Unit 4 My Neighbourhood 写作 专练（含解析）冀教版 英语八年级上册

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冀教版 英语八年级上册 Unit 4 My Neighbourhood 写作 专练
1．书面表达
一份调查报告显示，现在有相当一部分中学生很少甚至从来不吃早餐（调查情况见表一），这一现象表明许多中学生在生活中不注意保持身体健康。请根据表一和表二提供的信息，写一篇短文，简单表述中学生不吃早餐的主要原因，并给出保持身体健康的一些建议。
要求：1. 可适当发挥，但必须包含表格所提供的信息。
2. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3. 参考词汇：appetite n. 食欲；harm v. 伤害
According to a survey, quite a few middle school students seldom or even never have breakfast before they go to school ________________________________________________________________________
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2．假如你是李大明，你昨天骑自行车时遇到一位疲劳驾驶的司机，发生了一场交通事故。请根据图片提示写一篇英语短文，介绍事故发生的经过及吸取的教训，并呼吁大家遵守交通规则、注意交通安全。
要求：
1）包含图片信息，语句通顺、流畅，可适当发挥；
2）100 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
I’m Li Daming. Yesterday, an accident happened to me near my home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．林涛是学校“爱心俱乐部（Kind-Hearted Club）”的成员之一。请根据林涛的情况和图片的内容，用英语写一篇字数80字左右的文章介绍林涛。
提示：
a tall boy with thick black hair, a round face, two small eyes, a smiling mouth, look strong and healthy, get on well with..., get ready to help others, collect rubbish...
Lin Tao is a member of our school’s Kind-Hearted Club. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．平凡的生活中可能会有意外的惊喜，也许是老师的一句评语，也许是同学的偶然邀请，也许是来自陌生人的一句鼓励……请以“The most surprising thing to me”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点:
1）未曾预料到的事情是什么；2）它是怎么发生的；3）你的感受。
2. 要求:
1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右。
The most surprising thing to me
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5．过去这一段时间我们身边的生活发生了很大的变化。李强是你班上的一名同学，这学期他变化了很多，学习进步很大，请根据下面表格提供的信息，以“Great Changes”为题用英语写一篇短文，向同学介绍李强的变化并简要说明理由。
过去 1.花很多时间打电脑游戏 2.讨厌看书
现在 1.发觉阅读有乐趣，每天看书一小时 2.喜欢看科学书，觉得有趣 3.图书馆借书 4……
原因 1.从书中获得乐趣，获得知识 2.开创新世界 3……
要求：1、必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
2、词数：100词左右； 3、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Great Changes
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6．俗话说：“远亲不如近邻。”在我们的生活中，邻里关系和睦对于我们的生活很重要，有利于构建和谐的社会。请你写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
内容：
（1）你的一次受邻居帮助的经历（事情的经过及你的感受）；
（2）对如何与邻居和睦相处提出两点建议；
（3）呼吁大家与人为善，建立良好的人际关系。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息；
（2）80词左右。
参考词汇：good relationship良好的关系
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7．提示：家务是我们生活中的一部分，我们作为一名家庭成员，应该学会分担家务。请以“Experience of Doing Housework”为题目用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你做家务的经历，并谈谈你的收获。
要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60。
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
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8．每个人在生活当中都会遇到一个难忘的人、一次生活的经历或一件事情，并给你留下很深的印象，请以“My Unforgettable...”为题，谈一下你对这个人或事情的经历及感受。
要求：
1.语言表达准确，使文章连贯通顺；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名；
3.字体规范，卷面整沽，100个词左右。
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9．在我们的日常生活中会有很多难忘的经历，让我们觉得这一天是十分特别的。现在某英语网站正在以 “A Special Day”为题进行征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍哪一天对于你来说是特别的，为什么，在这一天你做了什么以及你的感受。
提示词语：birthday, buy, cook, never forget
提示问题：1. What day was your special day and why
2. What did you do on that day
3. How did you feel
A Special Day
We have a lot of unforgettable memories in our daily life. They are special for us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是Judy，你的朋友Tom写信跟你分享了他最近很难忘的一次经历。他因为觉得学习压力大，跟父母发生了争吵。请你结合Tom的问题给出建议，并从下面两幅图中选择一件事，描述你最近难忘的一次经历，给Tom回一封信。
1. When and where did it happen
2. What were you doing
3. What were your friends or family members doing
4. Why was it unforgettable

February, 2022 Beijing April 16th, 2022 Jiuquan
注意：1. 文章必须包含所有的提示内容；文章要有开头和结尾并有恰当的过渡；2. 信中不得出现真实的人名和班级；3. 词数：100左右。
参考词汇：Beijing Winter Olympics北京冬奥会；gold/silver medal 金/银牌；the return capsule of Shenzhou-13神舟13号返回舱；land着陆
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11．你的笔友Marry给你写了封信，想了解你的一些情况。你收到信后按下列要点回信：假如你叫Tom，父母都是中学教师。你现在是八年级的学生，爱好弹钢琴，你对电脑很感兴趣，并且很擅长电脑。这学期在原有学科基础上增加了新学科物理，物理老师对学生很好。你相信你能学好这些课程。
