Unit 1 Encyclopaedias 写作 专练（含解析）牛津深圳·广州版 英语八年级上册

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牛津深圳版 英语八年级上册 Unit 1 Encyclopaedias 写作 专练
1．兴趣爱好给人带来幸福快乐，养宠物也是一种爱好。请根据图片，谈谈你和宠物Henry的日常生活。
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2．你听过“乌鸦喝水”的故事吗？请根据图片提示以“The Crow and the Pitcher ”为题，用英文写一篇70词左右的童话故事。

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3．假如你是大明，你的家乡是深圳。请根据提示介绍一下你的家乡。
提示：
1. 深圳在临近香港的海岸。它是一个比香港还新的城市。有一千多万人，比中国的许多其他城市的人口都要多。
2. 实际上，它在20世纪80年代才变得重要。它正变得更大、更繁忙。街道也更宽、更干净。我相信有一天它会变得和香港一样繁忙。
3. 欢迎来参观深圳，记得去参观一下帝王大厦，它比深圳的许多其他建筑都高。
要求：
1. 书写认真，条理清晰，语句通顺，可适当添加内容。
2. 必须包含以上信息。
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4．假如你叫李华，某英文网站以“I love Pandas/Tigers...”为题征文，请你投稿。介绍一种濒危动物，讲讲它的样子、现状及濒危原因、呼吁一下大家可以怎样保护它们。
提示词语：live, in danger, the number of, enough food, safe place, protect
提示问题：
●What do they look like
●Why are they in danger now
●How can we save them
I love pandas
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5．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My Favorite Person/Character”(以《我最喜欢的人/角色》为题写一篇作文，不少于60词）
6．扶绥是我的家乡，它位于广西西南部，是左江边的一座美丽的小县城。假如你是扶绥某中学的一名中学生李华，请你以“Changes in My Hometown” 为话题，从环境、生活、交通等方面向你的英国笔友Sam介绍你的家乡的变化。
写作要求：
1. 包含题干中所有信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得题目要求之外的人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名，否则不予以评分；
4. 80词左右。短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: county; environment; living condition; transport.
Changes in My Hometown
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me about the changes in my hometown Fusui and now let me tell you something about them.
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Sam, I’m looking forward to your visit!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
7．假如你叫陈云，昨天从报纸上看到南山区要组织一次“全民学英语”的活动，并且在暑假要招聘一批英语志愿者的广告，你想应聘。请你用英语写一封简短的书信，根据表格提供信息，表示愿意为深圳市民服务。
姓名 陈云 年龄 15
身高 160 cm 健康状况 良好
性格 外向
爱好 体育运动
特长 英语，唱歌，跳舞
电子邮箱 chenyunfifteen@21cn.com
提示词：外向 outgoing
要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Sir,
I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday. I am writing to tell you I’d like to work as a volunteer for the Nanshan district.　
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Yours truly,
Chen Yun
8．请根据下列汉语提示写一篇日记，记录5月1日，周五，你和父母去参观科学博物馆。天气：晴朗；距离：5000米，乘公交车去；早晨8:00出发。10:30离开博物馆，看到很多照片实物、模型等。
要求：运用日记格式，词数80词以上。
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9．李丽是成都熊猫基地 (Chengdu Research Base) 的志愿者，她希望更多的人加人成都熊猫基地志愿者队伍，一起来保护熊猫，请观察并结合图片信息，为李丽写一篇英语演讲稿，向更多人介绍熊猫及熊猫志愿者工作。
要求：
1.演讲稿需包含提示中的基本内容和图片中的信息；
2.表达合理、流畅。
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
2.词数：100左右。
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参考答案：
1．One possible version:
I have a pet dog. I call it Henry. It is brown and small, but it is very clever. It likes playing games with me. It also enjoys watching TV with my mother on the sofa. After supper, we often go out for a walk. At that time, it is very active. I think he must like walking outside very much. I often help it take a bath, so it is very clean. It sleeps in my room and wakes me up every day. It is my best friend and I love it very much.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片内容以及自己的想象介绍你和宠物Henry的日常生活。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时可以介绍宠物的外貌、性格以及它喜欢做的事情，同时可以介绍你是怎么和它相处的。围绕主题展开合理想象即可，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
2．例文：
The Crow and the Pitcher
It was a hot day. A crow felt so thirsty that he looked for water everywhere. Finally, he found a pitcher. But there wasn’t much water in it. So his beak couldn’t reach it.
