in English.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以日记形式记录学校“英语节”总结交流会，内容包括介绍一等奖获奖者；谈谈现场演讲及获奖者分享演讲技巧和学英语的方法，最后谈谈自己的收获和感受。
2.写作指导：本文用一般过去时和一般现在时写作，介绍演讲及获奖者用一般过去时，介绍获奖者的经验用一般现在时；书写要紧扣主题，分层介绍获奖者，获奖者分析的经验及自己的收获和感受。做到中心突出，内容完整连贯。
12．（1）Remember to wash hands very often.
（2）Keep the classroom windows open.
【详解】本文是其他类写作，要求用英语写两条怎样防护新冠疫情的建议，建议一般用祈使句，此处可建议： 记得经常洗手。 记得做某事remember to do sth.，固定短语；洗手wash hands，固定短语；经常very often，所以第一个建议是 Remember to wash hands very often。第二个建议可以是： 让教室的窗户开着。 保持……怎么样keep sth.+adj，固定搭配；教室窗户 the classroom windows ，窗户有很多，所以用名词复数；开着的open，所以第二个建议可以是： Keep the classroom windows open。
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