Unit 2 第五步写作 五步达标案（含答案）人教版新目标九年级全册（含答案）

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Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious 五步达标训练
【主题分析】
本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中 “历史、社会与文化”这一主题，涉及子主题 “世界主要国家的文化习俗”和 “节假日与庆祝活动”。常见的写作任务的介绍某个节日的庆祝方式，体裁多为说明文或书信等应用文。
【思路妙解】
【典型例题】
年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味、像年糕（New Year cake)、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。
请以“The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”为题，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国文化习俗。
注意：标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
The Family Dinner in Spring Festival Eve
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【思路点拨】
The family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
开头点名年夜饭的重要性：The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture.
描述粘液饭的菜品、寓意及文化习俗：New Year cake means “having more luck and becoming better”. Fish means “having more than we need .”
结尾重申年夜饭的重要地位：It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years .
【素材积累】
常用短语
traditional Chinese culture ______________________
have great meanings _______________________
好运______________________________
....的象征______________________________
不仅.....而且..... ____________________________
常用句子
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks . 有各种美味的食物和饮料。
It Is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years. 这是我们保持了几千年的中国传统。
Not only Chinese people but also foreigners are interested in the celebrations .不仅中国人，而且外国人也对这些庆祝活动感兴趣。
【高分模板】
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture . On Spring Festival Eve , family members get together to enjoy the dinner.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks . (2) Many of them usually have great meanings . (3)For example , in Wenzhou , New Year cake is often the first dish , witch means “having more luck and becoming better” in Chinese pronunciation . Another dish is fish , which means “having more than we need” . Children all like this family dinner . （4）At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money their parents .
It is a Chines tradition that we have kept for thousands of years .
【主题评价】
作者在理解和感悟中华优秀传统文化的基础上，描述了年夜饭这一文化现象，传承和弘扬了中国文化，展现了跨文化交流的意识与能力。
开篇点题，知名年夜饭的重要性。
过渡句，自然而然地过渡到年夜饭的寓意。
句中which引导的定语从句表意准确，现实了作者深厚的写作功底。
句中not only ...but also ..的使用使文章富有文采。
【小试身手】
假定你是李华，有一位美国交换生要来你校学习，他想了解中国春节和美国圣诞节的异同。请你根据要求写一篇80词左右的英语短文，需包含风俗、庆祝活动等相关内容。
要求：1.思路清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；
不得出现自己的真实信息；
题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Spring Festival and Christmas
The Spring Festival is the most traditional festival in China . _____________
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参考答案：
作文训练
The Spring Festival and Christmas
The Spring Festival is the most traditional festival in China . It falls in January or February . Christmas is the most important day in America . It’s on December 25th .
The two festivals have much in common . People in both countries always prepare beforehand to welcome the festivals . They clean and decorate houses . Paper cutting is popular in China . Americans decorate Christmas trees with colorful lights , balls , stars and so on . They buy lovely presents and make delicious food . On that day , all the family members have a big dinner together .
In China , children get lucky money from their parents or grandparents . In America , all the children look forward to Father Christmas , because he brings them presents .
Everyone has a good time during the festivals.
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