When he wanted to give up，he came up with an idea. He picked up a small stone and dropped it into the pitcher. Then he took another and dropped it in. Gradually, the water rose and he was able to drink the water.
How clever the crow was!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇寓言故事，属于看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：按照图片顺序逐一阐述，图片上的细节元素不能漏掉，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据第一幅图阐述天气情况以及乌鸦口渴的状态，描绘出乌鸦发现了容器但是喝不到水的情况，为后面做铺垫；
第二步，根据第二幅图以及第三幅图展开想象，并进行描述，乌鸦想到了办法，喝到了水。
第三步，书写结语，乌鸦很聪明，成功喝到水。
[亮点词汇]
①look for寻找
②give up寻找
③come up with想出
④pick up捡起
⑤be able to能够
[高分句型]
①A crow felt so thirsty that he looked for water everywhere. (结果状语从句)
②When he wanted to give up, he came up with an idea.(时间状语从句)
③How clever the crow was!(感叹句)
3．例文
I’m Daming. I live in Shenzhen. Shenzhen is on the coast near Hong Kong. It is a newer city than Hong Kong. It has a population of over ten million, that’s larger than the population of many other cities in China. In fact, it only became important in the 1980s. It’s getting bigger and busier. Its streets are much wider and cleaner too. I think it will become as busy as Hong Kong some day.
Welcome to Shenzhen! Remember to visit the Diwang Tower. It’s taller than many other buildings in Shenzhen.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的中文提示，介绍你的家乡——深圳。写作中多用比较级句型。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，并从“地理位置、变化”来介绍深圳这座城市；
第二步，书写结语。欢迎大家来参观，并着重提出要参观的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①a population of……的人口
②in fact实际上
[高分句型]
①It is a newer city than Hong Kong. （形容词比较级句型）
②It’s getting bigger and busier. （比较级+and+比较级）
③I think it will become as busy as Hong Kong some day.（省略引导词that的宾语从句；as...as同级比较）
4． I love pandas
Pandas are our national treasures. They look very lovely with black and white fur. They are fat and have four strong paws. They usually live in bamboo forests and mainly live on bamboo. However, the cute animals are in danger now. It’s difficult for pandas to have babies, and many baby pandas die when they are very young. What’s more, the bamboo forests are getting smaller now. As a result, pandas are becoming fewer and fewer. In order to provide pandas with enough food and living places, we should set up more nature reserves with lots of bamboo. We should give them more care in their daily life. Anyway, let’s work hard to protect pandas together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示问题，介绍一种濒危动物，描述它的外貌、现状及濒危原因、呼吁一下大家可以怎样保护它们。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍它是什么样的；
第二步，介绍它们为什么现在处于危险中；
第三步，介绍我们应该如何保护它们。
[亮点词汇]
①live on以……为食
②What’s more而且
③As a result结果
④in order to为了
[高分句型]
Anyway, let’s work hard to protect pandas together.（不定式作目的状语）
5．Mr. White is my favorite person. He is my math teacher. He is a funny man with small eyes and short curly black hair. He is tall and thin. He likes wearing white T-shirts and jeans. He doesn’t wear glasses. He also likes sports. He is good at playing ping-pong. He is friendly to us. Although he is sometimes strict with us, we all like him.
