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牛津深圳版 英语九年级上册 Unit 4 Problems and advice 写作专练
1．读下面的文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80词，把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。
Up to 65 % of children don’t get as much sleep as they should do, and this can make them nervous and slower at school, scientists say.
So how long should young people sleep each night The answer is between eight and ten hours. If you don’t get enough sleep at night, you’ll have less energy the next day.
But the scientists say many children have missed out on 4,500 hours of sleep by the time they are seven years old. They say that children miss sleep because they have TVs and computers in their rooms, and busy parents don’t read to their younger children at night any more. The traditional “bedtime story” helps children to relax and fall asleep peacefully. Children with TVs and computers in their bedrooms are more likely to sleep badly, and to get less than eight hours’ sleep. Even losing one hour’s sleep a night can mean that children do less well at school.
German scientists think that your brain keeps working while you are asleep. To show that they were right, they gave two groups of people a problem to work out. One group went to sleep, and the other group stayed awake. The result The people who slept worked out the answer more quickly. This showed that their brains had been trying to find the answer while the people were asleep. So, make sure you get enough sleep tonight, and you’ll be at your best tonight, and you’ll be at your best tomorrow!
1. What problem do more than a half of students have
2. What influences many children’s sleep
3. What did the German scientists’ experiment show
4. What is the purpose of the writer in writing the article
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2．根据图片，写一篇英语小短文。
提示：
1. Why do these things happen
2. What do you think of the Internet
3. How to deal with the problems with parents
注意：
1. 短文中须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
The Internet brings us a lot of fun and convenient, but it also causes some new problems.
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3．日前，中共中央、国务院印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》(A guideline on hardworking spirit education)，提出了中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的劳动精神。英语报纸以此为主题举行英语征文比赛，请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文向其投稿，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法，并提出建议。
写作要点：
1.你对劳动教育的观点及看法；
2.在家、学校可以做的劳动劳动事项；
3.关于劳动教育你对学生的建议，至少两条。
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．近日，教育部印发了有关学生手机管理的通知。通知中明确规定，中小学生不得将个人手机带入校园。通知一出，就引发了热烈的讨论。有人说，手机可以作为学习工具，有效辅助学习。有人说，带手机会分散学生注意力，干扰学校教学秩序。也有人说，课堂上和课余时间应该区别对待。请你就中学生是否应该带手机上学为话题，发表你的观点。
要求：不得出现真实姓名和班级；100词左右；书写工整清晰。
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5．双减以来，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校英语报举办了以“How to make better use of our spare time”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇80词左右的英文短文投稿。
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6．假如你叫梁华，是无锡阳光中学的学生，进入九年级后感到学习压力很大，想找 youth worker 倾诉烦恼、寻求帮助。请根据以下社区提供的两名候选人信息，选择其一并用英文写一封求助信。
Mrs. Friend Personality: Patient & kind Hobbies: Writing Specialty: Listening & comforting Available Time（可用时间）: 6:00 p.m. – 8:00 p.m. from Monday to Friday Mr. Light Personality: Active & humorous Hobbies: Playing basketball Specialty: Color therapy Available Time: 9:00 a.m. – 5:00 p.m. at the weekend
注意事项：
1. 求助信须陈述选择该工作人员的原因，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右；
3. 求助信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
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7．假如你是中学生李华，曾经在你们班学习的交换生 Peter 看到你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的班会很感兴趣。请根据以下信息给他写一封信， 向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流中学生如何解决学习和生活中的烦恼。
写作要点：
1.班会的主题：我的烦恼
2.介绍同学们的烦恼
（1）张红：尽管学习很努力，但成绩没有提高
（1）王伟：和有些同学相处的不好
3.说说中学生应该如何解决学习和生活中的烦恼。写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实行文连贯。
3.字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰。
4.至少 80 词。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing I’m writing to tell you about the class meeting held last week.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
8．面临世界的快速发展，21世纪的青少年应该拥有关键能力从容以对。假如你是李明，今天你们班召开了班会，请你根据以下信息，写一篇日记，并说说21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力和理由。
写作要点：
1. 班会主题：21世纪的青少年。
2. 同学们的发言：
（1） 很多同学认为沟通力（communication）是重要的；
（2）刘丽说表达力（expression）是有帮助的；
（3）说说你认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力（key skill）和理由。
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实, 行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
April 14th,
2022 Thursday
Sunny and warm
Today we had a class meeting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we all have a bright future.
