Unit 1 Wise men in history 写作 专练（含解析）牛津深圳·广州版 英语九年级上册
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牛津深圳版 英语九年级上册 Unit 1 Wise men in history 写作 专练
1．假如你是李华，正准备参加学校举办的首届“用英语讲好中国故事”比赛，请根据下方图片提示，准备英文稿件，讲述“司马光砸缸”的故事。
要求：1. 语言规范，语句通顺；
2. 应包括图片所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 字数：100词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇：hide-and-seek捉迷藏；vat缸；shout for help大声呼救；lift a big stone举起一块大石头；be saved得救；learn from向……学习。
Sima Guang Breaking the Vat
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2．某学校九年级学生进行了一场关于“九年级学生是否应该要体育锻炼”的舆论调查，请你以下面信息为主要内容，介绍调查结果并给出自己的观点。
70%的学生认为：
（1）有必要进行体育锻炼，例如：跑步，游泳和打篮球；
（2）使他们身体健康与强壮；
（3）感到放松，有益于学习。
30%的学生认为：
（1）使他们疲劳，浪费时间；
（2）锻炼后过于兴奋，影响学习；
（3）运动中有可能受伤。
最后，请给出你的观点。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实。
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确。
（4）词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
The students in Grade Nine have done a survey about whether they should take exercise. Here is the result. 70% of the students think that__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．北京冬奥会的成功举办激起了全民运动热潮，学业繁忙的中学生们更应该加强体育锻炼。请你根据以下提示，以“Let’s enjoy exercise”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你的运动之旅。
1. How do you keep exercising in your daily life
2. What do you achieve from the exercise
3. What advice can you offer to those that are short of exercise
注意事项：1.词数100 左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
4.表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范。
Let’s enjoy exercise
There’s no doubt that it’s important for us to do exercise. After watching the 24th Winter Olympic Games, I’m crazier about sports. Although I’m busy with my study, I also have some ways to keep exercising.
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4．本卷阅读理解E篇短文中提到荷兰运动员Sifan Hassan在东京奥运会1500米比赛中跌倒并落后仍然继续坚持比赛，最终赢得奖牌。Sifan Hassan的事例告诉我们：向着目标坚持不懈，就能获取成功。请你根据下面写作要点提示，以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿：谈谈你每天坚持做的事情、坚持的原因及坚持后的收获。
写作要点：
1. What do you think of keeping doing something And what’s the thing you keep doing every day
2. Why do you keep doing the thing every day
3. What have you got from keeping doing the thing every day
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80。
One thing I keep doing every day
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5．近年来中学生身体健康越来越受到重视。假定你是李华，你校英语校报正在开展主题为“我运动，我健康”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1.你的运动方式（两种）：
2.你对运动的看法：
(1)增强体质；
(2)缓解压力；
(3)……。
注意：
1.所写内容应包括以上要点，内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.词数100左右。
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6．Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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7．近期校英语网站正在开展“坚持运动，健康同行”为主题的征文活动。请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：
1.中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.不少于80词。
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8．假如你是李华，请你给你的笔友Tom写封100字左右的信，谈谈你对新型冠状病毒肺炎预防建议。
要点：
1. 遵守疫情预防措施；
2. 在家常开窗户通风，常洗手；
3. 出门戴口罩；
4. 尽量不去公共场所或聚会；
5. 保持良好心态，多锻炼身体；
6. 合理处理学习和休息的关系；
7. ……
要求：
1. 应包括上述文字等各项要点。
2. 不可逐句翻译，允许必要的增减。
参考词汇：
新型冠状病毒肺炎COVID-19，疫情epidemic situation，预防prevent，口罩mask
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．中学生“五项管理”之一的“体质管理（Health Management）”倡导我们积极参与体育运动。体育运动不但可以帮助学生增强自信，从而塑造更加健全的人格，而且有助于我们实现体育强国之梦。假如你是学校体育部长，请你以“Try to Improve Our Health Management”为题，写一篇倡议书推动中学生体质管理。
要求：
（1）80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
（1）体育运动的重要性（放松身心，增强自）；
（2）你对校内体育运动的建议（组织乒乓球比赛，开设游泳课）；
（3）……
Try to Improve Our Health Management
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
Health Management raises the awareness of doing sports._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
School Sports Department
参考答案：
1．例文：
Sima Guang Breaking the Vat
Sima Guang was a great statesman and historian in ancient China. He was very clever from an early age.
