(共18张PPT)
Unit 1 Teenage Life
—Reading for Writing
As a teenager, what problems do you have
in your daily life
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Step1 Lead-in
pressure from
heavey school work
depression
cyber addiction
bullying
feel lonely and
isolated
generation gaps
with parents
high expectations
from parents
and teachers
what advice will you give if you have friends with such problems
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help
1
communicating face to face with the person concerned
2
turning to friends for help
3
asking for advice on social media
4
writing a letter to a professional adviser
5
ringing help hotlines
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Step1 Lead-in
My parents won’t listen when
I tell them things. I guess it’s
because they’re adults and
can’t understand me. Do
you have any suggestions
I always feel lonely after
school because my parents
work in another city. What
can I do
There is a girl I like in my
class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me!
My friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I’m very worried about him. What should I do
Eric, 15, Chicago
Min Ho, 15, Seoul
Xu Ting, 14, Hangzhou
a Worried Friend
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
But spending too much time online is
unhealthy and makes it very difficult
to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on
school and family life. I think you
should encourage your friend to try
new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will
listen to you, since you are his good friends.
I recommend that you talk to your
friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your
generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
A Letter of Advice
The structure of a letter of advice
Date
Day Month Year
e.g. 10 September 2018
Body
To give suggestions
Close
All the best
Best wishes;
Best regards……
Signature
Your name
The most important part
Greeting
Dear Sir/Madam/name of Addressee,
How is everything going
Mark the body parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason.
D. I think my advice will help.
Step2 Reading
A. I know what the problem is
B. I understand how you feel.
D. I think my advice will help
C. This is my advice and reason.
Step3 Conclusion
提出有针对性的建议,给出理由。
Body
希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助,同时阐明你所提供的建议仅供对方参考。
Ending
一般指明建议的前提和事情的原委,对自己的立场作一些解释。
Beginning
建议信的正文通常采取“三段式结构”:
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I'm sorry to know that you are now having trouble ( in) doing sth… .
知道你现在在……方面有些麻烦, 我很抱歉。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。
My advice /suggestions are as follows./ The following is my advice.
/ Here are some tips to help you.
我的建议如下/这里有帮助你的一些建议。
Beginning:交代背景+写信目的(1+3 或2+3)
Sentence patterns
First/First of all ,why not...?If you do this,you can….
Secondly/What's more, you should / had better do...
It is also helpful/useful to do..., which will …
I think it could be more beneficial if you could ...
Thirdly/ In addition/Besides, it would be a good idea if....
By doing this,....
As far as I'm concerned/Last but not least, doing ... is a better choice.
When it comes to this problem, I suggest that you should....
If I were you (in your situation) / in your shoes, I would...
Body:介绍详情、提出建议和理由根据问题给出建议
(3个左右为宜)
Ending:提出希望采纳建议+感谢+盼望回复(1+2或1+3)
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
I believe/am sure that if you follow my advice,you’ll… .
我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会……。
I would be grateful if you could consider my advice.
I would appreciate it if you could take my adice into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。
Looking forward to your early reply.
盼望你的早日回复。
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While-writing
1. Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.
1 Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
Dear _________,
Best wishes!/Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
I understand how you feel.
This is my advice and reasons.
I know what the problem is.
I hope my advice will help.
While- writing
Body
Beginning
Ending
Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in good order
Does the writer give reasons for the advice
Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions
Does the writer use commas and stops correctly
Is the handwriting easy to read
Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner's draft.
Checklist
Evaluation
建议信.
首段:写信原因(目的)
中间段:列出具体建议+原因
尾段:表达愿望.
Dear________,
I'm delighted to receive you letter asking for my advice on how to________(引出对方需要建议的主题).I'm writing to ······/Here are some suggestions.
To begin with, you'd better do sth./ It would be a good idea to do sth. If you do this, you can not only ___________but also__________ Besides/In addition,it also helps to do sth.By doing this, you will _____________.Last but not least, doing sth is also a good choice, only in this way will you
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful./I would appreciate it very much if you consider my suggestions.
建议句型:It is helpful to do sth.
Doing sth. is of great benefit to sb.
I suggest that you’d better do sth.
Doing sth is also a good choice.
Step5 Assignments
Polish you passage with the skills we have learnt this class.
Thank You
Goodbye