9．进入九年级以来，不少同学熬夜使用手机或电脑玩游戏。导致睡眠不足，不能认真听课，成绩下降。鉴于此现象，你们班召开了一次班会来讨论这个问题。请你以“How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly”为题写一篇发言稿。
提示：1. 手机和电脑可以用来查阅资料，记单词等；
2. 长期使用手机和电脑对视力带来的影响；
3. 熬夜对青少年所带来的危害；
4. ……
要求：包含所给要点；语言流畅，意思连贯，适当拓展；100词左右。
How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly
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参考答案：
1．例文
Young people need to sleep between eight and ten hours. But many children don’t have enough sleep. Some have TVs and computers in their rooms. They are more likely to sleep badly. German scientists’ experiment has showed that the people who slept well worked out the answer more quickly. So, make sure you get enough sleep tonight.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为小作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据问题提示，总结文章的大意。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述儿童睡眠少这一现象及原因；
第二步，介绍德国科学家的实验结果表明了睡眠对学习工作的影响；
第三步，得出结论，应确保有足够的睡眠。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth需要做某事
②make sure确保
③work out解决
[高分句型]
①German scientists’ experiment has showed that the people who slept well worked out the answer more quickly.（that引导宾语从句，who引导定语从句）
②make sure you get enough sleep tonight.（make sure后跟宾语从句）
2．例文：
The Internet brings us a lot of fun and convenience, but it also causes some new problems. We teenagers like the Internet. On one hand, the Internet brings people closer. On the other hand, the Internet makes us avoid positive communication. Some of us would rather communicate with others online than talk with our parents. If we spend too much time on the Internet, we will have less time with our family and friends in the real world.
Parents are always with us. So why not talk to them face to face when we have problems If so, parents will understand our thoughts and feelings. I am sure that we can get on well with our parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”陈述为什么会发生图示中的这些事情，谈谈自己对网络的想法及如何处理与父母之间的问题。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述网络的优缺点，引入正文；
第二步，陈述为什么会发生图示中的这些事情，谈谈对网络的想法；
第三步，谈谈如何处理与父母之间的问题。
[亮点词汇]
① On one hand…On the other hand…一方面……另一方面……
② would rather宁愿
③ get on well with与……和睦相处
[高分句型]
① I am sure that we can get on well with our parents.（使用宾语从句）
② If we spend too much time on the Internet, we will have less time with their family and friends in the real world.（使用if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly. The hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
I usually do housework at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. I also take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich my real-world work experience.
In order to develop hardworking spirit, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. We should try to form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“A guideline on hardworking spirit education”中提出的劳动精神为主题，写一篇短文谈谈自己对劳动教育的看法，并提出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时；本文可分为三段式：第一段点明主题。第二段发表自己的观点并介绍自己在家常做的家务、在学校参加的课外活动。第三段阐述自己对学生们如何培养劳动精神的意见。在写作时要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4．范文
Concerning about the notice that middle school students are not allowed to bring their personal mobile phones into school, I believe that it’s a right movement to forbid students to bring mobile phones into the school. Here are the reasons.
It is true that some primary and middle school students can use mobile phones to search for information and complete some learning tasks. However, some others have poor self-control ability and sometimes they will lose themselves into mobile phones programs. Strengthening the management of mobile phones can prevent students from using mobile phones unreasonably. And this can also make them get rid of mobile games, which will distract student’s attention and affect their studies.
All in all, I think middle school students should not bring their mobile phones into the school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作话题已给出，写作时应提出自己的观点，并详细阐述。考生要突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明自己的观点“学生不应该将手机带入校园”；
第二步，具体阐述原因；
第三步，书写结语，再次强调自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①forbid sb. to do sth.禁止某人做某事
②lose oneself into沉迷于
③prevent sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事
④get rid of摆脱
[高分句型]
①It is true that some primary and middle school students can use mobile phones to search for information and complete some learning tasks.（it作形式主语）
②Strengthening the management of mobile phones can prevent students from using mobile phones unreasonably.（动名词短语作主语）
③And this can also make them get rid of mobile games, which will distract student’s attention and affect their studies.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
5．例文
How to make better use of our spare time
Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students don’t know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they can’t finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV. What’s worse, some students are crazy about playing computer games. We don’t think it’s good for their study and health.