One day, Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water vat in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the vat. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the vat. “Bang!” The vat broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved.
In my opinion, I think we should learn from him. When we are in trouble, we should calm down and find a solution.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据题干中给出的四幅图片，按照时间发展顺序描写“司马光砸缸”的故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首段引入话题，介绍司马光；
第二步，按照所给图片的发展顺序描写，首先孩子们在院子里玩耍、然后一个孩子掉进水缸、司马光想出主意，拿石头砸向水缸、最后孩子得救；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的个人感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满，装满
②fall into掉入
③start to do sth.开始做某事
④pick up捡起
⑤in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①There was a large water vat in the yard.（There be句型）
②When we are in trouble, we should calm down and find a solution.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2．例文：
The students in Grade Nine have done a survey about whether they should take exercise. Here is the result. 70% of the students think that it is necessary for us to do sports, such as running, swimming, and playing basketball. Because doing exercise not only makes them physically healthy and strong, but also makes them feel relaxed and beneficial for learning. 30% of students think that doing sports makes them tired and wastes time. And being too excited after exercise can affect learning. There is a possibility of injury during simultaneous exercise. I think we should do sports. Because doing exercise not only keeps us healthy, but also helps us relax.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意分成两个角度分别阐述，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述70%的学生观点，从给出的要点出发，详细列明观点；
第二步，阐述剩余30%的学生观点，将要点清晰明了的写出；
第三步，给出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①make them physically healthy and strong使他们身体健康和强壮
②wastes time浪费时间
③a possibility of injury受伤的可能性
[高分句型]
①it is necessary for us to do sports, such as running, swimming, and playing basketball.（句型it is +形容词+for sb + to do sth）
②Because doing exercise not only keeps us healthy, but also helps us relax.（not only...but also不仅……而且……）
3．例文
Let’s enjoy exercise
There’s no doubt that it’s important for us to do exercise. After watching the 24th Winter Olympic Games, I’m crazier about sports. Although I’m busy with my study, I also have some ways to keep exercising.
First, swimming is a good sport indoors. I usually go swimming once a week. I think it’s easy and relaxing. Second, playing football is a good sport outdoors. I usually play football with my classmate after school. I think it’s interesting. I also join our football club. We often play against other teams. These sports can not only make me keep fit, but also be good for my mind.
Now many students have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. I advise them to change their ways and thoughts. We should keep a balance between our study and exercise. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Let’s enjoy exercise”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段介绍自己的锻炼方式和频率，以及自己从锻炼中获得了什么；第三段提出建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4．例文
One thing I keep doing every day
As the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way” goes, what we keep doing every day is very helpful for us to achieve our goals. So I keep doing sports every day no matter what weather it is and no matter how busy I am.
I used to be in poor health and I often fell sick. Because of this, I was often absent from school and it influenced my study greatly. So I made a decision to do sports every day and I have kept doing it for about one year. To be honest, my health has greatly improved after keeping doing sports every day. I am more active and outgoing than before and good health helps me study better.
In a word, I think the best way to relax is through exercise every day. It is healthy for the mind and the body. The more we do sports, the healthier and happier we are!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，确保条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你认为一直做一件事怎么样以及你每天都在做什么；
第二步，介绍你为什么每天都做这种事。
第三步，最后说明自己从中获得了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②make a decision做决定
③to be honest老实说
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①So I keep doing sports every day no matter what weather it is（no matter what引导的让步状语从句）
②The more we do sports, the healthier and happier we are （“the+比较级，the+比较级”句型的使用）
5．例文
As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class. As for me, I think highly of jogging because it’s good for health. I often jog in the playground for half an hour. Another sports that I like is playing football. I often play it with my friends after school. It is very interesting.