要求：
1. 包含提示要点，可适当发挥。
2. 注意时态，人称。
3. 词数80词左右。
Dear Mary,
I was very happy when I got your letter. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Tom
参考答案：
1．According to a survey, quite a few middle school students seldom or even never have breakfast before they go to school. It’s really a bad habit. But why don’t they eat breakfast The survey shows that 56% of them think they are busy. 26% say that they have no appetite, and 18% say that they are afraid of getting fat.
In fact, having no breakfast will do harm to students’ health. It’s very important for us to keep healthy. Here is some advice for you to follow.
First, it’s necessary to eat enough fruit and vegetables, but don’t eat much meat. Good habits can help you keep healthy. Doing exercise is certainly a good way to make you healthy. After a day’s work, you need to have an eight-hour sleep. And you’d better not work too hard. You know that smoking is bad for your health, so never smoke.
【详解】试题分析：本文根据图表和提示写出关于有相当一部分中学生很少甚至从来不吃早餐的调查情况，简单叙述不吃早餐的原因，并给出一些建议。所写的句子要符合英语语法，要注意主谓一致的问题。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：The survey shows that 56% of them think they are busy. 26% say that they have no appetite, and 18% say that they are afraid of getting fat. First, it’s necessary to eat enough fruit and vegetables, but don’t eat much meat. You know that smoking is bad for your health, so never smoke.用了一些连词，that引导的宾语从句，用了非谓语动词短语作主语，增加了文章的亮点。
2．例文
I’m Li Daming. Yesterday, an accident happened to me near my home. While I was riding a bike in the middle of the road, I was listening to music.
A car appeared and it wasn’t going fast. However, the driver was very tired, so he didn’t see me. The driver and I didn’t stop and I hit the car. I fell off my bike and broke my leg. The driver called 120 and I went to the hospital with his help.
Now I am very careful. It’s important to pay attention on the road. Don’t listen to music when you are riding a bike. And don’t drive a car when you are very tired.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文，介绍一起交通事故的记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据题目图片提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、经过以及结果等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍昨天发生了一起事故；
第二步，具体阐述事故的情况。包括事故发生的经过以及结果等；
第三步，最后介绍通过这次事故吸取的教训。
[亮点词汇]
① happen to发生于
② in the middle of在……中间
③ ride a bike骑自行车
[高分句型]
① While I was riding a bike in the middle of the road, I was listening to music.（while引导时间状语从句）
②And don’t drive a car when you are very tired.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．例文
Lin Tao is a member of our school’s Kind-Hearted Club. He is a tall boy with thick black hair. He has a round face, two small eyes and a smiling mouth. He looks strong and healthy. He is kind-hearted and gets on well with everyone. He always gets ready to help others. For example, he often helps his classmates with the lessons, helps old people cross the road. When he takes a bus, he often gives his seat to the people in need. To protect the environment, when he is free, he goes to the park to collect rubbish with his friends. Lin Tao is a good student. We should learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所示图片完成写作，不能遗漏信息；以第三人称为主，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍林涛的外貌；
第二步，介绍林涛的性格和品质；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①kind-hearted 好心的
②get on well with 与……相处融洽
③in need 需要帮助的
[高分句型]
①When he takes a bus, he often gives his seat to the people in need.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②To protect the environment, when he is free, he goes to the park to collect rubbish with his friends.（动词不定式表目的）
4．例文
The most surprising thing to me
Life is always filled with surprises which make us happy and warm. The most surprising thing to me is a note from my new classmate.
