Unit 2 Why don't you talk to your parents? Period 5单元写作课课件(23张PPT）鲁教版英语八年级上册

(共23张PPT)
Period 5
Unit 2
写作课
Why don’t you talk to your parents
Learning Objectives
Learning Aims
1.能运用所学的单词和短语如 communicate with、in one’s opinion等表述问题以及对解决问题的建议和看法；
2.能熟练议论文文体并学会书写“谈论问题, 提出建议”类作文，积累写作技巧，培养写作能力；
3.能通过写作过程中的小组讨论及写作评议学会针对某些问题发表个人看法，给出合理建议；
4.能通过议论文写作培养学生的批判性思维和表达能力。
Review
Lead in
Lead in
孩子是否要上兴趣班？
(1)How about your opinion ？
Work in groups and have a debate.
Lead in
(2)Try to review the words and phrases we have learned in this unit to help you show your opinion.
允许某人做某事 擅长于
和某人和睦相处 对...感到紧张/焦虑
提供给某人某物 与某人沟通
向某人解释某事 介意某人做某事
害怕做某事 成功地发展/解决
和某人竞争 热衷于...
督促某人做某事 依...看 发展 v. n. ......
Lead in
Pre-writing
3b
Pre-writing
Write a letter to the magazine to express your opinions on after-school classes for children. Use the following expressions to help you.
Try to write two paragraphs. First, say if you agree or disagree. Dear ... , I don't really agree with ... because ... Although some parents are right about ... , I think children should ... Then, explain why.
In my opinion, it is important for children/parents to ...
I believe it is better if children/parents ... so that ...
Perhaps children/parents should/could ...
If children ... , they will ...
写作指导：
OREO writing method(奥利奥写作法)
Opinion- Tell your readers how you feel about something.（告诉你的读者你对某事的感受）
Reason- Tell your readers why you feel that way. （告诉你的读者你为什么这样想。）
Examples- Give your readers examples of why you feel that way.（给你的读者举例说明你为什么有这种感觉。）
Opinion- Tell your readers one more time about your opinion and your feeling.（再一次告诉你的读者你的观点和感受）
Pre-writing
Brainstorm
如果你赞同：Agree:
O（观点）:
R（理由）:
E（例子）:
O（观点）:
如果你不赞同：Disagree:
O（观点）:
R（理由）:
E（例子）:
O（观点）:
Pre-writing
思考：
怎样才能使语言更丰富呢？我们可以使用扩句技巧。那怎样巧妙扩句呢？
Pre-writing
1. Parents should let kids be kids.
扩写:说明原因。
Parents should let kids be kids to let them have a happy childhood. After all, they have to compete when they grow older.
Pre-writing
2. Parents care about us most in the world.
扩写:描写人物多用定从
Parents are the ones who care about us most in the world.
Pre-writing
3. Many students don't have time to relax.
扩写:举例子
Many students don't have time to relax, such as listening to music or watching a movie. They don't have time to think for themselves, either.
Pre-writing
4.扩写:说结果
After- school classes make kids more more competitive in study so that they can win in important exams and get into a good university.
Pre-writing
Review
While-writning
While-writing
写作要求：
结构 开头、主体和结尾要清楚。
内容 包括三个主要内容:主题句、支撑句、结论句。
语言 运用丰富的表达，打动读者。
书写 书写要优美整齐。
字数 不少于80词
While-listening
总体把握， 要点齐全； 人称时态， 逻辑清楚；
关键词汇， 动词第一； 组词成句， 结构完整；
组句成文， 连词增色； 此路不通， 绕道迂回；
字迹工整， 留好印象； 从句适量， 高分有望。
Writing skills
Share your writing with your partners and perfect it.
Post-writing
It’s your time.
Show your wrting to us.
Post-writing
范文赏析
Dear Sir:
In my opinion, it's necessary for us to take after-school classes, because these classes are good for our development. In the first place, after-school classes are good for the children's future. They can help children get into good schools and universities. What's more, some classes help children learn important skills not taught at school. These skills may actually help children relax, such as playing sports or playing a musical instrument. Last but not least , people learn better at a younger age. Children have more time than adults, so they should learn as much as they can before they get too busy to learn new things.
In a word, if children are glad to have these after-school classes,they will get a lot from them.
Yours truly,
Linda
Post-writing
Homework ：
You must:
根据下列提示写一篇文章。
1) 你和张莉是朋友、同桌, 昨天英语测试，她想抄袭 (copy)，被你拒绝(refuse)；想查字典，又被你阻止。她很生气，你也很伤心。
2) 你决定下周找她好好谈谈你对这事的想法和观点，并希望今后你们能够互相帮助，共同进步
If you can:
根据上述作文题目开展一次校园英语小记者活动，征集大家的对上述现象（涉及人物匿名）的看法和建议，并制作视频在学校做宣传。
Homework
Thank you !