There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us. We can not only build up our body and keep us healthy and strong. What’s more, when we feel stressed, we can do some sports to relax ourselves. The most important is that we can make friends when we do sports. I met my best friend when I once played football in the playground.
Let’s do more sports. In this way, we can be healthy and happy every day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干中的提示要点介绍自己的运动方式以及对运动的看法，可适当增加细节。
2.写作要点：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段主要介绍自己的运动方式；第二段讲述对运动的看法；第三段号召大家多运动。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6．例文
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
Cycling is one of my favorite sports.
It always makes me relaxed and full of energy. It was sunny last Saturday morning. After finishing my schoolwork, I felt a little bit tired. So I went cycling along the road in a forest not far from my home. What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it! Colorful flowers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing. Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster. I got relaxed and refreshed at once.
What an enjoyment of cycling it is! I enjoy my life by doing sports.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己运动的经历；
第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb adj使某人处于……状态
②get close to接近
③far from远离
[高分句型]
①Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an enjoyment of cycling it is! （感叹句）
7．例文
Keep exercising and keep healthy
Doing exercise on a regular basis is necessary in our daily life. Everyone benefits from exercising regularly, regardless of age. Not only can regular exercise help us keep a healthy body weight, but it can strengthen our bones and muscles as well. Exercising regularly helps keep our thinking and judgment sharp as we age. It can also reduce our risk of depression and anxiety.
As far as I’m concerned, however busy we are, we should try every means to spare a certain amount of time for exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生注意文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题。阐明在日常生活中，定期锻炼是很有必要的；
第二步，介绍定期锻炼的好处；
第三步，结尾点题。表达“无论多忙，我们都应该留出时间来锻炼”。
[亮点词汇]
①benefit from从……中获益
②regardless of不顾，不管
③not only...but...不仅……而且……
④as well也
⑤as far as I’m concerned就我而言
[高分句型]
①Not only can regular exercise help us keep a healthy body weight, but it can strengthen our bones and muscles as well（倒装句）
②As far as I’m concerned, however busy we are, we should try every means to spare a certain amount of time for exercise.（however引导让步状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going As we all know, COVID-19 has changed our life. Now I’m writing to tell you how to prevent this virus.
First, observing epidemic prevention measures. You should avoid going to crowded places! If you have to, remember to wear a mask. You’d better keep at least one meter of distance between yourself and other people.
Second, developing some good habits. Please wash your hands as often as possible. Keep exercising every day. Have a good sleep and then you can study well. Keep your spirits up. Open your windows to get fresh air every morning. Don’t spit anywhere. Try to eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. Refuse to eat the meat of the wild animals.
Third, please go to the hospital in time if you don’t feel well, especially when you have a fever.
With best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是书信类书面表达，内容围绕“新型冠状病毒肺炎预防建议”展开，格式和按照书信类格式。
2. 写作指导：本文主要以第二人称来写作。时态主要是一般现在时。例文采用五段式结构：第一段问候并关心对方；第二段、第三段和第四段具体介绍了如何预防新型冠状病毒肺炎；第五段表示祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文
Try to Improve Our Health Management
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
Health Management raises the awareness of doing sports. As we all know, sports can not only relax our mind and body, but also enhance our self-confidence. It can also let our brains have a good rest and help us study better. It is good for our legs, hearts and lungs. In addition, doing sports can help us relax.
In our school, many students like doing sports very much. Most of us like playing basketball and running. I think we should add some sports games, such as swimming so that students can choose their favorite sports. We can also have table tennis competitions.
Do you like sports I would like to ask all of you to take an active part in it. Let’s be healthy and happy every day!