It was my second year in the junior high school. I was very shy. But one day in class we had a group work to discuss our favorite movie. I shared my favorite movie The Sound of Music with my group members. “Your voice is nice, ” a girl said after the discussion, which surprised me totally. I was afraid to speak in class before! From that day on, I got confident and became active in my life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题目是材料作文写作，围绕“最让我惊讶的事情”展开，写作时结合内容要点结合自身，叙述未曾预料到的事情是什么。
2写作指导：该题目主要使用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主；结合亲身经历，叙述自己遇到的事情，它是怎么发生的并且表达自己的感受，保证内容完整，结构清晰条理，做到无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
5．例文：
Great Changes
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn’t like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library. Sometimes he reads books on the Internet. Why is he interested in reading books Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him. It is also helpful for him to have a good reading habit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，还要适当添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先说明李强同学这个学期发生了很大变化；
第二步，介绍李强同学过去的生活；
第三步，介绍李强同学现在的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③be interested in doing sth.对做某事感兴趣
[高分句型]
①Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②…and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him.（省略that的宾语从句）
③It is also helpful for him to have a good reading habit.（It固定句型）
6．例文：
The good relationship between neighbors is very important. Last Sunday night, I had a bad stomachache, but both my parents were on business. My neighbor found that and sent me to hospital. She took care of me for the whole night. I was moved deeply and my parents were very thankful to her.
But how can we get on well with neighbors First, I think we should communicate with our neighbors very often so that we can know them better. Second, we should try our best to help each other.
Hope all of us can be kind to people around you. Having a good relationship with others, we can live a happier life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：描述过去经历时为“一般过去时”，其他内容为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“内容”中受到邻居帮助后的感受的描述。注意要点要齐全，不要出现真实人名。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，“邻里关系和睦很重要”；
第二步，具体描述受到邻居帮助的经历和感受，围绕“我胃痛”展开；
第三步，具体阐述“如何与邻居和睦相处”的两条建议，从“多交流、多帮助”展开。
第四步，再次点题，呼吁“建立良好的人际关系，快乐生活”。
[亮点词汇]
①have a bad stomachache严重胃痛
②be on business在出差
③take care of照顾
④be thankful to sb.感谢某人
⑤communicate with与……交流
⑥try one’s best to do sth.竭尽某人全力做某事
[高分句型]
①First, I think we should communicate with our neighbors very often so that we can know them better.（so that引导的状语从句）
②Hope all of us can be kind to people around you.（省略that的宾语从句）
③Having a good relationship with others, we can live a happier life.（现在分词短语作状语）
7．范文：
My Experience of Doing Housework
Doing housework is part of our life. It’s necessary to share housework with other family members. I’d like to tell you about one of my experiences.
Last Mother’s Day I made a special dinner for my mom. It didn’t work as well as I thought. I hurt my fingers while cutting carrots and I forgot to put salt into the dishes. When my mom came back home, she was happy to taste them. Then she hugged me and said “Good girl!”.