However, how can we make better use of our spare time There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
Let’s make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题干要求写出双减之后出现的一些问题，并针对问题提出一些建议等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍双减之后，学生们如何度过自己的空闲时间；
第二步，针对这些现象，给出一些建议；
第三步，最后呼吁学生们好好利用课余时间，让生活变得丰富多彩。
[亮点词汇]
① quite a number of相当多
② for example例如
③ different kinds of各种各样
[高分句型]
① They spend so much time on their hobbies that they can’t finish their homework on time.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
② If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．例文
Dear Mr. Light,
I am Liang Hua, and I am a Grade 9 student. After entering Grade 9, I feel very stressed. I think a youth worker will be of great help to me.
I used to play basketball for thirty minutes every night, but now I am busy with my schoolwork on weekdays. Moreover, my parents are strict with me and care too much about my exams, so that makes me blue.
You are active, humorous, and good at playing basketball. I think you may have the same experience during your schooldays. What interests me most is that you can use colour therapy to change moods.
Besides, you are free from 9 o’clock a.m. to 5 o’clock p.m. at weekends. How about 9 o’clock a.m. this Saturday I am free during that time. I am looking forward to your valuable suggestions.
Best wishes,
Liang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：本文要求根据社区提供的两名候选人信息，选择其一并用英文写一封求助信。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍，表明身份并表达写信目的。
第二步，表达自己的压力。
第三步，陈述选择该工作人员的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①Moreover此外
②be strict with对……严格
[高分句型]
①What interests me most is that you can use colour therapy to change moods.（表语从句）
②Moreover, my parents are strict with me and care too much about my exams, so that makes me blue.（结果状语从句）
7．例文：
Dear Peter,
How are you doing I’m writing to tell you about the class meeting held last week.
The topic is “My Troubles”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took part in the discussion and shared our views.
Hard as Zhang Hong studied, her grades didn’t improve. So she was very upset. She wants to know how to improve her grades. Wang Wei doesn’t get along well with some of his classmates. They don’t play with him.
In my opinion, if you want to solve the trouble in study, you need to do two things. First, listen carefully in class and review carefully after class. Second, when you encounter problems, ask your classmates or teachers in time. About the troubles in life, it is also necessary to turn to parents or teachers. So we middle school students can grow up healthily.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据写作要点，写一篇作文向交换生Peter介绍班会的情况并和他交流中学生如何解决学习和生活中的烦恼。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第三人称和第二人称为主。写作时需介绍班会主题，同学们的烦恼，最后要给出解决这些烦恼的方法。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
8．例文
April 14th,
2022 Thursday
Sunny and warm
Today we had a class meeting. Many students think that communication is important. Liu Li says that the expression is helpful. I think it is very important to express my ideas well. First of all, no matter how knowledgeable you are, if you can’t express yourself well, others won’t understand your ideas. You can’t communicate well with others. Secondly, the organizational ability is also very important. A chopstick is easy to break, but a bundle of chopsticks is hard to break.
I hope we all have a bright future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该文章为日记，写作时候要注意符合日记的写作格式。日记内容主要包括两部分：（1）包括同学们的发言；（2）作者自己认为的认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力。
2.写作指导：写作时应以第一人称来写；时态用一般现在时；写作时要注意围绕主题，并能准确地使用一定的语法，词汇，短语和句型。
9．例文：
How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to stand here to share my opinion. Nowadays, more and more students like to use smartphones and computers. They like chatting with their friends, sending emails to each other or playing games on them.
The Internet helps us a lot. We can learn new words and find out information online. But it takes us too much time to chat online. What’s worse, some of us stay up late to surf on the Internet. It’s bad for our studies and eyes.
In my opinion, spending too much time online is a waste of time and it’s bad for our teenagers. So we must use the computer and smartphone properly.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。以“How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly”为题进行写作，叙述手机和电脑的利和弊。具体要包含所给的提示，也可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为四段式：第一段介绍手机和电脑用处；第二段和第三段介绍手机和电脑带来的影响和危害；最后一段表示感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
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牛津深圳版 英语九年级上册 Unit 4 Problems and advice 写作专练
1．读下面的文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80词，把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。
Up to 65 % of children don’t get as much sleep as they should do, and this can make them nervous and slower at school, scientists say.