School Sports Department
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Try to Improve Our Health Management”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍体育运动的重要性；
第二步，介绍对校内体育运动的建议；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家参与体育运动。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know众所周知
②have a good rest好好休息
③take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①As we all know, sports cannot only relax our mind and body, but also enhance our self-confidence.（not only...but also...连接的并列结构）
②I think we should add some sports games, such as swimming so that students can choose their favorite sports.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
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牛津深圳版 英语九年级上册 Unit 1 Wise men in history 写作 专练
1．假如你是李华，正准备参加学校举办的首届“用英语讲好中国故事”比赛，请根据下方图片提示，准备英文稿件，讲述“司马光砸缸”的故事。
要求：1. 语言规范，语句通顺；
2. 应包括图片所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 字数：100词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇：hide-and-seek捉迷藏；vat缸；shout for help大声呼救；lift a big stone举起一块大石头；be saved得救；learn from向……学习。
Sima Guang Breaking the Vat
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2．某学校九年级学生进行了一场关于“九年级学生是否应该要体育锻炼”的舆论调查，请你以下面信息为主要内容，介绍调查结果并给出自己的观点。
70%的学生认为：
（1）有必要进行体育锻炼，例如：跑步，游泳和打篮球；
（2）使他们身体健康与强壮；
（3）感到放松，有益于学习。
30%的学生认为：
（1）使他们疲劳，浪费时间；
（2）锻炼后过于兴奋，影响学习；
（3）运动中有可能受伤。
最后，请给出你的观点。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实。
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确。
（4）词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
The students in Grade Nine have done a survey about whether they should take exercise. Here is the result. 70% of the students think that__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．北京冬奥会的成功举办激起了全民运动热潮，学业繁忙的中学生们更应该加强体育锻炼。请你根据以下提示，以“Let’s enjoy exercise”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你的运动之旅。
1. How do you keep exercising in your daily life
2. What do you achieve from the exercise
3. What advice can you offer to those that are short of exercise
注意事项：1.词数100 左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
4.表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范。
Let’s enjoy exercise
There’s no doubt that it’s important for us to do exercise. After watching the 24th Winter Olympic Games, I’m crazier about sports. Although I’m busy with my study, I also have some ways to keep exercising.
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4．本卷阅读理解E篇短文中提到荷兰运动员Sifan Hassan在东京奥运会1500米比赛中跌倒并落后仍然继续坚持比赛，最终赢得奖牌。Sifan Hassan的事例告诉我们：向着目标坚持不懈，就能获取成功。请你根据下面写作要点提示，以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿：谈谈你每天坚持做的事情、坚持的原因及坚持后的收获。
写作要点：
1. What do you think of keeping doing something And what’s the thing you keep doing every day
2. Why do you keep doing the thing every day
3. What have you got from keeping doing the thing every day
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80。
One thing I keep doing every day
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5．近年来中学生身体健康越来越受到重视。假定你是李华，你校英语校报正在开展主题为“我运动，我健康”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1.你的运动方式（两种）：
2.你对运动的看法：
(1)增强体质；
(2)缓解压力；
(3)……。
注意：
1.所写内容应包括以上要点，内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.词数100左右。
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6．Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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7．近期校英语网站正在开展“坚持运动，健康同行”为主题的征文活动。请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：
1.中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.不少于80词。
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8．假如你是李华，请你给你的笔友Tom写封100字左右的信，谈谈你对新型冠状病毒肺炎预防建议。
要点：
1. 遵守疫情预防措施；
2. 在家常开窗户通风，常洗手；
3. 出门戴口罩；
4. 尽量不去公共场所或聚会；
5. 保持良好心态，多锻炼身体；
6. 合理处理学习和休息的关系；
7. ……
要求：
1. 应包括上述文字等各项要点。
2. 不可逐句翻译，允许必要的增减。
参考词汇：
新型冠状病毒肺炎COVID-19，疫情epidemic situation，预防prevent，口罩mask
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．中学生“五项管理”之一的“体质管理（Health Management）”倡导我们积极参与体育运动。体育运动不但可以帮助学生增强自信，从而塑造更加健全的人格，而且有助于我们实现体育强国之梦。假如你是学校体育部长，请你以“Try to Improve Our Health Management”为题，写一篇倡议书推动中学生体质管理。
要求：
（1）80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
（1）体育运动的重要性（放松身心，增强自）；
（2）你对校内体育运动的建议（组织乒乓球比赛，开设游泳课）；
（3）……
Try to Improve Our Health Management
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
Health Management raises the awareness of doing sports._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
School Sports Department
参考答案：
1．例文：
Sima Guang Breaking the Vat
Sima Guang was a great statesman and historian in ancient China. He was very clever from an early age.
