Unit 1 Me and My Class 写作专练（含解析）冀教版 英语八年级上册

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冀教版 英语八年级上册 Unit 1 Me and My Class 写作专练
1．请仿照例句，用方框中提供的信息，写一写你的真实的经历 (情况) ，并说明理由或感受。
Example:
A．I have read Treasure Island once. I think it is an interesting story.
B．I have never swum in the river. It is dangerous.
C． I have eaten stinky tofu many times. It doesn’t smell good but it tastes delicious.
I have visited … I have been to . . . I have read … I have never… I …
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2．请根据图片描述你的朋友Ben的周末生活，并介绍你自己是如何度过上周末的。
要求：
(1)短文须包括所有提示，可适当发挥。
(2)词数60个左右，不要出现的地名、校名和人名。
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3．本学期即将结束，新的一年即将到来。在过去的一学期里，同学们一定有许多收获与遗憾，根据表格内容，写一篇短文。
学习方面 健康方面 自我提升 人际关系
总结过去 不擅长英语 吃垃圾食品，打游戏 内向，不愿参加活动 与父母争吵
规划未来 每天多读，向老师求助 多锻炼，多吃健康食品 培养一个兴趣爱好 帮助父母，关心父母
参考词汇：argue with (与……争论)
写作要点：
1.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数：100 词左右。
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4．2022年即将过去，2023即将到来。在这过去的一年中，你在学习、健康、友谊等方面仍有许多不足之处；在新的一年开始之际，你针对自己的不足之处写下自己的新年决心，努力提升自己。
要求：
1. 短文应包含所有要点，不足之处至少写出两处，可适当发挥。
2. 字数，80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
How time flies! 2022 has already passed (已经过去). Look back to 2022, I still had many problems.
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5．4月23日是世界读书日，习近平总书记在多个场合强调读书的重要性，但还有学生不重视阅读。请用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对这一现象的看法。
要点：
1. 指出现象；
2. 分析原因；
3. 阅读给我们带来的好处。
要求：
1. 语意连贯，书写规范，字数80字左右；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
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6．随着“双减政策”的实施，学生们的作业负担减轻了，睡眠时间也充足了，学习生活都发生了很大变化。假如你是Mike，你的好朋友Tim给你来信，想了解“双减政策”带给你什么变化和你有什么感想，你打算从以下内容进行回复。
主要内容 方面 过去 现在
1. 有哪些变化 作业 过多、完成时间晚 ……
睡眠 熬夜、上课犯困 ……
个人安排 周末忙于上辅导班、没有自由时间 ……
2. 谈谈自己的感受（至少一点）
参考词汇：
The Double Reduction Policy双减政策，extracurricular tutoring class课外辅导班， take up占据，independent study自主学习，burden负担
要求：
1. 所写内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数：80—100字左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名。
Dear Tim,
I am happy to hear from you. Everything is going well with me. The Double Reduction Policy has changed me a lot.
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Write soon.
Yours,
Mike
7．假设你是李平，请你给分别近两年的小学同学Jack写一封回信。请根据所提供的信息，可以适当拓展内容，要求字数在80词左右。开头和结尾已给，不计入总数。
Dear Li Ping,
How is everything going with you It is two years since we last saw each other. Do you change a lot Are you taller Are you still outgoing And I remember you liked sports very much. How often do you exercise now What do you always do on weekends What’s your favorite place to go to on weekends I hope to see you again.
Yours,
Jack
Dear Jack,
Long time no see!
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Yours,
LiPing
8．上周六你校组织了志愿者团队到天津站为旅客提供志愿服务。假如你是李华，是志愿者团队的一员，请你用英语写一篇日记。记录此次有意义的活动。
内容要点：
志愿服务 1. 活动时间：上周六上午9: 00。 2. 活动地点：天津站。 3. 活动内容：帮助旅客搬运重行李、帮助旅客使用自助取票机、捡垃圾。
我的感受 活动意义：……
参考词汇：天津站 Tianjin Railway Station
行李 luggage
自助售票机 ticket vending machine
要求：
1. 词数：80~90词。
2. 日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Saturday
I was very glad to take part in the volunteer activity this morning.
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9．2022年8月江苏省运动会将在泰州举行，不少同学想加入到省运会志愿者的队伍中来。假如你是学生会主席王涛，请以“What makes a good volunteer”为题，从必备品格、关键能力和相关知识等方面写一篇演讲稿，阐述成为优秀志愿者的条件。
注意： 1. 词数100词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所要求的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
What makes a good volunteer
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Tao. Jiangsu Provincial Games are coming. Many students want to be volunteers. What makes a good volunteer I think we should have necessary qualities, key abilities and some related (相关的) knowledge.
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In a word, any help would mean a lot. Being a good volunteer not only gets to help others but also improves ourselves.
Thank you for listening!