So how long should young people sleep each night The answer is between eight and ten hours. If you don’t get enough sleep at night, you’ll have less energy the next day.
But the scientists say many children have missed out on 4,500 hours of sleep by the time they are seven years old. They say that children miss sleep because they have TVs and computers in their rooms, and busy parents don’t read to their younger children at night any more. The traditional “bedtime story” helps children to relax and fall asleep peacefully. Children with TVs and computers in their bedrooms are more likely to sleep badly, and to get less than eight hours’ sleep. Even losing one hour’s sleep a night can mean that children do less well at school.
German scientists think that your brain keeps working while you are asleep. To show that they were right, they gave two groups of people a problem to work out. One group went to sleep, and the other group stayed awake. The result The people who slept worked out the answer more quickly. This showed that their brains had been trying to find the answer while the people were asleep. So, make sure you get enough sleep tonight, and you’ll be at your best tonight, and you’ll be at your best tomorrow!
1. What problem do more than a half of students have
2. What influences many children’s sleep
3. What did the German scientists’ experiment show
4. What is the purpose of the writer in writing the article
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2．根据图片，写一篇英语小短文。
提示：
1. Why do these things happen
2. What do you think of the Internet
3. How to deal with the problems with parents
注意：
1. 短文中须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
The Internet brings us a lot of fun and convenient, but it also causes some new problems.
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3．日前，中共中央、国务院印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》(A guideline on hardworking spirit education)，提出了中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的劳动精神。英语报纸以此为主题举行英语征文比赛，请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文向其投稿，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法，并提出建议。
写作要点：
1.你对劳动教育的观点及看法；
2.在家、学校可以做的劳动劳动事项；
3.关于劳动教育你对学生的建议，至少两条。
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．近日，教育部印发了有关学生手机管理的通知。通知中明确规定，中小学生不得将个人手机带入校园。通知一出，就引发了热烈的讨论。有人说，手机可以作为学习工具，有效辅助学习。有人说，带手机会分散学生注意力，干扰学校教学秩序。也有人说，课堂上和课余时间应该区别对待。请你就中学生是否应该带手机上学为话题，发表你的观点。
要求：不得出现真实姓名和班级；100词左右；书写工整清晰。
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5．双减以来，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校英语报举办了以“How to make better use of our spare time”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇80词左右的英文短文投稿。
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6．假如你叫梁华，是无锡阳光中学的学生，进入九年级后感到学习压力很大，想找 youth worker 倾诉烦恼、寻求帮助。请根据以下社区提供的两名候选人信息，选择其一并用英文写一封求助信。
Mrs. Friend Personality: Patient & kind Hobbies: Writing Specialty: Listening & comforting Available Time（可用时间）: 6:00 p.m. – 8:00 p.m. from Monday to Friday Mr. Light Personality: Active & humorous Hobbies: Playing basketball Specialty: Color therapy Available Time: 9:00 a.m. – 5:00 p.m. at the weekend
注意事项：
1. 求助信须陈述选择该工作人员的原因，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右；
3. 求助信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
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7．假如你是中学生李华，曾经在你们班学习的交换生 Peter 看到你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的班会很感兴趣。请根据以下信息给他写一封信， 向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流中学生如何解决学习和生活中的烦恼。
写作要点：
1.班会的主题：我的烦恼
2.介绍同学们的烦恼
（1）张红：尽管学习很努力，但成绩没有提高
（1）王伟：和有些同学相处的不好
3.说说中学生应该如何解决学习和生活中的烦恼。写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实行文连贯。
3.字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰。
4.至少 80 词。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing I’m writing to tell you about the class meeting held last week.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
8．面临世界的快速发展，21世纪的青少年应该拥有关键能力从容以对。假如你是李明，今天你们班召开了班会，请你根据以下信息，写一篇日记，并说说21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力和理由。
写作要点：
1. 班会主题：21世纪的青少年。
2. 同学们的发言：
（1） 很多同学认为沟通力（communication）是重要的；
（2）刘丽说表达力（expression）是有帮助的；
（3）说说你认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力（key skill）和理由。
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实, 行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
April 14th,
2022 Thursday
Sunny and warm
Today we had a class meeting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we all have a bright future.