One day, Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water vat in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the vat. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the vat. “Bang!” The vat broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved.
In my opinion, I think we should learn from him. When we are in trouble, we should calm down and find a solution.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据题干中给出的四幅图片，按照时间发展顺序描写“司马光砸缸”的故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首段引入话题，介绍司马光；
第二步，按照所给图片的发展顺序描写，首先孩子们在院子里玩耍、然后一个孩子掉进水缸、司马光想出主意，拿石头砸向水缸、最后孩子得救；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的个人感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满，装满
②fall into掉入
③start to do sth.开始做某事
④pick up捡起
⑤in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①There was a large water vat in the yard.（There be句型）
②When we are in trouble, we should calm down and find a solution.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2．例文：
The students in Grade Nine have done a survey about whether they should take exercise. Here is the result. 70% of the students think that it is necessary for us to do sports, such as running, swimming, and playing basketball. Because doing exercise not only makes them physically healthy and strong, but also makes them feel relaxed and beneficial for learning. 30% of students think that doing sports makes them tired and wastes time. And being too excited after exercise can affect learning. There is a possibility of injury during simultaneous exercise. I think we should do sports. Because doing exercise not only keeps us healthy, but also helps us relax.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意分成两个角度分别阐述，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述70%的学生观点，从给出的要点出发，详细列明观点；
第二步，阐述剩余30%的学生观点，将要点清晰明了的写出；
第三步，给出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①make them physically healthy and strong使他们身体健康和强壮
②wastes time浪费时间
③a possibility of injury受伤的可能性
[高分句型]
①it is necessary for us to do sports, such as running, swimming, and playing basketball.（句型it is +形容词+for sb + to do sth）
②Because doing exercise not only keeps us healthy, but also helps us relax.（not only...but also不仅……而且……）
3．例文
Let’s enjoy exercise
There’s no doubt that it’s important for us to do exercise. After watching the 24th Winter Olympic Games, I’m crazier about sports. Although I’m busy with my study, I also have some ways to keep exercising.
First, swimming is a good sport indoors. I usually go swimming once a week. I think it’s easy and relaxing. Second, playing football is a good sport outdoors. I usually play football with my classmate after school. I think it’s interesting. I also join our football club. We often play against other teams. These sports can not only make me keep fit, but also be good for my mind.
Now many students have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. I advise them to change their ways and thoughts. We should keep a balance between our study and exercise. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Let’s enjoy exercise”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段介绍自己的锻炼方式和频率，以及自己从锻炼中获得了什么；第三段提出建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4．例文
One thing I keep doing every day
As the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way” goes, what we keep doing every day is very helpful for us to achieve our goals. So I keep doing sports every day no matter what weather it is and no matter how busy I am.
I used to be in poor health and I often fell sick. Because of this, I was often absent from school and it influenced my study greatly. So I made a decision to do sports every day and I have kept doing it for about one year. To be honest, my health has greatly improved after keeping doing sports every day. I am more active and outgoing than before and good health helps me study better.
In a word, I think the best way to relax is through exercise every day. It is healthy for the mind and the body. The more we do sports, the healthier and happier we are!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，确保条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你认为一直做一件事怎么样以及你每天都在做什么；
第二步，介绍你为什么每天都做这种事。
第三步，最后说明自己从中获得了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②make a decision做决定
③to be honest老实说
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①So I keep doing sports every day no matter what weather it is（no matter what引导的让步状语从句）
②The more we do sports, the healthier and happier we are （“the+比较级，the+比较级”句型的使用）
5．例文
As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class. As for me, I think highly of jogging because it’s good for health. I often jog in the playground for half an hour. Another sports that I like is playing football. I often play it with my friends after school. It is very interesting.
