Unit 1 Know yourself 书面表达 专练（含解析）牛津译林版英语九年级上册

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牛津译林版 英语九年级上册 Unit 1 Know yourself 书面表达 专练
1．现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国而努力奋斗。请根据下列图示内容写一篇英语短文，谈谈以下几种职业是怎样做贡献的。作为学生，你又该怎么做？
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 短文必须包含图示内容要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
4. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now all the Chinese people are making a contribution to building a beautiful China.
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2．国家主席习近平在2020年新年贺词中提到“只争朝夕，不负韶华”，鼓励人们珍惜当下时光，勇敢追逐自己的梦想。下面是某中学对该校学生梦想的工作的调查统计结果。其中，想当医生的人数占29%，想经商的人数占33%。
请你用英语写一篇短文，简要说明图表内容，并且谈谈你梦想的工作是什么以及你将如何努力实现你的梦想。
要求:1.词数不少于80; 2.首句已给出，不计入总词数; 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
In order to encourage students to go after their dreams, a school did a survey among the students about their dream jobs in the future.
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3．书面表达。
为迎接中考，你常常复习功课到深夜。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇90词左右的日记。
注意：1 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2．文中不得出现真实姓名。
I often stay up late to go over my lessons．Last night_________
4．假设你叫李明，你们班级要选拔新班长，你想向班主任王老师推荐张航。请根据表格内容，写一封80词左右的推荐信给王老师。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
姓名 张航
特长 精通电脑，擅长演讲
性格、品质 自信、勤奋、谦虚、有条理、乐于助人
个人事迹 经常花很多时间组织课外活动，从不介意为班级做额外的工作，总是尽最大努力帮助同学，深受同学们欢迎。
Dear Mr Wang,
I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you can consider my recommendation.
5．中央电视台少儿英语栏目（CCTV English Channel for Children）正在招收一名小记者，请你根据下面的提示写一封求职信，推荐自己担任该栏目的小记者。
提示：
1．学习勤奋，乐于助人；
2．性格开朗，聪明自信，有很强的组织能力，从不忘记该做的事；
3．汉语和英语的口头表达能力很强，在众人面前讲话从不胆怯；
4．担任去年学校的慈善义演的节目主持人。
注意：
1．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to recommend myself as the news reporter of CCTV English Channel for Children. I'm sure I can
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Yours sincerely
6．今天的中国，是梦想接连实现的中国。每一位青少年更要敢于有梦，勇于追梦。作为中学生，请以 “My Dream”为题，根据以下提示与要求写一篇短文。
提示：l. What is your dream
2. Why do you have such a dream
3. What should you do to achieve your dream
要求: 1.紧扣主题，适当发挥，语言表达准确，语义通顺连贯；
2. 80词左右；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其相关信息，否则不予评分。
My Dream
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7．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
梦想能给我们带来无限的憧憬，让我们拥有无限的动力。某英文网站正在开展以"My dream job"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的职业梦想。你理想的工作是什么？为什么？为了它你是如何准备的？
提示词语：meaningful, useful, work hard, responsible
提示问题：What is your dream job
Why do you want to do it
What will you do to prepare for it
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8．4月16日，神舟十三号成功返回，中国航天人再创伟绩！科技的发达、社会的进步和文化的传播都离不开优秀的个体。请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，阐述你将来想做什么样的工作，想为祖国做出哪些贡献。
要求：1、涵盖以上内容，可适当发挥；2、逻辑清晰，语言通顺有条理；3、100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream
As the saying goes, “Great dreams make a bright future.” _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．年少正是追梦时，少年的梦是多姿多彩的。梦想是帆，引领着我们的人生之舟驶向金色的彼岸。请根据图示信息，以“My dream”为题谈谈你的梦想吧！
写作要求：
1. 行文连贯，结构完整，书写工整；
2. 短文只选择一个梦想进行描述即可；
3. 词数100左右；
4. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My dream
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10．假如你是一名初三学生张华，你要写一封推荐信给班主任Mr Wang，告诉他你想推荐Millie做班长。请根据下列信息，写好这封信。
她具备做这个职位的突出品质：
1. 她足够自信，能把任何事做好…（举例）。
2. 她也聪明，总是能想出好主意。…（举例）
3. 她有条理，…（举例）。
4. 她喜欢…（颜色），因为…（说明原因）。
5. 希望您同意我的观点。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to recommend Millie as our new monitor.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
11．第十九届亚运会将于2022年9月在浙江省杭州、宁波等地召开。假定你是李华，近日在E-zhejiang网站上看到一则全球招募亚运会志愿者的海报。请仔细阅读这则招聘海报，并根据个人实际情况，用英语写一封自荐信参加应聘。注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）自荐信需包含海报中所有要点，可适当拓展；
（3）词数100左右；信件格式已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。
The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022
Volunteers Wanted all round the WorldAre you free in summer Are you good with people Are you interested in sports Are you helpful as a games volunteer What are you good at and what could you do Maybe you are just the person we need! Please join and contact us!
