Unit 3 Computers 写作 专练（含解析）牛津深圳·广州版 英语八年级上册

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牛津深圳版 英语八年级上册 Unit 3 Computers 写作 专练
1．每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“My favorite _______”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。
要点：1. What does it look like
2. What is it made of
3. Why do you like it
要求：1. 文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、校名等；
3. 词数：100词左右。
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2．请根据下面提供的信息用英语以“Online Shopping”为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。
优点：
1.可以在任何时间购物。
2.只需要一台电脑和鼠标。
3.方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱。
4.无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。……
缺点：
1.网上付款有时不安全。
2.看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。……
注意：
1.不得在作文中出现你真实的学校名称和自己的姓名。
2.语句连贯，表达准确，词数80词左右。
Online Shopping
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3．小作文，根据要求完成下面的内容，词数30左右。以“My phone”为题，写一个小文章，做简单介绍。包括颜色、材料、用途等。
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4．时下，网上购物已风靡全国，人们通过网络几乎可以买到想要的任何物品，而中国网民的网上购物热情也节节高涨。你或你身边的亲戚朋友应该或多或少都经历过网上购物。请“Shopping online”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你对网上购物的利与弊的看法。
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5．假如你是李华，你的学生朋友Tina暑期要回英国，想准备几件有中国特色的礼物。她上网查找后发邮件向你寻求建议。请结合以下搜索结果，写一封回信，推荐一些你认为有中国特色的礼物，并说明推荐理由。
参考词汇：mascot吉祥物，unity团结
要求：
①结合上图，至少推荐两种礼物并说明理由，可适当拓展：
②文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息：
③文本长度：110词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tina,
Glad to hear from you. You said you wanted to choose some special Chinese gifts.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是李明，这周你们班英语活动课的主题是“Gift”，请你请根据表格中的内容，以“The most special gift I’ve received”为题，完成你的发言稿。
Key points (内容要点) Words and expressions for reference (参考词汇)
What it is A toy Nezha …
From whom my cousin …
How long more than one year …
How I got it gave up playing the piano; invited me to watch the film Nezha; gave me a toy Nezha, as brave as Nezha. …
注意：1. 文中必须包含四个方面的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选择使用；
2. 词数80-100，文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
The most special gift I’ve received
Hello, everybody! It’s my honor to share my topic with you! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening, that’s all.
参考答案：
1．例文：
My favorite dress
I have many clothes, but I like a dress best among my clothes. It is a black dress. It is made of cotton. And it’s very comfortable to wear. I like it so much that I often wear it to school. I like it because it’s a special gift from my mother. She sent it to me last year for my 20th birthday. She made it by herself for months. It doesn’t have fancy designs or flowers on it, but it fits me very much. The color make me look slimmer. Everyone says it looks great on me. What’s more, it also makes me remember the love from my mom.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给问题中包含的关键信息，写短文介绍自己最喜爱的衣服。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用衣服类的名词补全标题；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的衣服是哪一件，长什么样；
第三步，介绍这件衣服的材料；
第四步，介绍喜欢它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①like ... best 最喜欢
②send sth. to sb. 将某物通过邮寄、电子邮件等方式发送给某人
③very much 非常
[高分句型]
①I have many clothes, but I like a dress best among my clothes.（but连接表转折关系的并列句）
②I like it because it’s a special gift from my mother.（because引导原因状语从句）
2．例文
Online Shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.
Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a computer and a mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive products anywhere in the world at any time!
But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the products or try the clothes on.
I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中网购的优点和缺点的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“描述网购的优点和缺点”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“网购的优点、网购的缺点，我的观点等”几个方面重点介绍网购的优点和缺点的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“有一天，没有人会再去商店了，因为你可以在网上买到几乎任何东西”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①at any time在任何时候；
②on the Internet在网上；
③try…on试穿……；
④because of因为。
[高分句型]
①But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. (动名词作主语)
②One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet. (because引导原因状语从句)
3．例文：
As we all known, mobile phones are being more and more widely used in our daily life. Next, I will introduce my cell phone.
My phone is black, which is a gift from my mother on my birthday. Its material is metal, and I think the quality is great. The phone is used in many ways. I can talk with my friends and my parents for a long time. It is quite easy for me to carry them everywhere. I can also surf the Internet on my phone.
There is no doubt that the mobile phone plays an important part in our daily life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我的手机”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“颜色、材料、用途”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①widely广泛地
②talk with谈话
③plays an important part in在……中扮演重要角色
[高分句型]
①My phone is black, which is a gift from my mother on my birthday.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②It is quite easy for me to carry them everywhere.（it固定句式）
4．例文
Shopping online
Online shopping is a new way of shopping. It has a lot of advantages. First, online shopping is fast and convenient, so you can save a lot of time. Second, you can buy cheaper products. Besides, you can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day.
But on the other hand, it has some disadvantages. For example, while shopping, we can’t check the goods by ourselves, so we don’t know whether the quality of the goods is good or bad. What’s worse, it is not safe to pay online.
In my opinion, we should learn how to make good use of the Internet resources, but we must think twice before we decide to buy goods on the Internet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：议论文
②时态：一般现在时
③提示：题目要求根据自己或身边亲友的网购经历，以网上购物为题，谈谈对网上购物利与弊的看法。
[写作步聚]
第一步，介绍网购的优点。
第二步，介绍网购的缺点。
第三步，最后以自己的观点谈如何正确网购。
[亮点词汇]
①a way of一种……的方法
②a lot of许多
③on the other hand另一方面
[高分句型]
①First, online shopping is fast and convenient, so you can save a lot of time.（用连词so表达结果）
②What’s worse, it is not safe to pay online.（it作形式主语）
5．例文
Dear Tina,
Glad to hear from you. You said you wanted to choose some special Chinese gifts. I think I can give you some advice.
From my point of view, a cheongsam is a good choice for women such as your mum or your aunt. Cheongsam, a beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. There are many different styles with different designs and pictures. I’m sure they will be glad to have one.
On the other hand, I advise you to buy some Chinese knots. The Chinese knot, which is a symbol of unity, is very popular with Chinese and is usually hung in the sitting rooms or in the cars. They are not only beautiful decorations, but also can bring good luck to those who you love.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，给Tina写一封回信，推荐一些有中国特色的礼物，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二、三段分别介绍旗袍和中国结两种礼物；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．例文：
The most special gift I’ve received
Hello, everybody! It’s my honor to share my topic with you!
The most special gift I’ve received is a toy Nezha. I have had it for more than one year.
My cousin and I went to see the cartoon film Nezha last summer. When the film was over, I understood why my cousin invited me to see the film. At that time, I failed to pass an important piano grading test. I was very sad and even considered giving up playing the piano. So my cousin tried to encourage me in this way. Later, I also received this toy Nezha as a gift on my birthday from my cousin. He hoped I could be as brave as Nezha.
The toy stands on my desk and it always encourages me to be brave in the face of difficulties. I think it is the most meaningful gift I have ever got.
Thank you for listening, that’s all.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是要求根据表格中的内容，以“The most special gift I’ve received”为题，写一篇发言稿，文章的开头与结尾已给出，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一、三人称来叙述，时态上以一般过去时为主。写作时要适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。
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