Unit 2 My Favourite School Subject 写作专练（含解析）冀教版 英语八年级上册

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冀教版 英语八年级上册 Unit 2 My Favourite School Subject 写作专练
1．书面表达假如你是 Ben,你们班上的同学 Judy 不幸身患重病，急需救助，你们班决定举行一次捐款活动来帮助她。请向校长张老师写一封申请信。
原因 帮助患病的Judy 同学
计划 目的：为Judy筹款； 时间：本周五下午3.00-5.00地点：在学校图书馆前面
活动 一些同学举行旧书义卖活动； 一些同学剪纸和做纸花义卖； … …
希望 得到老师的批准和支持
Dear Mr Zhang,
We are writing to ask permission to have a voluntary activity.
Yours sincerely, Ben
2．书面表达。
以“My friend Tom”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词。请充分发挥你的想象力，使短文的语言流畅.连贯。
1. 汤姆是一个好学生。他13岁，高而瘦并戴着眼镜的男孩子。他乐意助人，昨天他帮助了迈克数学。
2. 汤姆勤奋学习，各门功课都好。 他数学和英语学得最好。他每天早晨读英语和语文。
3. 他很健康，他经常吃健康食品并一周锻炼三次。他也喜欢打篮球和游泳。
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3．书面表达：
以“My best friend Nancy”为题，根据所给提示要点，用英语写一篇短文，70字左右，要求第5点用1-2句适当展开想象，要点如下：
1. Nancy是一个幽默漂亮的女孩。她有着大而明亮的眼睛和直的长发。
2. 她喜欢画画。她总是在绘画比赛中获得第一。
3. 她慷慨大方并且乐于助人。她经常在作业上帮助我。
4. 她从来不说别人的坏话。
5. 她长大后想当一名社会工作者，这样她可以……
My best friend Nancy
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4．假如你是李华，在春节到来之际，你校举办了中国文化周活动，请你根据以下提示写一封信，向外国朋友Tom介绍此次活动的开展情况，宣传中国的传统文化。
【写作要点】
文化周活动 1. 品尝中国传统食物，如：饺子、面条…
2. 体验中国传统文化课，如：中国功夫、粤剧…
3. 介绍中国古典书籍，如：《西游记》
4. 请自行补充一个活动
你的感受 ……(至少一点)
【写作要求】
1. 80-100词左右，开头和结尾均不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使条理清楚、行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
【提示词】
粤剧Cantonese Opera 中国功夫 Chinese Kung Fu
古典书籍 classic books 《西游记》 Journey to the West
Dear Tom,
Long time no see. I am very pleased to introduce the activities we held during the Chinese Culture Week in our school.
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I am looking forward to your visit in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假如你的名字叫Lisa，你认识一位有传统剪纸技艺的老人，你的笔友Peter 对剪纸技艺很感兴趣，于是你给Peter写信介绍这位传统艺术家——孙先生。
要点：可根据以下提示，第一段介绍孙先生，第二段描写他的技艺特长，第三段写自己的看法。
姓名：Mr Sun
年龄：超过70岁
特点： 身体健壮，勤劳
特长： 擅长剪纸艺术，学艺多年；5岁开始父亲教他剪纸，只需要使用剪刀和红色的纸；有时候将纸折叠几次，只要几分钟就能完成；需要很多耐心。
你的观点：. . . . . .
参考词汇：a pair of scissors 剪刀 折叠fold a lot of patience 很多耐心
要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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6．假如你是李华，你校的英语社正在举行“中国传统故事”演讲比赛，请选择你喜欢的中国传说或故事，用英语写一篇演讲稿，词数80左右。
内容要点：
1.你的选择及喜欢的原因；
2.相关的传说故事； 3.感想或启示。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有内容要点；
2.意思清楚， 表达通顺， 行文连贯， 书写规范；
3 . 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名。
Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s my great honor to share my favorite Chinese traditional story with you.
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Thanks for listening!
7．为了丰富校园生活，激发学生对中国优秀文化的热爱，你校英语社团本周五将邀请王老师做一个关于“中国茶文化”的讲座。假定你是申鹏，请代表社团拟一则通知，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容安排；
3. 欢迎大家积极参加。
要求：1. 须包含提示中的所有内容，可以适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 词数：80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
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English Club
July 8, 2022
参考答案：
1．Dear Mr Zhang,
We are writing to ask permission to have a voluntary activity.
My classmate Judy was badly ill. We were worried about her.
In order to help Judy, we are going to raise money for her. We would like to have the activity in front of our school library. The time is from 3p.m to 5p.m Friday afternoon. Some of students will have a book fair, they will sell old books. Some students will cut paper, and sell paper cuttings ,others will make colourful paper flowers to sell. Our group are going to draw some cartoon characters and sell the pictures. I hope you can support us.