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Now all the Chinese people are making a contribution to building a beautiful China. Doctors are trying their best to save patients’ lives and help them keep healthy. Policemen work hard to protect people from danger. It’s scientist’ duty to invent more useful things to make the world better. Farmers try their best to plant crops for us.
As a student, I have to not only be good at my study, but also be a good person. I am supposed to contribute a lot to the society and achieve my dream.
I believe if we pull together, our world will be a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：请根据所给图示内容写一篇英语短文，谈谈图片中的几种职业是怎样做贡献的。作为学生，你又该怎么做。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：先仔细审视图片内容。
第二步：谈谈图片中的几种职业是怎样做贡献的。
第三步：介绍一下作为学生，你应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①make a contribution to为……做出贡献
②keep healthy保持健康
③work hard努力工作
④be good at擅长
⑤be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①Doctors are trying their best to save patients’ lives and help them keep healthy.（try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事）
②It’s scientist’ duty to invent more useful things to make the world better.（it是形式主语）
③As a student, I have to not only be good at my study, but also be a good person.（not only…but also…不但……而且……）
④I believe if we pull together, our world will be a better place.（if引导的宾语从句）
2．参考范文
In order to encourage students to go after their dreams, a school did a survey among the students about their dream jobs in the future. Here are the results.
Of all the students surveyed, 30% of them wanted to be teachers while 29% dreamed of becoming doctors. 33% expressed their hope to be businessmen and the rest of them would like to do other jobs.
For me, I’m preparing myself for working as a teacher. To realize my dream, I need to work harder and try my best to increase my knowledge. What’s more, good communication ability is also important, so I’ll take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve myself. No dream is too big, and no dreamer is too small. I’ll try my best to fight for my dream.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇图表作文，这是一篇某中学对该校学生梦想的工作的调查统计结果，根据图表提示，简要说明图表内容，并谈谈你梦想的工作是什么以及你将如何努力实现你的梦想。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全。
2. 写作指导：本文用到了一般过去时态和一般现在时态，人称用到了第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，应该符合英语的表达习惯。
3．Saturday, March 26, 2016 Fine
I often stay up late to go over my lessons. Last night I didn't go to bed until 12 o'clock. When I woke up this morning, I found it was already 7 o'clock. I put on my clothes, brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly. Then I rushed into the living-room, where Mother was cooking breakfast. Before she could say anything, I got my school bag, ran out and got on my bike. I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late. So I rode as fast as I could. It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school. To my surprise, I found the schoolgate was closed. Then I realized it was Saturday.
【详解】这是一篇图画作文，内容是根据所给图画写一篇日记，记叙自己的一天。文章时态是一般过去时为主，人称是第一人称，写作的过程中注意找准图片信息，要点要全，细节可以适当增加，以使行文连贯，还要注意条理清晰，使用一些过渡词及复合句，来给文章增色。
短语：stay up熬夜；go over复习；not… until直到……才；wake up醒来；put on穿;brush teeth and clean face刷牙洗脸；rush into冲进；run out用完；get on上车；get to到达，
句型：（1）When I woke up this morning, I found it was already 7 o'clock. 当我今天早上醒来的时候，我发现已经七点钟了。When引导的时间状语从句。
(2) Then I rushed into the living-room, where Mother was cooking breakfast. 然后我冲进客厅，妈妈正在做早餐。Where引导的定语从句。
4．I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers. He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school acivities.
He is very helpful, too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.
I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.
【详解】本文属于材料作文，向老师推荐张航做我们的班长。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good at, do well in, spend+时间+doing, too, mind doing, try one’s best to do, be popular with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
5．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to recommend myself as the news reporter of CCTV English Channel for Children. I'm sure I can fill the position because I have many good personal qualities.
I am a hard-working student. I always do extra work in class. And I am helpful. In our class, I often help other students with their studies. I am an outgoing girl and I am clever and confident. I often come up with good ideas. I am good at all subjects, so I always get high marks in tests. I have strong oral communication skills in both Chinese and English. I can do anything if I try my best. I am never afraid of speaking in front of the whole class.
I am also organized and never forget to do the things I need to do and work to high standards. I was the host of the school charity show last year.