【详解】1.题干分析：本题要求以《我最喜欢的人/角色》为题写一篇不少于60词的作文。内容要点可自由发挥，但要紧扣主题，突出重点。
2.例文点评：例文开篇点题，描写人物的身份（职业）、外貌、性格等特征，是一篇典型的人物描写记叙文。作文用一般现在时及第三人称进行写作，符合要求。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be good at...，be friendly to sb., be strict with sb.。
句型：He is a funny man with small eyes and short curly black hair.
Although he is sometimes strict with us, we all like him.
6．例文：
Changes in My Hometown
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me about the changes in my hometown Fusui and now let me tell you something about them. With the help of the favorable policies of our county, great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. High buildings can be seen everywhere and children can also get very good education. The environment has become more beautiful. The sky is bluer, the water is clearer, the roads are wider and the trees are greener. Transport has become more convenient and students can go to school by bus. Every year, thousands of people from China and other countries come to visit our city. I feel satisfied with life in my hometown. I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future. I believe that my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future.
Sam, I’m looking forward to your visit!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出将介绍自己的家乡。
第二步，从环境、生活、交通等方面向Sam具体介绍家乡的变化。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①With the help of在……的帮助下
②thousands of成千上万的
③work hard努力工作
④in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①High buildings can be seen everywhere and children can also get very good education.(and连接并列句)
②I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future.(动词不定式作目的状语)
7．例文
Dear Sir,
I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday. I am writing to tell you I’d like to work as a volunteer for the Nanshan district.　
My name is Chen Yun. I am fifteen, and I am 160 cm. I am an outgoing girl, so I would like to make friends with others. In my spare time, I like doing some sports, such as running, swimming, playing table tennis and so on. I think they are good for our health and I am quite healthy. I am also good at singing and dancing. My best subject is English. I always find the chance to practise my English. And I won the first prize in the English speech competition in our school last year.
If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, please send me an email to chenyunfifteen@21cn.com. I will try my best to do the job well.
Yours truly,
Chen Yun
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给中文提示，写一封信应聘英语志愿者。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的姓名、年龄、身高以及健康状况；
第二步，介绍自己的性格以及自己的爱好；
第三步，书写结语，并注明自己的联系方式
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with和……交朋友
②would like to想要
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, please send me an email to chenyunfifteen@21cn.com（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．例文
May 1st Friday Sunny
Today my parents didn’t go to work and I didn’t go to school, so we went to visit Science Museum in our city. It’s about five kilometers away from my home. We decided to go there by bus. We set off at eight o’clock in the morning. At the museum, we saw many photos, models and other old but interesting things. We learned a lot and knew more about Chinese science history. I saw a lot of children with their parents, students with their teachers and some foreigners. At ten thirty we left the museum for home. We had a wonderful day and I made up my mind to study hard. I want to be scientist in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍今天去的目的地；
第二步，讲述今天和父母的所见所闻。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth决定做某事
②set off出发
③make up one’s mind to do sth下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
①We decided to go there by bus.（动词不定式作宾语）
②I want to be scientist in the future.（动词不定式作宾语）
9．例文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Li, a volunteer at the Chengdu Reaserch Base. First, please allow me to introduce pandas and our volunteer work to you.
It is known to all that pandas are cute and shy animals. Pandas usually do not have any special hobbies, just liking to eat. What’s more, pandas are endangered and are at risk of extinction at any time. On the one hand, pandas do not have many babies. On the other hand, the habitat and life of pandas are seriously affected by human activities.
I hope more and more people can join in our volunteer activities, and protect pandas together. Our volunteer work includes building a good living environment for pandas and feeding it with bamboo every day. Besides, we also need to tell the knowledge about pandas to the visitors and ask them to protect pandas. Moreover, planting some bamboo is also part of our job.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿，向更多人介绍熊猫及熊猫志愿者工作。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍熊猫的特征，爱好和状况以及熊猫志愿者的工作内容；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
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