From this experience, I’ve learned doing housework can not only help me grow up but also bring happiness to my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态应为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给的写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍做家务是有必要的；
第二步，介绍自己的一次做家务经历；
第三步，介绍自己从家务中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①one of my experiences我的其中一次经历；
②made a special dinner for my mom为我妈妈做一顿特别的晚餐；
③forgot to do sth忘记去做某事
④came back home回家
⑤not only…but also…不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①It’s necessary to share housework with other family members.(it作形式主语)
②When my mom came back home, she was happy to taste them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
8．例文：
My Unforgettable Day
I would like to talk about an unforgettable day.
It was a cloudy day, and I received my last math paper. It was too terrible. I felt sad and a little fear because my math teacher Mr. Gao was so strict that nearly everybody was afraid of him. After math class, Mr. Gao asked me to come with him. I followed Mr. Gao to his office and he looked straight at me. I strongly believed that Mr. Gao would punish me. But to my surprise, he gave me a kind smile. He told me I should practice more and what he said encouraged me a lot, which gave me much big confidence. When I reached my home, I thought of Mr. Gao’s words carefully. It was the first time that I thought Mr. Gao is both cool and kind. From then on, I began to study hard, and then I got a good grade.
Although the life in Grade Eight is busy, I know we do need to find something meaningful for us. What an unforgettable day I had!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，要介绍难忘的一天；
第二步，具体介绍这一天的难忘的经历；
第三步，最后总结文章，与开头呼应。
[亮点词汇]
① talk about谈论
② be afraid of害怕
③ from then on从那时起
[高分句型]
① Mr. Gao was so strict that nearly everybody was afraid of him.（so…that…引导的结果状语从句）
② I strongly believed that Mr. Gao would punish me.（that引导的宾语从句）
9．例文
A Special Day
We have a lot of unforgettable memories in our daily life. They are special for us.
Last Sunday was a very special day because it was my mother’s birthday. On that day, I did many things for her. In the morning, I bought some flowers with my pocket money. In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some vegetables and helped my mother cook a delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave her the card and said “Happy Birthday” to her. My mother was moved.
That day was a special day because I showed my love to my mum. I was very happy and I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中自己的感受，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来介绍自己难忘的一天，并阐明原因；
第二步，具体介绍这一天所做的事；
第三步，书写结语。描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①pocket money零花钱
②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
③show one’s love to sb.向某人表达爱
[高分句型]
①Last Sunday was a very special day because it was my mother’s birthday.（because引导原因状语从句）
②In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some vegetables and helped my mother cook a delicious dinner for my family.（动词不定式作目的状语）
10．Dear Tom,
As a Grade 8 student, you have a lot of pressure from school. What’s worse, your parents can’t get on well with you. I think in order to solve the problems, firstly, you should talk to your parents, although you may be unhappy with them. I believe they will understand you. Secondly, you can hang out with friends, take more free time activities to relax yourself. As the saying, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Too much pressure is not good for either your health or your study. Life shouldn’t just be grades.
A short time before, China held 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics in February. My family and I have watched it from the beginning to the end. It was so wonderful! I like Ailing Gu best. She won gold medals and silver medals at the Winter Olympics. She failed before, however, she did not give up until now. She’s really encouraged me.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Judy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写Tom 遇到的问题，接着提出建议；
第二步，结合题目给出的两幅图，选出一幅并描述最近难忘的一次经历。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to 为了
②hang out闲逛
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
As the saying, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”（引用谚语）
11．例文：
Dear Mary,
I was very happy when I got your letter. I am glad to be your penfriend. I’m Tom, a student of Grade 8. I’m the only child in my family. My parents are both teachers in a middle school and they work very hard. I like playing the piano and I am interested in computers. I’m also good at it. This term we have a new subject. It is physics. I like it very much and our physics teacher is kind to us. I believe I can learn all my subjects well.
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，然后介绍自己的父母；
第二步，介绍自己的爱好；
第三步，介绍新学科的物理老师。
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to对某人友好
②be good at擅长
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①I like it very much and our physics teacher is kind to us.（并列句）
②I believe I can learn all my subjects well.（宾语从句）
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