10．阳光中学八年级二班的学生将在本周六去瘦西湖公园游玩。假如你是班长，请根据下面表格中所提供的信息，用英语写一个通知，将活动安排告知全班同学。
活动时间 本周六
集合时间、地点 上午7:30、 学校大门口 到达时间 上午9:00
出发、返回时间 上午8:00、下午4:00 交通工具 大巴
活动内容 上午：划船，野餐，DIY水果沙拉；下午：观园，摄影拍照……
要求 1. 爱护花草树木， 2. 不乱扔垃圾， 3.……
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥;
3. 词数：100词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Notice
We are going to take a trip to the Slender West Lake this Sunday.
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We will be back at 4:00. At last, wish you have a good trip!
参考答案：
1．【小题1】I have visited the Bird’s Nest twice. I’m really prould of it.
【小题2】I have been to the Great Wall many times. I think the it is an unusual wonder in the world.
【小题3】I have read Journey to the West twice. I think it is very exciting.
【小题4】I have never been to Japan before. It’s too far away from my home.
【小题5】I have tried Beijing Duck before. I think it’s very delicious.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题要求按照所给的要点提示，根据例句进行仿写，描述自己的真实的经历，并说明理由或感受。
2.写作指导：根据例句可知，本题主要采用现在完成时；人称以第一人称为主。写作可以结合自身的经历，描写去过的地方，读过的书等。注意写五点即可，但是要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
2．例文
This is my friend Ben. Last weekend, he did his homework on Saturday morning. After lunch, he played soccer on the playground, because he likes playing soccer very much. In the afternoon, he cleaned his bedroom. Last weekend, I visited my grandparents on Saturday morning. Then we went shopping together. After lunch, I had a rest. At about 5:00, I went home. On Sunday, I stayed at home and did my homework all day. This is my weekend. How about yours
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给图片完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片介绍Ben的周末生活；
第二步，介绍自己是如何度过上周末的。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②go shopping购物
③stay at home待在家
[高分句型]
After lunch, he played soccer on the playground, because he likes playing soccer very much.（because引导的原因状语从句）
3．例文：
To be a better me
The Lunar New Year is coming. In the past, I was not good at English. So sometimes I couldn’t pass the English exam. I often ate junk food. And I liked playing games on the Internet. I was too shy to make friends. I didn’t want to take part in activities. I didn’t exercise, either. I used to argue with my parents.
Now I want to improve myself. First, I will eat healthy food and exercise more. Second, I’m going to develop a hobby. And I’m going to join a football team so that I can make more friends this year. Third, I want to help my parents do more housework and care about them more. I will also cook on weekends.
If I stick to my determination, I believe I will become a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格内容提示，首先介绍自己过去一年的基本情况。
第二步，以转折的形式承接上文，介绍自己未来的打算和要做的改变。
第三步，总结：如果自己能坚持，就能成为更好的自己。
[亮点词汇]
①be going to 打算
②stick to 坚持
[高分句型]
I’m going to join a football team so that I can make more friends this year. (目的状语从句)
4．例文
How time flies! 2022 has already passed (已经过去). Look back to 2022, I still had many problems. For one thing, sometimes I was lazy. I can spend a whole day watching TV. For another, my vocabulary was very good, but my pronunciation was not good, I was afraid to speak English in public. I asked my friends to help me. She told me that I should listen to some English songs and watch English movies.
The new year is coming. I think it is a great time to make resolutions to improve myself. I am going to develop good living habits and learning habits. I will exercise more. And I will take part in more activities. I will read English aloud every day.
As the old saying goes, a year’s plan starts with spring. I believe I can keep my resolutions and make myself better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于话题作文；
②时态：叙述不足之处时时态为“一般过去时”；新年决心与努力用“一般将来时”；
③提示：不足之处至少列出两点，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先陈述自己的不足之处；
第二步，在新的一年开始之际，针对自己的不足之处写下自己的新年决心，努力；
第三步，结尾，相信自己在新的一年会变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①For one thing一方面
②For another另一方面
③be afraid to do害怕做某事
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①She told me that I should listen to some English songs and watch English movies.（that引导的宾语从句）
②I can spend a whole day watching TV.（人+spend+时间+doing sth表示“某人花费多长时间做某事”）
5．例文
Reading is very important in our life. But only a few students do some reading after class. Quite a lot of students don’t have a habit of reading. They always say they are under too much pressure because of homework. So they like spending their free time on mobile phones or on the Internet. However, reading is very important. We can get much from it. We can get much more knowledge and it can open our eyes. And we can even make our life more colorful by reading different kinds of books. So let’s do some reading for at least half an hour every day.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题是一篇话题作文，针对有的学生不重视阅读这一现象，谈谈自己的看法。
2. 写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称和第一人称。写作时紧跟要点，首先阐述这一现象，然后分析原因，最后谈谈阅读的好处。注意主谓一致，语言表达要符合英语的表达习惯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．例文
Dear Tim,
I am happy to hear from you. Everything is going well with me. The Double Reduction Policy has changed me a lot.