9．进入九年级以来，不少同学熬夜使用手机或电脑玩游戏。导致睡眠不足，不能认真听课，成绩下降。鉴于此现象，你们班召开了一次班会来讨论这个问题。请你以“How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly”为题写一篇发言稿。
提示：1. 手机和电脑可以用来查阅资料，记单词等；
2. 长期使用手机和电脑对视力带来的影响；
3. 熬夜对青少年所带来的危害；
4. ……
要求：包含所给要点；语言流畅，意思连贯，适当拓展；100词左右。
How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly
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参考答案：
1．例文
Young people need to sleep between eight and ten hours. But many children don’t have enough sleep. Some have TVs and computers in their rooms. They are more likely to sleep badly. German scientists’ experiment has showed that the people who slept well worked out the answer more quickly. So, make sure you get enough sleep tonight.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为小作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据问题提示，总结文章的大意。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述儿童睡眠少这一现象及原因；
第二步，介绍德国科学家的实验结果表明了睡眠对学习工作的影响；
第三步，得出结论，应确保有足够的睡眠。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth需要做某事
②make sure确保
③work out解决
[高分句型]
①German scientists’ experiment has showed that the people who slept well worked out the answer more quickly.（that引导宾语从句，who引导定语从句）
②make sure you get enough sleep tonight.（make sure后跟宾语从句）
2．例文：
The Internet brings us a lot of fun and convenience, but it also causes some new problems. We teenagers like the Internet. On one hand, the Internet brings people closer. On the other hand, the Internet makes us avoid positive communication. Some of us would rather communicate with others online than talk with our parents. If we spend too much time on the Internet, we will have less time with our family and friends in the real world.
Parents are always with us. So why not talk to them face to face when we have problems If so, parents will understand our thoughts and feelings. I am sure that we can get on well with our parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”陈述为什么会发生图示中的这些事情，谈谈自己对网络的想法及如何处理与父母之间的问题。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述网络的优缺点，引入正文；
第二步，陈述为什么会发生图示中的这些事情，谈谈对网络的想法；
第三步，谈谈如何处理与父母之间的问题。
[亮点词汇]
① On one hand…On the other hand…一方面……另一方面……
② would rather宁愿
③ get on well with与……和睦相处
[高分句型]
① I am sure that we can get on well with our parents.（使用宾语从句）
② If we spend too much time on the Internet, we will have less time with their family and friends in the real world.（使用if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly. The hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
I usually do housework at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. I also take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich my real-world work experience.
In order to develop hardworking spirit, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. We should try to form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“A guideline on hardworking spirit education”中提出的劳动精神为主题，写一篇短文谈谈自己对劳动教育的看法，并提出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时；本文可分为三段式：第一段点明主题。第二段发表自己的观点并介绍自己在家常做的家务、在学校参加的课外活动。第三段阐述自己对学生们如何培养劳动精神的意见。在写作时要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4．范文
Concerning about the notice that middle school students are not allowed to bring their personal mobile phones into school, I believe that it’s a right movement to forbid students to bring mobile phones into the school. Here are the reasons.
It is true that some primary and middle school students can use mobile phones to search for information and complete some learning tasks. However, some others have poor self-control ability and sometimes they will lose themselves into mobile phones programs. Strengthening the management of mobile phones can prevent students from using mobile phones unreasonably. And this can also make them get rid of mobile games, which will distract student’s attention and affect their studies.
All in all, I think middle school students should not bring their mobile phones into the school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作话题已给出，写作时应提出自己的观点，并详细阐述。考生要突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明自己的观点“学生不应该将手机带入校园”；
第二步，具体阐述原因；
第三步，书写结语，再次强调自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①forbid sb. to do sth.禁止某人做某事
②lose oneself into沉迷于
③prevent sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事
④get rid of摆脱
[高分句型]
①It is true that some primary and middle school students can use mobile phones to search for information and complete some learning tasks.（it作形式主语）
②Strengthening the management of mobile phones can prevent students from using mobile phones unreasonably.（动名词短语作主语）
③And this can also make them get rid of mobile games, which will distract student’s attention and affect their studies.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
5．例文
How to make better use of our spare time
Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students don’t know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they can’t finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV. What’s worse, some students are crazy about playing computer games. We don’t think it’s good for their study and health.