Yours sincerely, Ben
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般将来时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用固定短语及句型如In order to，would like to do sth等，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：考查提纲类作文。
2．My best friend is Tom. He is a good student. He’s 13 years old. He is both tall and thin. He usually wears small and round glasses. He is always ready to help others. Yesterday he helped Mike to learn English. Tom is a hard-working boy, he does well in all his subjects, especially English and math. He reads English and Chinese every morning. Tom is very healthy, he often eats healthy food and exercises three times a week. And he also likes playing basketball and swimming.
【详解】试题分析：本题要求以My friend Tom为题，根据所给要点写一篇60词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般现在时态书写，只有一个一般过去时态的句子。可以用第三人称。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，并且要围绕主题适当发挥。
写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了自己的朋友Tom，结构清晰，要点全面。一个一般过去时态的句子把握的也比较准确。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。He is always ready to help others. Tom is a hard-working boy, he does well in all his subjects, especially English and math.
考点：提纲类作文。
3．My Best Friend
My best friend is Nancy. She is a beautiful and humorous girl. She has big bright eyes and long straight hair. She likes drawing. She always comes first in the drawing competition. She’s generous and willing to help others. She often helps me with my homework. She never says a bad word about anyone. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up. She can listen to people carefully and help them with their problems.
【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
考点：提纲作文
4．例文
Dear Tom,
Long time no see. I am very pleased to introduce the activities we held during the Chinese Culture Week in our school.
First, you can taste Chinese traditional food, such as dumplings and noodles. They are very delicious. Second, you can experience Chinese traditional culture lessons. For example, some students will perform Chinese kung fu. There will also be a Cantonese Opera show. Third, our teachers will introduce some classic books like Journey to the West. Finally, my good friend Peter will play Erhu. I think the performances will make great impression on you. I am sure you can enjoy yourself if you come.
I am looking forward to your visit in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍活动的内容；
第三步，期待对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②make great impression on给人留下深刻印象
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There will also be a Cantonese Opera show.（there be句型）
②I am sure you can enjoy yourself if you come.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．例文：
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to you to introduce a traditional artist—Mr. Sun.
Mr. Sun is a paper cutting master who makes a traditional skill from paper. He is over 70 years old. However, he is still very strong, healthy and hard-working.
He is an expert in paper cutting as he has learnt it for many years. Mr. Sun’s father started teaching him paper cutting when he was only five. Only some red paper and a pair of scissors are required to make a paper cutting. Sometimes he needs to fold the red paper for many times. After thinking for several minutes, he starts his work. However, it needs a lot of patience.
Paper cutting has a history of more than 1500 years. I not only like paper cutting but also hope to learn this traditional skill. I hope I can cut out a beautiful pattern with my own hands.
Do you want to have a try Please come to China soon.
Yours,
Lisa
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述孙先生的个人信息；
第二步，描述孙先生的技艺特长
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①an expert in熟于、在……方面是行家
②be required to do被要求做某事
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
④hope to do希望做某事
[高分句型]
①Mr Sun is a paper cutting master who makes a traditional skill from paper.（定语从句：由who引导定语从句修饰先行词master）
②He is an expert in paper cutting as he has learnt it for many years.（状语从句：由as引导原因状语从句）
③Mr Sun’s father started teaching him paper cutting when he was only five.（状语从句：由when引导时间状语从句）
④I hope I can cut out a beautiful pattern with my own hands.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略）
6．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s my great honor to share my favorite Chinese traditional story with you. It is the story of Yu Gong. It is one of the Chinese traditional stories and I can learn a lot from it.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. Although he was almost 90, he decided to move the mountains. A “clever” man called Zhi Sou said, “You are too old to move the mountains.” Yu Gong said, “If I die, my sons will still do this. And if my sons die, my grandsons will continue doing this.” Then a god was moved by Yu Gong. So he sent two gods to help him.
From the story, I learned that anything is possible if we work hard!
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头已经给出，结合话题讲述自己喜欢的中国传说，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出《愚公移山》的故事，并介绍自己喜欢它的原因；
第二步，简要叙述一下《愚公移山》的故事内容；
第三步，抒发你对故事的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①too…to do…太……以至于不能做……
②anything is possible凡事皆有可能
[高分句型]
①Although he was almost 90, he decided to move the mountains.（although引导让步状语从句）
②A “clever” man called Zhi Sou said, “You are too old to move the mountains.”（过去分词作定语）
③From the story, I learned that anything is possible if we work hard!（that引导宾语从句，if引导条件状语从句）
7．例文：
Notice
Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. We are going to hold a talk about Chinese Tea Culture this Friday. It will take place at 2:30 p.m. in the school hall.
At first, the expert will explain about Chinese tea culture. If you have questions, you can ask the expert. What’s more, we will hold a tea testing event. You can drink tea with your friends, or enjoy it on your own. At last, there are special teachers who will teach you how to make tea.
Hope you can come to enjoy a cup of Chinese Tea this Friday!
English Club
July 8, 2022
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一篇关于宣传“中国茶文化”的讲座。请结合内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时以一般将来时为主来行文，人称不限，作文可以分为三段，第一段介绍活动的时间和地点；第二段介绍内容安排；第三段欢迎大家积极参加讲座。要求语言连贯、无语法以及拼写错误。
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