There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us. We can not only build up our body and keep us healthy and strong. What’s more, when we feel stressed, we can do some sports to relax ourselves. The most important is that we can make friends when we do sports. I met my best friend when I once played football in the playground.
Let’s do more sports. In this way, we can be healthy and happy every day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干中的提示要点介绍自己的运动方式以及对运动的看法，可适当增加细节。
2.写作要点：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段主要介绍自己的运动方式；第二段讲述对运动的看法；第三段号召大家多运动。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6．例文
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
Cycling is one of my favorite sports.
It always makes me relaxed and full of energy. It was sunny last Saturday morning. After finishing my schoolwork, I felt a little bit tired. So I went cycling along the road in a forest not far from my home. What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it! Colorful flowers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing. Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster. I got relaxed and refreshed at once.
What an enjoyment of cycling it is! I enjoy my life by doing sports.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己运动的经历；
第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb adj使某人处于……状态
②get close to接近
③far from远离
[高分句型]
①Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an enjoyment of cycling it is! （感叹句）
7．例文
Keep exercising and keep healthy
Doing exercise on a regular basis is necessary in our daily life. Everyone benefits from exercising regularly, regardless of age. Not only can regular exercise help us keep a healthy body weight, but it can strengthen our bones and muscles as well. Exercising regularly helps keep our thinking and judgment sharp as we age. It can also reduce our risk of depression and anxiety.
As far as I’m concerned, however busy we are, we should try every means to spare a certain amount of time for exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生注意文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题。阐明在日常生活中，定期锻炼是很有必要的；
第二步，介绍定期锻炼的好处；
第三步，结尾点题。表达“无论多忙，我们都应该留出时间来锻炼”。
[亮点词汇]
①benefit from从……中获益
②regardless of不顾，不管
③not only...but...不仅……而且……
④as well也
⑤as far as I’m concerned就我而言
[高分句型]
①Not only can regular exercise help us keep a healthy body weight, but it can strengthen our bones and muscles as well（倒装句）
②As far as I’m concerned, however busy we are, we should try every means to spare a certain amount of time for exercise.（however引导让步状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going As we all know, COVID-19 has changed our life. Now I’m writing to tell you how to prevent this virus.
First, observing epidemic prevention measures. You should avoid going to crowded places! If you have to, remember to wear a mask. You’d better keep at least one meter of distance between yourself and other people.
Second, developing some good habits. Please wash your hands as often as possible. Keep exercising every day. Have a good sleep and then you can study well. Keep your spirits up. Open your windows to get fresh air every morning. Don’t spit anywhere. Try to eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. Refuse to eat the meat of the wild animals.
Third, please go to the hospital in time if you don’t feel well, especially when you have a fever.
With best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是书信类书面表达，内容围绕“新型冠状病毒肺炎预防建议”展开，格式和按照书信类格式。
2. 写作指导：本文主要以第二人称来写作。时态主要是一般现在时。例文采用五段式结构：第一段问候并关心对方；第二段、第三段和第四段具体介绍了如何预防新型冠状病毒肺炎；第五段表示祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文
Try to Improve Our Health Management
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
Health Management raises the awareness of doing sports. As we all know, sports can not only relax our mind and body, but also enhance our self-confidence. It can also let our brains have a good rest and help us study better. It is good for our legs, hearts and lungs. In addition, doing sports can help us relax.
In our school, many students like doing sports very much. Most of us like playing basketball and running. I think we should add some sports games, such as swimming so that students can choose their favorite sports. We can also have table tennis competitions.
Do you like sports I would like to ask all of you to take an active part in it. Let’s be healthy and happy every day!
School Sports Department
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Try to Improve Our Health Management”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍体育运动的重要性；
第二步，介绍对校内体育运动的建议；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家参与体育运动。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know众所周知
②have a good rest好好休息
③take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①As we all know, sports cannot only relax our mind and body, but also enhance our self-confidence.（not only...but also...连接的并列结构）
②I think we should add some sports games, such as swimming so that students can choose their favorite sports.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
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