In the past, I had too much homework and I had to stay up late to finish it. But now I have less homework and it only takes me about 60 minutes to finish my homework. In the past, I usually slept for less than 7 hours and felt sleepy in class. But now I have enough sleep and study more efficiently. Now I study without pressure, because I am not forced to take after-school classes and now I have more free time to do whatever I like.
In a word, I enjoy my daily life and my school life now.
Write soon.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍“双减政策”带给你什么变化和你有什么感想。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示“双减政策”带来很多的影响；
第二步，详细介绍自己发生的变化；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②less than少于
③be forced to do被迫做某事
④in a word总的来说
[高分句型]
①But now I have less homework and it only takes me about 60 minutes to finish my homework.(and连接的并列句以及it固定句型)
②Now I study without pressure, because I am not forced to take after-school classes and now I have more free time to do whatever I like.(because引导的原因状语从句)
7．例文
Dear Jack,
Long time no see! I am not the same as before. Now I am taller, stronger and more outgoing. I eat fruits and vegetables every day. I never stay up late. I also exercise two or three times a week. Because I think it is good for my health. I like watching TV and news programs because I want to know more about the world. My favorite place to go on weekends is the park, because I like to play football with my friends.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据书信中的问题介绍自己的相关信息，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己发生的变化，描述自己现在的情况；
第二步，介绍自己多久做一次运动、周末经常做什么以及周末最喜欢的地方等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①the same as和……一样
②stay up late熬夜
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
I like watching TV and news programs because I want to know more about the world. (because引导的原因状语从句)
8．例文
Saturday
I was very glad to take part in the volunteer activity this morning. Our school organized a volunteer team to Tianjin Railway Station at 9:00 a.m. to provide volunteer service for passengers. We helped passengers carry heavy luggage. We also helped passengers use ticket vending machine and picked up garbage. Through this activity, we not only learn how to communicate with others, but also experience the fun of helping others. If I have the opportunity in the future, I will continue to do volunteer activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生根据题干中的提示介绍那一天的志愿活动，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并介绍活动时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述那天的志愿活动；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sth. for sb.为某人提供某物
②pick up捡起
[高分句型]
①Through this activity, we not only learn how to communicate with others, but also experience the fun of helping others. (not only…but also连接的并列句)
②If I have the opportunity in the future, I will continue to do volunteer activities. (if引导条件状语从句)
9．例文
What makes a good volunteer
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Tao. Jiangsu Provincial Games are coming. Many students want to be volunteers. What makes a good volunteer I think we should have necessary qualities, key abilities and some related (相关的) knowledge.
Above all, we should have some necessary qualities. First, it’s important for volunteers to be kind and friendly. Second, we need to be patient enough to do our work one-to-one. Third, we should always be ready to help others at any time. Fourth, as a volunteer, we can’t be too careful to avoid making mistakes.
Also, we need to be good at some key abilities, such as team-work, communication and organizing abilities. As volunteers, we should learn how to work with team members. We’d better know how to communicate with different people. And we should be well organized and solve problems wisely because we may face some difficult situation.
What’s more, it’s necessary for volunteers to learn some related knowledge, like good manners, communication skills, first aid knowledge and knowledge of saving energy and protecting the environment.
In a word, any help would mean a lot. Being a good volunteer not only gets to help others but also improves ourselves.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“What makes a good volunteer”为题写一篇演讲稿，并从必备品格、关键能力和相关知识等方面阐述成为优秀志愿者的条件。写作时，要包括所列列举的要点，适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：写作主要以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。在写作时，要适当增加内容，阐述成为优秀志愿者的必备品格、关键能力和相关知识。句子符合英文表达习惯，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句和复合句，同时注意上下文意的衔接，是文意连贯，表达流畅。
10．One possible version:
Notice
We are going to take a trip to the Slender West Lake this Sunday. Please get to the school gate at 7:30 on Saturday morning. We will stat off at 8:00. So we should be on time. It will take us one hour to get there by coach.
On that day, in the morning we can go boating. After that, we can have a picnic in groups. Some of us are interested in DIY. So we can take some fruit to make a fruit salad. In the afternoon, we can travel around the park and enjoy the beauty of the nature. During the trip, it is meaningful to take some photos. If we are tired, it is comfortable for us to ride a sharing bicycle.
In the park, please remember to be careful with the grass, flowers and some small trees. It’s our duty to protect them. What’s more, don’t drop litter carelessly. All of us must pay attention to our own safety while travelling.
We will be back at 4:00. At last, wish you have a good trip!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，一个通知；
②时态：本文以一般现在时为主；
③提示：本通知的要点已给出，注意写活动内容要衔接自然，下午的内容要补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，活动的时间，集合地点和时间及出发的时间，交通工具；
第二步，详细叙述活动的内容，及注意点；
第三步，结束语，告知返回的时间，及对这次游玩的期望。
[亮点词汇]
be interested in对……感兴趣
the beauty of the nature自然的美
[高分句型]
If we are tired, it is comfortable for us to ride a sharing bicycle.（条件状语从句）
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