However, how can we make better use of our spare time There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
Let’s make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题干要求写出双减之后出现的一些问题，并针对问题提出一些建议等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍双减之后，学生们如何度过自己的空闲时间；
第二步，针对这些现象，给出一些建议；
第三步，最后呼吁学生们好好利用课余时间，让生活变得丰富多彩。
[亮点词汇]
① quite a number of相当多
② for example例如
③ different kinds of各种各样
[高分句型]
① They spend so much time on their hobbies that they can’t finish their homework on time.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
② If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．例文
Dear Mr. Light,
I am Liang Hua, and I am a Grade 9 student. After entering Grade 9, I feel very stressed. I think a youth worker will be of great help to me.
I used to play basketball for thirty minutes every night, but now I am busy with my schoolwork on weekdays. Moreover, my parents are strict with me and care too much about my exams, so that makes me blue.
You are active, humorous, and good at playing basketball. I think you may have the same experience during your schooldays. What interests me most is that you can use colour therapy to change moods.
Besides, you are free from 9 o’clock a.m. to 5 o’clock p.m. at weekends. How about 9 o’clock a.m. this Saturday I am free during that time. I am looking forward to your valuable suggestions.
Best wishes,
Liang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：本文要求根据社区提供的两名候选人信息，选择其一并用英文写一封求助信。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍，表明身份并表达写信目的。
第二步，表达自己的压力。
第三步，陈述选择该工作人员的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①Moreover此外
②be strict with对……严格
[高分句型]
①What interests me most is that you can use colour therapy to change moods.（表语从句）
②Moreover, my parents are strict with me and care too much about my exams, so that makes me blue.（结果状语从句）
7．例文：
Dear Peter,
How are you doing I’m writing to tell you about the class meeting held last week.
The topic is “My Troubles”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took part in the discussion and shared our views.
Hard as Zhang Hong studied, her grades didn’t improve. So she was very upset. She wants to know how to improve her grades. Wang Wei doesn’t get along well with some of his classmates. They don’t play with him.
In my opinion, if you want to solve the trouble in study, you need to do two things. First, listen carefully in class and review carefully after class. Second, when you encounter problems, ask your classmates or teachers in time. About the troubles in life, it is also necessary to turn to parents or teachers. So we middle school students can grow up healthily.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据写作要点，写一篇作文向交换生Peter介绍班会的情况并和他交流中学生如何解决学习和生活中的烦恼。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第三人称和第二人称为主。写作时需介绍班会主题，同学们的烦恼，最后要给出解决这些烦恼的方法。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
8．例文
April 14th,
2022 Thursday
Sunny and warm
Today we had a class meeting. Many students think that communication is important. Liu Li says that the expression is helpful. I think it is very important to express my ideas well. First of all, no matter how knowledgeable you are, if you can’t express yourself well, others won’t understand your ideas. You can’t communicate well with others. Secondly, the organizational ability is also very important. A chopstick is easy to break, but a bundle of chopsticks is hard to break.
I hope we all have a bright future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该文章为日记，写作时候要注意符合日记的写作格式。日记内容主要包括两部分：（1）包括同学们的发言；（2）作者自己认为的认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力。
2.写作指导：写作时应以第一人称来写；时态用一般现在时；写作时要注意围绕主题，并能准确地使用一定的语法，词汇，短语和句型。
9．例文：
How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to stand here to share my opinion. Nowadays, more and more students like to use smartphones and computers. They like chatting with their friends, sending emails to each other or playing games on them.
The Internet helps us a lot. We can learn new words and find out information online. But it takes us too much time to chat online. What’s worse, some of us stay up late to surf on the Internet. It’s bad for our studies and eyes.
In my opinion, spending too much time online is a waste of time and it’s bad for our teenagers. So we must use the computer and smartphone properly.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。以“How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly”为题进行写作，叙述手机和电脑的利和弊。具体要包含所给的提示，也可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为四段式：第一段介绍手机和电脑用处；第二段和第三段介绍手机和电脑带来的影响和危害；最后一段表示感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
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