I think that I have all the qualities a good news reporter should have. I hope that you will agree with me.
Yours sincerely
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是推荐自己担任少儿英语栏目新闻小记者，内容按照题目中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍自己的优点，包括性格，个人品质，语言能力，有无经验等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
6．例文
My Dream
My dream is to be a dancer in the future. I want to be a super dancer because I like dancing very much. I think dancing can make me happy and relaxed, and it also can bring pleasure to people when they are watching wonderful performances.
But to be a good dancer is not an easy thing. It needs hard work. So I must study hard and try to learn more about dancing. And I also have to do a lot of practice every day. I think if I put my heart into my dream, I can achieve it. And I’m confident I can be a great dancer one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，注意根据要点补充细节，使得文章内容更丰富、逻辑更清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么有这样的梦想；
第三步，介绍自己打算如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
① in the future 在未来
② have to 不得不
③ a lot of 许多
[高分句型]
① I want to be a super dancer because I like dancing very much.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② But to be a good dancer is not an easy thing.（不定式作主语）
7．例文：
My Dream Job
Everybody has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide.
Why do I want to be a tour guide First of all, I'm an outgoing girl, and I like doing some meaningful things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. If I become a tour guide, I can travel all around China, and know more about our country. Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world. This may be great. Perhaps someday my foreign friends will ask me to visit their countries. I really like to go to their countries to know something about their culture.
Now, I am still a middle school student. My job now is to work hard in school. Then I’ll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于计划类写作，要求根据提示问题以“My dream job”为题写一篇短文谈谈你的职业梦想，应包含“是什么、为什么、怎么做”三部分内容，可进行适当发挥。。
2. 写作指导：本文应用第一人称来写，时态可结合一般现在时和一般将来时。第一段写理想的工作是什么；第二段写为什么想要做这份工作；第三段写为此讲做什么准备。要做到无语法和单词错误。
8．例文
My Dream
As the saying goes, “Great dreams make a bright future.” My dream is to be a doctor in the future.
I think it’s great to be a doctor. When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get well. What’s more, being a doctor isn’t only about treating patients. Doctors also do research and experiments so that they can make a contribution to medical service of our country.
I’ll make an effort to become a doctor.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以“我的梦想”为题写一篇短文，阐述自己的理想职业，开头已给出，要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，以第一人称写作；可分为三段，第一段：点明自己的理想职业是什么；第二段：阐述为什么选择这个职业，能够为国家做出什么样的贡献；第三段：表达自己努力去实现梦想的决心。注意做到无语法和标点错误。
9．One possible version:
My dream
Everyone has a beautiful dream. So do I. When I grow up, I want to be a writer because I like writing very much. I can express my feelings and ideas in different ways. Mo Yan is my favourite writer. I enjoy reading his books a lot.
To make my dream come true. First, I will study hard and try to read more books. Then, I’m going to practice writing in my free time. And keeping a diary every day is a good way to improve my writing. Next, I’d like to join some clubs about reading and writing. I think I can learn a lot from others.
That’s about my dream. I’m sure I can be a good writer by working hard.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“My dream”为题根据图示信息谈谈你自己的梦想。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；人称采用第一人称。写作时围绕主题，力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误，可适当运用从句和一些短语句型使文章更出彩。
10．例文：
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to recommend Millie as our new monitor. Because she has many strong qualities for this position.
She is confident. She can do anything if she tries her best. She is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people. Millie is also clever. She always comes up with good ideas. Moreover, she has won several science competitions. We also think she is organized. Because she always keeps everything in good order. She likes orange. She thinks orange can cheer her up when she feels sad.
We think she is the most suitable person to be our monitor. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以张华的身份写一封推荐信给班主任Mr Wang，根据文中提示的五点信息，写出你向班主任推荐Millie做班长所具备的突出品质。
2.写作指导：写作时，注意信件格式的写法。以第三人称为主，时态上主要采用一般现在时态，注意主谓一致问题。书写时需包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺，符合英文表达习惯。
11．Possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam.
I am writing to apply for being a volunteer in the 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022. I will graduate this summer, so I can work during the whole summer vacation. I am good with people of all ages, for I am friendly and outgoing. I believe I am helpful as a games volunteer because I am a sports fan. I am good at speaking English, therefore I could talk with foreigners freely. More importantly, Ningbo is my hometown, and I am familiar with beautiful sights. It must be more convenient to show our tourists around, isn’t it
Look forward to your reply!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，根据通知中的问题，写自荐信介绍自己的情况，介绍自己的优点，突出自己能够胜任这个工作，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，符合书信格式，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
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